How I feel when it's my turn to write a composition

1. I heard that I was going to write a composition.

I used to feel that writing a composition was a headache and I didn't know how to write it. I'm like squeezing toothpaste. Every time I write a sentence, I use a calculator to calculate it, trying to make up the number of words stipulated by the teacher bit by bit. Fortunately, there were not many words in the composition, only 100- 150 words. My mother helped me write a better composition, and I gradually wanted to rely on my mother as soon as I wrote it. Later, my mother said, "son, you have to practice your own handwriting." At home, mom can tutor you. Can you take my mother to the examination room when you enter the university? " It doesn't matter whether you write well at first, as long as you write with your own brain, it is the best! "But I racked my brains and my composition was still a mess. Once the exam was off topic and only got 5 points. Isn't this enough to "reflect" my writing level at that time?

After the fourth grade, I practiced writing and diary more, and my writing level improved a little. I often get stars from teachers, so I'm not afraid to write my composition now. In retrospect, I feel ashamed. The composition was so interesting that I thought it was a terrible thing at that time! I mostly write some beautiful stories in my composition, and a diary is to write memorable things that happened in a day, whether it is joy, anger, sadness or joy. I prefer writing a composition, which is really like climbing a mountain. I was exhausted in the process of climbing, but after climbing to the top, I felt a sense of victory.

I think writing depends not on your grades, but on whether you are interested. Read more extracurricular books and learn to use good words and sentences to improve your composition. Some people can't remember, so they can read the book several times and remember it naturally.

Students, I think writing a composition should first get rid of fear and dependence. Write more, practice more and read more, and you will surely write well.

2. How do you feel about writing after reading the composition? See what you feel, composition. Write down your feelings after reading it.

Eleventh, sentiment (attached 1)

In the face of complicated life, we often have many feelings: when we see a red sun rising in Ran Ran, we may feel the vitality and vitality of people; When we see leaves falling from trees, we may realize that life is short, so we should cherish time and make great efforts. ...

In the process of participating in social communication, what we see, the scenery we see, the people we think of, and the things we experience … will always cause changes in our inner thoughts and emotions and pluck the strings of our emotions, so we feel something and understand something. What kind of feelings and understanding can cause others to sing after turning into words? Only profound uniqueness can win.

First, feel because of the scenery.

"All the scenes are sentimental." In writing, we can integrate our subjective feelings and ideological will into the scenery, so that the scenery is affectionate and the vegetation is meaningful. We cherish people when we look at flowers, homesick for the moon, spacious when we look at the sea, elegant when we look at the clouds, and everything depends on the scenery.

Sometimes, landscape also shows a natural philosophy. At this time, to write a sense, it is necessary to associate and imagine the scene and give the specific scene an abstract philosophy. When we see the dawn, we feel its power to break through the darkness, and when we see the sunrise, we also feel its difficulty in nurturing hope.

Second, because of things.

Things in literary works are either tied to a story, or entrusted with a feeling, or imply a truth. When recalling things, you can borrow things to express your feelings, you can also express your feelings with things, and you can also sing things clearly. For example, an eraser records a friendship, a greeting carries a family affection, and a bouquet of roses interprets a kind of love.

Feeling because of things is a conceptual writing mode of "saying this and meaning that" The purpose of the author's description of things is not to express this thing, but to elicit a feeling and a philosophy. So, before writing something, give it meaning; When writing, gain motivation for feeling; After writing, it feels natural. For example, writing lotus flowers is actually to praise nobility; Writing bamboo is actually to celebrate modesty; Writing scalpers is actually to show diligence; Writing about bees is actually for eulogizing dedication.

Third, feelings about people.

That is, looking for feelings from people's appearance, language, behavior and personality. You can tell your feelings while describing, and polish your feelings and feelings in the description. You can also express your feelings after the narration. Finish writing, write down your feelings in detail, and be reasonable. We can feel the greatness of our father's deep maternal love because our parents have no worries about food and clothing. We can feel something because of the heroic sons and daughters of the motherland and realize the horror of the descendants of heroic martyrs.

Fourth, feeling because of things.

After taking notes, it is an important means to express feelings on the basis of facts or to elaborate feelings from facts, which makes the composition have a philosophical beauty. Try to climb the mountain, you can feel the taste of conquering difficulties; When you experience fishing, you can feel the realm of tranquility and indifference. To write feelings from events, we should analyze and mine events from the outside to the inside, extract a truth from events, and point it out in incisive language.

Five, because of the text and feeling

After reading an article or a book, write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The written article is called "feeling after reading". In addition to "feelings after reading", you can also write "feelings after watching a movie, TV series or an exhibition". When writing this kind of sentiment articles, we should carefully choose some meaningful and targeted sentiments for real life, so as to avoid the disadvantages of generalities, scattered articles and aimlessness.

Attachment 1, the sentiment is intriguing.

A person who lives in family, school and society can't always be smooth sailing. There are smiles and tears; There are joys and sorrows. As the saying goes, "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" Write all the ups and downs in our life into the composition, and the plot will naturally have waves.

First of all, this feeling should be credible-real.

Only true feelings can make people sing, and once there are traces of affectation, there will be no touching effect. True feelings can move people's hearts. Write articles for feelings, not for feelings.

Second, perception should have the nature of slope.

Perception is not the first sight of people or things, but a process, which must be relevant, transitional, ready-made and paved, otherwise it will make people feel abrupt, difficult to understand and even more unacceptable.

Third, perception should be profound.

First of all, we should analyze the described materials, find out the points that can be expanded, then refine the materials, grasp the essential characteristics of things, and expand imagination and association, so as to explore the meaning of things themselves.

Fourth, the feelings should be concentrated-touching.

The article is not heartless. A good article is often permeated with the author's sincere and strong feelings. Strong feelings will leave a deep imprint on readers' hearts, while shallow feelings will be like passing clouds, leaving no trace.

It feels everywhere! Only through feeling can we discover the wonder of the world and the wonderful life! Only by feeling can we find out how charming the world is and how beautiful life is.

3. The feeling after writing the composition "Time" needs an inch of time urgently, but an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time.

Yesterday passed away silently with memories, today came quietly with hope, and tomorrow is shining and waiting for people. Some people are immersed in memories and nostalgic for yesterday; Some people are addicted to dreams, and they are looking forward to tomorrow. Both people forget that what should be cherished most is the preciousness of today.

Today, is it not a short day? Starting from tomorrow, I will study hard. Today, isn't it 24 hours? I will start working hard tomorrow. Isn't it 1/365 today? I will fight for the cause of * * * from tomorrow (some people think so and do so). Friend, why do you put what you want to do until tomorrow, and everything starts from tomorrow? The sun and the moon are in a hurry, and tomorrow, tomorrow becomes today again. After every today, there is endless tomorrow. Then, when will your determination and your ideal become action and reality?

Shakespeare said, "He who abandons time will be abandoned by time.". I said, "If you abandon today's people, you will abandon him today. And those who are abandoned today will have no tomorrow. "

"Tomorrow after tomorrow, how many tomorrows; I have to wait until tomorrow, and everything is in vain. " A few short poems are the crystallization of our ancestors' tortuous and difficult life experiences! The ancients felt this, so there were diligent stories of "hanging the beam and stabbing the stocks", "reflecting snow in the bag" and "stealing the wall lightly" Now that conditions are superior, shouldn't we cherish today and seize every minute?

Grasping today means grasping today's knowledge; Grasping today means grasping the possibility of invention and creation. Smart, diligent and ambitious people deeply understand that time is life, even more precious than life. They will never waste today's precious time for tomorrow. Edison, the great inventor, has always cherished his time and used his spare time selling newspapers in the car to do experiments. He drank a glass of cold water when he was thirsty. If you are hungry, chew a piece of bread; Sleepy, take a nap at my desk. Newton, Madame Curie, Einstein ... all ambitious and accomplished people are like this. They will never dwell on yesterday, let alone wait and see tomorrow. They will start from today forever.

On the contrary, for some people, time is like a calendar. Tear this up, and there's another one. After tearing this one, there is still the next one, but I don't know how to leave my hard work and sweat on the snow-white calendar. They spend their time doing nothing, observing and waiting from the beginning to the end of their lives. If a person's life is spent like this, then the lost years are like a sad tragedy. Memories left in personal life history will also be mixed with tears of regret, pain and sadness. ...

The wasted time is damaging the light of life; Strive to open up the road of thought in time. Friends, don't dwell on yesterday, don't wait and see tomorrow, let's start today! Today is the starting point of struggle!

Brother, believe me, as long as the beginning and end are well written, it must be an excellent composition with fluent intermediate language.

4. The composition "My Feeling" is 500 words, and I deeply feel the greatest love.

It is said that maternal love is the greatest love in the world, and I am deeply touched.

The corridor from the elevator to my door is very long, and I walk slowly with a heavy bag on my back. There was a light knock at the door, but no one answered, so I took out the key to the house.

When I got home, I felt I was going to collapse. I think of the scene when my mother opened the door to help me carry my schoolbag and help me enter the house on weekdays, only to find a person's loneliness. Mom was not at home, so she left a note on the refrigerator explaining her whereabouts and eating and other trivial matters. She even reminded me not to forget to eat apples. Such a note has been kept in a thick stack in my drawer, and it always begins with: "Wenwen, I'm really sorry, another note greets you …" In my mother's eyes, I am a child who will never grow up.

Unscrew the faucet and pick up the "clean &; Clear ",wash away the dust on your face for a day. My mother gave it to me. She said that she should pay attention to cleaning her skin during adolescence, and she took out this bottle of foam facial cleanser like a magic trick. Although I didn't have acne on my face at that time, I still insist on using it now. I am very moved by my mother's carefulness.

The effect of the potion refreshed me at once. I sat down at the table and began to eat dinner. The dinner is not heavy, but it is well prepared and reasonably matched. Maybe my mother is afraid of my malnutrition or something. Grandma said that when I was a child, my mother wrapped cabbage in white gauze and squeezed juice for me to drink. She also said that it was an excellent thing. But I always don't cooperate. Later, my mother took a bite and threw up, saying that she would try to improve the taste. Mom, you did your best for my growth!

Sitting alone on the sofa after dinner, I miss sitting and chatting with my mother. It has been a long time since then, because we are all busy. Now they just ask symbolically. How can my mother be interested in the new things I said? After all, we are two generations.

It's already 10: 30, and the senior high school entrance examination will be held tomorrow. I'm going to bed. Turn off the light. I heard my mother come back in the dark, and her footsteps were light, perhaps for fear of waking me up. She came into my room, kissed me gently on the forehead while I was "sleeping", then turned with a smile and closed the door. Although I can't see it, I believe it must be like this.

Tomorrow is the exam. I will work hard, for my mother's love and for myself. I will always love my mother, just as my mother always loves me.

So in the examination room, I wrote this greatest love!

My feelings about starting school.

I am happy, happy, happy, expecting and curious. In short, my tastes are varied!

I am here to register today. I will visit my new school by the way. I have many unknown tastes. I think I will be as happy as a little dolphin! Walking on campus, I smiled inexplicably, so happy and so sunny. Although six years of primary school life makes me unforgettable, I yearn for middle school life more. In that primary school, I found happiness, not friends. So what did I find in this key middle school? Is it happiness? Are you friends? Or the pressure of study? I plunged into this middle school with curiosity and expectation.

Walking into the campus, I feel mature even breathing. Looking at the teaching building, I can't help but imagine how I will study in this building in the future. God, I can't wait. I have never been in such a hurry. Seeing my classmates walking around, I thought, will I be in the same class as my old classmates? Forget it. Forget it. You'll know what you need to know.

This school is really beautiful and big. I think I must be smiling, otherwise how can I feel happy? I think the students must feel the same way! I can even imagine what my tomorrow will be like. The wind here seems to be joking with me. I finally realized that before the exam, my teachers and parents wanted me to be admitted to a key middle school, but I was different from them. They are depressed, which will bring me pressure. I am very happy and curious, which will surprise me. I like this school. It not only brought me honor, but also made me feel inexplicably relaxed. I like this inexplicably.

I am happy, happy, happy, expecting and curious. In short, my tastes are varied!

The composition king who can't write a composition thinks that I can read an article when I am in primary school, but when I hear that I want to write a composition, my mind will be blank, my hands will hold the pen tightly, and my palms will sweat. After a long time, the pen will be pinched by me. I'm still eating pumpkin like a mouse, and I don't know where to start. It's just that when it's time to hand in my composition, I either write a composition like others, copy it from a book or write it casually. The teacher's comment on me is either "a group of people and children know the story of Xi Bao Lou" or "nonsense". Hey! I am so depressed.

Teachers often say: "Interest is the best teacher." However, I didn't listen at all. I just blame myself and make excuses. Every time I have a composition class, I am almost in a daze and have no interest in composition. The teacher always criticizes me when she sees it. When it's my turn to talk about my writing experience, I always stand in my seat and can't speak. How I hope teachers and classmates can understand my difficulties. I can't write a composition at all, let alone make an impromptu speech in class.

I can't turn my attention to my composition. Other students can always pass the exam easily and smoothly in writing, but I can't! As soon as the teacher criticized me, I couldn't wait to find a crack in the ground. But what if I go in and can't come back? As the saying goes, people strive for a sigh of relief, and the Buddha strives for a column of incense. I also want to save face, and I don't want to be criticized by the teacher every time. I think I can write some simple compositions, but once I have written them, I don't want to write any more. And I can't write a difficult composition at all. I can't do difficult things, and I don't want to do easy things. That's who I am.

After the teacher knew it, he took the time to tell me about it, and asked me to read more extracurricular books after I got home and slowly improve my writing level. At first, I read many composition books and copied good words and sentences. But when it comes to writing, I don't know how to use those good words and sentences. Even if I can barely make up gorgeous words, it's still nonsense. Teachers and classmates often call me "copying women" behind my back, which makes me very depressed!

The method taught by the teacher is useless, even if I choose a laundry list of good words and sentences. Now, I only rely on my own brain to improve my composition. God, how can I figure something out? Some people say that writing a composition needs something real. My experiences are all true, so they should be regarded as materials, but when it comes to moving materials into my composition, I am confused again.

6. How to write the composition "Feelings of Entering Junior High School" Although I am reluctant to bid farewell to the winter vacation and prepare to end my free life, I am still full of expectations for the new semester, because I have to change my deskmate, seat and textbook in the new semester ... In short, everything is new except my classmates and classrooms. In the new semester, there is a new English teacher named Miss. Last semester's maternity leave. This semester, I finally met an English teacher, and her classmates all said that she had a good temper. The teacher also told us that she studied child psychology, and her earnest words cared for us like her mother. Although my new deskmate made friends with me, she was sometimes "rude" to me. Behind me is a very talkative boy. He often talks with my deskmate in class, and the Chinese class is strictly controlled, so they dare not say anything casually. But when it comes to math class, I have a headache. The math teacher always leaves us questions to do in class. After finishing, they lined up in front of the podium to wait for the math teacher's review. Students who do the right thing will get a red label, so they can get extra points in the safflower book, and they will receive the safflower book every week to evaluate their grades. Therefore, when students line up, it is time for them to "make trouble", and the math teacher ignores the students who are not noisy and noisy under the stage. The math teacher is humorous, just like a naive child. I know that we are busy doing our homework in the afternoon and didn't take a nap, so when it's the math teacher's turn to attend class in the afternoon, we will always hear our class laughing, because the math teacher is telling jokes to refresh us! Chinese teachers always take up big classes, and then I hear a sound of reading. It turns out that we are reciting and preparing for dictation. Knowing that the sixth grade had little free time, the Chinese teacher found a paper lesson and made up the dictation on Tuesday. Those who write well in dictation can go directly to activities, followed by physical education class (physical education class is the only miscellaneous course that has not been banned), and students like Tuesdays very much.

7. Writing a composition, I feel () I deeply feel the pleasure of reading (composition).

When I was a child, my mother taught me to recite ancient poems, such as Jiao Jiao Hehan Girl, Chang 'an Bridge Dust, and so on. Every time I recite a song, I get a timely return from my mother: Zhang Xinwei's smiling face and a affectionate kiss. From then on, I felt the pleasure of reading and vowed to read a lot of books to enrich myself when I grew up.

After growing up, picture books and comic books have been replaced by classical and western literature. Reading the works of famous artists at home and abroad, I will have a feeling of * * * like a silkworm eating mulberry leaves, and at the same time, there will be a sound wrapped around my ears: extremely large and finely cut, very far and very close, like a spring flowing through a valley, like a horse galloping on the grassland. I know, this is the voice of thoughts and works. Some people say it well: reading a good book is talking to many noble people. Every time I have a * * * sound with my work, I deeply appreciate this kind of fun.

I travel in the sea of books, far and wide, in all directions, octupole makes my heart come and go freely. Although I have never been to Qilian in the north, I feel that Qilian Snow Mountain is just around the corner. Although he is not an adult, he also knows the lingering feelings of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. Xu Zhimo and I "bid farewell to the clouds in the Western Heaven", Sanmao-get up and watch the starry sky in the desert, enjoy the figure of the girl picking shells on the beach with Xi Murong, and go to the rain lane with Dai Wangshu to find a girl who is as sad as lilacs ... Every time I hang out with ancient and modern celebrities, I deeply feel the pleasure of reading.

Poems and books written by ancient and modern masters have been hammered and revised repeatedly, but there are also times when inspiration is insufficient. One of Du Fu's poems describes Li Bai in this way: "The son of heaven called instead of getting on the boat and claimed to be Brewmaster." After reading this, I think, if the word "minister" is replaced by "grandfather", wouldn't it better show Li Bai's wild and unruly personality when he was as drunk as a fiddler? Thought of here, it seems that Du Fu will also come to worship himself as a teacher of one word. Every time I feel neck and neck with the author, I deeply feel the pleasure of reading.

Reading can be wise, Xiu De, nourishing and educating people ... Reading well is the quality that teenagers should have in today's society. I am glad that I have such a good habit, and I am glad that I can deeply feel the fun. What regrets do I have in my life?

8. Feel the composition of senior one. My senior year life >

I bid farewell to my carefree childhood and spent my innocent primary school time. I stepped into the threshold of middle school campus and started my colorful first-year life. On the first day of junior high school, I was very excited because I saw the fruits of my six years' labor. I remember how eager I was to enter junior high school as soon as possible when I was in primary school. Today I finally realized my dream.

When I entered a new class, I saw new classmates. Their laughter reminds me of my lovely primary school classmates. Seeing every new teacher, every word they wrote on the blackboard reminds me of my kind first teacher. Seeing this spacious classroom reminds me of the narrow primary school classroom. My first day of life was sour.

While I was moping in my seat, my classmates were asking questions. When I needed help, they all lent me a helping hand, because I didn't live in primary school and I was not familiar with it. Every time I run out of water, they help me carry it without thinking. I suddenly felt that the first day of life was "sweet".

I failed in the final exam. See the "cross" symbol that everyone hates and hear the teacher's criticism. When I got home, my parents were anxious to ask my grades. I have no choice but to bite the bullet and tell my parents my grades. At this time, I think my first year of life is very "spicy".

The final exam is coming, homework; The number of test papers is increasing gradually, and the homework alone makes me overwhelmed. Here comes the blank paper again, written at school and at home. Write in class and after class; I write during the day and at night ... when I have no leisure all day, that's when I feel the first year of life is "bitter"

My freshman life is really interesting, mixed with "ups and downs". These are just some episodes in my freshman life. This group has brought me great happiness and made my life more full and moving. .....

A thousand words, only one sentence: I love my first love!

9. Ask for an excellent composition and attach some ideas. Today, I read Aulaire's In Berlin with a heavy heart. After reading it, I couldn't calm down for a long time.

In Berlin, a wartime reserve veteran and his weak wife were on the train, and her wife kept counting loudly: "one, two, three." People think he is crazy. Later, the veteran explained, "We just lost three sons. They died in the war. Now it's my turn to go to the front. "

Through this short film, I felt the cruelty of the war and the old woman's mental journey from sadness to despair to madness. The war destroyed one family after another.

In such a peaceful era, we should be happy for a happy life. We should study hard in this era and repay those who have made great contributions to a better life. We should advocate peace, oppose war, fill the blue sky with joyful laughter, and fill the earth with new hope. Let's work together to make our home harmonious and beautiful.