Ask for ten essays and comments with full marks in the senior high school entrance examination.

Can't be multiple because it's too long.

Shanghai senior high school entrance examination full marks composition (2 articles) 1. Quietly reminding noise and complexity has become a common problem in this era; Speculation and reprimand have interpreted a lot of news; Quietly remind that it is the right time; Chicken soup for the soul soothes the restless soul. You remind me quietly, and I will remind you quietly. Let's really run towards a better tomorrow in harmony! Your sincerity is so touching; Your kindness is so pure; Your virtue is so noble; Your silent reminder is so magical that it can make Gan Kun change his mind. I don't need three orders and five applications, no fanfare, no screaming, no mountains and seas, no twelve gold medals, no strong push ... as long as you quietly remind me, it will be enough to change my fate. When I am confused, your eyes are full of encouragement; When I am frustrated, your happy smile conveys confidence; When I failed, your message ignited my passion ... It's better to remind me quietly than to be thunderous. When I was a child, I bathed in the naughty underground river. My mother called me home loudly and reminded me in a low voice-"Don't be a water ghost's child!" "This matter left a deep imprint on my heart. When I was in primary school, it rained heavily, and my oil-paper umbrella turned hard to watch the water drop fly around. Suddenly there was a strong wind, and the umbrella flew and punctured my companion's oil-paper umbrella. I'm so scared that I don't know what to do. It was my father who quietly reminded me-"Go and change umbrellas with that classmate. "Sow the seeds of goodness in my heart. On the eve of the senior high school entrance examination, physical education class accidentally sprained his ankle. The teacher took me back to the hospital and my classmates came to visit me. Facing the tense review, I am very anxious and don't know what to do. It was the class teacher who quietly reminded me-"believe in yourself, I can do it!" "I have a blooming lotus in my heart. Since work, I always hope that disobedient children will have a correct attitude, clear goals, improve methods, do everything possible to improve their grades, and develop the habit of asking questions and good sentiments. Sometimes I quietly remind you-"Don't slide too far on the edge of danger. "It also left a deep impression on many children. Corruption is the lack of a quiet reminder-a quiet reminder outside the party discipline and state law; Losing your mind is the lack of a person to quietly remind you that impulsiveness will be punished; Evil thoughts are born from the heart, and they lack someone's quiet reminder-no matter how bad the advice is, it is also conducive to the quiet reminder of action. Be loyal to career, family, love, nature and life-let's remind each other more quietly! 2. Quietly remind a candidate in Shanghai that noise has become a common problem in this era; Speculation and reprimand have interpreted a lot of news; Quietly remind that it is the right time; Chicken soup for the soul soothes the restless soul. You remind me quietly, and I will remind you quietly. Let's really run towards a better tomorrow in harmony! Your sincerity is so touching; Your kindness is so pure; Your virtue is so noble; Your silent reminder is so magical that it can make Gan Kun reverse Gan Kun. I don't need to make repeated demands, make a big noise, scream at the top of my lungs, demand mountains and seas, win 12 gold medals, and push hard ... as long as you quietly remind me, it will be enough to change my destiny. When I am confused, your eyes are full of encouragement; When I am frustrated, your happy smile conveys confidence; When I failed, your message ignited my passion ... It's better to remind me quietly than to be thunderous. When I was a child, I bathed in the naughty underground river. My mother called me home loudly and reminded me in a low voice-"Don't be a water ghost's child! "This matter left a deep imprint on my heart. When I was in primary school, it rained heavily, and my oil-paper umbrella turned hard to watch the water drop fly around. Suddenly there was a strong wind, and the umbrella flew and punctured my companion's oil-paper umbrella. I'm so scared that I don't know what to do. It was my father who quietly reminded me-"Go and change umbrellas with that classmate. "Sow the seeds of goodness in my heart. I accidentally sprained my ankle when I went to physical education class on the eve of the senior high school entrance examination. The teacher took me back to the hospital and my classmates came to visit me. Facing the tense review, I am very anxious and don't know what to do. It was the class teacher who quietly reminded me-"believe in yourself, I can do it!" "I have a blooming lotus in my heart. Since work, I always hope that disobedient children will have a correct attitude, clear goals, improve methods, do everything possible to improve their grades, and develop the habit of asking questions and good sentiments. Sometimes I quietly remind you-"Don't slide too far on the edge of danger. "It also left a deep impression on many children. Being tried for corruption is a lack of someone's quiet reminder-a quiet reminder outside the party discipline and state law; Losing your mind is the lack of a person to quietly remind you that impulsiveness will be punished; Evil thoughts are born from the heart, and they lack someone's quiet reminder-no matter how bad the advice is, it is also conducive to the quiet reminder of action. Be loyal to career, family, love, nature and life-let's remind each other more quietly!

1. Memories on campus once again stood on the concrete road of primary school, looked at the drizzle, hesitated for a long time, and found himself wet again. It seems that this habit cannot be changed. I smiled, and a sadness welled up in my heart. I still remember the happy time in primary school, the angelic girl who brought me happiness. At that time, I was in the fourth grade of primary school, and my parents transferred me. At that time, I was very introverted and afraid to talk to people I didn't know. I always sit alone in the seat at the back of the classroom, watching the freshmen joke. Now that I think about it, at that time, those students who were joking might be laughing at me like a mute, but I was afraid to talk to them. At that time, I felt as if I was the only one in the world. One day, it began to rain in Mao Mao for no reason. I look at the sky, but I have an impulse to be caught in the rain. The drizzle attracted me to sit down on the swing, close my eyes and feel the rain falling on my hair. The neck is cold and wet. After a while, the warmth from my hand slowly opened my closed eyes and I saw a delicate face. She has long hair, her eyes are aura, and her mouth is slightly raised. She asked me, "Can I play with weighing?" I didn't speak, just nodded. She sat next to me and began to talk to me. Listening to her talk, I suddenly felt very warm and felt that she was like a sister. After a while, driven by her, we played. I was on the swing, and she pushed me where I could reach the clouds, and then I fell down. Every time I look at the sky, I seem to reach out and touch it, but it is so far away. I played with her for a long time, sitting on the same swing, swinging to the same place within reach, watching her rippling smile and listening to her silvery laughter. Trance is a dream. For a long time, the bell rang and we walked to the classroom together. When I walked to the door of the classroom, I stopped her and blushed and said what I hesitated for a long time: "Can I be your good friend forever?" She looked at me and nodded with a smile. I suddenly feel that it is not difficult to talk to others, and no one will care about my every word. Then, laughing at me is just my own unnecessary worry. Since then, we have been eating together and doing homework together every day ... but such a day has gone away from us unconsciously, and it is getting farther and farther. We grew up slowly, time changed her and me, and we became strangers to each other. When I woke up from my memory, I found two little girls sitting on the swing in the playground, just like me and her. A girl pointed at me and said, "That sister is crying!" The other said, "No, can't you see it's raining?" "It's rain, not tears." Listening to their words, I subconsciously touched my cheek and really couldn't tell whether it was tears or rain. I turned and left, leaving a footprint and a string of memories, so that she could stay in the deepest part of her memory and bloom the most beautiful flowers! This is the work of a middle school student, with unique and novel ideas. When I was in the fourth grade of primary school, I was withdrawn and autistic because I moved to a new environment. On a rainy day, a strange little girl accompanied me on the swing, which made me feel the joy and happiness of my childhood for the first time. As a result, the little girl and I became very good friends. However, as they get older, they actually change. This conception not only highlights the wonder of childlike innocence, but also shows the helplessness of childlike innocence eroded by age. Especially nowadays, "I don't know when two little girls are sitting on the swing in the playground, just like me and her at the beginning", which reveals the reincarnation of this phenomenon in the process of human growth and is thought-provoking. The language of the article is simple and the description is delicate, especially the characterization, which is vivid and vivid. The author shows the loneliness and autism of the past, the innocence and romance of the future, the silence and reserve of the future, and is ready to go. 2. My Conversation with Dad On the day of a candidate in Ningde, a stranger lived in my house. My mother asked me to call him "Dad". For a rebellious girl like me, how can I call a stranger "dad" How can you call a rude and savage "dad"? Although I don't have a real father. But even so, the man I don't want to call "dad" actually lives in my house, although I refuse to talk to him. When I was in primary school, he was responsible for sending me to and from school every day because my home was far from school. He is so fat that he can squeeze oil out. After school, looking at the parents who come and go to pick up their children and the brand-new and fashionable vehicles, my heart is like a broken bead, which is extremely uncomfortable. Sitting on that old bicycle and looking at the fat man in front of me, I became more and more angry and distressed. I moved forward hard, occupying more than half of the space, and he also moved hard and pedaled his bike ... He was still like that, carrying me through thick and thin, and I have always been like that, arrogant and unreasonable, occupying more than half of the space. Gradually, I found that he had obviously lost weight. Originally, the crowded bicycle could hold a big bag, but his body kept moving forward for fear of pressing me. I don't know that he fills his bike with love all the time, and I know that I am beginning to accept him, but I just can't name the word "dad". In junior high school, he gave me his room for me to have a good study environment. They and their mother were crowded in a wet and dark room. I am afraid of the dark at night, and he offered to study with me. The night is quiet, the cicada outside the window has stopped, and there is a faint chrysanthemum fragrance in the air. He turned the pages in a low voice, hardly hearing or making any noise, but occasionally leaning slightly. He looked at a novel in his hand with relish. In this way, he accompanied me with a novel for three long years in junior high school. I was admitted to No.1 Middle School and he was very excited. The village chief congratulated our family. But when the village chief asked him to sign, he pushed the village chief aside and muttered while shaking. Although the voice is very small, I can still hear it: "village head, I'm sorry, I can't read." Can you sign it for me? " For a moment, I suddenly felt very dizzy. He couldn't read but read books he didn't understand for three years, and stayed up with me after a hard day. God, how could I do this to him? How could I … "Dad", I threw myself into his arms and tears filled our eyes.

Anyway, I love you, too. Dad: Hello! I haven't talked to you for a long time. Today, I decided to write down my heart and let you have a look. Dad, you know, after junior high school, whenever I see an article praising my father's love, I despise it. I can really feel maternal love, but I haven't felt fatherly love for a long time. In recent memory, it is my mother who loves me and takes good care of me. And dad, besides being unkempt all day, bearded and clumsy, you still have a cold face all day. Even sometimes when you try to do something for you, you either object or ignore it. What's more, he criticized my practice. It was a few days before Father's Day. Several friends in the class got together to discuss how to surprise dad, and finally we decided to buy a present for dad. I am very reluctant to do so. Because I think even if I do, I think I won't get your smile. This is not the first time. But in the end I decided to buy a fishing rod. I know you have a hobby of fishing. I remember the happiest thing when I was a child was to go fishing with you. At that time, your face was full of sunshine. Every time I see you catch fish, my heart is full of joy. Seeing more and more fish in the bucket, I became more and more excited. I will choose my favorite fish to raise and play. The rest, naturally processed into delicious food by my mother, hit the greedy worm in my stomach. When I was in the fifth grade of primary school, my grandmother left after a serious illness, which made you look a different person. From then on, you got up early and worked harder. I see all this in my eyes, and I love you from my heart. It's just that what I can't stand is your incomprehension. On that day, I bought you a cheaper fishing rod with the pocket money I had accumulated for a long time. I just hope my you can be as full of sunshine as before. I have been thinking nervously about how to say my blessing to you all the way. But when I got home, I found that you hadn't come yet. I know you are still working outside. I'm relieved. After supper, I am doing my homework. I heard you were back. I hurried out. I want to tell you what I am thinking, so that you can pay more attention to your health. I see you still look tired. I suddenly took out my gift and said, "Today is Father's Day. This is a gift I bought for you." I saw a glimmer of light in your eyes, which made me move. But then there is your serious expression, and your tone seems to be severe with a hint of blame. You said, "Just study hard. You are not allowed to buy anything in the future. " Your cold voice is a cruel blow to me. Although before that, I had thought that I might receive such courtesy. But at that moment, I still couldn't help crying. In a vague dream, I heard what you said to your mother, which contained deep remorse. You said you knew your daughter had grown up and loved her father. Hearing this, my heart is warm. Dad, a lot of times, I don't understand you either. In the days to come, I won't be willful any more, and my daughter will work hard! Dad, I know you have done a lot for me and this family, but there is nothing I can do. I only hope that your heart is full of sunshine and that you can be happy! Finally, I wish my father's face will always be full of sunshine! Dad, I just want you to know that I love you. Love your daughter and tell me the truth. I feel sorry for you, too. A candidate in Guiyang, Guizhou looked up at the starry sky and a meteor fell. Looking down, I suddenly heard several frogs croak. Is that the star that hangs on the horizon that I miss day and night? Spring Breeze It's warm and sunny today. You took a kite and led me and my neighbor's children to run in Yuan Ye. The kite that flew in the sky that day flew farther and higher than other children's butterflies and dragonflies. It was smooth and smooth, and there were shouts and cheers ... My neighbor's uncle asked me where I bought the kite, and I said my father made it. Uncle said, no wonder the wind is good for your home. My father and I just giggled and tasted what happiness was. It was a summer night, the moonlight was dim and the breeze was blowing gently. You lie on the grass and I rest in your arms. I can only hear the frog's voice, which spreads between heaven and earth like a bell and drum, and the whole world is immersed in this drum music. At this time, you pointed to the starry sky and told me the legend of the slow flow in the Milky Way. You said, "The most dazzling is Polaris, you are my father's Polaris!" " At that moment, I began to realize what happiness is. Autumn is a bleak autumn wind, and the forest is dyed. I came to the foot of the mountain and saw the sunset reddening the hill. There is a figure, hunched back, carrying a plow, driving cattle, stumbling down from the mountain, fixed in my memory. That's you. I miss my father day and night. Your thin body is no longer the body of its heyday. I didn't see your smile when I put the plow on your shoulder, but I heard your gentle sigh. At this moment, I realized what sadness is. Snow in winter It was a season when the north wind roared with snowflakes and the rain continued. I got the news that your life was dying and rushed to the hospital at once. I took your hand and only heard you say, "I'm sorry, you should take good care of yourself." Say that finish, you walked away. Suddenly, my eyes filled with tears, and my sky collapsed instantly. The kite flying in the sky that day, the Polaris in the night sky and the swaying figure are all gone. I cried my heart out, savoring what pain is. Finally, winter passed and spring came again. When I think of the past years, tears fall again. Looking up at the sky, I have many feelings in my heart. To tell the truth, I feel sorry for you, father. If there is an afterlife, I will be your son.