On how to write a composition

The college entrance examination is approaching, and time is pressing. How to prepare composition effectively has become a problem that puzzles teachers and students. Besides doing some fragment training, writing the whole article as required is also a good way to write a good topic analysis.

The examination analysis mentioned here includes examination and conception. Accurate examination of questions is a key step in writing a good composition. As the saying goes, "One careless move will lose the game." The purpose of the examination is to understand the topic "what to give, what to want" and to clarify the scope and framework of writing. Intention refers to defining "how to write" on the basis of examining questions, which embodies the thoughts, feelings and values of candidates, which is of course the soul of the article. Examination analysis is to ask candidates to write their own examination, understanding, generalization, thinking, analysis and grasp of composition requirements in a very short time, that is to say, to write their own thinking process. When writing a composition, these analyses will play an important role in outlining and restricting. So how to write a good composition analysis? I tried the six-step method of "reading-understanding-listing-choosing-mentioning-preparing".

The first is reading and understanding the material. Distinguish the types of materials, understand the connotation of materials, clarify the hierarchical structure of materials, and understand how many layers of meaning materials have. Read the topic requirements and find out what the restrictions are.

The second step is enlightenment, recognizing the center of matter. Combine the previous reading, find out the core information and secondary information, and try to figure out the main intention of the questioner.

The third is to list possible angles. There is a saying in the composition requirements of the college entrance examination that "choose an angle to conceive the composition", which obviously means that the materials are of course more than just providing an angle.

The fourth is to choose one of the angles. Of course, I feel that I have the most thorough understanding, the most accurate analysis, the richest information at hand and the most confident perspective.

The fifth is the training center. Combined with the content of the material, from the point of view of your own choice, summarize the center to be expressed in concise and accurate language.

The sixth is to prepare relevant materials. Around the extracted center, actively search for available life-awakening materials-including life experience and reading experience-which can be personal experiences or sentiments, famous poems or celebrity cases, provided that they are closely related to the center.

Using the above methods, we made a careful analysis of the composition questions in the mock exam of senior three in five cities of Henan Province in March 2009.

2 1. Read the following text and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)

Before the New Year, many students in Grade 2009 of Nanjing Foreign Languages School have received the admission notices from famous foreign schools, and many students have received full or half scholarships. (2) Among them, Liu Tian, a senior three (4) class, received the admission notices from Grinnell College in the United States, Insa University in France and Pacific University in Japan. ③ All-round development is the greatest feature of Liu Tianxiang. ④ Erhu Grade 10 certificate, 1500m long-distance running won the gold medal in the school sports meeting for four consecutive years, participated in provincial competitions on behalf of the school table tennis team for many times, was the host of the school art festival, was the best debater in the debate, and acted as an actor in the drama "Jing Ke Stabbed the King of Qin" ... ⑤ Perhaps what impressed the admissions officer more was that in a chemical experiment mentioned in the application materials, he accidentally dropped concentrated sulfuric acid on his pants.

Ask to choose an angle to conceive the composition, and independently determine the conception, style and title; Don't deviate from the content of the material, don't copy it or copy it.

The first step is to read the hierarchy. The material * * * has five sentences. The first sentence introduces the background information, and the second sentence says the result of the matter. The third sentence "All-round development is the greatest feature of Liu Tianxiang" is a core message of this material; The fourth sentence is a concrete explanation of the third sentence and belongs to subsidiary information. The fifth sentence is another core message of the materials-Liu Tianxiang's persistence in the face of difficulties and his spirit of exploring science touched the admissions officer.

The second step is enlightenment, enlightenment center. The two most direct core messages of the material are: Liu Tianxiang is outstanding in all aspects and has developed in an all-round way; Liu Tianxiang has a persistent spirit of exploration. In addition, this material has an important indirect message: all the students admitted to Liu Tianxiang are famous foreign universities. From this perspective, we can talk about the standards followed by foreign universities in selecting talents.

The third step is to list and list the angles. The material provides the following angles. From Liu Tianxiang's point of view: (1) To achieve something, you need tenacious will and persistent spirit; (2) People need a little persistent spirit of inquiry. From the perspective of famous foreign universities: (3) All-round development is the direction of talent development; (4) Criteria for selecting talents (breaking the criteria for selecting and employing people based on score theory)

Step 4, select and select the angle. For example, from the perspective of choosing famous foreign universities to compete for admission to Liu Tianxiang. The fifth step is to mention and refine the center. What kind of talents do universities need?

Step six, prepare, prepare materials. This paper analyzes the reasons why Liu Tianxiang was admitted to famous foreign universities, and draws the conclusion that universities need talents with all-round development, and universities need talents with exploration spirit more. At the same time, universities select talents to serve the society, and the talents needed by universities are the talents needed by society. In today's fierce social competition, emphasizing a person's comprehensive quality requires talents with all-round development and inquiry spirit. For example:

(1) Einstein, known as "Newton of the 20th century", is famous for discovering the formula of mass and energy, but his achievements are far more than that. Einstein played the violin so well that he even admitted that a lot of inspiration came from playing the violin.

Lev tolstoy, a famous Russian writer. Someone once joked with Tuo Weng, "What can you do besides writing novels?" Tuo Weng didn't say a word and stayed up all night when he got home. The next day, he gave the man a pair of cowhide boots made by himself and proudly asked for two rubles. As the owner of a large manor, as we all know, Tuo Weng can afford and do every farm work.

(3) Mr. Jin Yong has made no achievements in poetry and Weiqi, so will martial arts novels be so wonderful?

(4) kelly knox, born in London, England, was born with a disability and lost a forearm. She has developed an independent personality since she was a child, and everything is no different from normal people. Her persistence touched everyone. Later, she took part in the residual model contest held by BBC. She survived all the way and lived up to expectations, and finally won the title of "Britain's first residual model".

When doing composition training at ordinary times, using six-step examination analysis method can accurately grasp the composition requirements and material gist; During the exam, you can finish the examination before writing in a short time, saving time for later writing. Of course, in the process of application, we should be flexible and avoid being rigid, and everything should be practical.