A fragment describing people's joys and sorrows.

1. It was a midsummer night. I went downstairs for a walk and met my former good friend Wu Wenbin. We haven't seen each other for a long time, and we had a good chat as soon as we met. Chatting, he suddenly asked me; "Mao Mao, how many push-ups can you do?" I shook my head and said, "I don't know." Before I finished, he got up on the ground and said, "I can do more than 20 things." You must do more than me. " Soon after he finished speaking, he stood up and said, "One * * * has made 25, so try it." I have no choice but to bite the bullet and do it. You know, I'm not good at sports because I'm too fat. I was on the ground, and I didn't do five things, so I lost. Wu Wenbin saw it and said, "I didn't expect you to make five. I think you are great. " ! "Hearing this, I blush to the neck. If there are cracks in the ground, I'd like to go in, but it's impossible.

When I got home, I lay in bed, tossing and turning, unable to sleep. I thought to myself, he can do 25, why can't I? Am I dumber than him? No, it's impossible! I am by no means more stupid than him, but I practice less than him. Yes, I must work hard to surpass him. So from that day on, I made up my mind to do five push-ups every day. In a day or two, with the increase of days, gradually, gradually, I can do more than 30 at a time. After a period of hard exercise, I can already do more than 40.

A year passed quickly, and on a midsummer night, I saw Wu Wenbin again in the same place. I offered to compete in push-ups. He said yes everywhere. He did it first, or he did 25. After he finished, he looked at me triumphantly and said to me as if he were laughing, can you do so much? Now it's my turn. I think of that night a year ago and the price I paid for my efforts. I can't help feeling refreshed. Suddenly, an unknown force broke out and made 50 in one breath. When I finished, I found that Wu Wenbin was tired. It was a long time before he came to his senses and stupidly asked me, "How can you be so great?" I smiled and replied, "Thank you. If you didn't touch my strong heart, how could I train so hard and surpass you? " "Oh, I see ..." He said with a wry smile.

Comments:

This composition successfully uses the description of psychological activities. For example, after losing face by doing push-ups for the first time, "Go home, ... overtake him." These descriptions of psychological activities truly and vividly describe the fierce ideological struggle between the little author "going home" and "tossing and turning in bed", and finally decide to "exercise hard and surpass him". It fully embodies the center of the article-"I am a strong person". When the article narrates the rematch one year later, there is such a description of psychological activities. Although there are only two sentences: "I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember …"

Although there are not many psychological activities in this paper, they are used properly and vividly highlight the character characteristics of the characters: strong and full of personality.

I want to have a home.

The intermittent rain is still falling.

The wind is whistling and still blowing.

Between heaven and earth, water mist overflows and is boundless. On this muddy path, I am still alone, wandering aimlessly like a boat without a rudder on the vast sea.

I'm all wet and I've been in the cold war. In the desolate wilderness, there is no shelter except this apricot tree. Where should I go?

Suddenly, a small bud, torn by the wind, reluctantly left the branch with endless attachment.

My heart is not a quiver, busy hands, firmly hugged the petite body. This little bud withered prematurely before it could bloom the brilliance of life.

Quietly holding this life that has long been thanked, I can feel that she also holds my hand tightly, and who can warm who with this clenched hand?

We have the same sadness and pain.

Dad has completely abandoned me.

Home has become a strange concept. Home, like a ferry, has carried me for sixteen spring and autumn, and abandoned me before reaching the other shore.

At this moment, I know I have an unforgettable attachment to that purgatory-like home.

However, now nothing is possible, just like this bud, which weaves many beautiful dreams when it is on the branch and disappears in a blink of an eye. All that remains is memory and hatred.

Six years ago, that afternoon, which was as rainy as today, somehow, my mother left this home forever and went to a place I still don't know. I clearly remember my mother's angry tears.

Mom hasn't left for a few days, and there is a beautiful young woman at home.

From that day on, washing and cooking are all mine. Even if it is a cup of mouthwash, the woman asked me to bring it to her. If I am not careful, I will be punished for nothing, no food and no school. But as long as you can go to school, what can you expect?

At noon today, her five-year-old son celebrated his birthday. Many people came to celebrate, and I was the only one hiding under the covers and eating cold steamed bread silently as usual.

Liveliness is theirs and cold is mine. After the banquet, the boy I brought up in one hand asked me to ride his horse again, saying that I was afraid I couldn't ride it again because his grandfather was taking him to a big city far away today.

In front of everyone, I, a girl of 16 years old, leaned forward helplessly and used to hold the ground with my hands. However, after carrying him twice, I couldn't help crying and accidentally dropped him. Unexpectedly, this was a disaster.

She scolded me for losing face, and even my brother couldn't meet a small request. Then, as usual, she and her father grabbed my hand, and she rudely grabbed my hair and touched the door.

The guests couldn't convince them.

They didn't stop until their clean clothes were stained with blood. ,

They insisted that I leave here and told me to find my mother, but all my entreaties were to no avail.

I miss my mother very much, but where is she? In this way, I was thrown like a rag.

Who dares to take me in? Dad is amazing.

I don't know where I can go or where I should go.

Bud, my only partner, can you tell me?

Some people say that "sixteen-year-old flowers only bloom once", but I don't even have a chance, even though it is spring now.

"... I want to have a home, a place that doesn't need too much ..."

Whose tape recorder rings faintly in the distance,

Are people who listen to music like me? Where is my home?

With a tremor, a magpie flew into the bird's nest on the treetop.

With endless envy, I just looked at it.

Many familiar cries rang out in the distance. I know, that's a lot of aunts asking their children to eat.

It's good to have a mother and a family, I thought sourly.

How kind and warm that simple call is.

I waited for a long time, but no one called me. At this time, if someone can call me, I will definitely jump into her arms and call her "mom". Even if the call is extremely weak, even if only I can hear it.

Is it possible? Is it possible? ……

My hometown, my partner, my classmate and my teacher, are we going to say goodbye forever?

The wind is still blowing; Rain, it's still raining.

Rainy night came to me. ...

Only a faint voice is still singing: "I want to have a home, I want to have a home ..."

Comments:

This article, mainly the description of psychological activities, should be said to be quite successful. It combines psychological activities with descriptions of environment and events. In a sad environment, a person's psychological state of loneliness and helplessness will be more incisive. At the same time, we also noticed that in the article, the little author introduced something similar to "flower bud" and "magpie" in the description of psychological activities. At this time, these ordinary things have shrouded the emotional color of the little author.

In addition, students will also notice that the paragraph of this article is quite short. It should be said that this was deliberately designed by the young author, or achieved the expected effect, that is, in such a lonely psychological state, psychological activities must be fragmented, discontinuous and emotional. Therefore, such a short paragraph can show such a psychological state!

In a word, such a successful composition describing psychological activities is of considerable reference significance for us to learn how to describe the psychological activities of characters.

For example, 3

Once in the ideological and moral class, Mr. Wang told us to develop good working habits. The teacher said earnestly, "People who don't love labor are called lazy. Lazy people are the least valuable. " She then asked her classmates, will they do housework at home? I don't know why, I'm so nervous that I pound my head for fear that the teacher will hit me. Think about it. I'm a battalion chief. I can still work at school, but what did I do at home? Mom didn't do anything? It's outrageous not to wash your handkerchief yourself.

explain

1. The psychological description of a character can describe the mood, emotions, joys and sorrows of the character, and so on. For example, "I don't know why, my heart is so nervous and pounding, for fear that the teacher will hit me on the head." The reason for this nervousness lies in the fact that the little author doesn't do housework and is lazy. These descriptions of the characters' moods accurately and meticulously reflect the inner world of the characters.

2. The psychological description of the characters can write the thoughts of the characters. For example, "think about it, I am the captain, and I can still work at school, but what did I do at home?" Mom didn't do anything? It's outrageous that you don't even wash your handkerchief yourself. "This passage is written by the little author's inner thoughts and blames himself for being lazy.

3. If you want to write a good character's mood and thoughts, you must observe deeply and find out the inner world of the character. We should be good at seeing what kind of emotional waves and thoughts are surging in the inner world of the characters in key situations, and strive for specific and accurate psychological description.