How to describe the characters in detail?

How to write a character's appearance? There are no two identical leaves in the world. Similarly, there are no two identical people in the world. It is precisely because everyone has his own appearance that we can know so many friends in the world. Today, let's learn how to write the appearances of these different roles into our compositions. (1) Let's have a try first! Who can guess who she is first? 1, I saw him with a dark face and short hair, a long mouth and big ears, a chubby body, a chubby belly, wearing a blue shuttle cloth dress and carrying a rake with nine teeth. (Pig Eight Rings) 2. He has three heads and six arms, a circle of Kun hung around his neck, and his foot stepped on hot wheels, commanding and imposing. (Nezha) 3. He wore a glittering shirt, a golden crown, and a golden cudgel snatched from the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea, showing a powerful and domineering appearance. A pair of fiery red eyes are bright, revealing the determination to eradicate all demons. The whole body is full of a fearless spirit. (the Monkey King) 4. He has a thin face, a protruding iron cover, black hair, a pair of green eyes and a pair of round-rimmed glasses stuck together with many tapes. What he likes most about his appearance is the light scar on his forehead like lightning. Summary: Appearance description refers to the description of characters' appearance, figure, clothing, etc. Describing appearance is like painting or taking pictures, which can make readers understand each other. So appearance description is also called portrait description. Effective appearance description can not only let readers see the specific people, but also see the inner world of the described task to some extent. So some people say that appearance is the key to understanding characters. (1) Captor: We studied and lived together for two months. You should be familiar with your deskmate. Let's observe the appearance of your deskmate and tell us what your deskmate looks like. Naming the appearance of the deskmate requires: ① complete sentences as far as possible; ② The description should have a sense of wholeness; ③ Other students should pay attention and prepare comments. Health (1): high nose, big eyes and thick lips. He is tall and thin, wearing a sportswear. [Student Comments] Lack of overall sense and small vision. Health (2): My deskmate is a little fat man with a round face and big bright eyes. He looks handsome in a gray sports coat, black trousers and white sneakers. [Student Comments] Like an image, it also pays attention to the whole, but it does not show the characteristics of "intelligence". Health (3): Next to me is a big black man with short hair standing upright on his head like a steel needle, which makes people know that he is a strong man at a glance. He has heavy eyebrows and a simple and honest smile on his dark face. [Student's comment] It's wonderful, and it vividly describes the appearance of the deskmate. Health (4): He is tall, with bright eyes on his round face and a modest mouth under his high nose. He is wearing a white shirt, a pair of black trousers and brown leather shoes. [Student's comment] Can you not say that your mouth is not too big or too small? Health (5): Height,1.60m or so. His pale face is obviously the result of lack of exercise. A pair of rimless glasses on the high bridge of the nose, like a white-faced scholar, looks very quiet. [Student Comment] Well said, it captures the characteristics of the characters. It is easy for us to name these characters at first because different people are different from others in appearance, that is, everyone's appearance has its own characteristics, and the author also describes their appearance characteristics. Therefore, when we describe a character's appearance, we must describe the characteristics of the character's appearance, so that people who know him or her can guess who he or she is when they see what you have written, and people who don't know him or her can also imagine what he or she looks like. Teacher: From your comments, we can find that in order to accurately describe a character's appearance, we must grasp the characteristics of the character's appearance. Such as "steel needle-like hair, black face", "a pair of rimless glasses on a high nose, like a white-faced scholar" and so on. You can also write by grasping the habitual movements, clothes and dressing of the characters. As for "a modest mouth", "white shirt and black trousers" and other things that can be written or not, try to write as little as possible or not at all, especially like "a pair of big eyes under heavy eyebrows". [blackboard writing: grasping the appearance characteristics of characters] (2) When describing the appearance, we should pay attention to reflecting the personality characteristics of characters. Guess their personalities: 1, a black bear is thick and an iron cow is naughty. I have red eyebrows and red eyes. Angry as an iron brush, ferocious as a sister-in-law. The evil spirit from the canopy got off the ladder. Holding a double axe, he is called an iron cow. Teacher: Students, can you guess who he is from this clip? Health (6): Black Cyclone Li Kui jy. Teacher: What is this person's personality? Health (7): Brave, rude and brave. Teacher: Where can I see it? Health (8): ... Teacher: Yes, writing a person's appearance means focusing on portraying the characters and grasping the appearance characteristics that can reflect the characters' personality, so as to write a "living" person with flesh and blood. Her name is Lang Lang. She has soft curly hair, a prominent forehead and a flat nose. She is wearing a small blouse with a red background and white spots. She is always silent, like a silent little philosopher. (Wenjing) How do students guess their personalities? Everyone has their own personality characteristics, which determines their differences in dressing (that is, appearance). Personality affects appearance. On the other hand, you can guess a person's personality according to his appearance. Therefore, when we describe the appearance, we should pay attention to the personality characteristics of the characters. Teacher: Yes, you can tell a person's character, demeanor and accomplishment from his appearance. When writing the appearance of a character, we should also grasp the personality characteristics and spiritual quality of the character and make a reasonable choice of the appearance characteristics to make it a whole. In this way, the talents we describe are not only "shapes", but also "gods", living and flesh-and-blood people. [blackboard writing: pay attention to the personality characteristics of the characters] (3) There must be a certain order when describing the appearance. At first glance, she is quite tall, in good shape, neither fat nor thin, and she is a piece of dancing material. Look carefully, she has ear-length short hair, and always wears two hair clips on her head, one on the left and the other on the right. Her hair is tightly tied behind her ears, revealing a smooth and fair face. Her eyes are small, long and thin, but full of spirit. When she laughed, she became two cracks. The nose is slightly upturned, giving people a playful feeling and looking cute. What she likes best at ordinary times is a dress with blue background and white flowers. This skirt is wide and big. As soon as she ran away, the skirt flew like a flower. [blackboard writing: there must be a certain order when describing the appearance. (Generally from the whole to the part, from top to bottom when describing the part) ](4) When describing the appearance, we should pay attention to reflecting the inner feelings of the characters. Game: Guess their psychological activities 1. On New Year's Eve, when her son and grandson came to her, her wrinkles spread out, just like chrysanthemum petals in full bloom, and every wrinkle was filled with a smile. She looked at the portrait of her wife, her lips trembled slightly, and a string of tears flowed in the knife-like wrinkles. [blackboard writing: when describing the appearance, we should pay attention to reflecting the inner feelings of the characters and the author's emotional tendency towards the characters. Third, on-site exercises (1) guide observation and writing. Please choose a classmate in the class as the description object and describe his appearance in 3-5 minutes. The number of words is less than 100, and the names of classmates are not allowed. (Show slide 10)(2) Revise each other at the same table: whether there are typos, whether the sentences are fluent, whether they are organized, and whether the characteristics of the characters are written. (3) Write a clip and the teacher will patrol. Game: Guess who she is? Teacher: Next, let's play a game. Ask the students to guess who he is talking about according to the appearance of the students they just described. If they can guess, we will reward the student with warm applause. Health (9): He is very tall, wearing a red and white football shirt, and has big bright eyes on his round face. He always kicks something when he walks, just as he is always playing football. We learned how to write the appearance of characters. (referring to blackboard writing) always: to write the appearance of a character, we should first pay attention to observing the face, expression, posture and clothing of the character, and then choose according to whether it has characteristics or not and whether it can reflect the character; Pay attention to concrete, vivid and organized expression. Only in this way can we write a living person with both form and spirit.