Distinguish and modify incorrect sentences

Modifying a defective sentence refers to modifying a sentence with grammatical defects so that it does not change the original meaning and makes the sentence more fluent. What are the types of faulty sentences that can be analyzed and modified? The following is a list of faulty sentences that I have compiled for analyzing and modifying. Welcome to read

Distinguishing and modifying faulty sentences 1

1. Among the following sentences, there is no one with a grammar problem Yes ( )

A. The development of any civilization is a process of collision, integration, and exchange with other civilizations. A completely closed environment cannot bring about the progress of civilization, but will only lead to its decline.

B. Promoting the paid use of plastic bags mainly cultivates people to reduce the use of plastic bags through economic means, which will undoubtedly have a positive effect on reducing white pollution and purifying the environment.

C. When the Olympic torch reaches the summit of Mount Everest, it must overcome unfavorable special climatic conditions such as low temperature, low pressure, and strong winds, and fully consider the various difficulties that mountaineers may encounter when climbing to the summit.

D. The Beijing-Shanghai high-speed railway, which will be completed in 2013, will not only optimize the railway transportation structure in the eastern region, but also help railway transportation and other transportation modes complement each other's advantages.

Analysis: In item A, the word order of the three words "collision, fusion, and communication" is inappropriate. According to the order of development of things, it should be "collision, communication, fusion"; in item B, the verb and object are improperly matched or the ingredients are incomplete. , should change "cultivate" to "prompt" or add "habit" at the end of the sentence; item C, improper or illogical collocation, "low temperature, low pressure, strong wind and other unfavorable special climatic conditions cannot be overcome", should Change "overcome" to "combine".

Answer: D

2. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors and clear meaning is ()

A. This picture reproduces the body Girls in festive costumes sang and danced together around a roaring bonfire, their clothes soaked with sweat.

B. According to Italian law, Berlusconi cannot serve as club president during his term of office, otherwise he may do acts contrary to the public interest.

C. Only when labor is organically combined with interests, hobbies and even ideals, can the imagination and creativity hidden in everyone be brought out to the greatest extent.

D. Our school’s fundraising event for the earthquake-stricken areas in Sichuan received positive responses from many school teachers and classmates, and raised more than 30,000 yuan in less than one day.

Analysis: Item A, incomplete components, reproduce the situation where the object center word is missing after the sentence, and should be added at the end of the sentence; item B, the sentence pattern is mixed in a chaotic structure, otherwise it will not work "Otherwise his behavior may be contrary to the public interest" and "Otherwise his behavior may be contrary to the public interest" are mixed together. It can also be said that the word-object combination is inappropriate, and "do" should be changed to "make" or "behavior" should be changed to "thing"; item D has an unclear meaning, and many school teachers and classmates have ambiguities. In addition,? The component "less than one day" is redundant and should be changed to "less than one day".

Answer: C

3. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ( )

A. On May 8, the Russian State Duma The overwhelming vote approved new President Medvedev's nomination of former Russian President Vladimir Putin, and Medvedev signed the appointment letter that day.

B. After processing, this non-woven environmentally friendly bag has the advantages of being waterproof, easy to clean, large in capacity, and meeting consumers' objective needs for environmentally friendly bags.

C. In a cultural environment where blending and conflict coexist, whether the spirit can be expressed using the language of Eastern sculpture is exactly what Chinese contemporary sculpture lacks.

D. The moment the Olympic flame reached the summit of Mount Everest, both the warriors who participated in the summit and the people watching this feat all over the world felt the shock to their hearts without exception.

Analysis: Item B, the sentence structure is mixed or improperly matched, "meets consumers' objective needs for environmentally friendly bags" and "advantages" do not match, and should be changed to "waterproof, easy to clean, large capacity" The advantages of the environmental protection bags meet the objective needs of consumers for environmentally friendly bags. Item C, improper matching of one side and two sides, is exactly what Chinese contemporary sculpture lacks. It is one-sided, and can it be two-sided? The two are not the same. If it is consistent, "can" should be deleted; item D, redundant components, "all without exception" or repeated wording, should be deleted "all without exception" or "without exception".

Answer: A

4. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ( )

A. The Qinghai-Tibet Railway, known as the "Heavenly Road" It was officially opened to traffic on July 1, which shows that my country has the ability to build plateau railways independently and independently.

B. From clenbuterol, Sudan red to melamine, various food additives that harm human health are difficult to prevent, and preventing the frequent occurrence of food safety incidents is a top priority.

C. The auction unit is responsible for withholding and paying the personal income tax payable on the proceeds from the auction of personal property, and shall file tax returns with the competent taxation department where the auction unit is located in accordance with regulations.

D. Whether e-commerce can become a pillar of Internet commerce depends on a premise, that is, it can benefit more consumers, merchants and cooperative websites.

Analysis: The components of item A are incomplete, and a verb such as "have" should be added after "already"; item B is improperly matched, so "prevent" and "situation" are not matched; item D is concerned with one thing and not the other. To both sides.

Answer: C

Analyze and modify incorrect sentences 2

1. Among the following sentences, the one with no linguistic defects is ( )

A. After Taiwan prosecutors indicted Ma Ying-jeou for corruption, Ma Ying-jeou held a press conference at 18:00 on the 13th, announcing his resignation as chairman of the Kuomintang and his decision to run for the 2008 Taiwan regional leader.

B. The development of contemporary information technology provides artists with greater creative space. The rapid development of Internet technology enables faster and better communication between artists and art-loving friends.

C. The 17th National Congress of the Communist Party of China will include "ecological civilization" in the report. To study and implement this spirit, we must first firmly establish the important idea of ??"ecological civilization" in the whole society as the central link.

D. April 22 this year is the 38th World Earth Day. Our country’s propaganda theme is “Be kind to the earth and start by saving resources.” The purpose of determining such a theme is to arouse human beings' awareness and behavior of caring for the earth and protecting their homeland.

Analysis: A. The object of the statement is inconsistent, and the subject should be placed at the beginning of the sentence; C. The sentence pattern is mixed, and it is inappropriate to establish and use ?; D. The verb and object are not properly matched, and ? Arousal and behavior do not match well.

Answer: B

2. (2008?National Ⅱ) Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ( )

A. Jinwu charcoal carving technology Exquisite, using pure natural pigments for coloring, it has elegant, fashionable and individual artistic enjoyment. It can also absorb toxic and harmful gases. It is an environmentally friendly art.

B. The county has conscientiously implemented the "Village to Every Village" plan, one of the eight practical things planned by the province. By the end of October, it was the first in the region to solve the problem of rural people having difficulty listening to radio and watching TV.

C. In their speeches, the heads of state of China and Russia unanimously stated that they should take the holding of the National Year as an opportunity to enhance mutual understanding and friendship between the two peoples and deepen exchanges and cooperation between the two countries in various fields.

D. I heard that Dr. Pan Wangcong, the village official, was going to give a lecture on agricultural technology. Everyone was very interested. Before the time came, the village committee meeting room was filled with many villagers coming to listen to the lecture. The scene was very lively. .

Analysis: A. Improper combination of verb and object, "possession" and "artistic enjoyment" cannot be matched. "Artistic enjoyment" can be changed to "features"; B. components are incomplete and word order is improper, "implementation" lacks an object The central sentence, the first clause can be changed to? The county is seriously carrying out the installation work of village-to-village communication, which is one of the eight practical things planned by the province; D The meaning is unclear and the sentence structure is mixed, it is not time yet? Change it to "It's not class time yet", and "Villers come to listen to the class" to "Villers who come to listen to the class".

Answer: C

3. (2008? Tianjin Volume) Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors and clear meaning is ( )

A. Citizen Virtue is the social ethics quality that individual social citizens should possess when participating in the practice of social life, or the social virtues with exemplary significance for fairness that are actually displayed.

B. We will definitely be able to show the style of an ancient civilized country during the Olympics. By then, our city will not only become more beautiful, but everyone will also be more civilized.

C. Some real estate agents have expressed the same concern. They believe that home buyers must consider the location and availability of the house and not blindly follow the trend.

D. To celebrate the 60th anniversary of the Cannes Film Festival, the festival organizing committee specially invited 35 directors who have won the Cannes Palme d'Or to shoot a 3-minute commemorative short film for each of them.

Analysis: B word order is inappropriate, "our city" and "not only" exchange positions, this question examines the positional relationship between the correlative word and the subject. When the subjects of the two clauses are inconsistent, the correlative word should be placed In front of the subject; C The concept is unclear, "geographical location" and "housing conditions" cannot be juxtaposed, "geographical location" belongs to "housing conditions"; D. Multiple attributives are arranged improperly and the verb and object are improperly matched, "35" is placed In front of the ?, the ?winner? and the ?Palme d'Or cannot be matched. You can change the ?winner?

Answer: A

4. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ( )

A. The main component of Chinese ink painting is ink, with clear water added. Dyeing on rice paper, interpenetrating, reflecting different aesthetic tastes through different shades, is called "Mobao" by the Chinese.

B. A South Korean official revealed that the relevant member states have reached consensus and agreed to establish the fund to prevent a financial crisis like the one in 1997 from happening again.

C. Due to environmental pollution, serious infections by anaerobic bacteria often occur, and tetanus is easily produced, resulting in death due to lack of treatment locally or during transportation to other places.

D. This annual report from the World Health Organization provides the latest information on mortality, disease spectrum, and increases in health risk factors such as smoking and drinking among children and adults.

Analysis: The subject of A is incomplete or the structure is confusing. There is no subject of "calligraphy treasure". The "?" after "ink painting" should be moved to the front of it, so that the subjects of the preceding and following clauses are consistent; B Improper negation, "preventing" should be "from happening again", so "should be removed" instead of ""; C component is incomplete, remove the preposition "because" at the beginning of the sentence, and add "patient" after "causing".

Answer: D

5. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors and clear semantics is ( )

A. ?A thousand pieces of gold are easy to come by, but a general is hard to come by. Therefore, we must not only pay attention to the use of imported talents, but also effectively improve the remuneration of original scientific and technological backbones and fully mobilize their enthusiasm for studying business.

B. After the reform of the office attendance system, the phenomenon of reading a cup of tea, a cigarette, and a newspaper for half a day has disappeared. The number of people with perfect attendance has suddenly increased, and the attendance rate has increased significantly compared with three months ago. .

C. The square platform is smooth and abrupt, steep and tall, like a big coffin. I heard from the old people that no one has ever been able to go up to Sifang Terrace, and no one who has gone up has ever been able to come back alive.

D. Following the comprehensive implementation of the compulsory education curriculum reform, the city’s high school curriculum reform will also be put on the agenda. The general trend of the reform is to reduce the required courses, add elective courses, and implement modular teaching.

Analysis: The meaning of sentence A is unclear. "They" can be understood as "original scientific and technological backbones", or as "introduced talents", or as including both; B: Attendance rate Is there a big increase? Improper matching; C is illogical. It says no one can go up, but then it says what about the people who go up. It is obviously wrong.

Answer: D

6. Among the following sentences, the one without grammatical errors is ( )

A. According to reports, the Institute of Food Safety of the Chinese Academy of Inspection and Quarantine Sciences Tests have shown that the "red heart" duck eggs produced by ducks after eating feed mixed with Sudan red contain Sudan IV.

B. The pace of modern people’s lives is getting faster and faster, the burdens are getting heavier and the pressure is getting bigger and bigger. This is naturally due to the objective reasons of the development of the times, and is also related to the fluctuations in our inner world.

C. Over a long period of time, the increasingly fierce competition for admission to higher schools and academic workload have made the living space and scope of activities of middle school students increasingly narrow, which has become a focus issue.

D. Taking the road of circular economy based on the most effective use of resources and protecting the environment, and continuously improving people's living standards and quality, is the ultimate goal of sustainable development.

Analysis: B has a confusing structure and inverted cause and effect. The last sentence should be changed to? It also has a lot to do with the fluctuations in our inner world?; C? is getting more and more intense? and is inappropriately matched with the? academic load? There is overlap between the living space and the scope of activities and should not be juxtaposed; the D component is incomplete and must be added before the word "last".

Answer: A

7. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ( )

A. Because science is a double-edged sword? , Therefore, advanced medical technology may relieve patients' pain, but may also be helpless against the disease.

B. Compared with making a phone call, using text messages can avoid the embarrassment caused by improper wording, and you don’t have to deliberately control your emotions for fear of losing your temper, so communication is more relaxed and casual.

C. When Mr. Fu Lei talked about his experience of learning French when he was thirteen years old, he said that the teacher had problems with his teaching methods and he did not study hard, so his grades were very bad, 10 out of 10. Nine has been forgotten.

D. In what way will Beijing demonstrate the ability of our ancient nation to participate in international modern affairs? Liu Qi responded to the Olympic venues’ admiration for foreigners and said: It is our consistent principle to run the Olympics frugally.

Analysis: A is illogical. The word "double-edged sword" means that the positive effects and side effects of things coexist, and "there is nothing to do about the disease" is not a side effect; C is inappropriate in word order and should be changed to "existing teachers" There is a problem with the teaching method, and there is also the reason why I don’t recite it well?;D?Response?The corresponding components are incomplete.

Answer: B

8. Among the following sentences, the one with clear semantics is ( )

A. The thickness of Panasonic’s new product is 14 mm. People's visual perception is not like Sony's products, which have an illusion of being slightly thinner than the actual thickness.

B. The U.S. government says it still supports a strong dollar, but whether this is just words or decisive measures must be taken, economists have a negative view on this.

C. Among the representatives of the World Anti-AIDS Conference were the directors of China Central Television and Oriental Television. The president of Hong Kong Phoenix TV was also invited to attend the meeting.

D. This murder tragedy that happened in an ordinary family also caused confusion and discussion among relatives. No one in the family believed that Xiaoli’s mother did not love her.

Analysis: A. There is an illusion that it is slightly thinner than the actual thickness. Does it refer to Panasonic’s new product or Sony’s product? The reference is not clear; B There is ambiguity, economics Everyone’s view on this is negative. Does this mean that it is just words or that decisive measures should be taken? The meaning of the sentence is unclear; D can also be understood in two ways due to different pauses: to say Xiaoli’s mother doesn’t love her, and no one in her family believes it? And to say that Xiaoli’s mother doesn’t love her, no one in her family believes it.

Answer: C