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Solutions to the problem of writing ideas

20 1 1 There are many questions about "writing ideas" in the Chinese examination paper of the college entrance examination. For example, the title of Anhui Volume 1 1 is "Please use concise language to sort out the context of this novel", and the title of Chongqing Volume 15 is "The article focuses on sincerity, please analyze the thinking of the article". The ninth question of Jiangsu Volume, "Talk about the conception of this poem", 15 question, "Please briefly summarize the discussion ideas of this article", a test paper has two questions to examine the writing ideas, which should be said to be full of the intention of the questioner. This paper takes the 20 1 1 Jiangsu college entrance examination as an example to analyze and guide this kind of examination questions from four aspects: examination review, examination site decryption, coping strategies and on-site training.

Look back at the test questions

Grab and dig.

Lu Xun

In China, when people encounter a person with ominous signs that will make them feel uneasy, they always use two methods: crushing him or lifting him.

If you press it down, you will use old habits and old morality. If you can't press it down, you will hold it. I think, if you hold it high and make it full, you can do yourself some harm and feel at ease.

Smart people are naturally beneficial to embellishment and praise, such as rich men, actors, general managers and so on; However, the general clown's "motivation" is probably just to avoid harm. That is, in terms of the shinto worshipped, it is generally fierce; Guanyin Bodhisattva is lovely, but it was introduced from India, not our "national quintessence". To sum up, nine times out of ten people who are praised are not good things.

Since nine times out of ten is not a good thing, the result will naturally be counterproductive to the holder's hope. Not only can it make them uneasy, but it can also make them very uneasy, because "people's hearts" are not easy to be satisfied. However, people haven't realized this yet, and they still regard it as one of the safe ways.

I remember a book telling a joke that when a magistrate of a county was born on his birthday, his subordinates raised money to cast a golden mouse as a gift because he was an annual mouse. After the magistrate accepted it, he found another opportunity to say to the public: next year happens to be his wife's life; She is one year younger than me, and she is an ox. In fact, if you don't send the golden mouse first, he will never dare to think of Taurus. As soon as I let him go, I was afraid that his aunt was also an elephant. The elephant is not in the zodiac, but the magistrate of a county must have magical methods that we can't fathom.

During the People's Republic of China (PRC) Revolution, there was a governor in S City. Although he was born in Greenwood University, he still took the overall situation into consideration and listened to public opinions. However, from the gentleman to Shu Ren, he was held together by the ancestral hug method. This visit, that compliment, sending clothes today and wing mats tomorrow made him get carried away and gradually became an old bureaucrat, scraping the ground.

The strangest thing is that the rivers in northern provinces are so much higher than the roofs. At first, it was natural to prevent it from collapsing, so we put a little soil on it; As we all know, the higher the paddle, the greater the disaster once it is broken. So I "robbed the embankment".

"berm",

"beware of breaking the dike", there are many colors, and everyone suffers. If I see the river flooding, I will dig the bottom of the river instead of adding dikes.

It is not only golden mice but also dead mice that covet Taurus. Then, even birthdays are unnecessary in my life. It's already a great pleasure to just save a message of congratulations.

The root of China people's troubles lies in holding, and the way of "seeking more happiness for themselves" lies in digging. In fact, the amount of labor is similar, but from the perspective of people with too much inertia, they think it is still relatively labor-saving. ?

December 10, 1925. ?

(from the complete works of Lu Xun? Gai Hua Ji,) has been deleted. ?

1. Please briefly summarize the idea of this article. (4 points)

Analysis can be summarized from the perspective of reasoning logic such as "asking questions-analyzing problems-solving problems".

Ask questions:

What is it (China people always do "pressure" and "praise")-Analyze the problem: Why (the cause and effect of "praise")-Solve the problem: How to do it (put forward the viewpoint and specific method of "excavation").

This paper first draws the following conclusions from the consistent practice of Chinese people, pointing out that people have the habit of "persistence", pointing out the essence and consequences of "persistence", and citing three examples to prove it, then putting forward the viewpoint and specific methods of "excavation", and finally returning to critical reality to collect the full text.

Test point decryption

This belongs to the examination of the ability of "analyzing the structure of the article and grasping the thinking of the article" put forward in the examination syllabus. The structure of the article is the concrete embodiment of the idea of the article. The focus is on the ability to grasp the relationship between paragraphs and the internal structure of paragraphs. The ability level belongs to level C.

Countermeasures should be made.

What are the advantages of writing ideas, that is, what to write first, then what to write, and finally what to write?

Different styles have their own characteristics and different ways of thinking and writing:

The structure of modern poetry is nothing more than "starting", "inheriting", "turning" and "combining". "Qi" is the first sentence or couplet of a poem, which often has the functions of commanding the whole poem, laying the emotional tone, rendering the atmosphere and creating a certain atmosphere. "Cheng" is the continuation and deepening of "Qi". The meaning between the two sentences can confirm each other, and it also plays a connecting role in structure. "Zhuan" is a turning sentence, which shows that the turning transformation of poetry is often reflected in the ideological transformation from things to people, from scenery to emotion, and from things to reason. "He" is the conclusion and the condensation point of the poet's thoughts and feelings. It is often the most important place for us to understand the poet's feelings and interpret the theme of ancient poetry.

② Prose is characterized by "loose form and strong spirit". "Form" is the event of writing an article, and "God" is the thoughts and feelings of the article. In most cases, you can learn from prose.

Emotional change ("God")

Summarize his writing ideas, especially lyric prose. Sometimes we can summarize the "writing ideas" from the perspective of truth ("spirit") contained in prose, among which there are many philosophical essays.

Sometimes you can learn from

Scattered events ("shapes")

Summarize his writing thoughts from the perspective of narrative prose. Sometimes, it can be summarized from the perspective of time and space changes, such as travel prose.

In most cases, novels can be summarized from the plot angle of "beginning-development-climax-ending". Sometimes, we can summarize his "writing ideas" from the narrative order of flashback, chronological narrative, insertion and supplementary narrative.

④ The type of discourse is characterized by strict reasoning logic. We can summarize his writing ideas from the perspective of three basic structures: "parallelism", "total score" and "progression" We can summarize his writing ideas from the perspective of reasoning logic such as "asking questions-analyzing problems-solving problems".

Field training

Please briefly explain the following writing ideas.

Cultivate a tolerant culture in China.

Liu

165438+1October16 is the International Day for Tolerance. I'm very excited about it. Today, China,

We should build a tolerant culture with China characteristics and China style.

The reason why this culture of tolerance is emphasized is that in the process of Stewart's economic development, the social gap is getting bigger and bigger, the savings of social contradictions are getting sharper and deeper, and we are more and more unwilling to tolerate, and we are more and more ignorant of tolerance.

The most typical is to face all kinds of negative news, group events and so on. Although some people can be objective, rational and tolerant, others are vicious, gloating and complaining, which in turn breeds negative factors of narrowness, selfishness and despair. Or suffered a heavy blow from unemployment, laid-off, entrepreneurial failure and life, they are often more willing to hold grudges, which in turn gives birth to revenge.

Although all "holding a grudge" has a grand reason for its existence, in the final analysis, there is something wrong with people's "heart" and our way of thinking in the process of self-development. We are more willing to consider ourselves and forget the needs of the public; Willing to amplify self-pain, but not realizing that pain is also a positive driving force; I prefer to hide my unhappiness in my heart, rather than let it become handwriting on the beach and be washed away by the waves. We use unintentional "psychological cocoon" to wrap up the shadow and failure, which is difficult to surpass, unable to extricate ourselves and very painful.

Therefore, the establishment of "International Tolerance Day" is undoubtedly a positive spiritual and emotional relief. Its purpose is to let more people get rid of unresolved grievances, enmity and enmity through this festival. It tells us that as long as we know how to be tolerant, learn to be tolerant, or consider problems from the standpoint of others, or treat all unhappiness as well-intentioned "frustration education", or have more broad-minded gentleman thinking, our mood will change dramatically, and our depression and narrowness will be gradually improved and sublimated.

The preamble of the Charter of the United Nations says, "We should practice tolerance and live in harmony as good neighbors." We should explore the "tolerance system" and "tolerance principle" with China characteristics, absorb the essence of traditional culture, spread profound traditional virtues, and send happiness, happiness and warmth to more people with tolerant culture and mellow sunshine. ?

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Reference answer

This paper is clear in thinking. At first, I hope to build a tolerant culture with Chinese style, point out the reasons for emphasizing the tolerant culture, then write about the social manifestations and psychological analysis of intolerance, and then discuss the significance of setting up the "International Tolerance Day". Finally, I call for cultivating a Chinese-style tolerant culture, and pay attention to the beginning and theme. ?

(Author: Li Fangshun, Suqian Maling Middle School)