Composition: lovely hometown

Tian Meng, Class Two, Grade Three, Dalian Maple Leaf International School

My hometown is in Japan. There is a beautiful picture with beautiful scenery all year round.

In spring, trees pull out new green branches and grow green leaves; Grass emerges from the ground, like a strong warrior; The little frog wakes up from a daze; The little squirrel began its labor work again.

In summer, the sun shows its majestic face, as if to eat us. In such hot weather, squirrels all hide in caves to rest, and only at night do bad and clever animals like wolves come out to move.

Autumn is a colorful season, which is the "Labor Day" for animals like squirrels. Some small animals lay their eggs in the grass so as not to freeze to death. Look! How clever she is!

winter is even more joyful! When some children saw the ice, they jumped on it. The ice was empty, and they fell into the ice hole at once, so they were all soaked. We laughed our heads off and tears came out. We stood a little cold, so I went to climb the mountain. The mountain is slippery, so I always slip. Later, I slowly mastered the method and stopped slipping. We also found frog eggs. Slippery on the hand, there are small black "beans" in the middle, like thousands of pairs of small eyes.

look! My hometown is beautiful!

Comments: I wrote the characteristics of my hometown scenery very well, which is hard to read. The article has vivid metaphors, vivid descriptions, appropriate adjectives, interesting activities, and interesting scenes.

Instructor: Yuxiang Liu

Shuangfeng Reservoir

Liu Xiaohui, Class Two, Grade Three, Dalian Maple Leaf International School

There is a place called Fangzheng near Harbin. There is a reservoir called Shuangfeng Reservoir.

One summer vacation, I went there to play, and we stopped under the "highway". As soon as we got off the bus, we ran quickly into the forest.

The car is like hell, and here is like heaven. Hell and heaven are just different. One is fresh air, and the other is sultry air. A sketch I have seen said it well: "It's all the same place. Why is the gap so big?"

My second aunt picked up her lunch and said, "Where can I eat?" We had already gone to play and didn't hear it at all.

Now, the trees are lush, and the dense layers of branches and leaves seal the grove tightly. Thousands of dazzling golden rays are like swords, one is dark and the other is bright. If the scenery in front of us is regarded as a painting, it will definitely be exhibited in the whole country. I found a tree with small mushrooms of different sizes popping up in a crack. I looked up, and some trees out of order rushed straight into the sky, with their tips shaking in the air, as if talking. You said a few words, I said a few words, talking and laughing, and some laughed. Some laughed and bent their backs; Some tears of laughter came out, and some mouths were numb.

I see the most beautiful scenery here-there is a small building next to the rushing and ringing river of Shuangfeng Reservoir. Look at how the gurgling river is like groups of music groups, singing beautiful songs.

sometimes there will be snow-white spray, straight up and down, which is really amazing!

I like Shuangfeng Reservoir, especially the never-ending river and the dense grove.

Comments: You are in a state of passion when you write, so the articles you write are wonderful, surprising, fluent, and rich in imagination. It makes people think of flying, such as being in Fengshan reservoir and entering the country.

Beautiful Golden Stone Beach

Eric

Today, my sister took me to Golden Stone Beach, which is a beautiful place with beautiful scenery.

The trees there are strong, tall and dense, like soldiers practicing quick march, shouting, "121, 121."

The most beautiful thing is the beach by the sea. There are golden beaches, blue sea and many small crabs crawling over, just like children playing "the eagle catches the chicken"!

Then I saw slippery little fish swimming around the reef. Their eyes were round. A little fish kept looking at me. Maybe it liked me!

then we went to buy flowers, and a breeze blew, and the flowers staggered, as if they were blowing us!

Then we went to the hunting ground. The animals there were very clever, especially the monkey. It had big eyes, a long tail, a sensitive nose and a red ass. It was very cute!

Then I saw a butterfly and a dragonfly. They were chirping as if they were chatting. Maybe it means, "I'm so lucky today! When flying on the road, someone gave me food. " The butterfly said, "You are so lucky! I am unlucky. Today, I had a quarrel with my friends at home. " Dragonfly said, "Nothing!" Then butterflies and dragonflies flew away.

finally, I went home. I'm so happy today!

Comments: The exercise vividly describes the beautiful scenery of Golden Stone Beach. The author's imagination is very rich, and he writes his own unique experience, which is full of children's life.

Beach in Dalian

Wang Yang

Since I came to Dalian, I have loved this beautiful place, especially the Haiwei here.

On Saturday, I went to the beach with my father. On the beach, my father and I went to buy a swimming ring and went swimming at sea.

After swimming for half an hour, we went to the beach to pick up seaweed. After a while, my father and I almost picked up a bucket of seaweed. My father and I picked it up so carefully, both for drinking seaweed soup cooked by my mother. After a while, a big spray rushed at me. This big spray hit my feet and felt cool.

My father and I played sand castles again. My father went to look for shells as windows. I built sand castles here. When my father came back with shells, I saw shells of various colors, including pink, white and yellow ... I also brought a five-pointed star and put it on the top of the sand castles.

There are many interesting things in Dalian!

Comments: Your exercise has always been wonderful, and you can properly express what you see, hear, think and feel, and your language is fluent. It is a masterpiece!

Times Square

Ma Siqi

When I was a child, during the Spring Festival, my mother said, "Go to Times Square to see the fireworks."

I asked my mother, "Is it fun there?" Mom said, "You will know how good it is." I said, "All right!"

I went to Times Square with my mother. When I got there, everything was there, but I said with satisfaction, "Mom, you lied to me." Because there is nothing I like there. After a long time, I think Times Square is a good place, where there are many flowers and trees in summer, and there are many insects in Times Square. Some butterflies gather among the flowers, like a dancing lotus, and there are crowds of people and some fountains during the New Year. What surprised me most was the ice lamp, which was white. It contained a lamp, like a Kongming lantern. I saw a dragon moving, shining eyes and a red body.

the most interesting thing is that a person tied the villain to a stick, which is beautiful. I think Times Square is a famous square and the best square in my mind.

Comments: The author truly wrote the scenery of Times Square and my emotional changes. His language was fluent and he described the image.

Taiping Mountain in Hong Kong

Zhao Yueheng

Today, I went to Taiping Mountain in Hong Kong, where the trees are very lush and the grass is very high. I have to take a cable car. My mother, my sister and my second uncle took the cable car together. We got on the cable car, and there were many foreigners on it.

Taiping Mountain is steep, and there are buildings on it, all of which are inclined. We took the cable car to the watchtower, and we looked down from the watchtower. Wow! There are all trees below, green, yellow and red, let alone beautiful.

There is a telescope on it. Just put a coin in the telescope. I put a coin in it. At first glance, there is a small house.

The most interesting thing is that my mother wants to take pictures. I said, "Mom, don't take pictures. I'm afraid your camera will be lifted. That's terrible." My second aunt was so shocked that she didn't dare to take pictures, but my mother still took pictures, so I said, "Mom, don't take pictures. If it falls, we won't be able to take pictures."

isn't Hong Kong very good?

Comments: The author described the Taiping Mountain in Hong Kong in detail. Because the author visited the Taiping Mountain, he felt deeply, and his writing was fluent. It would be better if he described the scenery of the Taiping Mountain in detail!

School

Huang Zhirui

Our school is a happy place and a lively place.

in spring, the school is still a little cold, but in a few weeks, the school is not cold at all, and the green trees have sprouted as sharp as grass.

Summer is the season I want to come to most, because there are the most insects at this time. When we were playing at noon, Jia Yi and I experimented with ants. At first, I caught an ant, then I saw a spider web and threw the ant on it. I saw a spider crawling out of a pine tree and tied the ant with its net at once. Because the ant could not breathe, it died soon.

in autumn, fruits are harvested. There are many fruits that I like to eat, so autumn is also a beautiful season.

Winter is also my favorite season. You can make a snowman and have a snowball fight. Look! How happy those children are!

this year is really happy and happy!

This is my life at school!

America

Tian Jincheng

There are many beautiful places in America. Let me tell you.

I traveled there. The tour guide told us that there is a tree that can live for 7 million years, and it is still alive. There are also some animals that grow only by plants in the desert. There are many plants, almost as many as a very, very large pasture, which should be 3 kilometers. It was all found in Death Valley. I also found some animals raised by rich people and lived in villas.

I also went to the Grand Canyon. At that time, I met sister Wang Xing. Here we are at the Grand Canyon, ah! I thought it was a mountain, but it was just a hill.

we're at another mountain, and I don't know its name. It is very high, more than three times as high as the school building, and the West Grand Canyon is three to four times as high as the Grand Canyon.

Later, I went to the West Grand Canyon. It was too high and there was strong wind. I was too timid to be around, so I took pictures with my father. Later, I ate in the mountains. Then go to see the "glass bridge". Some people went by helicopter, but I didn't go because it was too expensive.

this is the process of my four-day tour.

Comment: The author traveled to the United States and wrote what he saw and heard. "Go to Wan Li Road and read thousands of books", the author has gained a lot of knowledge in his travels, so he can write beautiful articles full of true feelings.

Lushun Snake Pavilion

Gao Jianguo

Today, we are going to Lushun Snake Pavilion.

I am so happy that I can't wait to go at once, but I haven't had breakfast yet.

After breakfast, we set off and arrived soon. We immediately bought tickets and went in.

just entering, I saw the scenery here is very good, with water and trees, which is very beautiful.

The most attractive thing is the cute baby snake. The baby snake has one posture. Look at this one and lie there lazily. Look at that one. It doesn't move.

There are the scariest and strangest animals in the cave. There are many lizards in the cave in front of us. It is a lizard cave. I found a two-headed turtle in a lizard cave. This turtle has two heads and looks like a monster.

we went to the poisonous snake area again. More than a dozen snake sticks are infected with the problems of city people, but the venom is poisonous. Some can even poison people's eyes.

finally, I returned to the development zone. Until now, I am still telling my classmates about the snake house I went to.

Comments: The exercise truly describes the scenery I saw in the Snake Pavilion. When writing the posture of the snake, I can write it in imitation of the text. This learning method is very good!

Scenery of Xinghai people's home

Ye Zhixin

Our Xinghai people's community has many flowers, grasses and trees, like many happy elves.

There are maple trees, buttonwood trees and ginkgo trees ...

In autumn, some elves on maple trees are green and some are red. They are happy and happy, and the maple leaves are dancing on the branches of mother maple. Now, they fall happily, piece by piece, jumping around. It seems to say, "We don't need our mother now, we are free." Look! How happy they are!

The elves on the mother branch of Ginkgo tree are also very happy. There is a small fan on the branches of mother ginkgo tree, which seems to blow the mother ginkgo tree! Elves play happily and happily on the branches of mother ginkgo tree. How free they are!

The buttonwood mother's children are like maple leaves. Little girls are singing and dancing on the branches of their mother, just like a group of dancers! Singing a nice song!

they must be very happy.

Comments: The exercise uses anthropomorphic writing to write the autumn scenery of Xinghai people, and writes out my own observations, experiences and feelings. This writing habit is very good!

The hill beside our house

Yu Haifei

The hill beside our house looks like a small green pile from a distance. Occasionally, on the way to the top of the mountain, a few shiny black squirrels appear. It is about twenty centimeters long, and its tail accounts for half of its body.

I also saw a very strange tree on the road. It also had a root, but when it reached the top, it split in two.

when you get to the top of the mountain, look east, and you will see an endless sea when you pass a residential area, and then you will see hills to the west. I also called to the east.

There are all kinds of trees on the mountain, such as willows, pines and pagodas ...

There is also a nice name for this mountain, which is called "vows of eternal love".

There is also a place to play chess at the foot of the mountain, where there are chess, gobang and Go ...

I really like "vows of eternal love"!

Comments: Many good words and sentences accumulated in Chinese class are used in the exercise, which vividly describes the characteristics of plants and animals on the hill, and the level of exercise has been greatly improved.

My hometown

Wang Yuwen

My hometown is in Jinzhou.

In spring, a jujube tree in our hometown is covered with small green leaves, and the willow tree wakes up in the call of the spring breeze, and its braid is blown by the wind, and it flutters with the wind.

In summer, my brother and I catch dragonflies outside the door. Once, he and I accidentally bumped into each other while catching dragonflies, but we didn't catch dragonflies. In the morning, my uncle and I went fishing by the river with a bottle and a big cake. My uncle opened the bottle, we put the pie in the bottle, and then threw the bottle into the water. In a short time, there were seven or eight small fish in the bottle. My brother and I were so happy that even the small fish smelled the smell and came here one after another.

In autumn, leaves fall on the ground, and my brother and I collect them one after another.

In winter, we came to the river to break the ice, and then water came out of it, and the water level became lower and lower. After a while, the water ran dry, so we stopped it. When it snows, we make snowmen and have snowball fights.

this is our hometown.

Comments: The exercise describes the scenery, people and events in my hometown. The author's language is smoother, his narrative ability is stronger, and he is better at using words.