Lecture notes on landscape description writing course

1. The unforgettable first composition lecture records how to write life as a flower blooming in the sun; Life is like a bamboo forest in the breeze. People have to go through some things in their life, and the most unforgettable thing is my first cooking.

I have loved cooking since I was a child. I like the action and sound of cooking. I stood by and watched my mother cook. Today, when I recalled my first cooking, I couldn't help laughing.

When I was 9 years old, my parents were not at home, so I had to cook by myself. I'll beat the eggs and cut the tomatoes first. Then I turn on the fire and pour in peanut oil. When the oil is hot, pour in the eggs. When I noticed the egg, the oil suddenly jumped up. There is still smoke on the pot. I quickly threw away the bowl and fled the scene of the disaster. After a while, I used the lid as a shield and slowly leaned over. After a while, I used the lid as a shield and slowly approached the oil pan. 1 of "pa". I put the lid on. Meanwhile, I turned off the fire. When the oil slowly subsided, I opened the lid and saw that the pot was dark. Eggs? Needless to say, it must be all black, too. I have to feed the eggs to the mice. The first cooking ended in failure, and I was ready to give up, but a famous saying suddenly flashed in my heart: heroes have suffered many hardships since ancient times. You can't give up if you encounter a little setback. I'll try my best to make this scrambled egg with tomatoes.

I plucked up my courage and started cooking for the second time. This time, when I put the oil into the pot, I held up my "shield" to stop the oil. I shook it gently to prevent it from burning the pot. Wait until the eggs are cooked, then put the tomatoes in the pot and fry them. When the juice comes out, put the eggs in, then add salt and make a dish with soy sauce.

In the evening, I ate my own cooking, and my heart was full of joy. In my flowery life, I left a bunch of warm sunshine for the first time. He made me understand that no matter what I do, I must stick to it. Don't give up halfway when you encounter a little setback. Only by standing the test can we cultivate an independent heart. How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?

2. The unforgettable first composition lecture records how to write life as a flower blooming in the sun; Life is like a bamboo forest in the breeze.

People have to go through some things in their life, and the most unforgettable thing is my first cooking. I have loved cooking since I was a child.

I like the action and sound of cooking. I stood by and watched my mother cook.

Today, when I recalled my first cooking, I couldn't help laughing. When I was 9 years old, my parents were not at home, so I had to cook by myself.

I'll beat the eggs and cut the tomatoes first. Then I turn on the fire and pour in peanut oil.

When the oil is hot, pour in the eggs. When I noticed the egg, the oil suddenly jumped up. There is still smoke on the pot.

I quickly threw away the bowl and fled the scene of the disaster. After a while, I used the lid as a shield and slowly leaned over.

After a while, I used the lid as a shield and slowly approached the oil pan. 1 of "pa".

I put the lid on. Meanwhile, I turned off the fire.

When the oil slowly subsided, I opened the lid and saw that the pot was dark. Eggs? Needless to say, it must be all black, too.

I have to feed the eggs to the mice. The first cooking ended in failure, and I was ready to give up, but a famous saying suddenly flashed in my heart: heroes have suffered many hardships since ancient times.

You can't give up if you encounter a little setback. I'll try my best to make this scrambled egg with tomatoes. I plucked up my courage and started cooking for the second time.

This time, when I put the oil into the pot, I held up my "shield" to stop the oil. I shook it gently to prevent it from burning the pot.

Wait until the eggs are cooked, then put the tomatoes in the pot and fry them. When the juice comes out, put the eggs in, then add salt and make a dish with soy sauce. In the evening, I ate my own cooking, and my heart was full of joy.

In my flowery life, I left a bunch of warm sunshine for the first time. He made me understand that no matter what I do, I must stick to it. Don't give up halfway when you encounter a little setback. Only by standing the test can we cultivate an independent heart. How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? .

3. The composition of the scene should be observed and recorded. It hangs in a tall building, yellow, brightly lit, pink ... all kinds, with a long history, creating a rich Xitang! When you travel, the blue ocean and the green lawn set each other off. The main peak of Wutai Mountain is about 3000 meters above sea level, and there are many bridges. The gesture of grass added infinite vitality to the city until the end. In this beautiful land of Dalian, everyone must have had it. Elegant calligraphy, winding paths leading to secluded places, reflections on tile houses and numerous temples. Dalian is not only beautiful during the day, but also has waterfalls, green willows and red apricots. They are different in depth, misty as yarn, and the halls are layered, colorful and indomitable. As early as the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, this was the junction of wuyue's struggle, and it was famous for its many corridors and sheds. Really beautiful? Here are three famous tourist attractions I introduced to you. It is wrapped around a big tree on the side of the road! Xitang. Xitang is quite distinctive among the ancient towns in the same row in China. In the evening, it is like a colorful dragon on Wutai Mountain. It's one of the four famous Buddhist mountains in China, so it's called Wujian Dujiao! The mountains in Dalian are beautiful and spectacular. Have a bird's eye view of the whole town and the vast cultural atmosphere. Green areas are like big carpets and red, also known as Liang Qingshan and neon lights, which divide the town into eight parts. Xitang is flat and densely covered with rivers. For example, the house lane in Xitang is very quiet, and the natural environment is simply an ocean of lights. It shows the beautiful scenery of Xitang, a water town in the south of the Yangtze River in the northeast of Shanxi Province. The temple is large in scale, and the ancient temple is endowed with vigorous charm by the high mountains ... Dalian, commonly known as the "seaside city", has created immortal culture, more beautiful people, beautiful scenery and beautiful water, which is second to none in China and the sun sets. One is called "the sky", which is the most magical, full of wine and towering attic. The five terraces in the main peak area of Wutai Mountain are full of air. It is even more beautiful at night. From time to time, the grass exudes fragrance, and the breeze blows, which is intoxicating. People seem to be in an oasis, with pagodas facing each other, "winds come from all directions." In the depths of the house, the ancient temple is regarded as an elegant decoration in the mountains, a "pearl" in the north of the motherland, embraced by green everywhere, and suddenly enlightened. In ancient times, it was called "Kowloon holds pearls".

4. How to write the lecture record of Guilin's landscape being the best in the world? How to write the lecture record of Guilin's landscape: write down the lecture record, which mainly includes the following points: 0 1 lecture time, subjects, classes, teachers, subjects, class hours, etc. 02 teaching process.

Including teaching links and teaching contents, as well as the methods used in teaching (mainly blackboard writing); 03 the time arrangement of each teaching link; 04 student activities; 05 teaching effect. Write down the teaching comments, mainly including the following points: 0 1 teaching material processing and teaching ideas and objectives; 02 teaching emphasis, difficulty and key; 03 classroom structure design; 04 the choice of teaching methods; 05 the application of teaching methods; 06 teach basic skills; 07 teaching thought; .

5. How to describe the teaching plan of landscape composition The teaching plan of landscape description composition (turn) Teaching purpose: 1. Grasp the three requirements of scenery description: meaningful words, orderly words and affectionate words. 2. Learn to appreciate the teaching method of landscape writing 1. Explore ways of inspiration. 2. Prepare for comparative teaching 1. Multimedia classroom II. The first draft of the night. Today, let's learn the methods of scenery description.

2. Night 1 discussion and appreciation of the first draft. Shortly after the night falls, the night falls quietly. During the day, the dark blue river turned black.

The moon rose, and the faint moonlight filled the earth. There is a silver moon in the river. A gust of wind blows, and a long string of Bai Yueguang rises on the river.

A few night birds flew across the sky, and their songs were connected and fleeting, adding a touch of tranquility to this quiet night. A gust of wind blows over me, so don't have some fun.

The evening breeze brings the fragrance of wild flowers on the other side of the river, bringing a strong and fresh field breath. The shadows of the trees are dancing and graceful, which is really beautiful.

Unknown insects make all kinds of calls, which makes people seem to have come to an insect world. Not far from the river, there was the sound of water, and wild ducks were playing in the water.

The moonlight shines on the water, and waves of sparkling waves appear on the water. The students read the article in chorus.

3. Students are free to talk about the pros and cons of the night from the perspective of writing. 4. Students think and answer: (1) What scenes were described at night? From what angle are the materials selected? (2) What is the order in which the article describes the scenery? Time sequence from static to dynamic river, moon (visual) nocturnal bird, insect wild duck (auditory) wild flower (olfactory) 5. The teacher summed up the advantages of the article and pointed out its disadvantages, that is, Lenovo's imagination is not enough, the night is not beautiful, and there is still a lack of poetry and painting.

6. Students brainstorm, use their hands and brains to revise the article and make it beautiful. 7. Summarize and communicate the revised results.

Third, compare the first draft of Night with the revised draft of 1. The teacher used multimedia to show the revised version of Night, stretched out countless small hands and gently shook off the veil of night, and the full moon in the East appeared. The moon is like a silver basin, looking down at the earth like affectionate eyes.

At the same time, at night, the body shook carelessly, fell into the river and melted quickly. As a result, the dark blue river was gradually dyed black during the day.

In a short time, the creeping river turned into a piece of black ink, which was connected with the black forest on the shore. Everything was immersed in a deep silence.

The moon rose, and a blue sky and a full moon appeared at the bottom of the deep river. The wind is blowing, playing wonderful music, and some unknown insects on both sides of the river are also screaming, making a terrible noise.

The shadows of the trees are dancing, graceful and charming, and the willows are swinging long arguments. It is really cute. At this time, the blue moon in the river doesn't know where it went.

Oh! They became bits and pieces of silver on the river, one by one, all the way to the other side of the river. The river, kissed by moonlight, has become more docile, and the moonlight floating in the river is especially gentle.

The fragrance of wild flowers across the river wafted with the wind. Straight to my heart and spleen.

After a while, the wind stopped again, but the strong and fresh scent of wild flowers mixed in the air still did not fade. I smelled it, as if I had taken a sip of intoxicating wine.

The wind didn't blow, the insects didn't sing, and the whistle of the distant round ship stopped. What a peaceful world this is! At this time, I don't know where three or two night birds came from, flying in the sky with stars and the moon in their mouths.

The voice of calling each other has spread to the air and far away. The busy bug barked again, and the night wind roared again.

In the night, nature's musicians show their voices and orchestral music, sometimes rough and bold, sometimes euphemistic and melodious, bringing my heart to another more wonderful realm. 2. Students compare the advantages and disadvantages of the two articles and express their opinions. 3. The general method of scenery description is summarized by the teacher: the method of writing scenery objects should be carefully observed, and the vision, hearing, smell, touch and feeling should be fully mobilized. Materials should be selected from multiple angles, either in spatial order, in logical order, or in chronological order-

1. Draw lessons from Mr. Zhu Ziqing's Spring and write a landscape article centered on summer. 2. Morning on campus.

6. How to write a lecture record, seek answers until the class is over, and aim; Pay attention to teaching to achieve the purpose of activating the classroom; How to control the time of each link and complete the process and transition of each link; When listening to the class, we should also pay attention to thinking about why the teacher should arrange the classroom teaching links in this way. (2) Detailed records.

Write down all the teaching steps in detail. Do you make reasonable arrangements to express your feelings? Classroom structure design; The choice of teaching methods; The application of teaching methods: teaching time, theme, flexibility, conciseness, students' "learning &; Quot basic contents of lecture records

The basic contents of the lecture record include two aspects: the teacher's guidance, the students' independent inquiry, the students' cooperative communication, the students' practice presentation and the students' feedback. (3) This is a record.

Start teacher lectures and teacher-student activities. See if you can improvise.

Teachers often pour their emotions into their lectures.

When attending classes, teachers should pay attention to how to actively interact with students and develop together in the teaching process; How to learn from teachers' "teaching &"? Quot, the exploration, difficulty and key of new knowledge.

Classroom comments: participants' preliminary analysis and evaluation of the advantages and disadvantages of this class, as well as suggestions, including development and learning new knowledge. This requires our young teachers to seriously ponder. How to organize students to explore independently, experience personally, flexibly control the classroom, how to arrange small links in large links, how to make the classroom structure conform to the teaching purpose, textbook characteristics and students' reality of this class, and so on.

Second, teaching evaluation, hierarchical; Teaching ideas and so on.

Writing teaching comments can take two forms: (1) is a brief comment.

; When teaching basic skills, teachers often use various body language to strengthen them, such as a look, a knowing or encouraging smile, and the introduction of new lessons; Whether to use examples to guide comparison.

Pay attention to how teachers help students break through key and difficult points and master new knowledge fully, analytically and comprehensively.

On the other hand, there are records on the left and comments on the right.

Class records include

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That is, it pays attention to the purpose of creating situations and cultivating abilities.

(4) Pay attention to the application of auxiliary means and blackboard writing design.

(5) Pay attention to practice design and knowledge expansion.

Pay attention to whether the practice design is targeted, when to ask questions and discuss, and when to summarize. The lecturer's teaching will often have an impact on the listeners, who choose the lecturer's teaching method, optimize the teaching links, the characteristics of the teaching language, classes, teachers and project hours. The teaching process includes teaching links and contents, consolidating new knowledge, learning to discuss, debate and demonstrate. It is not necessary to record all actions, but to record the body language or inappropriate parts used by the teacher.

(7) Pay attention to the immediate thinking and evaluation of participants; How to deal with the relationship between imparting knowledge and cultivating ability; It is very difficult to create a teaching environment in which students actively participate and stimulate their enthusiasm for learning, and it is necessary to record every detail in great detail. So make records selectively.

(1) We should not only pay attention to the design of teaching links, but also pay attention to the diversity of practice forms, pay attention to solving practical problems in daily life by using what we have learned, and improve students' ability to solve practical problems.

(6) Pay attention to teachers' body language; How to train students to observe, question and compare, analyze and judge, reason, design and apply, expand and other teaching links.

Several problems that should be paid attention to in recording lectures.

The teaching design of a class is rich in content, effectively using students' existing knowledge to reproduce the vertical and horizontal relationship, learning to operate and demonstrate, intuitive demonstration and other means; How to use comparison; Taking this as the center, record the feedback after the bilateral activities between teachers and students at any time.

(3) Pay attention to teaching methods and learning methods, learn to generalize, summarize and induce, and cultivate students' learning ability, a proper gesture, and even the pace of teachers on the podium. Teachers' gestures are all part of the teaching process. Of course, there are also random feelings and evaluations generated in the process of listening to lectures and writing on the blackboard. , briefly record the teaching steps and methods. (2) It is a general evaluation.

That is, the opinions or suggestions formed after the comprehensive analysis of the brief comments are recorded in the record book. After class, they will communicate and learn from each other. To solve the problem, we should pay attention to how to turn book knowledge into students' spiritual wealth: the treatment of teaching materials and teaching ideas, scientific deployment, and give full play to the utility of every minute.

(2) Pay attention to the key points, highlight the difficulties and the methods used in teaching (mainly blackboard writing); Time arrangement of each teaching link; Student activities; Teaching effect, etc.

7. Good composition and every comment on the landscape. In my eyes, the campus is where we live and study every day, and about two-thirds of the time is spent in school every day. Therefore, the campus security risks are directly related to our lives.

There are also some unsafe factors in our school. For example, because our campus is very small, there are only two basketball courts, and it is impossible for more than 20 classes to do it at the same time, so we are divided into several groups, and all the big classes stand in a row and lead the team down. Because some classes that don't do exercises have already finished in the corridor, the already spacious corridor has become more crowded, and we can't get up or down, in case there are no students on it. Do exercises, or lead the team in an orderly way, but isn't it more dangerous to have students rush down after school at noon? Moreover, when I was in physical education class and during recess, my classmates all loved to play basketball, and they were sweating all over the playground, not to mention affecting the quality of the next class. Stumbling often happens ... at noon, some students who didn't go home bought some rice at the school gate to make do with it. There are many restaurants near the school, which are generally very cheap. As you know from newspapers, it is difficult to guarantee the food hygiene and safety in these places. These shops are basically a house with a small business area. Shops near the school have no food and expired food, and unlicensed operation is common. Employees have not gone through health examination and training, and there are great food safety hazards. Moreover, there are no tableware disinfection and cleaning facilities, no three-proof facilities, and a pool or bucket is used for washing hands, vegetables and dishes, and some even have no refrigerator.

Such an environment is really worrying, and I am afraid to think about it. China Youth Research Center once conducted a survey, and the results showed that safety accidents had become the first cause of death for children under 14.

Campus safety involves more than 20 hidden dangers in teenagers' life and study, including food poisoning, sports injury, online dating safety, traffic accidents, fire danger, drowning, drug injury, sexual assault, AIDS and so on. Therefore, it is urgent to create a healthy and civilized campus environment. In fact, some security risks are caused by ourselves and can only be solved by ourselves. For example, you can consciously walk on the right after school, and the school can also draw a sign line in the middle of the stairs to remind us at all times and reduce unnecessary accidents. Because eating out is not clean, I hope the school can run a canteen to solve the problem of eating for some students.

In fact, security risks are everywhere, so we should be good at finding and solving them. In my mind, the safe campus is a very safe and environmentally friendly beautiful campus. As soon as they enter the school gate, every student has to undergo robot inspection to see if they have any dangerous goods.

Then go ahead and you will see a playground. There is a robot on the playground. He is responsible for cleaning the playground. If a classmate litters, he will stop it in time. It also has an important task to protect the safety of his classmates. If a classmate falls, he will help them up before they fall. There is a big flower bed next to the playground. The flowers and trees inside will never dry up and wither. In the middle is a pine tree, surrounded by various flowers and plants. If a naughty child wants to touch it, the "safety robot" in the garden will stop you. If you don't listen, it will tell a good joke, and you won't be so naughty after you are happy.

Behind the lawn are neatly arranged desks in the teaching building. There is also a robot in each classroom that will remind students to pay attention to safety at any time. For example, in a manual class, students cut paper, and the robot will automatically remind them: "Pay attention to safety." Going to physical education class is not on the playground as before, but all of them are moved to the roof. The roof is like a gymnasium, surrounded by spectators and in the middle is the venue for our activities. When I go to physical education class, there is also a teaching assistant who will watch the students at any time to prevent accidents.

There is also an "electronic reading room" in the corner of the school, which is just a place to surf the Internet and open for a certain period of time. You need to make different online modes according to your grades. I believe that students who want to play will try their best to make them surf the Internet healthily. No longer addicted to internet cafes.

I believe that the safe campus in my heart is not far away ... There are nine tall buttonwood trees on one side of our school playground. They are as high as three stories and need two children to hug them.

They stood neatly like a military parade and guarded the campus like brave soldiers. In spring, it drizzles like silk. Nine phoenix trees have all pulled out new branches, sprouting tender yellow buds, like green flower bones, covered with green jade, which is very attractive.

A few days later, the buds turned into small leaves like baby's hands, and they laughed in the warm spring breeze. In summer, the sun is like fire.

The leaves of Indus are lush and dense. Dark green leaves are like a big cattail leaf fan and an adult's palm, but they are much bigger than the adult's palm.

Golden sunlight shines on the leaves, flashing green golden light, making the buttonwood full of vitality and vitality. During the break, we went to enjoy the cool under the buttonwood tree and danced with rubber sticks ... In autumn, the leaves of the buttonwood tree were dark green, and some of them turned yellow.

A gust of autumn wind blew and the leaves slowly fell. Some dance like yellow butterflies; Some are like parachutes, falling from the sky; Others are like swinging, getting high.

We pick up fallen leaves, use them as bookmarks, make specimens and paste pictures of leaves ... in winter, the cold winter whizzes by. All the leaves of the phoenix tree have fallen out, leaving only thick branches, bravely fighting grandpa Feng.

They are accumulating strength and waiting for the arrival of next spring. We are not afraid of the cold, skipping rope and throwing sandbags under the buttonwood tree ... I love the buttonwood tree on campus, and I love cultivating our healthy campus.

Campus morning I like campus morning because it is beautiful and warm; The morning of my campus, because she is beautiful and moving. I want to spread a colorful picture with the fervent love in my heart ―― the morning on campus.

It's a summer dawn. The night hasn't opened yet, the grass is sleeping soundly, and the birds haven't woken up from their dreams.

When the moon sets in the western hills, the stars of the opening ceremony are fading away, and the whole campus is filled with morning fog, like the mythical heavenly palace.

8. Scenery: Writing about the classroom: We have a spacious and bright classroom, which is full of loud reading and crisp laughter, and we study happily in it.

There are blackboards in the front and back of the classroom. The east, that is, the front, is where teachers write on the blackboard, where teachers' sweat and hard work leave us, and where our learning steps leave us. Above the blackboard is a bright five-star red flag, a bright red background and a brilliant Venus, which set off the prosperity of our Chinese nation. We are always urging us to study hard and make contributions to the country and society when we grow up. Whenever we are discouraged, we will regain our confidence by looking at the dazzling five-star red flag in front of us.

The blackboard behind is mainly printed with black newspapers. Every month, there will be a new theme, which will be completed by the enthusiastic and responsible publicity Committee of our class. When finished, the students will go and have a look to broaden their knowledge. The window in the north of the classroom occupies almost half of the wall. Every holiday, some ribbons will be hung to add a little color to our classroom. The window in the south, like the window in the north, occupies most of the place, leaving a small place to hang things in the middle. Usually, we will win various awards. Hanging on the wall will let other students and teachers see and praise our class! There is a black Jason Chung hanging on the wall. The ticking of the second hand on the clock not only provides us with accurate time, but also teaches us to cherish time and not to waste it. Every time I see this clock, it always reminds me that an inch of time is worth an inch of gold, and an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time.

There are forty-three stools and forty-three tables in the classroom, all of which are students'. There are also two platforms, one is iron and the other is wood, which are used to correct homework. Our classroom is bright and tidy. I am very happy to study here. I love my beautiful.