Appreciation of Bing Xin's "Memories"

(1) Show the scene of playing with water and exaggerate the joy of the group

The poet closely follows the theme of the topic and first writes about the scene in the square after the rain: after the heavy rain, the clouds opened and the sun rose, in the square The green trees washed by the rain are even more verdant, and the treetops are bathed in the sun and shining with golden light. The water on the field has not been collected, forming an "ocean". This is a good place for children to play!

Playing in the water after the rain is a natural preference of children. You see, a group of children are here. They are barefoot, with their trousers rolled up, scrambling to be the first in the "ocean" of water on the square, treading water, calling, laughing, "as happy as gods" - this is A vivid metaphor exaggerates the lively scene of children being carefree, unrestrained, and playing in the water, creating an atmosphere of great joy, and the joy of the group overflows from the page.

(2) Emphasis on treading water and wrestling, conveying annoyance and joy

If the poet used concise pen and ink to exaggerate the group joy of children playing in the water at the beginning, then, next, This highlights the typical description of the little brother treading water and wrestling - you see, he stepped on the water hard, splashing high and high water splashes! The word "hard" secretly conveys that the little brother was unwilling to be outdone when treading water, and tried his best. I used my full strength, so the water splashed very high. Maybe I used too much strength and my body was unstable. While telling my sister to "be careful", I slipped. How humorous and interesting!

The little brother slipped and his pants were wet and covered with mud. He was dripping with water and sticky. He shouted "Oops" repeatedly while slapping him. Was he worried about his mother's blame or was he worried about the jokes of his friends? ?Despite this, the "joy" on his face not only did not diminish at all, but instead radiated with "excitement and pride": he was excited about treading water to his heart's content, and he was proud that the water he splashed was higher than his playmates, right? What's the big deal if you fall, not to mention that you will be happy and proud after falling! This is really annoying and happy, and the childlike innocence shines...

(3) Describe the mood of the little girl, implying the desire for happiness

Is playing in the water after the rain just a thing for boys? No. Girls also have a natural tendency to love playing in water. You see, behind the little brother who is treading water and having fun, closely followed is the little sister with two short and thick pigtails. Maybe this is a lesson learned from the little brother's treading water and wrestling, but the little sister is more cautious - she "bites her lip" and doesn't yell like the boys; she "holds up her skirt" to prevent it from getting wet by the rain. clothes; she "runs gently and carefully" to prevent slipping in the water and falling like her little brother. This kind of description shows the little sister's mood of playing in the water after the rain in a detailed and vivid way. Compared with the little brother's hard treading on the water and splashing the old man's water, it shows another feature, giving people a swaying, rich and colorful feeling. feelings of change.

However, in this way, how can we reflect the children's joy of playing with water? The wonderful thing is that the poet closely follows the description of the little sister's mood at the end of the article, and supplements the little sister's psychological activities. One stroke: "In my heart, I hope that I will also have such a happy fall!" The little brother stepped on the water hard, and the water splashed. Although he fell, he was "excited" and "proud". What a fall. "Happy"! In comparison, how awkward it is for the little sister to play in the water after the rain, silently and extremely carefully! How happy it is to simply fall down, like her little brother did! The word "happy" , not only reproduces the little brother's feeling of wrestling in the water, but also hints that the little sister hopes to get rid of the constraints of playing in the water, follow in the footsteps of the little brother, fall down, have fun, and long for fun!

Bing Xin loves children, understands children, and has a meticulous understanding of children's lives, hobbies, and interests, so she writes affectionately and realistically. Let us recite "After the Rain" and experience children's fun of playing with water again!