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Speaking of my cousin, it's really a headache. My cousin often makes us angry. He looked at us piteously when we were angry. The following are my essays and comments on my lovely little cousin, hoping to help you!

I have a lovely little cousin who is only one and a half years old and has big black eyes. He's cute.

Once, I poured watermelon juice into a bottle and fed it to him. I saw him drinking with relish. My mouth has been moving, as if to say, so sweet and delicious.

I thought, what will happen if I take the bottle away? So I pulled it. When he saw that watermelon juice was gone, he burst into tears. I quickly put the bottle in his mouth again, and he smiled through tears.

I like my little cousin very much.

Comments: In this article about writing people, the author wrote a lovely little cousin in short language, which caught the cousin's appearance description and her eating watermelon. The language of the article is relaxed and natural, concise and clear, showing the author's love for his cousin everywhere.

I have a lovely cousin. He is good-looking. Do you like him? Big head son? , I call him? Brother big head? .

My cousin's face is round. When she smiles, her round face is printed with two deep dimples, two heavy eyebrows and a pair of big eyes flickering. When I am angry, I will roll my eyes at you. At this time, as soon as you touched him, he immediately cried and kicked. If he is happy and his eyes narrow, he will do whatever you ask him to do and show you his beloved Transformers!

One day, my cousin came to my house to play, and as soon as he came, he got into my mother's room. After a while, my cousin was wearing mom's high heels? Crack crack? Come out and shout: Miss Hong Kong is coming! ? He wore his mother's skirt, rouge, lipstick, earrings and a small backpack on his back. When I walked into the room again, I saw him turn out his mother's lipstick and foundation cream, and his mother's clothes were turned upside down. I was so angry that I wanted to slap him. He quickly said:? I'm Miss Hong Kong, and I'm protected! Don't you dare hit me. What's my name? Four kings? To take care of you, alas, this naughty and clever cousin is really irritating and funny.

Comments: The layout of the article is reasonable, the title is given at the beginning, and then the description of his brother's appearance makes him very cute, and then an interesting story about his life reflects his personality characteristics. The language is fluent and natural, and the lively and lovely image of my brother is vividly and concretely described, which is very good.

My lovely little cousin is five years old, with an apple-like face, thick eyebrows, two big eyes that keep blinking, and two small lips like watercress that are chubby. He often uses paper rolls as microphones and sings melodious songs. Everyone laughed when he shook his head.

My little cousin often wears a blue navy suit, a navy hat and a telescope in his hand, looking into the distance. How like a navy soldier! Once, I teased my cousin: you are short and fat, can you be a navy? She pouted. When I grow up, I will be taller than you and my father. You can't stand on tiptoe to make gestures at this height. When eating, who doesn't eat food says: Hum, if you don't eat vegetables, you won't grow tall; I will be taller than you in a few days. ? That class is really like an adult!

Cousin, little guy, not tall, but ambitious. Once, he saw his father shaving. The teacher's razor doesn't work well, and the electric one can't be cleaned. Cousin said: I want to invent a blade that won't shave and shave my face clean. In this way, dad's beard won't shave my face. ? He also took a pen and paper and drew what he imagined. This is really a strange blade, not round and square, and there is no other setting, but he said that when such a blade touches the chin, the beard will disappear.

My cousin is small and ambitious. I hope she will become a navy or an inventor when she grows up and realize her childhood dream.

Comments: The little author of this article used two concrete examples to show us that his cousin's ideal is to be a navy or an inventor. This article is accurate in language and specific in description. It is really good to express my little cousin's lovely character with action description and language description.