The writing teacher taught me how to write a composition.

1. How to write the composition "Teacher teaches me to learn" Soon, we will bid farewell to the beautiful campus, the teachers and classmates who live together day and night, and step into a new school with reluctant affection and start a new study life.

Soon, we will bid farewell to the beautiful campus, the teachers and classmates who get along with each other day and night, and enter the new school with reluctant affection and start a new study life. In my six years of primary school life, I will never forget my teacher's careful teaching, and my experience of teaching me to write will always be engraved in my heart!

I remember that time, I usually couldn't write a good composition. I only got 25 points in this exam composition, and deducted 10. I am very unhappy. I think: I should get more than 80 points in my usual exam results, but my composition is not good, so I only got 70 points every time. How much I want to improve my writing, but I can't. I don't know what to do!

I still remember that when I was frustrated, it was the teacher who gave me help. The teacher said to me gently, "Loneliness, do you want to improve your writing?" You know, you just don't write well, so your exam results never improve! "I nodded." Then, the teacher will teach you to write, but you have to do as I say! "I listened, dancing with excitement!

On the first day when my teacher taught me to do my homework, at the end of school, my teacher quietly said to me, "Loneliness, the teacher wants you to write a composition today, the topic is' Love is around'. You should write carefully when you go home and show it to the teacher for review tomorrow! " I nodded and made up my mind to write my composition well.

When I got home, I finished my homework and immediately began to write my composition. I wrote my composition for a long time, and it took me a whole hour to finish it. I think this composition should be good!

The next day, I handed my composition to the teacher for review. After reading the composition, the teacher said to me, "Loneliness, your composition is well chosen, but the sentences are not beautiful enough, too vulgar, and some places are too complicated, not concise enough and not clear enough." You need to improve these places in the future! "After that, the teacher helped me revise my composition and gave me a composition book, so that I could read more other people's compositions and get inspiration from them. Looking at the numerous revised symbols on the composition, I feel warm in my heart

In the days to come, the teacher often assigned me a composition, helped me revise my composition and encouraged me to write well. At the same time, I often regard it as a document, accumulate some good words and sentences from others and apply them to my own practice. Now, my writing level has been greatly improved, which is attributed to the careful teaching of the teacher!

Teacher, thank you for teaching me to write! Your careful teaching to me will be engraved in my heart forever! Your majestic image will always stand in my heart!

The teacher taught me how to write a good composition of 500 words. In the process of growing up, the teacher gave us a lot. Among them, what impressed me the most was that the teacher taught me to write a composition.

At that time, I participated in the school speech contest and wrote a speech. In order to make the speech more perfect, Teacher Chu made several detailed revisions for me. Every afternoon after school, the teacher always leaves me behind, carefully scrutinizing words and sentences word by word, even the subtle punctuation marks. In order to make me have a deeper understanding and better memory of the article, the teacher will explain it to me in detail until I understand it. All the teachers in the teacher's office have left, and she is still patiently correcting my composition. In this way, day after day, day after day cycle, although the teacher is very tired, but still take pains to correct my composition. What moved me most was that I was doing my homework at home that night, but Mr. Chu rushed to my home regardless of the busyness of housework and made further revisions for me. He taught me to write sentences in detail, not wordy, and to use words accurately and appropriately, so that concrete and true compositions would be excellent.

With teacher Chu's encouragement and support, I studied harder, participated in various composition competitions, and achieved excellent results. The teacher often reads my composition to everyone as a model essay. When I won the National Silver Award for Essay Writing and the first prize, the teacher was even more happy and told me a lot of things to pay attention to in writing, which made my writing level go up a storey still higher.

Teacher Chu, you not only gave me a way to write a composition, but also gave me great encouragement. I will always remember your teachings!

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My fourth grade composition teacher taught me how to write 300 words. My Chinese teacher is Miss Deng. I love her very much.

She wears a pair of glasses and has short hair. Sometimes she is kind and sometimes she is strict. When we did well in the exam, or made progress in our studies, she smiled and praised us, narrowing her eyes into a line, which looked good. But when we don't do our homework seriously or pay attention to the lecture in class, she will seriously criticize us and ask us to correct our mistakes immediately. At this time, we are all afraid of her and never dare to disobey us again.

I remember once, for fun, I made my homework ugly. She called me to the office and said angrily, "Cheng Huan, how can you write this homework so ugly and how can you be careless in your study!" " "My face turned red. I quickly and seriously redone my homework under the supervision of my teacher, who is a strict person. My teacher is very strict, but sometimes she is very kind.

I remember one day, I was playing with my classmates and accidentally scratched my scalp. The teacher quickly brought tea oil and cotton swabs from the office to help me smear the wound carefully. At this time, I feel that the teacher is just like my mother. My teacher is really a good teacher! I love my teacher.

4. The fragment describing the teacher teaching me to write a composition was also discussed, and only Chen Xiaoqing heard it.

After the group discussion, our group agreed to teach the teacher "perception". It's still terrible to think about it now. It's really scary. I just finished my homework upstairs. I am busy talking and thinking with the team members. These five aspects are described in detail. After class, the students are still discussing this class with relish, which is not good. "Say, shook his head, very helpless. Before we could react, we heard Mr. Xia say, "I have an idea, classmates." Can you teach the teacher? How can I say that you can feel the fear in the teacher's heart last night? " The voice just fell, lifelike, can't help but make us feel scared. After listening, Mr. Xia said happily, "Thank you for teaching me to write a composition. There seems to be a shadow flashing outside the window? The other members of the team and I don't know where to start at present. Suddenly, the whole class burst into laughter, especially Wang Lingling, who laughed so hard that I taught the teacher to write a composition.

"Jingle bells ..." The class rang, and our group agreed that it was really interesting that you could see, hear and feel the scene when writing: "We can suggest the teacher to describe what he saw and heard at that time, which made him feel scared. Just like this, I suddenly saw the curtain cloth fluttering for no reason, and I saw the experience of looking after the house alone one night last summer: that night! Originally, the teacher wanted to write out what she felt last night. It seems now. " ..... Finally: "Teacher, each group began to publish their own suggestions. Some groups suggest that teachers should pay more attention to rhetorical devices when writing. As a representative, I stood up confidently. After all the students were seated, Mr. Xia said with a smile, "Students, we will have an immersive feeling after reading it, and we will feel the fear in the teacher's heart at that time. "The students are all inspired by me." After listening to our speech, Miss Xia nodded? "

Let's "teach" the teacher what to do. But how to teach teachers to write? Last night, I looked at the house alone, you know? Curious, the whole class began to discuss in groups! I have an idea, which is very exaggerated.

When the laughter stopped, Miss Xia pointed to Wang Lingling with a smile and said. Speaking out is not afraid of jokes; Then there was a strange "squeak" sound downstairs ... it scared me at that time. By the way. ""No." Wang Lingling simply replied. "hey. From the students' speeches just now, I understand how to write a concrete and vivid composition. Next, please join me in writing down your own domestic experience in the way you just said. " ……

Just forty minutes passed. However, I have never been so scared since I was a child. That kind of fear can't be described in words. He asked, "Lingling, aren't you afraid after listening to what I said?" I was really scared when I looked at the house last night, as if I was very sad: "Hi! But can we do it? I thought and thought. " Teacher Xia asked doubtfully, "Why don't you feel scared after listening?" Wang Lingling pondered for a while: "I don't think what you said is specific enough." These five aspects are described: "you can also ask the teacher to talk about what he was thinking at that time;" Some groups suggest that teachers should write more about the environment at that time ... it's our group's turn to speak.

The teacher taught me to learn composition. I used to think that the composition was difficult to write, and my mother was very worried.

Later, my mother asked me to attend a composition writing class on Sunday. 09 1 class Many students study with me in the class. The teacher who teaches us to write a composition is surnamed Huang. She is an amiable teacher who gives us lessons with a smile every day.

Miss Huang is also an experienced teacher. In order for us to write a good composition, she will read us several excellent works before each composition, so that we can feel how others write a good composition first. Then Mr. Huang taught us the ideas and methods of writing with a small blackboard; Finally, let's finish the composition independently in one hour. The teacher will look at us quietly and come over to give us some advice from time to time.

After a period of hard work, I feel that writing is much easier now. I not only have content to write, but also more and more words to write. I like writing more and more. I have to thank Mr. Huang for making these progress. I like Mr. Huang. I believe that as long as I work hard, maybe I will become a great writer in the future.

Please wait and see.

6. The teacher taught me to be proud of having a good teacher like me. She is my head teacher, Miss Jiao. When I first entered middle school, I heard that our head teacher was an excellent teacher, Miss Jiao. With a little excitement, I silently imagined the image of this excellent teacher in my mind.

In my anxious expectation, finally in the evening, Miss Jiao appeared in front of us. First of all, I think she should not be our future head teacher, Miss Jiao! So young. While I was thinking about this problem, she couldn't help introducing herself to us. Strangely, right or wrong, she is not much older than us. Why did you become an excellent teacher?

But in the later days, I gradually got to know her. Miss Jiao's handwriting is also great, but she is our English teacher. She is strict in class, but not strict outside class. I remember that she used to chat with us. Really, she seems a lot like her sister. If she has something on her mind, go to her and she will talk to you for a while, so that there will be no unhappy things. It seems that some students like to make mistakes. As long as they get to Mr. Jiao's hand, there is nothing, just what she gave them is crisp, just like "roll with the punches, roll with the punches". .

In fact, I am also a person who likes to make small mistakes sometimes, but sometimes I can control it, and sometimes I can't, but Miss Jiao never criticized me, just chatted with me for a while, and that one thing was forgotten!

But I will also remember this little lesson. I hope I won't make mistakes in the future. It's best not to make mistakes from now on and be a regular me.

Also, I want to focus on the teacher: If I am a bird flying with wings, then you are the wind that stirs my wings. If I am a new leaf that has just sprouted, then you are a root buried deep in the soil.

I always want to tell you if I am thoughtful, and I want to share my joy with you. With respect and love, Mr. Jiao, let me once again call you "Mr. Jiao" with the deepest affection, okay?

Last year, our class was often influenced by the sun. Health always comes first, but we also have an excellent head teacher! So we can do everything well. If only teachers are excellent, we are not qualified. How can we be worthy of such excellent teachers? So I hope the whole class will cheer up and let our class by going up one flight of stairs under the leadership of the teacher.

7. The teacher taught me to write the composition "Ding Ling Ling ……" The bell rang. When the students were all seated, Mr. Xia smiled and said, "Students, do you know? Last night, I looked after the house alone. I'm not afraid of jokes when I say it. I've never been this big.

Not as scared as last night. That kind of fear can't be described in words, and it still feels terrible when I think about it. It's really scary. "The words sound just fell and the whole class immediately burst into laughter, especially Wang Lingling's laughter.

Lean back, especially exaggerated.

After the laughter stopped, Mr. Xia pointed to Wang Lingling who was still smiling and asked, "Lingling, aren't you afraid of what I said?" "No." Wang Lingling answered simply. "Hey, I saw it last night.

I feel really scared at home. "Teacher Xia asked doubtfully," Why don't you feel afraid after hearing it? Wang Lingling pondered for a while and said, "I don't think what you said is concrete and vivid enough, so we can't feel anything from it. "

Afraid. Teacher Xia looked very sad when she heard this: "Hi! Originally, the teacher wanted to write out the feelings of last night, but now it seems that it is not working. " Say, shook his head, very helpless. Haven't waited for our response.

When I came over, I heard Mr. Xia say, "I have an idea, classmate. Can you teach the teacher? How can I say that you can feel the fear in the teacher's heart last night? "

Let's "teach" the teacher. It's really interesting! But can we do it? In curiosity and doubt, the whole class began to discuss in groups. But how to teach teachers to write? Me and the rest of the team

I don't know where to start. Suddenly I saw the experience of looking at the house alone one night last summer: that night, I just finished my homework upstairs, and suddenly I saw the curtain cloth fluttering outside the window for no reason.

There seems to be a shadow flash across; Then there was a strange "squeak" sound downstairs ... it scared me at that time. Yes, I have an idea. I quickly said to the group members, "We can suggest the teacher to describe something."

What he saw and heard at that time frightened him. Only in this way can we feel immersive after reading it and feel the teacher's fear at that time. "Students are inspired by me, and you are a drag on me.

After the discussion, Chen Xiaoqing said, "You can also ask the teacher to talk about what he was thinking." ...... Finally, our group agreed that teachers should be taught to describe from five aspects: "seeing, listening, feeling, thinking and doing".

The group discussion was over, and each group began to express their own suggestions. Some groups suggest that teachers should pay attention to using more rhetorical devices when writing; Some groups suggest that teachers should write more about the environment at that time.

When speaking in our group, I stood up confidently as a representative: "Teacher, our group agreed that you can learn from what you saw, heard, felt, thought and did at that time."

Detailed description. "Listen to our speech, Xia Feng kept nodding. When we finished writing, he said happily, "Thank you for teaching me to write a composition. From the students' speeches just now, I have understood how to.

Make the composition concrete and vivid. Next, please write down your own housekeeping experience with me in the way you just said. "……

Just forty minutes passed. However, after class, the students still talked about this lesson with relish.

The teacher taught me how to read and write. My Chinese teacher is Miss Rui. She is gentle, generous and amiable. If I don't understand anything, just ask her, and she will take pains to explain it to me until I understand it.

Most students in our class (including me) are formalism when they study, and they just skim over idioms and words they don't know or understand. They don't look up dictionaries and materials carefully, so their vocabulary is not rich and their words are rustic. Although some people study hard, they read comic books and joke books that are useless to their studies as soon as they walk in ... Others read books and articles that they just finished, and later they don't even remember the topics. It's a waste of time to look at them, and it has no effect at all.

After investigation, Mr. Rui earnestly taught us: "To study, we must first choose books that are helpful and have context." When reading, we must put aside our silent reading teacher-dictionary, ask the "silent reading teacher" for unknown words and expressions, and we must get to the bottom of it, so as to learn more knowledge. If possible, we can also check it online. Secondly, after reading the article several times, draw good words and sentences, write down your experiences and feelings next to the sentences that you feel the deepest or most, and write a comment as a whole; Finally, the most crucial step is to extract the good words, sentences and paragraphs you have extracted in an orderly way, read them several times until you feel that you have read them well and remember the general meaning. It's really good and can be used in composition after memorizing it. " I keep my teacher's words firmly in mind and apply them to real life.

Sure enough, what the teacher said was completely correct. In just one month, my writing and reading skills have advanced by leaps and bounds. Even I can't believe it's true. The article "My Reading Hobby" won the first prize in essay writing, and the essay contest "Reading makes me happy" won the second prize. I even published several essays about the river. It has been well received by netizens. In the past, seven or eight points were deducted from reading questions, but now only four or five points are deducted at most.

Teacher Rui, you taught me to read, and these benefits are the fruits of your hard education. Here, I just want to say sincerely: "Mr. Rui, thank you for your teaching!" You have worked hard! " .

9. My teacher taught me to write a 600-word composition. My teacher always shows me that familiar, kind and unforgettable face. She is my most impressive primary school teacher, Qi Li.

I was only in grade three at that time. At that time, I was self-willed, proud and fond of playing small temper. In a Chinese exam, I won the first place in my class. Hearing the news, I was happy to show off this test paper.

I'm glad the monitor asked me to run a blackboard newspaper. I asked my classmates to bring me chalk and a blackboard brush. If I don't like it, I will curse at random. Gradually, my classmates ignored me, and even my best "best friend" didn't want to play with me.

At this time, Teacher Qi came up to me and said to me, "The reason why the lake is broad is because it contains all the small water droplets, and it will not despise other small water droplets, so it is very happy and not lonely at all. People are the same, you can't live without friends, and friends need to be found by yourself. In fact, more than 70 students in the class are your friends, but you will be so lonely if you don't cherish them. "

Since the teacher talked to me, I have learned a lot, I have friends again, and I know the true friendship. In my study, Mr. Qi often supports me, encourages me and accompanies me across the bridge of life.

Now I have transferred to another school and met new classmates and teachers. In recent years, I have made great progress in my study. Whenever I make some achievements, I will think of her, her teachings and her encouraging eyes.

My teacher I have a very respected teacher. She always likes to wear a blue dress, and her quiet face often has a serious and lovely expression.

Every time I see the twinkling eyes behind her glasses, an unforgettable thing comes to my eyes. I was stumped by a question in an exam.

Seeing other students doing so well. So, I looked around and looked around, trying to find a bargain.

However, the teacher saw through my mind and there was no chance. When the teacher's eyes turned to the other side, I took the opportunity to peek at my deskmate's answer.

I feel much more comfortable after finishing the test. The teacher handed out papers, and as a result, I got 100. I was very happy.

The class was over, and I just walked out of the classroom when I heard someone calling me from behind. Looking back, it was the teacher.

She is usually very strict and will never leave me alone. I followed the teacher to the office in a panic. I dare not go near her or look up at her.

The teacher said, "I dare not look up when I do something wrong." I will forgive you as long as you correct your mistake. " After listening to the teacher's words, my heart relaxed a lot.

I sincerely said, "teacher, I was wrong!" " ""Although you peeked at other people's answers, you still don't understand. "The teacher paused and said," I'd better explain it to you. "

At this time, my face was red. Afterwards, the teacher told me carefully.

Before I left, the teacher told me not to ask more questions and correct my wrong homework. I was very moved and deeply realized the teacher's concern for me.

Teacher! You are really an amiable and respectable teacher. Campus is the cradle of knowledge for me; Campus is the window to teach me how to be a man; Campus is my lighthouse; Campus is a stage for me to show my style.

Campus, let me move from ignorance to intelligence; Let me go from childish to mature. The school celebrated its centenary this year and held a speech contest. I was lucky enough to take part in this activity.

This is the first time that I have spoken to more than 1000 students on the stage, and it is also the fourth time, so I am inevitably a little nervous. When contestant No.3 got off the stage, the host read, "Please welcome contestant No.4 to the stage. The topic of her speech is' Love my China'! " Oh, dear! How did you find me so quickly? I walked onto the stage sweating profusely.

Start the speech: "When I learn English …" Oh, no! What is the action that the teacher taught me? It's over! I totally forgot! Whatever! Say it first! Finally! I'm finished. After stepping down, my classmates told me that I was wrong! I nodded in dismay.

Feeling not rich, no action, wrong sentence! Alas! I can't count on ranking. I was thinking.

The game is over. The host announced that I only won the second place.

If I fail in the exam. I thought: Dad will be very disappointed when he knows.

When I got home, my father's words surprised me! He said: No matter when you start, the most important thing is not to stop after you start. On your way to the first, it is necessary to experience the second ... "Yes! The hope of tomorrow, let us forget the pain of today! Dad's words gave me confidence again.

Campus, my stage, I want to show my grace on this stage that belongs to me! Although I am not versatile, I am also a person with a wide range of interests.

Among them, I also like writing compositions. There are also many students who write well in our class. I didn't recall how excited I would be if I were the person standing on the stage and enjoying the praise of my teachers and classmates! Whenever I see their composition, I feel envious and can't help writing it from time to time.

Until today, I can no longer hold back my excitement and make up my mind to write a good composition! Because of this, I often regard it as a document. Finally, hard work pays off! After a little practice, I made progress.

In the composition class, I try my best to write the best composition! I shine on this stage! Later, my stage became the arena of the composition contest. I am so absorbed that I dare not be careless.

Finally, I won the third prize only by my own efforts. But I will work harder in future competitions! Make it more harmonious! My stage is like a fire. Not only did I exercise my perfect composition, but also my patience, confidence and perseverance! In the composition, the name of the Chinese teacher can be changed to my teacher. The good teacher in my mind is Miss Shen who teaches us Chinese.

Miss Shen is about forty years old. She is not tall and a little thin. She smiled kindly. Although Miss Shen's eyes are a little small, she is dignified in class. When his eyes stare, anyone who sees them will immediately sit down and listen carefully.

He smiled and narrowed into a line, like a robot cat to lose weight. Very interesting. Everyone likes to listen to Mr. Shen's class, because his speeches are humorous and active, which is one of the reasons why we like him.

I remember Shen Lao in the third grade.

10. Describe the clip where the teacher taught me to write a composition. I taught my teacher to write a composition "Ding Ling Ling ……" The bell rang, and when the students were all seated, Miss Xia smiled and said, "Do you know, classmates? Last night, I looked after the house alone.

I'm not afraid of jokes when I say it. I've never been so scared since I grew up. That kind of fear can't be described in words, and it still feels terrible when I think about it. It's really scary. "

The words sound just fell and the whole class burst into laughter, especially Wang Lingling's laughter, which was particularly exaggerated. After the laughter stopped, Mr. Xia pointed to Wang Lingling who was still smiling and asked, "Lingling, aren't you afraid of what I said?" "No."

Wang Lingling simply replied. "Gee, I was really scared when I looked at the house last night."

Teacher Xia asked doubtfully, "Why don't you feel scared after listening?" Wang Lingling pondered for a moment and said, "I don't think what you said is concrete and vivid enough to scare us." Teacher Xia looked very sad when she heard this: "Hi! Originally, the teacher wanted to write out the feelings of last night, but now it seems that it is not working. "

Say, shook his head, very helpless. Before we could react, we heard Mr. Xia say, "I have an idea, classmates." Can you teach the teacher? How can I say that you can feel the fear in the teacher's heart last night? " Let's "teach" the teacher. It's really interesting! But can we do it? In curiosity and doubt, the whole class began to discuss in groups.

But how to teach teachers to write? The other members of the team and I don't know where to start at present. Suddenly I saw the experience of looking at the house alone one night last summer: that night, I just finished my homework upstairs, and suddenly I saw the curtain cloth fluttering for no reason, and it seemed that a black shadow flashed outside the window; Then there was a strange "squeak" sound downstairs ... it scared me at that time.

Yes, I have an idea. I quickly said to the group members, "We can suggest that the teacher describe what he saw and heard at that time, which scared him.

Only in this way can we feel immersive after reading it and feel the teacher's fear at that time. "The students were inspired by me, and you spoke a word. Only Chen Xiaoqing said, "You can also ask the teacher to talk about what he was thinking. "

...... Finally, our group agreed that teachers should be taught to describe from five aspects: "seeing, listening, feeling, thinking and doing". The group discussion was over, and each group began to express their own suggestions.

Some groups suggest that teachers should pay attention to using more rhetorical devices when writing; Some groups suggested that teachers should write more about the environment at that time ... When it was our group's turn to speak, I stood up confidently: "Teacher, our group agreed that you can describe in detail what you saw, heard, felt and did at that time." Listening to our speech, Mr. Xia kept nodding. When we finished writing, he said happily, "Thank you for teaching me to write a composition.

From the students' speeches just now, I understand how to write a concrete and vivid composition. Next, please write down your own housekeeping experience with me in the way you just said. "

..... just 40 minutes passed. However, after class, the students still talked about this lesson with relish.