How to write a good third-person novel and how to connect the dialogues? . probably

The use of movements, expressions, psychological activities, etc. , make the picture richer.

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The following is taken from the novel Warlords in War Plays.

"Hello, my name is Song Yannv." Song yannv leaned out and held out her hand to the lower berth.

"My name is Zhao Jiadi." He held out his hand hesitantly, lisping. Song Ya Nu didn't recognize Zhao Jia's first unusual name. Then he paused, as if at war with heaven, and finally said shyly, "My nickname is Baliang, so my friends call it."

Song Yannv didn't really want to know Zhao Jiadi's name, but just showed her attitude. But she finally heard the nickname "Baliang" and smiled again. She lay back under the quilt, looked at the ceiling and said, "I heard this nickname for the first time."

Brother baier smiled foolishly.

"Uncle, false niang? Today is not wild at all. " Peacock people are very puzzled and send a short message.

"It's not in the village. No home court advantage. If you don't want to be hit in the face, you have to dress up as a pig and eat a tiger. Nowadays, the protagonists in the mainstream works of the Internet all do this. If you want three wives and four concubines, you have to pretend to cheat. The hard bow of bullying doesn't work. " Zhao Jiadi answered calmly.