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Please help me to see how this composition is written. ! Urgent!
To tell the truth, your title is a trivial matter. From the first paragraph, you pointed out that your characteristic is carelessness, and then in the second paragraph, you wrote that you mixed facial cleanser and toothpaste to highlight your careless image, but later you described picking flowers for your mother, which was a surprise for your mother and readers. Little Ma Hu is unambiguous. Sublimated the theme.
If it is not enough, it is that the topic is too general to highlight the center, which can be said to be divorced from the main idea. You obviously wrote two things yourself, and the title can be changed. If there is anything else, Ma Daha can't tell the difference between toothpaste and facial cleanser, which doesn't mean that it is Ma Daha's behavior, because the author himself admits that he didn't squeeze toothpaste, so it is far-fetched to say that Ma Daha is far-fetched.
On the whole, it's not bad for senior one. It would be more perfect to change the title and finally describe mom's mood.
Satisfied still hope to adopt.
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