Junior one English composition "Go to the park with my brother"

One day my brother and I went to the park. The park was beautiful and interesting. We played games in the park and had a good time. When we were tired and hungry, we went shopping in the nearby supermarket. My brother and I had a good time, so we decided to come again next time.

I think this can be done. I wasted a lot of effort on this. Don't worry, you can ~ ~