My ideal excellent composition

No matter in study, work or life, we often see the figure of composition. With the help of composition, people can achieve the purpose of cultural exchange. In order to make your writing easier and more convenient, the following are my ideal and excellent compositions, which are for reference only and I hope to help you.

My ideal excellent composition 1 My ideal is to be a doctor serving the people.

My ideal originated when I was 4 years old. Every morning, I see my father take out some medicine in the cupboard. It's not just a day or two. Every day is the same thing. My curiosity arose, so I asked my mother. Unexpectedly, my mother's answer surprised me. Ordinary father is a strong and healthy middle-aged man, but it turns out that he has been hiding a small pink tumor and rhinitis, and he needs to take a lot of medicine every day to control his illness. Because he often takes medicine, but after I heard the news, my heart ached, my heart ached. From that day on, I fought back tears in my heart and decided to be a doctor to relieve my father's illness and restrain his illness.

I know very well that it is not an easy task to realize this ideal. To achieve it, we must rely on my own efforts and move forward towards my own ideals and goals. Now I want to study hard and try to get into my ideal middle school. Pave the way for your future and make your life more exciting and fulfilling.

"The blade comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold." Ideal, not just talk, should be realized by your own actions. If the sword wants to be sharper, it must be sharpened, and if the plum blossom wants to be more fragrant, it must go through the cold winter. If I want to pursue my ideal, I must make some efforts to achieve final success.

After all, the ideal needs to be realized by our own efforts. Without the achievements of Zhang Zhongjing and some medical scientists, our medicine would not be as developed as it is now. I will join the medical team in the future to benefit the people!

My ideal excellent composition 2 The ideal of a stream is to flow into the sea, the ideal of a prisoner is to fly to the blue sky, the ideal of fallen leaves is to be absorbed by the soil, and my ideal is to become an artist.

Some people say that artists can't find jobs and earn money, but I think art can purify people's hearts, decorate our lives and improve people's aesthetic taste. Many people think that art is painting, in fact, art contains many aspects. From abstract sculpture and garden design to coffee painting and cake baking, all these can be counted as art. There are many things that seem completely unrelated to art. A breakfast can be simple bread and coffee, but if you do it with your heart, it can become a beautiful, energetic and vibrant breakfast. This is an art. Therefore, art is everywhere, making life more stylish and emotional.

Another reason for choosing art is that some people still can't see the meaning of art's existence. Those Renaissance painters, who tried to create new factions and create their own styles, really attracted a burst of ridicule. Today, a casual sketch has also become a rare treasure with priceless value, which shows that people despised art at that time. Therefore, I want to spread art and let more people know its charm.

If you want to be an artist, you must read more books. A lot of inspiration comes from books, so reading can help us find ideas and innovative ideas. Reading is not enough, you need to do it yourself. Many problems that you can't understand in books are unimaginable. If you want to find a solution, you must experiment by yourself. During the experiment, some new ideas may be discovered unexpectedly. In short, there is no accurate direction on the road of art. Either you can solve the problem according to the formula, or you may discover the brilliance of art with a heart that loves life.

Although I am still far from the so-called artistic glory, I have no fixed form and appearance, but I am not unpredictable. Love of art from the heart is the real password.

My ideal excellent composition 3 1. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre and refreshing.

2. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is deep, which highlights the essence of the event.

3. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

4. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.

5. The selection of materials is too popular, unrepresentative, old themes and old ideas.

6. Although I chose events with certain narrative value in my life, because

7. The analysis is not thorough, the excavation is not deep, and there is no deep reflection on the truth hidden behind the incident.

8. The material selection is dull, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.

9. Failure to reflect the truth through small things, and lack of proficiency in the use of the expression "seeing the big with small things".

10. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.

1 1. Strong emotions, such as volcanic eruption, can deeply touch readers.

12. Sincere feelings, deep affection, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.

13. Emotions are real and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a normal heart.

14. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to readers at a glance.

15. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.

16. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.

17. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.

18. The feelings are so strong that I can't seem to feel them. Instead, they are posing and performing by themselves.

19. Lack of depth of emotion, failure to express feelings in scenes, failure to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.

20. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the attitude, likes and dislikes of the characters.

My ideal excellent composition 4 My ideal in life is to be an excellent actor and singer, hoping to bring happiness to everyone with my own singing.

Actors use their own efforts and sweat to express their wishes in my own songs and dances. People only see the actors glamorous on the stage, but they don't know that there are also unknown bitterness behind the glamorous. One minute on stage, ten years off stage. Every movement and expression on the stage often needs to be practiced under the stage for a long time before it can be performed to the audience. If the audience doesn't like it, it means that all the efforts and painstaking efforts of the actors are in vain. Therefore, the profession of actor is full of hardships and bitterness.

Not only that, the profession of actor has also been integrated into all kinds of ups and downs in the world. The difficulty of actors is not only reflected in whether the program can be put on the stage. He is also manifested in the actor's reputation and image. As long as the actor is a little inconvenient, he will disappear on this stage forever. Similarly, the chances of an actor becoming famous are very high, and he can even make people become famous overnight. But there are no real permanent winners on this stage. Because no one can be young forever, only young people have capital on this stage. And this capital is given to each of us by God. As long as each of us can make good use of this capital, then each of us can become a superstar in different fields.

Although the road to being an actor is hard and not easy, I am confident to overcome these difficulties and difficulties and fly higher and higher on the stage of life with my musical dreams. Wandering freely in the ocean of dreams.

It is my dream to be an actor and perform on the stage.

My Ideal Excellent Composition 5 Everyone has an ideal, some want to be a singer, some want to be a doctor, and some want to be a teacher ... My ideal, like many people, wants to be a fair lawyer.

10 years later, I, a just lawyer, will become a top lawyer in the legal field. I will not be an evil lawyer who distorts the facts just to make money. I will do my best to defend justice, and I will defend justice in front of the poor and the rich. In court, I spoke frankly, and my guilty opponent was defeated by the light of justice. My fame in the legal field has spread all over the country, and many people come to me to be a lawyer. Among these people, there are bad people and good people. In the face of bad people, I always close the door and thank my guests. No matter how expensive gifts he sends, it will not blind my heart of justice. I always greet good people with a smile. I will try my best to help him even if they are broke. So I have a title in the legal profession "the embodiment of justice".

Once, an old lady came to my office in rags. She cried and told me everything. It turned out that the old woman was killed by a rich young master because her family was poor, and because she was poor, she could not send those young masters to prison. Later, she heard about my title and came to me for comment. As soon as I heard this, my eyes flashed with flames, and I couldn't wait to teach my grandmother a lesson at once. I confiscated a penny from my grandmother and immediately started looking for clues. A few days later, the court started! I said so much in court that the opposing lawyer had no excuse. Later, the face of the rich young master changed from euphoria to despair. Finally, the young master was sentenced to death and the old woman was compensated. My fame is growing.

This is my ideal, and you have your own ideal. Let's talk about it

On that day in 2006, my father and I visited a famous exhibition. This exhibition shows some photos taken by a photographer while living in the wild.

We shuttled through energetic photos, and dazzling works kept flashing in front of my eyes. Looking at those works really seems to take us to a forest full of killing, fighting and status. It seems that I saw the scene of the law of the jungle and brutally killing cute little animals. But some are not! Some photos describe the love between animals and the friendship in the forest. For example, this is a photo: there are two cows, resisting the fierce attack of a lion together. In normal times, one cow can't resist the lion's attack at all, but the strength of two cows together can drive the lion away. How beautiful nature is!

These beautiful scenery of nature attracted me and made me like photography gradually. I think it is not enough to just like it, but also to be a professional photographer. I think the photographer's life is so carefree! He can run freely in the vast fields all day; He can lean against the big tree and lie on the grassland, sleeping soundly and undisturbed; He can take pictures of small animals, capture every detail and even get in close contact with them. He can ... he can ... he can do anything, he is free, and I look forward to this life! Because I am still young, being a photographer has become my temporary ideal!

When I grow up, I will be a photographer. I want to discover the friendship between animals, the creatures in the forest and the beauty of nature!

My Ideal Excellent Composition 7 Some people say that the ideal is the guiding light, some people say that the ideal is a starlight in the night, and some people say that the ideal is a song when you are lonely, but I think the ideal is an inspiring goal.

I have a simple ideal, that is to be a fairy tale writer.

In fairy tales, you can fly without wings; In fairy tales, all creatures can talk; In fairy tales, you can feel different happiness; In fairy tales, ideals are not just ideals, and hopes are not just hopes.

I like fairy tales since I was a child, because fairy tales are my other world. As soon as I picked up the fairy tale book, I read it tirelessly, forgetting the time and myself. I only heard the sun talking to the water drops, and I only saw the chicks learning to fly with their mothers.

Growing up, my dream is to be a fairy tale writer and write very good and beautiful fairy tales so that everyone can feel happy and joyful. You can read fairy tales when you are sick. This is a beautiful angels in white. When you are sad, you can look at fairy tales, which are a kind of spiritual masseur; You can read fairy tales when you are lonely. They are good friends who accompany you.

Now that I have this dream, I will move towards this goal-reading more extracurricular books and expanding my thinking; Practice writing more and improve your level; Observe carefully and seek the true meaning of life. In short, hard work+extensive reading = becoming an excellent fairy tale writer.

I have written many fairy tales, all of which were created after repeated thinking. There are characters with distinctive personalities, encounters with bumpy fate and bizarre happy endings. During the period, it may be that the study task is heavy and a little lazy. However, I will not give up and will not be discouraged. Starting today, I will re-accumulate materials and boldly conceive stories. I know that writing is not about being fast, but about being good.

I believe that in the near future, everyone can read my fairy tales, so that everyone likes my fairy tales, so that hope is no longer hope, so that ideals are not just ideals!

My ideal excellent composition 8 Time is like water, life is like a song, day after day, year after year, flowers bloom and fall, only the dream in my heart never dies. ...

My ideal is to be a writer. In the third and fourth grades, all my classmates were talking about a writer. I asked my deskmate, "Which writer are you talking about?" The deskmate took out a book from his schoolbag and said, "It's Sister Braid. This book was written by her. I'll lend it to you. "

I picked up the book and turned to the first page ... I read it and was attracted by the story. This is a book called "Meeting You through Time and Space", which introduced me to an unheard-of magical figure-the book tamer! This strange story, let the incredible book demon sweep my mind and mind.

I didn't come to my senses until I read the whole book. Oh! Sister braid's story is so full of childlike interest. It's like sitting on a train and seeing endless scenery along the way. I began to love reading braided sister's books, and it was from that time that the ideal of being a writer took root in my heart.

In ancient Sima Qian, he also had such an ideal. In accordance with his father's wishes, he decided to write a history book "A famous mountain hidden in Tibet will be handed down to future generations". In the seventh year when he wrote Historical Records, the Li Ling case happened. Sima Qian was arrested and imprisoned and suffered cruel "corruption". After being punished, he tried to commit suicide because of humiliation and pain. However, at the thought of the unfinished history books at the end of my life, I submit to humiliation and rise up against them. I used it for 18 years, and finally I wrote a historical record. It has always been highly respected by people. Mr. Lu Xun once spoke highly of Historical Records in very general language, saying that "the historian died and sang a swan song, and Li Sao had no rhyme."

As my writing level is getting better and better, I am one step closer to the writer's ideal.

I want to write one story after another with the pen in my hand, write down my childhood and write down my dreams!

My ideal excellent composition 9 My ideal is to be a painter. I want to draw all the mountains, rivers, grass and trees of the motherland with my strokes. But if I were a painter, what would be the first painting? I'm going to paint the Great Wall of Wan Li. When I was a child, my grandfather said to me: The Great Wall of Wan Li is a dragon. At school, the teacher said to me: The Great Wall of Wan Li is a symbol of the Chinese nation. My ideal is to be a painter, so I will first look at its majestic posture, the world-famous Jiayuguan, known as the first pass in the world. Then, with my magic brush, I drew this dragon. I also want to draw Mount Tai, Huashan, Hengshan, Songshan and Hengshan among the five mountains. The Yellow River is known as the cradle of the Chinese nation. Oh, if I were a painter, I would travel all over the famous mountains and rivers, places of interest and historical sites of the motherland and describe their elegant demeanor.

Oh, if I were a painter, what else could I paint? I want to draw the ups and downs of the harvest field; I want to draw a busy factory with steel flowers everywhere; I'll also draw that hot construction site. At that time, I will definitely take my picture folder to my alma mater where I spent six years studying and living in primary school. At that time, the alma mater, the teaching building will be dozens of skyscrapers, and the whole campus will be as beautiful as a garden. After decades of hard work, teachers will be full of peaches and plums. I want to put the new look of my alma mater, the kind face of teachers and the smiling faces of a new generation of children into my picture.

Ah! If I were a painter, I would always carry a drawing board on my back and take a brush with me, and draw wherever I go. At that time, I will travel all over the country and draw them all with my brush. I believe that one day I will become an excellent painter.

My Ideal Excellent Composition 10 Everyone has his own ideal. Some people want to be scientists and invent a new thing for the motherland; Some people want to be a skilled doctor and save lives; Some people want to be teachers, the world is full of peaches and plums ... as students, they will also have a lot of interests. Interest gradually evolved into an ideal. You guessed right, I have always had an ideal, that is, to be a fashion designer.

When I was very young, I saw models walking on the runway on TV. They are wearing beautiful clothes and their faces are filled with carefree happiness. I asked my mother curiously, "What are they doing?" Mom smiled and replied, "They are showing clothes designed by fashion designers. Only when they put on clothes that they feel beautiful will they feel extremely happy. " After listening to my mother, I nodded inexplicably. Since then, I have an ideal to be a fashion designer when I grow up.

Because my desire to be a fashion designer is too urgent, and I have made many jokes. I remember once, I made a skirt out of newspapers, beads and colored paper. I put it on me. I look beautiful in the mirror. I turned proudly in front of the mirror. At this time, my parents came back. They laughed their heads off when they saw me, which embarrassed me!

I want to be a fashion designer. The clothes I designed must be the best, not only beautiful, but also comfortable to wear. I want to help primary school students design a school uniform, which can not only make students look generous, but also show their lively sunshine.

I want to design clothes for my teacher. I want to design clothes for my parents; I want to design clothes for my friends; I want to design clothes for all those who need them.

I learned from the mouth of adults: to be a fashion designer, you must draw well. So, I like painting very much now. I often take out drawing paper and draw all kinds of clothes at home. Although I am not very good at drawing, I am still full of enthusiasm.

This is my ideal. I will work hard for this ideal, and I believe that my ideal will come true in the near future.

My ideal excellent composition 1 1 ideal is the first flower in spring; Ideal is burning for the first time in summer? ; Ideal is the first fruit of autumn; Ideal is the first snowflake in winter; Ideal is an oasis in the desert; Ideal is the horn of life ... the ideal of mountain stream is the sea, the ideal of prisoner is the blue sky, and the ideal of tree is the earth. How much more is it a person? Of course, I also have ideals. To everyone, my ideal is naive. However, it will not have lofty ideals like some people. My dream is to be a famous veterinarian!

I remember that day, I watched the news on TV. What caught my attention was the handsome vet. Let me take a closer look, ah! They are feeding two little white tigers! Watching these two little white tigers eat with relish, the veterinarians are very happy, and my heart is sweet. I like small animals best. Every time I see a small animal, I am very happy! From then on, I decided: I must be a vet when I grow up.

One day, I told my mother my ideal, and her mother said in surprise, "No way! Yi Xuan, you don't have a fever! " I said strangely, "What's the matter? Mom, what's wrong with being a vet? " Mother said nothing but shook her head. I understand that my ideal is not so beautiful. However, since being a veterinarian is my ideal, I can't let it go!

I have been paying attention to the news of small animals every day in recent years. I'm always the first to jump in front of the TV and watch them. From now on, I must study hard, study hard and make progress every day! On the basis of excellent grades, learn more about small animals and grow into a real veterinarian!

It is my dream to be a veterinarian. With ideals, it is as colorful as a dream; With ideals, it is as elegant as a butterfly; With ideals, like the seeds of expectations, they are planted in our hearts. As long as we work hard, the ideal bud will bloom. Let's fight for our ideals, come on!

My Ideal Excellent Composition 12 Everyone has his own ideal. Some students in our class want to be angels in white-to be a doctor when they grow up, to save lives, drive away diseases and give patients a healthy body. Some students want to be writers when they grow up and write more soothing and excellent works. Some students want to be teachers when they grow up, watering the budding seedlings with knowledge like gardeners, and cultivating more outstanding talents for the country. Everyone has different ideals. I want to be an excellent singer when I grow up.

It's no use just talking and not doing, and so is my ideal. I must use practical actions to realize my ideal. First of all, I must study all the subjects carefully, and then I will study dance hard. The reason why we should learn all subjects well is that every subject is very important, and every subject can't be left behind or discarded. However, it focuses on Chinese, English and music.

Nothing is easy to do, and being a singer is no exception. "One minute on stage, ten years off stage." This sentence can prove that although the time to perform on stage is short, we need to practice hard for a long time before the performance.

Now I am still so far from my ideal, and the road ahead is still very bumpy. Come on! Conquer everything with firm faith! Ideal is a stone, knocking out a single spark; Ideal is the road, illuminating the road of night navigation; Ideal is fire, lighting the extinguished lamp; Ideal is the road that leads you to the dawn. As long as I have a firm belief, work hard and go forward bravely, I believe I will step by step towards the road of singing and reach the ideal realm!

Maybe your ideals are as many as stars, and your ideals will never change. But no matter what career and work I want to do when I grow up, there is only one thing I will never change, that is, I will start from small things, start from myself and be a person who contributes to society and the whole people!

My ideal excellent composition 13 ideal is a bright light, illuminating the road of our life; Ideal is the birthplace of wisdom, from which we can find the truth and understand the truth of being a man. Life is a starting line, and the ideal is waiting for us at the end, but the distance we have traveled now is only 1% of the whole journey, and the rest of the journey needs us to complete with faith, courage and hard work. The ideal waiting at my destination is a writer.

My parents bought many books for me to read at home in order to cultivate my writing ability. I sit at my desk, watching my friends frolicking outside, while I sit here reading. Really boring! But on second thought, instead of sitting here, it is better to see what is in this book! I turned to the first page. Wow, the beautiful language and vivid stories in the book deeply attracted me. I thought, how did the author write an ordinary thing so vividly? From then on, I fell in love with reading and writing. I think this is an indispensable thing in life. After reading this, you may say, what's good about being a writer? How much can I get for the manuscript fee? Besides, writing at home is not good with your brain! If you look at it this way, you are wrong. Writers instinctively attract readers with their rich and interesting content, not to get paid for the manuscript and become famous, thus bringing them happiness and learning knowledge. This is the true meaning of being a writer.

This is my ideal, an ordinary ideal that can no longer be ordinary. Maybe others don't agree with it that much. I believe that I will struggle with faith, courage and hard work, and then the ideal of waiting at the end of my starting line will deeply cheer me up.

My Ideal Excellent Composition 14 Zhang Hua once said: A person without lofty ideals and lofty goals in life is like a bird without wings, a machine without a motor, and a light bulb without tungsten filament.

Ideal is not only the mother of career, but also the beacon of life, which will guide you to the other side of success. Everything in the world has ideals: the ideal of flowers is to produce beautiful flowers; The ideal of birds is to fly freely in the blue sky, and the ideal of fruit trees is to bear countless fruits. ...

It is precisely because of ideals that people will struggle and work hard for their ideals. My ideal is to be a good teacher with selfless dedication.

Teachers are like candles, burning themselves and illuminating others; Teachers are like gardeners, cultivating our young saplings into towering trees. Teachers are engineers of the human soul. They work hard and selflessly on the three-foot platform, day after day, year after year, transmitting knowledge and spreading human civilization. It has trained a batch of outstanding talents for the country, making the whole society more civilized and the country more prosperous and strong.

When we first went to school, the teacher taught us to read and tell us stories. At that time, I thought the teacher was really good. His mind is full of knowledge and he can do anything. I think: I want to be a teacher when I grow up and teach children everything I know. Slowly, we bid farewell to our innocent childhood, and the knowledge taught by our teachers has become richer and deeper. The teacher is really great. He is like a book, giving us knowledge, letting us swim in the ocean of knowledge and leading us to the door of success. Therefore, this has strengthened my belief as a teacher.

If I become a teacher, I will also climb the three-foot platform to impart knowledge to children and lead them to swim in the ocean of knowledge. What a wonderful thing!

Being a teacher is my ideal, it will sound an alarm for me, remind me not to make mistakes, and urge me to study hard, forge ahead, persevere, fight hard and strive for the ideal reality!

My ideal excellent composition 15 My ideal is to be an electronic engineer.

Perhaps many people will think that computer engineers are the chief culprit in hurting others' eyes. No, it's not. When the words "eye protection mode has been turned on" appear on the mobile phone, have you ever thought that such a program was created by a computer engineer?

I want to be an electronic engineer, because he will bring convenience to people. When someone can't write, the browser can answer your questions; When you are far away from home, a video call will make your dream come true completely; When you want to take a picture as a souvenir, the camera is definitely the best choice ..... Only with these, you should feel that the benefits brought by electronic engineers are endless.

I am convinced that if I want to be an electronic engineer, I must learn math well first. Only mathematics can add luster to my ideal road. In my electronic programming, the calculation factor is essential; Secondly, I want to learn English well, because many programming books are in English, and learning badly will definitely lead to many jokes. Moreover, the keyboard is composed of English letters, and English factors are also integrated into it; Third, I want to learn my composition well. When I describe the program, I have no good literary talent. Who will read these programs? Besides, I ask people programming questions. If my language organization is not good, who will listen? Finally, I must learn history well. Enough history will make everyone who uses software indulge in it, make them open their eyes and stop believing that software is a plaything.

I believe that nothing is difficult in the world, and I am afraid that if you put your mind to it, countless efforts will definitely keep me moving forward on the ideal road!