Composition: Affection

Composition materials with the theme of "family"

1, in the most helpless life, family is the most lasting motivation, giving us selfless help and dependence; On the most lonely emotional road, family members are the most sincere companions, which makes us feel incomparable warmth and comfort; At the most helpless crossroads, affection is the clearest road sign, guiding us to reach our goal smoothly.

2, simple, affection is just a small nest built by several branches. But I'm young, and I can jump into it at once. There is a bowl of water in it, which is cool and sweet, nourishing my thirsty soul. There is a bulging bag, full of fragrance, full of my endless desires; There is a bed inside, soft and warm, soothing my inexplicable sadness; There is also a potted flower, a painting, a poem, dotted with some exhortations, embedded with some entrustment ... this is home, a nest, which keeps me growing.

3, family, is a guitar with an oblique back. The deeper you go, the more you can touch the heartstrings; Family is a vine, no matter where you are, it always holds your hand tightly; Affection is a bunch of keys hanging around the neck, opening the melancholy doors and windows. Love, between the eyebrows, in a shallow smile, in my lyric ditty.

4. Affection is the story of Mulan replacing her father; Affection is the story of Meng Mu's three moves; Affection is the melody of A Bing Erquan reflecting the moon.

5, the family is rain, take away irritability and make it cool; Family is the wind, blowing away sadness and leaving happiness; Family is the sun, which takes away darkness and leaves light. Affection is the greatest, no matter you are happy, depressed, painful or hesitant, it will always walk gently on your road and accompany you quietly for a lifetime.

6, there is no "White-headed Life and Death" vigorous, but it also makes "the sunset speechless"; There is no "we want two birds to fly in the sky with one wing and grow together on the ground, two branches of a tree." Vows of eternal love, but it is also "everlasting, everlasting; The two will end one day and will be connected by blood forever "; There is no saying that "the body is like a willow in front of the door, and the branches and leaves don't leave", but there is a silent wish that "I wish people a long time and a thousand miles of beauty" ... The falling snowflake can't take away the solidified memory, it will cross the dignity of time and space into an age that will not grow old, wait silently like a bud, and reluctantly leave the sunset, reflecting two words in the depths of the soul in the distant view of the soul.

7. The family is a tree, and everyone is its root, so that it can absorb nutrition and stay young forever; Family is a river, and everyone is its tributary, so that it will never dry up and surge forward; Family is a fire, and everyone is its firewood, so that it will never go out and warm the four sides.

8. In the face of failures and setbacks, affection is a good medicine. It is a kind of courage to fill your lost heart and then rally. In the face of misunderstanding and hatred, affection is a glass of cold water, which douses the fire in your heart and then faces it calmly. This is a philosophy. In the face of praise and flattery, affection is an awl, which pierces your empty dreams and keeps making progress. This is a warning; In the face of troubles and worries, affection is a breeze that blows away your messy thoughts, and then it is a state of peace and relief.

9. Affection is like water, which makes complex things pure after filtering; Affection is like fire, which makes plain look sharp and angular through calcination; Affection is poetry, which makes boredom reach an artistic conception after modification. Family, the eternal power of life.

10, affection is like a river that cuts the spring water, flowing with the eternal thoughts in the hearts of wanderers; Affection is like a hill piled up with countless fine sand, which has precipitated the worries accumulated for many years; Family is like the Big Dipper in the night sky, guiding the lost lamb home.

1 1. What is kinship? It is sweet milk that feeds our growth; It is bright eyes that guide us forward; What protects our hearts is gentle words; This is a severe punishment, urging us to correct our mistakes. We can't live without affection, just like a kite flying high can't get rid of a slender rope; We rely on family ties, like vines of melon beans wrapped around bamboo joints or fences; We have affection, like cold wheat covered with snow, warm as spring and happy as honey.

12, when the first horn of life blows, affection is the tears in the mother's eyes and the smile marks on the father's face; When the boat of life begins to ferry, affection is the paddle that stirs the clear water to push the boat forward, and it is the lighthouse waiting in the air to guide the boat; When the boat of life is about to dock, home is a quiet harbor, a silent running water that embraces you.

13, affection is the father's palm, trembling lips and an angry face that hates iron and does not produce; Affection is mother's burning tears, gentle call, warm and comfortable embrace; Affection is a child's positive eyes, respectful language and a small gift. The ship of affection depends on the harbor of love, and the building of affection should be built on the cornerstone of love; The fountain of love should flow in the land of love, the stars of love should shine in the sky of love, and the flowers of love should bloom in the garden of love.

14, family is the snow on the top of Changbai Mountain, simple but eternal; Affection is the flowing water of the Tigris River, soft but long; Family is the sunset in Sicily, lingering but gorgeous; Affection is an inscription on the Mesopotamian plain, which is vague but meaningful. Family! Family! Love ... weaving the most beautiful rainbow in life across time and space.

15, family, like a drop of dew in spring, can always live out the air-dried nostalgic memories in sad years; Family is like a shade in summer, which can always support the blue sky of the lost in the scorching sun; Family, like a ray of sunshine in autumn, can always warm the heart lost in the bleak wind and rain; Affection is like a snow in winter, which can always wash away the dust of the trudgers on a dirty journey. That's it, no impurities, no distance, no hypocrisy. It's just silently connected blood taking care of each other.

16, affection is a trickle, bringing sweet moisture to the soul; Affection is a ray of soft sunshine, which makes the frozen heart melt silently; Family is a quiet harbor, which makes the fatigue of sailing disappear. Affection is white hair on parents' foreheads, infinite care and hope in parents' eyes, and affection is a beam of light in the dark, giving you an irreplaceable feeling and warmth of home. Yes, the best feeling in the world is human affection.

17, family, is your visit and care when you are sick, she makes you feel the warmth of the sun in the dark, and strengthens your determination to overcome the disease; Affection is your encouragement and support when you are frustrated. It makes you feel selfless in despair and inspires your confidence to move on. When you get carried away, feelings are a good drink. It makes you feel harsh eyes when you are arrogant and ensures that you are in the right direction.

18, affection is a light rain floating in spring, which makes lonely people nourish their souls; Affection is a clear spring flowing in summer night, which makes people who are hot and restless appreciate poetic peace; Affection is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, so that people wandering in a foreign land can get the shelter of love; Affection is a rainbow flying in the sky, which makes people full of sadness feel the warmth of the world.

19, family, is a bright light, illuminating the road of the prodigal son; Family is a safe haven, giving wandering wanderers a calm harbor; Affection is a bowl of chicken soup for the soul, giving care to the injured soul; Affection is also a sword, which gives stubborn people a trick to split Huashan. Affection is the deepest and indelible mark in human mind, and it is the sublimation of the purest, most sincere and warmest feelings of human beings.

20. Emotion is the cradle of growth. Only under her nurturing can you grow up healthily. Affection is the source of strength, under her watering, you can thrive; Affection is the flame of the soul, and in her light, you can have a successful career; Affection is a panacea for pain. With her comfort, you can get rid of all the pain. Birds need the blue sky to show their majestic posture, spiders need to weave webs and run around the world, and people need families to maintain their lives.

2 1, she is an immortal lamp that lights up the darkness of my life forever; She is a never-ending ship, always ferrying on the ferry of my life; She will always be a beautiful flower, blooming in the garden of my life forever. I want to praise you with the most beautiful and warmest word in the world-affection!

22. Family affection is sometimes the weakness abandoned by the royal family for power, sometimes the capital used by misers, and sometimes the rope climbed by local admirers. This is the victory of justice over evil, the shelter and connivance, and the substitution of emotion for reason. Make good use of your family, because she is also a double-edged sword, which may hurt the person you love or yourself.

23. Affection is intangible, and no one can tell what he looks like; Feelings are free, and no one will let you spend money to buy them; Affection is priceless, and nothing in the world can match her price; Affection is selfless, and nothing in the world can sacrifice herself more than her; Affection is endless, and you will realize that it exists in your life every moment.

24. When you are a baby, affection is the milk that feeds your growth; When you are a teenager, your family is your refuge; When you are old, affection is a comfort when the sun goes down. This is a kind of blood-related love, and it is an eternal love.

25. I feel my father's care in the haze, and the wind slowly lifts the screen window; I vaguely heard my mother's words, and the soft rain was falling all over the windowsill. When I was depressed, my family comforted me; When I hesitated, my family gave me encouragement; When I was happy, my family gave me a blessing.

26. If you are a green leaf, the family is a branch that provides you with endless nutrients; If you are a sail, affection is the sea breeze that pushes you forward until the other side of victory; If you are Nightcrawler, family is the Beidou you are looking for; If you are a seed, affection is the land that lets you leave the darkness and move towards the light; If you are a bird, family is the vast sky where you can fly. Yes, no matter what you are, affection must be your dependence, your attachment and your expectation.

27. Father is a mine. In the storm, the tired back is shortened in the morning light and lengthened by the sunset; Mother is a torch, in the dark, in the songs of gentle voice, hoarse and repeated in the middle of the night; I am a small embryo. Under the clear sky, my tender arms broke ground in the fertile fields and stood upright in the firelight.

28. The family is a bank, which builds strong confidence for you when your heart is fragile; Affection is a rainbow, which paints a beautiful and splendid picture for you after you have experienced the storm; Home is a cloud, embroidering a beautiful flower for you when you are lonely. Your family is waiting for you in the distance, waiting for your return; Affection is a permanent miss, missing everything about you; Affection is endless sadness after parting, mourning for your distant back; Affection is the infinite joy of reunion, and it is happy for your safe return.

29. There is a kind of love that you can't come back if you are late; There is a kind of affection, which can't be traced back when you leave. It's affection! From the initial birth, to sensible, and then to adulthood, it has always accompanied us; From minor injuries to setbacks to failures, it has never left us. When I was a child, I thought it was family to send a bottle of beer that my father loved to drink; When I was young, I thought that getting good grades for my mother was family; When I grow up, I know that the original family relationship must be. When we said we would take care of them all our lives, they stubbornly said, "Who wants it?"! Isn't it rare? Rare! This is just like our deep gratitude to them-this is affection.

30. If you are a seed, the family is the soil, providing you with the necessary nutrients for growth; If you are a grass, the family is a big tree, open your long arm to shelter from the wind and rain; If you are a ship in the Wang Yang, your family is a lighthouse to guide you home; If you are a small river, family is the sea, and always open your inclusive mind. Affection is the continuous drizzle in March in spring, nourishing your heart; Northern Ireland is the scorching sun in hot summer, light your heart; Affection is the fruitful result of autumn, soothing the joy of your harvest; Affection is the sunshine in December in winter, and warmth is your eternal hope.

3 1, family is sunshine, which shines on the petals in the wind when you are cold or warm; Family is a lamp, which gives you a little warm light when you walk alone at night; Family is the wind, the driving force to push you forward when you are confused. Affection is the eternal fire in your heart, shining on your endless way forward; Affection is the silk that silkworms spit out, and it keeps growing and taking root. No matter how bumpy and dangerous the road is, it will always be with you. Family ties are eternal.

32. You use the calm of the lake to smooth the ups and downs of my heart; You look at my lonely journey with loving eyes; You embrace my wandering feelings for many years with powerful arms. You are family, and family is you! You are an important hub, and everything in the world is carefully maintained by you; You are predestined fate, from morning till night, from near to far, from birth to death, always accompanied; You are a silent melody, sunshine is your overture, moonlight is your melody, and candlelight is your note; You are family, and family is you. You are eager to wear, but you are full of affection. You have mixed feelings, but as always, you are everywhere, but you feel the earth moving. You are family, and family is you. You are catkin, you are lotus leaf, you are lotus ... family, so you have a name!

33, this is a bowl of fried rice with eggs, ordinary, but it can soothe my hunger when I am hungry; This is a paper towel, really, but it can dry my crystal tears when I am sad; This is a cup of boiled water, tasteless, but it can extinguish my blazing flame when I am dry; This is a piece of chewing gum, from thick to light, but when I want to vomit, I find it has been with you for so long; This is a mass of cotton candy, which melts in your heart before you are full: this is steak, and the longer you stew it, the more fragrant it will be; This is an old bottle of wine. The longer it is preserved, the more mellow it is. This is affection, the firmness of love, the eternity of friendship, and what love and friendship don't have: ordinary fried rice with eggs, the truth of facial tissue, tasteless boiled water, the persistence of chewing gum and the gentleness of cotton candy. It's steak and old wine, and time is their best coagulant. Remember, people can live without love or even friendship, but family ties are absolutely indispensable.

34. What is kinship? Affection is the seed of spring, the coolness of summer, the fruit of autumn and the warmth of winter; What is kinship? Affection is a paradise beyond the hustle and bustle of the world, a calm harbor after stormy waves, a green state in the boundless desert, and a comfort in a lonely heart; What is kinship? Affection is a beacon when you are lost, a soft couch when you are tired, a good medicine after you are injured, and a hot tea when you are thirsty; What is kinship? Affection is the charge of "meet each other immediately without paper and pen, and report peace with your short message", the concern of "she sews carefully and makes it up thoroughly, for fear of delaying his staying home late", the yearning of "leaning against the window in the future, bringing flowers in the cold" and the waiting of "raindrops hitting yellow leaves and lights shining on hoary heads". The most selfless thing in the world is affection, and the most extensive thing in the world is affection.

35. When I was a child, my home was a warm home. My father, mother, sister and I lived here. It was that naughty thing that I lost my rock, scissors and cloth but wanted to put a sticker on my brother's face. It's a pity that I can't stick to the delicious meal cooked by my mother. When I made a mistake, it was my father's terrible fist. When I was a teenager, affection was the hard work for parents to go to school for their children. That is the old age written by the wind and frost on the parents' faces, and that is the hopeful but hesitant eyes. As an adult, affection is a long and effective boat ticket, an endless kite line, and a stamp that can't be sent out when an envelope is pasted; Later, affection is the touch of "going home often to see".

36. Affection is a warm coat, and the button that will fall when the coat is shaken; Affection is a treasured record, an old song on the record; Affection is a cup of pure tea, and affection is a flashlight after power failure, which only illuminates others, not yourself; Emotion is a history of separation of flesh and blood, Spanish, Egyptian and Suez, mainland and Taiwan Province province; Affection is the feeling of giving up, the follow-up without hesitation, the attachment of the strong, the farewell of Haiyan, and the tacit understanding of words and deeds.

37. Affection is a drop of dew after rain, nourishing the originally barren soil; Affection is the crow of chickens at dawn, awakening the sleeping earth; Affection is a boat on the sea of Wang Yang, saving people who are struggling in it; Affection is a lonely lamp in a dark harbor, and people who are looking forward to going home; Affection is a post station on the ancient road of Yangguan, and it is goodwill to wanderers. Affection is like medicine, which can heal your injured wound; Feelings are like wine, the longer they get, the more mellow they become; Affection is like a shadow, no matter rich or poor, no matter high or low, it will accompany you with no regrets in your life.

38, disheartened, family is a plum blossom that gives people hope, see it, see all difficulties; When you are upset, family is a cup of spirits to relieve your worries. Drink it and get drunk to solve your worries. When satisfied, affection is the horn that inspires people to forge ahead. Hearing this, it shocked a hundred miles. This is family, no matter when and where, she will always accompany you.

39, affection is a lamp, it will lead you to the right place, but sometimes it will lead you astray; Affection is a pot of fire, it will warm your heart, but sometimes it will burn your reason; Affection is a kind of medicine, which will heal your wounds, but sometimes it will aggravate your illness.

"Emotional" Composition Guidance

First, the teaching objectives:

1, fully feel and understand the family by various methods.

2. Learn to show affection with typical life details.

Second, the teaching focus: family-related composition writing method guidance.

Third, teaching tools: multimedia

Fourth, the teaching process:

(1) Introduction: Students must like listening to songs. Today, the teacher asked the students to listen to a song.

(2) Listen: Play Han Hong's Dawn, and the lyrics will be displayed on the screen:

This autumn wind is so lingering that it reminds me of their helpless eyes in the beautiful scenery. I heard a loud noise shaking the valley. It was that autumn that I never saw my father's face again. He held up the starting point of my rebirth with his shoulders. In the dark, my eyes are full of tears. Don't leave. Don't hurt me. I saw my parents leave me in this strange world. I wonder what risks there will be in the future. I want to hold his hand tightly. My mother told me that I hope to see the sun again. My mother smiled at dawn.

Introduce the background of the story: This is Han Hong's Dawn, which was shown at the party on March 15 last year. Touched hundreds of millions of TV viewers, but students all know that there is a real and tearful story behind this touching song. ...199910/0, Maling Scenic Area, Guizhou Province, an accident happened suddenly on the running cable car, and 14 of the 36 passengers were killed. Just as the cable car was about to land, a young couple lifted their two-and-a-half-year-old son with both hands. Finally, the son Pan Zihao was saved, but the young parents lost their lives. Do or die, parents instinctively think of themselves first and leave the hope of life to their children. This is the love of parents.

Love is mutual. With such love, children will naturally shout "Mom loves me again".

(3) Watch the movie clip "Mom loves me again"

(d) Say: (This part encourages students to speak freely)

Listening to Han Hong's "Dawn" and watching the movie clip "Mom loves me again" remind you of your own experience: happy, sad, grateful, guilty ... Maybe this person will never be forgotten, and maybe this incident will make you unforgettable. Tell everyone, okay?

(1) Please answer.

(2) Teacher's summary: After listening to your family story, the teacher was very moved. The teacher also has a touching article here for the students to read.

Wonderful clip appreciation.

Lead mom across the street.

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..... To get to the market, you need to walk on the sidewalk and then cross the street. It is the off-duty time, and the cars are coming and going in the street, and the crowds are surging. When I was old, my mother's legs looked awkward and she couldn't walk fast. She walked beside me with a vegetable basket and told some chores in her parents' lives.

Cross the road and you will find the food market. Mother stopped suddenly. She held the basket in her arms and made her right hand reach out to me. ...

For an instant, my heart was shaking. What a familiar gesture this is!

When I was in primary school, I had to cross a road to school every day. My mother is worried about my accident and walks me across the street every day before turning back to work. When crossing the road, she always holds my little hand in her hand, leads me to the other side of the road, and tells me again and again, "Don't cross the road when there is a car coming" and "Cross the road with others ..."

More than 20 years have passed, and the small hand of the past has grown into a pair of big hands of a man. The young mother of the past, with wrinkled face and thin fingers, was still so skilled in holding hands.

I didn't pass my hand, but stretched out a hand to take the basket from her arms and hold it in my hand. The other hand gently held her hand and said to her, "When I was a child, you held me every time I crossed the road. Let me hug you today! " Mother's eyes flashed with surprise and her smile rippled, like an old farmer facing a bumper harvest of farmland, like a fisherman carrying a heavy fishing net. ...

Isn't it touching to lead mom across the street? Can students analyze the touching reasons?

(5) discuss it. How to write to make the composition vivid and infectious?

Discuss at the same table:

1, photos of real people, personal experience.

Famous sayings related to multimedia display:

(1) "Those who are touching, don't worry about feelings first"-Bai Juyi

(2) "As long as your feelings are a little untrue, readers will see it immediately. So be true to yourself and write your true feelings. " -Bing Xin

3 true feelings, language is not carved. Shen Deqian

2, grasp the emotional point, see the truth from small things.

3. Represent the characters through various descriptions.

(6) Practice: Use descriptive methods to reproduce a family fragment in the depths of memory.

Students write and draw a few strokes in class.

Teachers also write in class and read their own compositions.

Summary:

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Home-family affection 1, photos of real people and stories, personal experience.

2, grasp the emotional point, see the truth from small things.

3. Represent the characters through various descriptions.

(7) homework:

A mood embodies a story; A feeling, engraved with a life experience. Through listening, watching, discussing and reading the touching articles above, plus the heartfelt feelings of the students, I think a thousand words have already flooded everyone's mind, and they are eager to express their feelings in words. Then, please pour your touching story into your pen, and let us understand the true meaning of the composition from the "family story". Write a composition on the topic of "feeling family".

Requirements:

1, recall your life path and who accompanied you along the way.

The True Story advocates "I write my heart by hand" and write my true feelings.

3, the topic is self-made, not less than 700 words.

Let's end today's lesson with "Mother by Candlelight"

Mom, I want to say something to you. I swallowed it. Mom, I want to smile at you, but there are small tears in my eyes. Oh, mom, mom by candlelight, your black hair is covered with frost. Oh, mom, mom by candlelight, there are so many cares printed on your cheeks. Oh, mom, mom by candlelight, your waist is no longer straight. Mom, mom by candlelight, why have your eyes lost their luster?

Don't want to grab your skirt

Through spring, summer, autumn and winter, oh mom, believe me, my daughter has her own daughter's reward.

In the music, the teacher read affectionately: family is the warm sunshine that shines on the world; Heart to heart is a tough bond ... If you can fully enjoy the perfect family relationship in life, then you can be called the happiest person in the world. I hope the students will feel their affection and true love with their heart. In addition, students are also invited to do something for their loved ones while enjoying their family happiness.

Expert comment: The teaching process of this lesson plan is designed reasonably, and the six links are quite compact, and most of the materials are suitable for the needs of the theme. The use of multimedia in teaching can effectively adjust the classroom atmosphere and implement teachers' teaching ideas. This lesson plan embodies good integrity.

Disadvantages: The expression of the film "Mom loves me again" is controversial among the audience. Excessive exaggeration and exaggeration may arouse students' disgust, and it is difficult to achieve the effect of * * *. Therefore, the selection of this clip is slightly inappropriate.