Write a composition with metaphor and antithesis.

1. With the theme of "kindness", I hurried through sixteen spring and autumn periods. Time is like water, diluting some good memories. Only the window of the mirror that I opened with the kindness in my heart was left.

Every day when I pass by the attic, I will appreciate the Parthenocissus crawling all over the wall. I appreciate the constant green of the four seasons, the vitality and vigor, the naughty little green buds exploring spring, the agility of green branches waiting for spring, the chic of green leaves welcoming autumn, and the hope of mo Xiang branches sending winter.

The Parthenocissus Wall is interwoven into a tight net, and the ancient and lonely windows are in it, just like a pair of vicissitudes of eyes. The gray curtains are also muddy tears, which block all the sunshine belonging to the windows.

Ring the bell gently, and a slightly thought-provoking picture appears: an old man with thick hair opens the window, and his eyes are full of surprise and excitement, but then they are full of disappointment, helplessness and sadness. Then she put down the curtains and closed the small windows dotted with green again.

The loneliness and bitterness of the old man shocked me. Like my grandmother, the poor old man lives alone in the old house, and every time he comes home, he can see her face full of bitter tears.

My kind grandmother must be thinking of me at the door of the house at the moment, just as the old man in the window must be thinking of his children.

The setting sun held the treetops hard and refused to leave for a long time. Is it waiting for something?

Ring the bell again, give the old man in the window a bright smile and sprinkle a touch of gorgeous color. Without too much, that window will open many times. Smiling and * * * have become my special greetings to the elderly every day.

I use a little kindness in my heart to gently knock on the lonely window of the old man's heart, cut open a pair of beautiful curtains, decorate that beauty and let the sun shine into the old man's heart.

Comments: Starting from his pure heart, this young author has aroused sincere thinking about caring for the elderly. Through delicate description, convey inner sincerity and truth gently. The language is vivid and the feelings are beyond words.

A kind dream

Class 9 (4) Cao

Sitting in front of the court watching the flowers bloom and fall, Daiyu buried the flowers, full of affection, which is where the kindness lies; Li Jianying realized the greatest value of life in 16 seconds, which is where kindness lies; Cong Fei touched China with love, which is the goodness.

Kindness is a supreme true psychology from the heart, and every kindness is a beautiful dream, which is touching.

"The flowers are falling all over the sky, and the death of the red pin is pitiless." The beauty of Daiyu is unlucky, just like the flowers on the branches, which have the most brilliant glory and the tragic ending of decline. Daiyu pity flowers, walking lightly, carrying a flower bag and a jacquard hoe, gentle and gentle, picking up the falling red mud and blowing it off, and collecting their beauty underground. The petals falling into the water drifted farther and farther in her sad eyes. It is this kindness that has brewed a wonderful dream, and the petals in the stream will flow into this dream and be fixed in the scene where Daiyu buries flowers.

"The body of seven feet fights against the sky. What is the importance of faith?" Li Jianying decided to skydive, 16 seconds forced landing. Looking at the dense villages below, he made a brave decision. Fortunately, people's lives and property were saved. Unfortunately, our hero was annihilated in the flames, but it was this fearless sacrifice that created a glorious military soul. It was kindness that made such a great dream, and the flames of the sky confirmed the glory of the dream, which was fixed in the scene of forced landing in Li Jianying.

"The first good Cong Fei, never-ending love." Cong Fei, a great good man who touched China. Donate all the proceeds from each performance to children who are out of school, even though they know they are terminally ill, they have not stopped loving. At the moment he left, his face was always full of smiles. Kindness is full of this epic dream, and his serene smile is the dream's * * * fixed in the scene where Cong Fei smiles forever.

Kindness is the true feelings of burying flowers, the life-and-death choice of 16 seconds, and the endless love for life. The world needs kindness, and life calls for kindness. Let kindness stay in our hearts forever and build our beautiful dreams together.

Comments: The author's understanding of "kindness", combined with the corner of real life, is realistic and has a certain depth.

2. Take "smile" as the topic. You must be surprised to see this topic: does a smile have power? Of course, and the strength is not small! If you don't believe me, please listen to the story I told you.

A closed heart curtain slowly opened, showing the impression of a few years ago.

A little girl sat under a big banyan tree on campus and kept crying. She was very sad. Sad cries echoed in the empty campus, which was so worrying. At this time, a teacher in a white dress, like a white fairy falling from the sky, walked gently to the little girl and sat beside her. "Don't cry, don't cry, tell Mr. Zheng everything, crying can't solve things." The little girl still kept her head down and said intermittently, "I, I did badly in the exam." Especially, especially writing and composition, it's too bad ... "

After listening, the teacher smiled gently and then said, "That's why! If you don't do well in the exam, try harder next time; If the composition is not well written, thank you for reading it. No, the problem is solved! "

The little girl thought, Teacher Zheng has never cheated me. But is everything really as simple as Mr. Zheng said? She sobbed and looked up suspiciously.

Teacher Zheng's beautiful long eyelashes sparkled, her watery eyes seemed to see through the little girl's mind, and a silvery voice said, "When did Teacher Zheng lie to you?" Say that finish, a sweet smile, two shallow dimples hanging on his face, very touching.

In an instant, a spring of strength flowed all over the little girl's body. The little girl felt that she had the strength and decided to cheer up and go to the base camp of composition. ...

That little girl is me. Because of Mr. Zheng's encouraging smile, I began to love literature, and my composition level naturally improved. Although I came to Xiamen, Mr. Zheng's earnest teachings still linger in my ears: it's no use crying, life is still long, and there will be more ups and downs. Cheer up, face it and move forward bravely! This will benefit me for life.

3. Write a short essay by comparison. The sentences are neat, symmetrical, with distinct rhythm and harmonious tone, which is easy to remember and recite. The antithetical sentences echo back and forth, set off each other, contrast sharply, and the language is concise, which can enhance the expressive force of the language and leave a deep impression on the readers.

Generally speaking, writing only requires equal words, the same structure and relevant meanings. There is no need to pay attention to flatness. This is called tolerance. Dual rhetoric is the most common in poetry couplets.

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Duality can be roughly divided into three types:

1. Right: Two angles and two sides of things explain the same thing, which are complementary in content. The dual meaning of the previous sentence and the next sentence is similar, similar, complementary or contrasting.

Example: the reeds on the wall are top-heavy and shallow; Bamboo shoots in the mountains have a thick mouth and an empty stomach.

2. Objection: The antithesis is called objection.

Exodus: Look at a thousand fingers, bow your head and be a willing ox.

3. Double pair: also called even pair and running pair. There is a relationship of coherence, cause and effect, condition and turning point in the meaning of the first and second sentences. This kind of antithesis sentence is called a string pair.

Exodus: only drink Yangtze River water and eat Wuchang fish. Silkworms in spring will weave until they die, and candles will drain the wick every night.

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4. How to write a literary composition? First of all, when writing a composition, you should have a clear point of view and clear thinking. Don't think that literary talent means changing sentence patterns. Use several rhetorical devices to realize that language and thinking are inseparable. There is no thought divorced from language, and there is no language that does not express any thought. With clear views and clear thinking, language expression will be smooth; Grasping the characteristics of things, language expression will be more vivid. Therefore, in order to make an article literary, we must first have clear views and clear ideas. Secondly, temper language and pay attention to the literariness of language. Confucius said: without words, it is not far away. He believes that speaking and writing articles should be not only ideological, but also literary, so that articles will not be handed down from generation to generation. It can be seen that a good article should not only be ideological, but also be rich in literature. For middle school students who are not proficient in language skills, it is particularly important to temper their language and pay attention to its literariness. Here are several ways to make the article rich in literary talent: method one: temper the language and pursue the vivid image of the language. To make your composition reflect the vivid characteristics of vocabulary, you must have a direction and purpose in the process of accumulating vocabulary, that is, what vocabulary we should accumulate in the composition. So what words should be used in the composition? In a word, it is fresh, lively, not rigid, not rigid, full of vitality, expressive and infectious words, that is, vivid words. Write a person's narrative and ask it to be vivid; Express a person's feelings and wishes, and seek the smoothness of his feelings. ① Use vivid words. Vividness of language is often closely linked with vividness, just like shapes and shadows. In other words, vivid language is often the language of images, and its main feature is architectural beauty, that is, three-dimensional sense. It can arouse readers' vivid thinking and stimulate readers' rich imagination and association. It can give people a feeling of being there, seeing things and hearing sounds. For example, a monk knocks at the door under the moon, and the spring breeze is green. Green in Jiang Nanan (adjectives are used flexibly as verbs). Because of the vivid and appropriate use of these two words, this work has become a masterpiece that has been handed down through the ages. When portraying characters, action description is an important means to portray characters. The key to describe their behavior is verbs. It can accurately reflect the subtle differences between characters' actions, express the characters' personality characteristics, convey the author's love and hate, make the characters vivid and give people a sense of relief. Therefore, the verbs used in writing should be accurate, vivid and emotional, reflect the personality characteristics of the characters, and include the author's love and hate. ② Use musical words. The so-called musical beauty refers to the author's use of the tonal characteristics such as the smooth change of Chinese characters and the harmony of phonology to form a kind of melodic beauty, which makes the article sound and affectionate, with good sound and meaning. In the process of writing, we should pay attention to tone collocation, rhyme coordination, clever use of overlapping words and emphasis on rhythm. For example, moonlight is like running water, quietly pouring on this leaf and flower. A thin green mist floats in the lotus pond, and leaves and flowers seem to be there. Lived up the moonlight with a dynamic verb, and wrote the scene of Yue Hui shining like a torrent. It depicts the moonlight rising slowly from bottom to top, spreading slowly and infiltrating into the lotus pond. Washing the Cage turned a static scene into a dynamic one, vividly depicting the hazy beauty of moonlight. Method 2: Choose sentence patterns to strive for the richness and diversity of the language. Different sentence patterns can be used to express the same meaning. It can also be expressed in several different sentence patterns. Mood and mood change accordingly, so the language style and expression effect are different. For example, the whole sentence (such as four-character grid, etc. ) make the sentences neat, the scattered sentences make the text smooth, and the article is lively and interesting through clever use of oral English. The article skillfully uses classical Chinese, which has its own quaint style. The so-called flexible sentence pattern refers to the author's proper choice and flexible transformation of sentence patterns according to the characteristics of the language environment and the needs of expression without changing his own meaning, so that the writing will be vivid, free, not stiff and not rigid. Common sentence patterns are: affirmative and negative sentences, active and passive sentences, long sentences. Oral and written sentences, whole sentences and scattered sentences, etc. Sentences can be divided into declarative sentences, interrogative sentences, imperative sentences and exclamatory sentences according to mood. In order to make the sentence patterns of the article flexible, we should pay attention to expressing a meaning in different ways, understand the characteristics of various sentence patterns, the expression effect and the characteristics of the language environment, and master the general methods of changing sentence patterns and choosing sentence patterns. For example, method 3: use rhetoric to improve the beauty and charm of language, and use rhetoric to beautify language. It is an important means to make the article literary. Liu Xie pointed out in Wen Xin Diao Long Cai Qing: The speaker is Wen Yuan. The general idea is that an article can be passed down through the ages because it has literary talent. Li Ao, an essayist in the Tang Dynasty, also pointed out in "Answering Wang Zai Yan Shu": Although the meaning is deep, the words are correct, and the words are not written. It means that an article can't be written even if it is established. This shows the importance of rhetoric in writing. The same meaning is expressed in different rhetorical devices, and the effect is completely different. Master the function and effect metaphor of commonly used rhetoric: when used in narration, explanation and description, things can be vivid, vivid and concrete, giving people a vivid impression; When it is used in argumentative writing, it can concretize abstract truth and make abstruse truth easy to understand. Analogy: it can make readers have a vivid impression on the things expressed, produce strong feelings and cause * * *. Metonymy: it can highlight the image and make it concrete and vivid. Exaggeration: it can arouse rich imagination, better highlight the characteristics of things and arouse readers' strong * * *. The content is concise and concentrated, and the generalization ability is strong. Parallelism: it can enhance the momentum of language. When used for reasoning, it can explain the truth more strictly and thoroughly. When used to express emotions, feelings can be expressed incisively and vividly. Question: The overall function is to make readers think. Used in the title, it can attract readers, inspire readers to think and better reflect the center of the article; Used in paragraphs.

5. Describe a game scene with antithesis, personification, parallelism, metaphor and exaggeration, about 400 words, 1. In spring and March, the courtyard presents a vibrant scene in the bright sunshine. The vines spread out pale green branches and climbed up the wooden frame near the east wall to become a beautiful green shed. The wind is blowing palm-like green leaves, swaying as if waving to me.

There is a park, although it is not famous, but the scenery is charming. One of them is more charming.

A fence is covered with many morning glories. They scrambled to climb to the top, stood proudly at the top of the fence and looked around. The petals of morning glory are purple outside, just like the colorful exercises in the hands of the legendary purple fairy. The interior is white, just like a white and flawless "harmonious wall". Inside are several tall and straight banyan trees. Brown and the author's trunk hold the crown. The green canopy, supported by the trunk, has become a big green umbrella, giving tourists an excellent place to enjoy the cool.

The most fascinating thing is the pond in the center. In the microwave pool, there are several lotus flowers standing upright. The outside of lotus petals is like a flawless pink jade. The petals seem to be made of white snowflakes. The whole lotus is like the lotus fairy in fairy tales. If you let this lotus turn, you can imagine its beauty and charm. Several green lotus leaves stand out and become natural "green umbrellas". Lotus, lotus leaf together, it can really be said: "The next day, the lotus leaf is infinitely bright, and the lotus leaves are of different colors." Yes

This scene can really become a beautiful "early summer landscape painting".

There is a lake in front of the garden. The lake is clear. There are fish swimming around in it, occasionally jumping out of the water, as if playing with tourists. If tourists take a motorboat for sightseeing, it will break the calm of the lake and splash white waves behind. There is a long bridge by the lake, where you can walk around and chat with your friends. Very comfortable! After crossing the bridge and climbing the stairs, you reach the gazebo halfway up the mountain. There is a pebble table and four small stone stools in the pavilion, where visitors can rest, play chess and cards ... The trees on the mountain are lush and the birds sing tactfully from time to time, which is very beautiful!

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