I am going to XX Middle School for an interview. I have prepared a self-introduction in English. Can anyone who is good at English help me take a look at it? What else needs to be revised?

Hello, EVERYONE!

I'm glad to meet you.My name is baoyishuang and MY English name is Peter.I'm 12 years old.I am studying in fuwai No .1 Primary school.

I have many hobbies, swimming, drawing, doing math problemS and so on.But my favorite hobbY is WOKING ON math problemS.Because WOKING ON math problem is VERY interesting.I want to be a mathematician in fufure.

I hope I can become ONE OF XXX middle school's studentS.

That's all.

Thanks a lot.

I changed it a little for you, capitalized~~

Hello, teachers!

I'm glad to meet you.My name is baoyishuang and my English name is Peter .I'm 12 years old.I am studying in fuwai No.1 Primary school.

I'm interested in many subjects, such as English, PE, math(and so on delete).Among them, Math is my favorite subject, because it is very interesting. I often do MANY Math prombles at home. By the way, I want to be a mathematician in the future.

I hope I can go to the XXX middle school and become one student of XXX middle school.

That's all.

Thanks a lot.

Changed again, basically correct!