Model essay and brief comment on the eighth unit of Chinese in the second volume of grade four

In the composition teaching of the eighth unit of Chinese in the second volume of the fourth grade, teachers should give students free practice space and wider practice content, stimulate their interest in practice and guide their methods. I have compiled the essay model essays and brief comments of Unit 8 of Chinese in the second volume of Grade Four here for your reference. I hope you get something from reading!

Since then, I have loved watching adventure stories since I was a child, and I am often deeply attracted by the thrilling and mysterious storyline in the story. Sometimes it seems that I am also in that bizarre storyline.

So I made a wish from an early age: when I grow up, I want to be an explorer, to solve the mystery of the eternal pyramid, to explore the mystery of Bermuda, a terrible devil, to travel in a spaceship in a fascinating and magical universe, and to open up a new planet for mankind. If today in 2020, I have become a world-famous explorer, and I have solved the mysteries of the pyramids and Bermuda one after another. At that time, the ecological environment of the earth was seriously damaged. Because of the greenhouse effect, seawater has soared all over the coasts of various countries, and deserts have expanded rapidly. One third of the land has become an endless desert. The hole in the ozone layer over Antarctica has spread to the whole Antarctic region, and the earth on which human beings depend is dying. On this day, I was entrusted by all mankind to ride in the blue of eight members. Earth one? Fly to space to find a planet suitable for human survival.

In the vast universe, our spaceship has been flying for more than a month. On this day, my assistant exclaimed-he found a planet very similar to the earth, but its volume is five times that of the earth. I quickly ordered landing on this planet. On the planet, we are surprised to find that, like the earth hundreds of millions of years ago, there are dinosaurs everywhere. In order to survive on it, we reduced the dinosaurs to the size of ants by reducing the light.

Back to the earth, human beings cheered, because we found a planet more suitable for our survival than the earth.

This wish must be realized in the future, but I hope that mankind will not destroy the earth again.

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Can this article be read in simple words? Me? The lofty ideal and vivid portrayal bring people into a brand-new sci-fi world, which makes people yearn for and has a simple and natural ending.

Twenty years later, it was a sunny day. Just as the bell rang in the morning, there was a clear birdsong outside the window. I opened my eyes and looked out.

On the tree-lined street in my yard, lovely birds are singing: little monkeys are playing in the trees, and small fish are swimming freely in the water. After breakfast, I walked alone in the street, on the wide road, and the solar car passed by me? Hey? Flash: the green grass on both sides of the road is shaded; Small animals can walk and play freely on the lawn. Hey, how did that little rabbit get into the road? Relax, all the solar cars are equipped? Surveillance footage? Whether the driver can see it or not, as long as there is something in front, the solar car will stop automatically and the driver will respectfully give way.

Remember today is Sunday, and want to go? Green forest? Look at the park When I came to Greenwood Park, the robot tiger at the door came to the door and walked past. Stomach? Put in the specified amount of money. Is there a sound? Are you welcome? The voice sounded and a ticket was issued from the slot machine. I just entered the park, and in an instant, I was relaxed and happy. I threw myself into the embrace of nature, where the sky is green and red, and animals and people are happy together.

I was intoxicated by this beautiful scenery, and unconsciously fell into meditation: people need a clean environment, animals need a happy life, and people and animals live in harmony and become the common masters of nature.

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Today, ten years later, the author imagines the scenery he enjoyed at home, in the street and in the park, writes out the colors of the scenery and the joy of animals, and achieves the combination of motion and static. The free activities of small animals bring joy to families and write about the harmonious coexistence between people and animals. The combination of reality and association and the yearning for beauty.

My deskmate, my deskmate Wang Kai, is very famous in our class. He usually doesn't make big mistakes, but he has many minor faults. But even if he studies well, even the teacher can't help him.

I remember that before the mid-term exam, the teacher wanted to talk about the math paper he did on the first day, but Wang Kai was the only one in the class who didn't bring it. I was so angry that the teacher shouted, Wang Kai, I want to see how many points you got in the mid-term exam. ? I can't help it Wang Kai must read my paper with me. The teacher asked us to correct the wrong questions while talking. To my surprise, although Wang Kai didn't bring an examination paper, his ideas for doing each question were very clear, and he also told me how to calculate and how to form it from time to time. I thought to myself, why didn't God give me his clever head?

He and I happened to be in the same examination room during the mid-term exam. After handing in the papers, I asked Wang Kai, Wang Kai, have you got all the answers? How many points can he estimate? He said with confidence. Yes, 100 is no problem. ? After listening to his words, I said to myself: You are really good at bragging. ?

However, after the mid-term exam results came out, Wang Kai got a hundred points in mathematics. I only got 82 points in the exam. He said to me when he was correcting the paper. Wang Kexin, if you have any math problems that you can't solve, just ask me. ? Although I don't talk much, it sounds very warm, and I am more motivated to correct the wrong questions.

I am glad to have such a deskmate, because under his influence, I gradually like math and my grades have been greatly improved.

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