In 2006, junior middle school Chinese exam classified training questions.

Open the topic composition of the 2006 senior high school entrance examination

The first lecture is the focus of this article.

The highlight is the publicity of students' composition personality and the flash of students' innovative thinking, which makes the marking teacher shine at the moment and has a strong visual impact.

First, the title is clear: eye-catching.

A good article is half the battle. A good composition, like a pair of moving eyes and charming eyes, leaves room for imagination and aftertaste.

The method of raising the topic:

1, rhetoric drafting

For example, the first green apple (topic: reading nature, society and life)

The most brilliant flower (theme: smile)

Sunshine in Life (Theme: Music)

Be a "dark horse" by yourself (topic: Shit)

2. The simulation method is put forward.

The winding path leads to the place of "music" (topic: seeing the world with a beautiful heart)

3. The method of seeking differences by anomalies is proposed.

Theme: desire

I long for a stepmother.

I long for pain.

I want to be a poor student (topic: thinking)

Grandma Liu's online record (topic: Internet)

4. Use numbers and equations to work out the problem

2 > 5 (Theme: Weekend)

Sincerity+trustworthiness = true friendship (topic: friendship)

5, mobilize the sensory method to plan the topic.

Tonight, the stars shine (mobilize vision)

"Long bell" (to mobilize hearing)

Coke for you, coffee for you (to arouse the taste)

It's drizzling (mobilizing the sense of touch)

Pinqiao (mobilizing thoughts)

6. Put forward the expansion method (the safest method is to expand the topic into phrases).

Theme: sunshine

Give some sunshine and it will be brilliant. Sunshine will act. What can I do to save you? My sunshine, sunshine girl, one meter sunshine, warm sunshine in winter, your love is like sunshine.

Second, the opening highlight: "First" is extraordinary

From the beginning, we should strive to be a "blockbuster".

1. Precautions at the beginning:

(1) The beginning should meet the needs of the theme, the beginning should adapt to the material, and don't start for the beginning.

(2) Get to the point as soon as possible, don't beat around the bush, and be top-heavy (long at the beginning).

The beginning should be fresh, lively and fascinating, and don't copy mechanically or platitudes, or mystify.

2, at the beginning of the method:

① Cut to the chase: cut to the chase quickly.

"The planetesimals' teacher just graduated from normal school. She is young and beautiful, and is very popular with the stars and classmates. (Curved Moon)

"After failing in the college entrance examination, my brother and I went to work in a coastal port city." (the best education)

"In the second grade, I fell in love with my Chinese teacher inexplicably." (Teacher's Tears)

"Bill Quelha is a middle school teacher in Utah, USA. He is always meticulous in education and teaching and has a good reputation among students and colleagues. On one occasion, he gave students an assignment and asked them to write a composition about their ideals. " (Teacher's Confessions)

"At the moment, the world is silent.

At the moment, the earth is dark and cold. "(Falling Sky)

(2) the beginning of flashback: including the beginning of quotation (the beginning of quotation poem and song)

"I will never forget that little girl, the lovely little girl I hurt" ("Deep Confession")

"Now, it seems that it was a very childish behavior, and he really thought and did that at that time." (Forever Bill)

"I can't forget the night in Argentina that was brightly dyed by the sunset." (The Old Man and the Dove)

"I walked by the sea during the holiday and saw many children flying kites. A long lead, one tied to the sky and one tied to the ground. Children and kites are wandering between heaven and earth, and Lian Xin is wandering in a trance, as if he had returned to his childhood. " (Fantasia for Kite)

(3) At the beginning of the scene:

Snowflakes like goose feathers were flying all over the sky, and the cold north wind was rampaging and growling ... Suddenly, my feet slipped and I knelt on the ground. (Winter in Spring)

"It was raining, the asphalt pavement was wet, and the green, yellow and red lights were flashing. We sheltered from the rain under the arcade and watched the green mailbox stand alone across the street. There is a letter for my southern mother in the big pocket of my white windbreaker. (butterfly forever)

"Get up early in the morning and walk to the small stone bridge. It seems a little hot to touch the bridge stone. There was not a breath of wind all day yesterday. In the evening, it thundered for a while and there was no wind. This night is more sultry than during the day. At dawn, two or three people were lying on the bridge. Maybe they tied these stones up again. " (Before the thunderstorm)

(4) Hanging beginning:

"She kept looking at the door of the waiting room. The plane will take off in half an hour, and the person she hopes to appear has not yet appeared. "("gift ")

"thud, there was a loud noise from the neighbor's house next door, which startled me when I was concentrating on my homework. Then there is the cry of tearing the liver and splitting the lungs. What happened to the neighbor's house? I'm curious and curious. ("After the Neighbor Accident")

"Today is the weekend. After a week of nervousness, I can finally relax. I hummed a tune and walked home briskly. Stuttering ... there was a burst of firecrackers in the village. What's the happy event? I stepped up and ran towards the village entrance. " ("Happy Event")

(5) The metaphor begins:

The feeling of growing up

A, a bunch of grapes from green to purple, from sour to sweet, long feeling really good!

B. Time flies. When I opened the fifteenth page of this great book of life, I suddenly felt that I had grown up.

C, seeing this topic, my heart is like catkins in March, drifting to the past when I grow up. ...

D, growing up feeling that coffee is bitter and sweet; The feeling of growing up is like a song, some exciting and some depressing; Growing up feels like a sea, rough and calm.

⑥ parallel start:

A, such as metaphor at the beginning

B, farewell to my loneliness; Farewell, my cartoon; Farewell, my networm; Goodbye, my Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck … because I have grown up.

C, no longer a little girl who clamors for her mother to tell stories every day; Seeing the caterpillar, I am no longer a little girl in a tourist trap; No longer the little girl who quarreled with her classmates and cried when she lost; I am no longer a little girl who failed the exam and dare not go home. Because, I have grown up!

We are the rising sun;

What you can't finish reading is books; What you can't finish listening to is nagging; What I am afraid of is the report card; What you can't do is homework in all subjects.

Attachment: Practice

My happiness and troubles (metaphor begins)

Grievance (opening with a scene)

True feelings exist in the world (starting with flashbacks or suspense)

Notes on campus life (starting with parallelism or quotation)

Third, the idea is clear: high and innovative.

Multiple topics can be extracted from the same topic. Don't choose familiar materials to express conventional themes, but be good at being unconventional. For example, the idiom "stealing the beam to replace the column" is generally used to describe hard study, but new themes can be developed: ① to describe brains; (2) Don't complain about poor conditions, and constantly improve environmental conditions.

"Seeking Spring" (see Appreciation of Excellent Works for the article): In the form of fairy tales, the article describes the process of finding spring for peaches in the mountains. Theme: All good things are spring.

You can also write about the elderly who have been widowed for many years to reunite their families. Theme: Looking for the spring of life.

Fourth, the selection of materials is clear: seeing the big from the small.

Choose the materials around you, talk about the things around you, and avoid those materials that are far away from life, such as those reported by the media, which everyone knows.

1, topic: fun

Title: trilogy of dormitory life

Theme:

(1) Get up in the morning (sleep late → play tricks)

② Lunch break song (sharing food: courtesy → sharing food → ordering food and sweeping the floor)

(3) Serenade (Hu Kan → end of song → snoring everywhere)

2. Theme: Examination

Topic: "Portrait of Examination" (or "Expression of Examination")

Theme:

(1) "smile" phase (smile)

② "regret" stage (regret)

3 "pull a long face" (bitter)

(4) "indifference" phase (wood)

Distinctive feelings: the true feelings are revealed.

Bai Juyi said: "Those who touch people's hearts don't put feelings first." Only by expressing true feelings can readers' heartfelt feelings be aroused. The highlight of the article is that "every sentence tells your own experience and every sentence tells your own heart", but don't belittle others just to express your feelings or raise yourself.

Vi. Bright layout: unique symmetry

1, refreshing packaging forms: diaries, letters, fairy tales, new stories, court records, live interviews, subtitle links, etc.

2. For example:

1 topic; have a conversation

Theme: dialogue beyond time and space

Content:

α. Qu Yuan and Qin Heng discuss patriotism and treason;

β. People-oriented dialogue between Li Shimin (winning people's trust) and Mao Zedong (integrating people).

Layout:

Time: time:

Location: location:

Shoot one event: shoot two events:

Digression: digression:

② Theme: Suffering

Topic: My Close Contact with Suffering

Intention: Summarize the life of junior high school in three years with four diaries: mosquitoes bite people in the dormitory, hot water rooms compete with each other, and clear soup and vegetables in the canteen flow freely in the examination room; It embodies the theme of hard work and struggle.

Layout:

α, 200 1, 1, gloomy weather, mood index: 2 stars.

β, 2002 1 1.5 sunny mood index: 5 stars.

C, April 7, 2003, Wan Li Cloudless Mood Index: 3 stars.

June 2004 17 d sunny mood index: n stars (5≤n≤ 10)

③ Topic: Examination

Topic: "Portrait of Examination" (or "Expression of Examination")

Intention: The expression after four groups of exams reflects the disadvantages of exam-oriented education and the call for quality education.

Layout:

A, "Laugh" (Laugh) B, "Regret" (Regret)

C, "pull a long face" phase (bitter) D, "indifferent" phase (wood)

Seven, the article is distinct: concise and powerful.

"The beauty of an article depends on the sentence"; "If she just turns her head and smiles, there are a hundred spells"; Ending a sentence is like ringing a bell. A good beginning can be fascinating, and a wonderful ending can leave a deep impression on people.

1. Finally, please note:

First, you can't gild the lily;

B, can't anticlimactic;

C, can't talk (moaning without illness);

D, don't be bored.

2, the end of the method:

(1) natural ending:

A, "Mom said,' I can't accept your care.' Why? Because everyone in our family has two hands! The chairman insisted, "I have bought a house for you." Mom smiled and said,' Then give the house to someone who doesn't even have a hand! "("noble charity ")

B, dad's face with an indescribable smile, holding a newspaper hand dripping on his knee ... ("Father's Question")

(2) the end of the set:

A, Twilight came quickly, only for a moment, the colorful canopy was like a misplaced dye, vaguely dark, just like my heart suddenly darkened ... ("The Old Man and the Dove")

The north wind is blowing, the snow is rolling, and the spring breeze is blowing from my heart. (Winter in Spring)

(3) Talk about lyricism and make the finishing point:

A, at that moment, my heart was filled with awe of my mother, who opened the curtain for me to know kindness, made me feel the beauty of human nature all my life, and planted the seeds of benevolence and love. (debt collection)

Yes, dreams are expectations. With expectation, you will have passion, work hard, stick to your dreams, move forward bravely and finally reach the other side of success. (Confessions of a Teacher)

C. Goethe said: "The happiest person is the one who can connect the end point and the starting point of life." I want to say that the starting point of your life is made of your parents' flesh and blood. It belongs not only to you, but also to your father and to all mankind. The greatest person is the one who can connect his life with his parents' life and the whole society. ("Knowing the Father")

④ Pointing at the ending: This ending is often combined with ③.

A, bright liquid oozed from the boss's eyes. He picked up a glass of wine and said, "I propose a toast to her old man-you have the best education in your life-and take her over!" " (the best education)

B Later, I became a real violinist and had the opportunity to play the violin in front of thousands of audiences. However, at this time, I can't help thinking of my special audience-"deaf" musicians. (special audience)

C, with youth, you have chic and romance. With youth, you have brilliance and brilliance. Please cheer for our youth! (Cheering for youth)

D, "I found my self-esteem": The article describes that the author lost his dignity in English class because he took off his shoes-he was called "old-fashioned" by the teacher; Later, I was criticized in English class, but I was surprised to learn that my composition "I am an old country without dignity" was published, and I found my dignity again. Let's see how the author points out the topic at the end:

In English class, I always hold my head high. However, the English teacher later lowered her head and talked about her class. Haha, find the feeling of self-esteem, cool!

⑤ Implied ending:

1. Xing Zi hurriedly opened the book and saw on the title page of the book: "To my most beloved first teacher: thank you for inserting the wings of imagination for me ..." After reading it, Xing Zi's face reappeared with that happy smile ... ("Curved Moon")

B, "People who don't want to take advantage will not suffer from life!" The father said meaningfully to his son. (poached eggs)

C, "No need." The young lady smiled and said, "Our manager read the check and knew who you were." He asked me to tell you that there are no waste books specially designed for decoration in this bookstore. Every book is a life with a soul, and it will eventually belong to those who really love books. "("I want to ask for a book ")

D, "I have nothing on my mind": The little author wrote in the article that as a boy with good grades, he occasionally stayed up late to watch the ball game, so he appeared in poor spirits the next day and was suspected of having something on his mind by his parents, classmates, teachers and class teachers (puppy love). Finally, the author was forced to tell the truth: "I have no worries, no puppy love, no love letters and no girlfriend." I just got up last night and watched a ball game. I'm afraid my classmates' jokes won't come out I'm not worried at all. " But ironically, parents and class teachers who "care about chaos" still don't believe it. Let's enjoy the unforgettable ending of this masterpiece:

Mom and the class teacher looked at each other: "It seems that he, he must be lovelorn!" " "

Oh, my God. ...

Attachment: Practice

My happiness and troubles (discussion, lyrical ending)

True feelings exist in the world (with a dot and a quote ending)

Interesting campus life (discussion and lyrical ending)

Appeal (point, end of quotation)

The second lecture on composition for senior high school entrance examination

Avoid misunderstanding topics: such as "commitment" and "integrity"

Avoid changing the subject.

Three taboos are mediocre or negative.

Four taboos are out of date.

Five bogeys don't want style: strengthen the training of a style, such as narrative.

Six taboos: plain language: literature and art, the pursuit of personalized expression.

Seven taboos are not high in style: it is not appropriate to magnify the dark side of society, assume that parents are affected, curse teachers, and render puppy love.

Eight bogey content distortion: for example, fabricating beautiful lies.

Nine taboos and novelty: if only the form is emphasized, the content is not emphasized.

Ten taboos for writing poetry.

Eleven avoid missing the title.

Twelve taboos are not enough words: try to finish the composition, giving people a heavy and fulfilling feeling.

Avoid scribbling and untidy writing.

Fourteen taboos and half-composition: even if you end it hastily, you should finish your composition.

Theme: shame

Old man repairing shoes

(to be replaced by:)

[Flashback begins:

It was a cold winter afternoon, and when I went to physical education class, I suddenly felt the air leakage under my feet. Looking down, I found a hole in my sports shoes. When I got home, I told my mother about it. Mom said, "Make it up, it's a pity to lose it!" " "[psychological description:

I had to put on my rotten shoes and go with my mother to find the old man who was repairing shoes in the street. At this time, the sun sets in the west. 【 Description of scenery:

〕

The old man who repaired shoes has packed the shoe box and is ready to go home. Seeing this situation, mother rushed up and said, "Grandpa, can you mend the shoes for the children?" His shoes were untied on the physical education class. "The old man looked at the sunset and gradually confused twilight, and then at my worn-out shoes. After some hesitation, he said, "All right! " "

The old man reopened the shoe repair box and sat on the stool. I quickly took off my shoes. The old man picked up my shoes, looked at them and mended them. Looking at his skillful movements, I couldn't help looking at the old man carefully. [Appearance description:

〕

He sewed carefully with a shoe cone in one hand and a thread in the other. [Detailed description:

〕

After a while, the crack was closed, but he didn't mean to stop. He pulled up where the thread was about to open one by one, sewed it again, and said to himself, "The shoes worn by children are not strong." Then he sewed it carefully. But I thought to myself, "Well, didn't you overcharge me?"

The shoes were mended, and the old man's hands were frozen stiff. The old man kept breathing and rubbing his hands. Mother asked him softly, "Grandpa, how much is it?" He held out two fingers of his right hand covered with tape and said, "Twenty cents." Twenty cents? I was startled. [Psychological description:

Mother asked him how much he could earn a day by paying the money. He said: "hey, what money is not money, just for everyone's convenience!" " "

[Happy ending:

The third lecture on packaging composition

"Six Ones" to Improve Composition Score

A subtle and profound topic.

A good start.

Dense paragraph layout

A beautiful fragment description

Perfect ending

A refreshing tattoo

[Packaging ingredients]

Composition requirements: Write a composition on the topic of "shame".

Old man repairing shoes

(to be replaced by:)

[Flashback begins:

It was a cold winter afternoon, and when I went to physical education class, I suddenly felt the air leakage under my feet. Looking down, I found a hole in my sports shoes. When I got home, I told my mother about it. Mom said, "Make it up, it's a pity to lose it!" " "[psychological description:

I had to put on my rotten shoes and go with my mother to find the old man who was repairing shoes in the street. At this time, the sun sets in the west. 【 Description of scenery:

〕

The old man who repaired shoes has packed the shoe box and is ready to go home. Seeing this situation, mother rushed up and said, "Grandpa, can you mend the shoes for the children?" His shoes were untied on the physical education class. "The old man looked at the sunset and gradually confused twilight, and then at my worn-out shoes. After some hesitation, he said, "All right! " "

The old man reopened the shoe repair box and sat on the stool. I quickly took off my shoes. The old man picked up my shoes, looked at them and mended them. Looking at his skillful movements, I couldn't help looking at the old man carefully. [Appearance description:

〕

He sewed carefully with a shoe cone in one hand and a thread in the other. [Detailed description:

〕

After a while, the crack was closed, but he didn't mean to stop. He pulled up where the thread was about to open one by one, sewed it again, and said to himself, "The shoes worn by children are not strong." Then he sewed it carefully. But I thought to myself, "Well, didn't you overcharge me?"

The shoes were mended, and the old man's hands were frozen stiff. The old man kept breathing and rubbing his hands. Mother asked him softly, "Grandpa, how much is it?" He held out two fingers of his right hand covered with tape and said, "Twenty cents." Twenty cents? I was startled. [Psychological description:

Mother asked him how much he could earn a day by paying the money. He said: "hey, what money is not money, just for everyone's convenience!" " "

[Happy ending:

Lecture 4 Theme Training

1, changes happen all the time around us. Careful observation shows that many changes are "changing without changing, changing without changing". Do you have such experiences and feelings? Please write an article on the topic of "change". The topic is self-made, and the style is not limited, not less than 600 words.

2. Liu Xiang challenged the limit in Athens-110 meter hurdles 12 seconds 9 1, which shocked the world;

Pull a spring, if the pulling force exceeds the bearing limit of the spring, the spring will lose its elasticity;

Some areas need to constantly break through the limits, and some areas need to live within their means and leave room.

Please write an article with your own ideas, style and title, no less than 600 words, on the topic of "Limit".

In 334 BC, Alexander the Great distributed all his property to his deputies before leaving for Persia. An attendant was very surprised and asked, "Your Majesty, what are you carrying?" Alexander confidently and decisively replied: "Hope!"

Please write a composition with the title of "Hope", with a self-made title and a style of your choice, no less than 600 words.

4. Words such as "exploring", "solving puzzles" and "uncovering the mystery" are often seen in newspapers and periodicals. Please write an article of no less than 600 words with the topic of "Secret" combined with your own ideas, topics and style.

Once upon a time, Internet became an indispensable part of modern life. The prevalence of the Internet has greatly increased the communication time and space between people, making people's communication more convenient and fast. On the Internet, you can talk directly with friends who are far away from the other side of the ocean, and you can also check the latest news from all over the world in real time. ...

Please write an article on the topic of "network", which is not limited to style, and the topic is self-made, not less than 600 words.

6. In the following year, the old camel once again crossed the desert called "the sea of death" and returned home in triumph.

The horse and donkey invited the old hero to introduce their experiences.

"Actually, there is nothing to say," said the old camel. "Look for your goal and move forward patiently step by step, and you will reach your destination."

"That's it? No? " The horse and donkey asked.

"No, that's all."

"alas!" Ma said: "I thought it would say something amazing, but it was very simple and ended in a few words."

"It's not wonderful. Disappointing. " Donkeys feel the same way.

Yes, these "not wonderful" things in life are often ignored. However, it is precisely because of these "ordinary" and "not wonderful" that success and greatness are born.

Please write an article of no less than 600 words on the topic "Feeling Ordinary", which can record experiences, write stories, make comments and express feelings. Choose your own style (except poetry) and make your own topic.