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Model essay on campus tourism review

Leaders:

Welcome to Hong Kong No.3 Middle School to guide the inspection. Lingang No.3 Middle School was founded in 1958. It is located at the foot of Shizhuling, beside Longwang River. Excellent geographical location, beautiful campus environment, rich cultural background and distinctive school-running characteristics. The school now covers an area of 105 mu, with a building area of 10000 square meters and a staff of10.

Our school has established the school motto of "knowing, understanding, being happy, being happy", formed the school spirit of "integrating knowledge with practice, being harmonious and innovative", adhered to the school philosophy of "everything is for the happy growth of teachers and students", promoted the way of education, and carried out the education that people are satisfied with. Let children study happily here and grow up healthily and happily.

Dormitory area part

Let's introduce our student dormitory to the leaders.

School safety is the top priority of school work. Our school has established a "trinity" school safety management model in practice: first, leaders attach importance to division of labor; Second, the system improvement measures are in place; The third is to strengthen the education guarantee in place; The fourth is to prevent and control * * *

For the arrangement of student dormitories, we also implement this "trinity" model. The specific method is to combine the report system of the head teacher with the teacher inspection and evaluation system, and arrange the "trinity" management of teaching cadres and classes, the duty of teachers during meals and the rotation inspection of the head teacher. Record the inspection results in detail and post them. The inspection results are included in the evaluation of "civilized dormitory" and "advanced class".

For students' rest time at noon and night, we arrange the class teacher and student supervisor to take turns to check and sign every day, and the leaders on duty supervise. Ensure the discipline and safety of students during lunch break and late break.

Blackboard part

What the leaders are seeing now is the campus cultural corridor.

Our school vigorously strengthens the construction of campus scholarly culture, actively mobilizes all teachers and students to participate, and carefully arranges the campus cultural corridor, so as to be separated by a wall and teach by example.

Our campus layout is reasonable, and the road we are taking now is wide and flat, with neat tassels, roses and cherry trees on both sides. Give people a strong, patchwork and distinct feeling! Beautiful teaching environment cultivates students' sentiment, enables students to learn to create beauty while appreciating and feeling beauty, plays a subtle educational role and promotes students' healthy growth in a good environment.

The outdoor cultural wall we see, the left and right blackboard newspapers, each page has a theme and interpretation. They are Message from the Principal, Teacher's Heart, Song of Youth, Inheritance of Civilization, Safety with Me, Legal System in My Heart, Lingang Spirit, etc. Every page highlights our efforts to promote the all-round development of students' morality, intelligence and physique, and enriches the spiritual life of teachers and students. The illustrated and touching blackboard newspaper is a life post that teaches people to seek truth and inspire people to forge ahead. It also shows that teachers and students in our school constantly enrich their enterprising spirit after work and study, and show their pursuit of educational happiness.

Even the words on the blackboard are written in different fonts, with the purpose of educating students and influencing them imperceptibly through the teacher's words and deeds.

The exhibition board part of the middle corridor

The spirit of "openness, tolerance, self-improvement, striving for the world and standing proudly at the forefront" has always inspired all our teachers and students. "Let the children in the port enjoy a happy education in the old appearance of the port" has become our unremitting pursuit.

The exhibition boards seen by the leaders below witnessed the joy of growth and harvest in Lingang No.3 Middle School. With the care and help of the District Education and Sports Bureau, the town Party Committee and the government, Lingang No.3 Middle School has been developing continuously, strengthening its internal quality, shaping its external image and continuously strengthening the supporting construction of the campus. Rebuilding dangerous walls and toilets; Hardening the pavement at the gate; Updated the cultural corridor; Beautify the garden playground; Books and instruments were added, and microcomputer facilities were improved; Connecting with distance education, it has reached the "five-oriented" standards of greening, hardening, lighting, standardization and scientificity, created a more beautiful and harmonious learning and living environment for teachers and students, and the school has taken on a new look.