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This is a new type of propositional composition test in the form of "material+topic".

The title "Here" is simple and concise. The pronoun "here" refers to the position, which can be real or imaginary. It can be a big place or a small place. For example, "here" can be a real hometown and campus, or a virtual ideal place and paradise. It can be as big as China and the earth, as small as Shaanxi and somewhere, or as small as home and classroom. This kind of topic is mainly to provide a broad platform for candidates, so that candidates can choose and write freely according to their own life and study practice, which has great flexibility.

In order to let candidates better understand the topic and investigate its meaning, a short reminder material is added to the topic: "Here, there is a fresh life; Here, there is a touching story; Here, a colorful life is displayed … "is the reference for candidates to understand" here ". You can write "vivid life", "touching story" and "colorful life" in the material tips, that is, people, things, things and scenery can all be used as the content of this paper.

Therefore, this exam seems ordinary and dull, but as a large-scale provincial exam with a vast territory and diverse candidates' conditions, it just shows its uniqueness. It is suitable for students of different regions and levels, so that everyone can have something to say and write, and it can highlight their respective regional and cultural characteristics, with strong times, culture and openness.

In fact, if we look at the whole volume of the Chinese examination paper for the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province, we can see that the composition proposition "here" is completely consistent with the theme and style of the whole volume. The whole volume highlights the regional cultural characteristics of Shaanxi. From today's reading of Qinling Mountain and the roaring of Shaanxi Opera to ancient poems of Warring States Policy (excerpts) and watching sunny days in farmhouse music, Shaanxi's regional cultural characteristics are everywhere highlighted, and the composition of "here" actually implies Shaanxi's regional cultural characteristics. Candidates are all from Shaanxi province, and "here" is basically Shaanxi.

Such a proposition not only highlights the regional cultural characteristics, guides students to pay attention to and love their hometown, but also cultivates students' patriotic feelings and socialist moral quality. At the same time, it provides favorable conditions and broad space for students to write independently, reduces the constraints of students' writing, and encourages students to express freely and creatively, which is completely in line with the spirit of the new curriculum.

Conception strategy

This exam is a composition exam, with a large writing space and strong openness, which is suitable for candidates from different regions, backgrounds and levels. Whether you are in a bustling city, a quiet country or a remote mountainous area; Whether it is a poor family, no cultural background, or a rich family, scholarly family; No matter whether the learning level is good or poor ... the proposition "here" is equal and fair to every candidate, and there is not much obstacle in the examination of the questions. All candidates can show their writing ability on the same starting line on a fair basis.

First of all, make sure what "here" in your composition refers to, that is, the motherland, hometown, school, classroom, community, street, village, field, family, house, book, language, dream, ideal, heart ... The specific place "here" limits the material of your composition. You can choose a big place or a small place. Of course, some compositions may not specify what "here" is, but readers can still feel the real "here". As long as you can clearly mark "here" and write the contents of "here", that's all.

Secondly, determine the specific meaning of "here". The key is to choose the content of writing and write about the things, people and things here. The materials of the test questions give us a good hint: "Here, there is fresh life; Here, there is a touching story; Here, colorful life is displayed ... "This is very helpful for candidates to examine questions and choose materials. It turns out that the topic "here" can be written as "vivid life", "touching story", "colorful life" and so on, as long as the candidates can put these contents here.

Third, the angle of conception can be freely determined. Because this propositional composition has a huge writing space, the angles of conception should be varied. You can eulogize the vivid life here, tell touching stories here and describe the colorful life here; You can praise the beauty of "here", lash the ugliness of "here" and satirize the falsehood of "here"; It can express the thoughts and feelings of "being here", express the emotional attitude of "being here" and show the beautiful memory of "being here"; People who can describe "here" can record things about "here", things about "here" ... according to the specific meaning and content of "here", make an idea from a smaller and more specific angle, so that the written composition will be more substantial, richer and more vivid.

Fourth, carefully conceive your own composition. The time for writing in the examination room is limited, so it is the key to have bright spots and careful conception. Many high-scoring compositions are ingenious and novel, which touched the examiner and got high marks. For example, paying attention to the integrity of the structure, with an inscription in front, rich content in the middle and an ending at the back, makes the structure of the article very complete; In order to express complex and grand events or events with a long time span, only a few exquisite small waves are often captured in the ocean of the whole event, and the whole event is expressed from different angles or levels. At this time, the purpose is often achieved in the form of subtitles through several parallel paragraphs, so that the structure is neat and beautiful; There are also flashbacks, double lines and other ways to structure articles, which are also unique in the structure of articles.

Fifth, in terms of style, candidates can also write narratives, essays, and even short stories and poems. According to your own specialty. The test questions do not require too many styles, which is conducive to the development of students' specialties. But no matter what style you write, you should be familiar with, good at and able to grasp. Don't write a style that you are not good at for the sake of so-called "innovation". Furthermore, the stylistic features should be prominent, and it is impossible to write a "four unlike" style in which narration is not like narration, discussion is not like discussion, and prose is not like prose. Narrative highlights the elements of narrative, prose highlights the characteristics of prose, and argumentative essays highlight the requirements of argumentative essays. No matter what style you write, you should meet the requirements of this style and highlight its characteristics.

Sixth, in terms of expression, it is necessary to write fluently, vividly and accurately, and express well. Language expression is an important criterion to measure the quality of a composition. No matter how new ideas, ingenious ideas and good materials are, if the language is dull, literary talent is lacking and there is no good language to express it, it will not be an excellent composition. Any composition that can get high marks in the examination room is a composition with good language expression. Therefore, the language must be accurate, vivid and vivid, the sentences should be fluent, and some rhetorical devices should be used appropriately to enhance the image of the language and make the expression rich in literary talent.

Seventh, if you want to get high marks in the examination room, some extraordinary breakthroughs in writing can also make your composition popular. These extraordinary breakthroughs are to stand out in a certain aspect of the composition and get high marks because of this outstanding feature. It can be a novel and special conception angle, such as positioning "here" as "the secret garden in my heart" and "the palace of China people"; It can be a clever and prominent structure, such as a subtitle structure; It can be that the content material is very special, such as writing the ancients Xiang Yu, Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi; It can be wonderful language and full of artistic appeal; It can also be a very special style, such as novels, poems and so on. An extraordinary breakthrough in one aspect can often win a high score in the examination room composition.

In short, for a relatively open composition topic like "Here", if you want to write it well, you need to carefully examine the topic, skillfully conceive it, carefully select materials and express it accurately. Only in this way can we write high-quality compositions in the examination room.

here

In a spring season, a baby girl was born, and this baby girl is me. From learning English as a child to being able to take care of myself now, I have always stubbornly believed that my world is only myself, but I can't find love around me. Where is love? When I open the box of memory, I believe the answer is in it.

"Wenwen, get up." With my father's voice, I seem to be a child again. Sleepiness comes out every morning, and only my father can wake me up. I don't know how long it's been since I heard such a familiar voice. When I was in primary school, my father's first task every morning was to wake me up and take me to school. No matter whether it is windy, rainy or foggy, my father always insists on his "work". In my opinion at that time, it was a matter of course, and sometimes I even complained that my father didn't wake me up in time. But now, as I grow up, the biological clock has replaced my father's crying. I have gone to school by bike and my father has been laid off. The only constant is that my father still watches me go to school every day and never forgets to say goodbye to me.

My father is a handy man by nature. Wood blade and wooden knives at home are my father's masterpieces, and I have carefully preserved them. I remember one time, my interest suddenly increased, and I asked my father to teach me how to cut wood blade. But as the principal's father, he has to bury himself in his work every day, so he refused this "task". I was so unhappy that I even ignored him with anger. The next morning, a miracle appeared, and a wood blade with exquisite carpentry skills appeared in front of me. This is the best one I have ever seen. Later, I learned from my mother that my father didn't sleep a wink to cut this wood blade for me. My heart is shaking, and everything in front of me suddenly becomes blurred. In order not to let my father see me, I hurried back indoors and put my sword in the most conspicuous place, suddenly feeling that I was the happiest daughter in the world.

My father's love for me is meticulous. Although it is not as obvious as mom's love, dad's love is greater and more eternal. I think my answer has been found. Where is love? Love is always by my side, everywhere.