Component redundancy in the topic of sick sentences

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying a sentence with the language of the sick sentence, so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. What are the redundant components of ill sentences? The following is the redundancy of the topic of ill sentences I have sorted out. Welcome to enjoy.

The composition of ill sentences is redundant 1 1. There are many students in our school. (? Hey? Contains a lot of meanings, and? A lot? Repeat)

2. Be laughed at generously. (? Laugh generously? Meaning? A joke that a generous family refers to as a knowledgeable person? , already contains the passive meaning, plus the front? By someone? This is redundant. )

I suddenly realized. (? Suddenly? Really? Suddenly? Meaning, prefix? Suddenly? Naturally, it is redundant. )

It is imperative now. (? Top priority? Already included? Now? No prefix required? Now? . )

5, including all the gold medals. (? Including? Namely. Is it all covered? You don't have to add it later? All of them? . )

6. There are fruits everywhere: pears, apples and persimmons? (? All over the mountains? With what? Everywhere? Repeat, it is best to delete? Everywhere? Because? All over the mountains? More emphasis)

7. Only by keeping close contact with the society and the masses can we put forward insightful opinions on national security and people's worries. (? Insight? With what? Opinion? Semantic repetition. )

8. The program of this party is very exciting. When I saw the sketch performed by Huang Hong, my always serious father couldn't help laughing. (? Can't help laughing? what's up Can't help laughing? The meaning of. It has been included. Laugh? What do you mean, in the box? Can't help laughing? And then added another one? Laugh? Isn't it a house with overlapping bedsteads? )

In the mid-1980s, he came to Shenzhen alone to break the world. One person, one person? Are you alone? It's already included. )

10. Originally, we agreed to see him off, but I couldn't see him off because of something temporary. I have always been bitter about my failure, and I still can't forget it. I can't let go of my worries. Still can't forget it? It's already included. )

1 1. So, don't be afraid on the issue of Taiwan Province Province. As long as the authorities make up their minds to liberate Taiwan Province Province, all China people on earth will agree. (? Small? With what? A small place? Repeat, delete? Small? )

12, they packed together and went their separate ways. (Delete "respective")

13, he has unspeakable difficulties (? Hard to say? Medium? Hide? It means hardship. Difficult? With what? Hide? Repeat)

14, the toy store is full of all kinds of toys, such as ships, planes, tanks and so on. (? All kinds? Refers to all kinds of many, in sentences? All kinds? Repeat)

15, for us ordinary people, life can also shine. (? People? Originally refers to all living things in the world, and later refers to ordinary people. Ordinary ordinary? Repeat with it)

The composition of ill sentences is redundant 2 1. At the foot of the mountain is a ditch, full of green of bamboo willow, poplar and phoenix tree, unfathomable.

You can't. Unreasonable, unpredictable or unmeasurable. Add in front? Can't? , and it became? Unpredictable? The meaning of, obviously repeated.

2. Strengthening the management of Internet cafes is the general trend. What should be done at present? Strengthen? .

The most important thing: the most urgent and urgent thing among all the tasks that should be completed at present. Visible,? Top priority? Already included? At present? Meaning, didn't you need to add it before? At present? Two words.

3. 1945 Ling became a diplomat in Yan 'an. As the fifth great-grandson of Lin Zexu, he was very excited when he talked about the return of Hong Kong.

Great-great-grandson: It's my fifth-generation grandson. If so? Great-grandson? Qianjia? Fifth generation? , not only redundant, but also easy to cause misunderstanding.

4. Keys: Metaphor is an important key to doing a good job.

Key: metaphor is the most critical part of things; The decisive factor of the situation. Since? Keys? Already included? The most important thing? Of course you don't have to use it anymore? Most? Come and repeat.

The local reporter, whom we call the good man Zheng Qiangping, was waiting at the station at four or five o'clock in the morning.

Please: can it be used in? Ten, a hundred, a thousand? After the equal sign or quantifier, it means divisor. Coming? The word should be preceded by an exact number, and? Four or five o'clock? It's already estimated, so it's not suitable? Coming? Use words together.

6. At this point, all the cash of 654.38+10,000 yuan was returned to Zhao.

Give me back the original intact. So what? Safe return to Zhao? Former? All of them? This word is really a wart.

7. The Western Translation Ark (Xi 'an Translation Institute) was established 15 years ago, and it is hoped that 4,500 students will devote themselves to further study and become successful.

Student: Many students. So what? Student? This is an estimate, plus? 4,500? Neither fish nor fowl can be added? Numerous? Waiting for orders.

8. From the end of the 20th century to the civilized world, will all kinds of evil deeds that don't treat people as human beings, especially women, disappear completely in our land?

Extinction: Cut off the trace and never appear. Are you online? Extinct? Used before? Completely? Adverbial modification is really unnecessary.

9. Only because of the warning of signal flares can we truly feel that class struggle is around us.

However, it is precisely because conjunctions expressing causality are often associated with? So what? 、? So what? Use together. Visible,? Only? In the back Because? what's up Snake feet? .

10. At the same time, I think to myself that by associating with Ma chinour, his unhealthy psychological behavior will be corrected. Steal: modesty, used to refer to one's own opinion. So what? Steal? Already included? Me? Not letting go? Me? With what? Steal? Use in parallel.

1 1. So Xia Bei's article also gives people a refreshing and brand-new feeling.

Brand new: brand new. So what? Is it new? With your back? Brand new? Semantic repetition. The latter should be deleted.

12. Now it can be said that part of my original intention has been achieved, but it is not perfect.

Original intention: the original wish. Then why use it again? Primitive to the limit? Original intention? And then what?

13. In addition, in my humble opinion, the formation of many poems in the collection is also deeply influenced by the tradition of classical poetry.

Fool: it can be used as a self-proclaimed courtesy, such as? Stupid brother, stupid idea? Wait, so? Humble opinion? Former? Mine? redundant

14. The urgent task now (? Top priority? Contain? Now? Meaning)

15. Involve, spread to (? And then what? With what? Arrive? Synonym. Delete? Arrive? )

16, warlords have been fighting for many years, and hardworking people are struggling. (? Volkswagen? With what? People? Repeat)

17、? God is here? 、? Epiphany? Not taken for granted, but taken for granted. (? Natural? With what? Naturally? Say it again. Water comes naturally, and the place where it flows naturally becomes a canal. Metaphor is mature and successful. Natural? It has been included. )

18, Kan Kan. A flow of words is a flow of words. Say? It's already included. )

19, the subtle influence. (imperceptibly, it describes that people's thoughts or personalities have been infected and influenced, and they have changed unconsciously. Influence? It's already included. )

20, take in everything in a glance. Take in everything in a glance, describing things is very simple, and you can see them clearly at once. Do you see it? It's already included. )

2 1, repeatedly stressed. Three orders and five applications? Emphasize? It's already included.

22. Improve day by day. (improve day by day: improve day by day. Day after day, with? Day by day? Say it again. )

23. I didn't expect to get a reputation for peace. (word of mouth: unexpected praise. Safe, unexpected, and? Didn't expect that, did you Say it again. )

24. The hearts of the victims are full of grief. (Mourning is everywhere: it is a metaphor for moaning and crying, and displaced victims are everywhere. The wailing geese are a metaphor for the victims of sadness and crying. The victim? Say it again. )

People lost their lives. (untold sufferings: describe that under the reactionary rule, the broad masses of people are in extremely difficult situations. Biological, refers to people, and? People? Say it again. )

26. I'm black and blue all over. (black and blue: the whole body is covered with scars as dense as fish scales, describing the injury as heavy. It's all over, it's all over, with? All over? Say it again. )

27. It's dwarfed. Compared with each other, there are some shortcomings. Appear? It's already included. )

28. Stay awake for days and nights. (all night: all night until dawn. With what? How many days and nights? Say it again. )

29. Excellent school spirit has become a common practice. (Become a common practice: describe a thing gradually developing, becoming popular and forming a good fashion. Wind, fashion, and? Wind? what's up Wind? Say it again. )

30. It's everywhere. (all over the mountains: all over the mountains, there are many descriptions. ? Men? With what? Is it over? It means full, everywhere, with? Everywhere? Say it again. )

3 1, these two strikingly similar stories show that the fat pig theorem is not groundless. (? No foundation? Metaphorically, rumors spread in the gap, and the legend of news is not completely unreasonable. Add idioms before sentences? No? Negative words, repeated with the negative meaning of the idiom itself)

32. It's like a collapse. (collapse: like a landslide, the tiles burst. Metaphor is complete collapse or rout. ? Elephant? Same? Should be deleted. )

33. Leaders should plan ahead before problems appear, and don't panic after problems appear. (? Before something goes wrong? With what? Plan ahead? Semantic repetition)

Jazz is in the ascendant. (? Fang? Is it? Positive? . )

35. He finished it in one sitting? Give me back my rivers and mountains? Four words. (? What is this book? It means to write)

Do not underestimate yourself. (? Laugh at yourself? Are you online? Since? Is it? Yourself? Meaning, and the back? Yourself? Repeat)