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Nowadays composition has become an indispensable tool for people, but how to write a good composition?

I. Title

As the saying goes, "a good title is half the story", a good title is the beginning of a good composition, and the title must be novel and unique to attract attention!

Second, the beginning and the end

The article begins with a dragon head and ends with a phoenix tail. There are many kinds of beginnings, and once you come up with a good beginning, the written thoughts will flow out. Common beginnings are as follows: 1, get to the point. 2. Ask questions to attract people's attention. 3. Summarize and reveal. 4. Describe the environment. 5. Flashback and create suspense. Only in this way can we have a good start, which is the beginning of a good article.

"Weaving baskets, weaving baskets, all in your mouth." The end of the article is also the essence of this chapter. Some endings are thought-provoking, some endings are natural, some endings are intriguing, some endings should be written in a more appropriate way, and the pen is also beautiful and generous.

Third, proper words and correct rhetoric.

Proper use of words will make the article more full and specific. A plain article, with a few modifiers, will make the article icing on the cake. At the same time, we should pay attention to inventory, print good words and sentences in our minds and use them vividly. You can also add some reasonable imagination to make the article receive the finishing touch effect.

Fourth, clear and logical.

In an article, we must pay attention to the order, and the article should not be irrelevant and messy. The best way is to outline it, have such an outline in mind, and then describe it in detail. In the process of painting, be realistic, and don't write things like "the rooster lay eggs", or you will make a joke. Also pay attention to punctuation, don't use it indiscriminately. Punctuation also has the law of punctuation. Pause, pause, and omit.

5. Clever layout and proper details.

When you get an article, you should make a layout, how to write it and how to write it. This layout is like a pork belly, many of which are big, but there are also details. If there are no details, the article will look dry, only the skeleton, like a running account. So, you can't make this mistake.

These are the five main points of the composition, which I have outlined. I don't think it is difficult to do these five points in composition.

Writing focuses on truth. True feelings can move people. I summarize the methods of writing a good composition as follows.

1 composition in examination room

In the examination room, the method of writing composition is slightly different. First, determine the angle you want to choose according to the given range. The angle should be positive and novel; Secondly, the proposition, for a topic composition, if the topic can show the center, but not too straightforward, it is almost the same; Furthermore, writing, many people like to write the beginning and end of an article. Actually, it depends on the tone of the article. For example, Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond begins with a direct narrative, and the effect is also good. In detail, pay attention to description and rhetoric, but don't spend too much space. Clever articles often win.

2 essays on life

Life essays should write your most primitive feelings without deliberate modification. But we should also pay attention to the clarity of the order and the accuracy of the language.

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How to have literary talent in college entrance examination composition

The ancients said, "The stone is like jade, reflecting the mountains, and the water is full of pearls and beautiful rivers." Literary sentences and paragraphs, such as "jade" and "beads", can make the whole article shine.

Pavlov said in "A Letter to Young People": "No matter how perfect a bird's wings are, it will never fly high without air." The literary talent of language is the air of exam composition. Without good language support, no matter how good the theme and the center are, it is difficult to express, and no matter how good the emotion is, the whole article is difficult to sublimate. I want the marking teacher to see this language, and I will feel warm in my heart. If you feel better, then you must use literary language.

How can we let the marking teacher revel in the rich literary language in the exam composition? We should learn to use various rhetorical devices to visualize the language, master the skills of changing sentence patterns to make the language lively, and properly use ancient poetry.

First, make good use of rhetoric

Being good at using some rhetorical devices properly is a good way to make the language of examination composition literary. Rhetoric is the spirit of examination composition. If we can properly sprinkle these magical waters on the exam composition, we can turn the stone into gold, make the article vivid and add color and momentum.

duality

Two phrases or sentences with the same structure, equal number of words and closely related meanings are arranged symmetrically. This metaphor is called duality.

Duality, from the content point of view, concentration and concentration, strong generalization; Formally, syllables are neat and symmetrical, with a strong sense of rhythm. Because of the cadence of antithesis and the harmonious echo of the couplet, it shows the beauty of phonology and gives people a sense of pleasure in hearing.

This is a truth proved by countless facts: listening to everything is clear, but listening to some is dark. Zou Ji bluntly sarcastically said that the king of Qi offered a reward that could be tamed, and Qi became stronger. Wang Ping sincerely advised, Ma Su was opinionated, and the street pavilion finally fell; Emperor Taizong appointed Wei Zhi, opened the way, accepted advice directly, and had the rule of Zhenguan; Zhu Yuanzhang asked Zhu Sheng for advice, amassed food, and slowly became king. Build a bright world; Li Dingming's opinion was adopted and the people supported it. Ma Yinchu's theory was criticized, and the population soared. The country is the victim ... don't these examples strongly illustrate the importance of "taking good advice"

Example 2. Overlooking the heights, thoughts and beautiful scenery, you can never get enough. Watch the birds sing willow green in the morning and watch the sunset glow dye mountain red at night; Sunny days are far away, and rainy days are foggy; Spring, young swallows kiss powder, summer, lotus boat wind scissors, autumn, cool moon like a hook, winter, white snow like jade.

(2) parallelism

Arranging three or more sentences or sentence elements with the same or similar structure, consistent tone and closely related meaning can enhance language potential and deepen feelings. This figure of speech is called parallelism.

Parallelism can form overwhelming momentum, strengthen language potential and deepen feelings. Parallelism reasoning can explain the argument more strictly, fully and thoroughly; Using parallelism to express feelings can express feelings to the fullest.

Exodus 1. The past remains the same in the Three Kingdoms. How can past mistakes be repeated? Who let a generation of fierce Dong Zhuo die hard is his most trusted adopted son Lu Bu; Who stole the gold brick from the wall of Cao Taigong is his favorite child, aunt; Holding Zhang Fei's head and running to the enemy camp, it was his hand-picked lieutenant. The past is wasted, and it is unbearable to look back. On the balance of history, they were all bullied to death by close feelings. On the rational scale, they seem so small and ignorant.

Please stare at the Yangtze River, and you will forget your loss and have fresh blood. Please stare at the sea, you will forget the bitterness and have a broad mind; Please stare at the mountains, you will forget your sadness and have a tall image; Please stare into the distance, you will feel that all setbacks and pains are not worth mentioning, and you will have the world and warm sunshine.

(3) Metaphor

When describing something or explaining a truth, make an analogy with other similar things or truths. This figure of speech is called metaphor.

The use of metaphor can make the language vivid, abstract into concrete, abstruse into simple, lengthy into concise. Metaphor is used in narrative and lyric paragraphs to depict the image of a person or thing, highlight the characteristics of a person or thing, and give people a deep impression. Using metaphors in argumentative paragraphs to explain things makes things simple. Metaphorically, writing is like running water, like a breeze blowing on the water, sparkling, and the composition is meaningful but not dull.

Exodus 1. The past is like a dream, full of fragrance. Childhood is a sweet music that accompanies me to live happily; Teenager is a pure music, accompanied by my carefree growth; Youth is a vigorous music that makes me fly freely.

Example 2. Self-confidence is the spring rain as expensive as oil, watering the vicissitudes of the ideal bud; Self-confidence is the Yun Fan that goes straight to the sea, full of leisurely winds; Self-confidence is the milky way in the dark, filling the vast sky on the road.

Example 3. Ideal is the beacon of progress, and effort is the sailing ship; Without navigation marks, ships will hit the rocks and sink; With navigation marks, you can't achieve your goal without a ship. To build a building, you must have a solid foundation; If you want a long stream, you must have an inexhaustible source; To be a successful person, you must have the spirit of turning your ideal into action.

(4) Comparison

Contrast is a figure of speech, which compares two different things or two aspects of the same thing together, also called contrast.

Described by contrast, the characteristics of things are more prominent; Use contrast to express emotions, and feelings are more vivid; Discuss with contrast, right and wrong are clearer.

Example 1. You are not like a gray spring rain, lacking the lightness and lingering of "sneaking into the night with the wind and moistening things silently"; You are not like the scattered autumn rain, and there is no cold sadness of "the rain hits the phoenix tree and the sound is clear in autumn"; You are not like the rainy plum rain, which ticks all day, making people feel suffocated and stuffy; Unlike the disturbing rain in Mao Mao, you always hang in front of the window like a curtain, covering all the beautiful scenery ... You are unique. Summer rain! Wow ... wow ... "When the silver bottle first entered the water slurry, it jumped out of the armored war horse, and the weapons collided with each other", like a thunderbolt falling into the Tianhe River, pouring down, pouring down, roaring down and soaring down! Summer rain-your bold and exciting rain! Yu Xia-you are a cheerful, bold, lively and generous chivalrous man!

Example 2. Smiling makes people successful, but crying only corrupts people. What is a smile? This is a cellar with a history of thousands of years. When opened, it smells good. Wan Li: A smile is a fire, which is infinitely dazzling when it burns. Smile is a flower, it is for people, and it is fragrant in your hand. Crying is far from it. Not as good as wine, litchi is instantly beautiful. It is a lonely heart, with the cold sword, its helplessness has turned into retreat. Smile ushered in the spring breeze and won the spring, but crying will only miss the stars, the moon and the spring scenery in the garden.

Example 3. Imagine how many emperors have created a peaceful and prosperous time since ancient times because of selecting talents and empowering them to "listen to their words". Duke of Zhou vomited, and the world returned to the heart; Liu Bei visited the thatched cottage three times, and eventually there were three countries; Xiao He chased Han Xin under the moon. Qiang Bing Ma Zhuang, later Liu Bang. How many emperors believed in slanderers? "partial listening", and make the country decline. Far from being virtuous, Chu Huaiwang was angry with Qu Yuan. Chu soon embarked on the road of national subjugation.

(5) Citation

The rhetorical device of borrowing other people's language to express one's intention in writing is quotation.

Citation can make the expression concise, vivid and colorful, thus enhancing the expression effect. Citation can enrich the content, highlight the theme and add icing on the cake.

Example 1. "If you know the east wind calmly, it will always be spring." When you walk into spring, you will find that the color of spring is magnificent and brilliant.

"Thousands of miles of warblers sing green and red, and the water town is full of fruit wine flags." When you walk into spring, you will find the image of spring, fresh and bright.

"The light and deep spring scenery is contained in a few branches, and the green shadow is red and fragrant, half full of desire." When you walk into spring, you will find that spring is beautiful and fragrant.

"Spring can't be caged all over the garden, and an apricot comes out of the wall." When you walk into spring, you will find that spring is still free and smart.

Example 2. Self-confidence makes Qiu Jin, the heroine of Jianhu, have the heroism of "being diligent and hardworking, and being able to transform Bi Tao after sprinkling"; Self-confidence makes Lu Xun, a fighter of "forbearance", have the persistence of "sending a message to Han Xing, I recommend Xuanyuan with blood"; Self-confidence gave Mao Zedong, a great man, the boldness of spirit of "sacrificing more and daring to teach the sun and the moon to change the sky".

Example 3. On the night of the small building, I pushed open the small window and looked at the twinkling stars under the vast starry sky, such as the enchanting crescent moon. I experienced the charm of "the night in the sky is as cold as water" and the artistic conception of "the moon moves and the flowers fall on the shadow", which made people wonder about the "green leaves swaying" and "the fragrant wind playing shadows" created in the sky. Occasionally, the wind and drizzle, the wind shaking the bamboo, the rain hitting the banana, trickling, lingering, like a feather plucking my heartstrings.

(6) personification

Writing things as adults and endowing things with people's words and deeds or thoughts and feelings is called personification.

Personification is easy to express love and hate, express favorite things, and make them vivid and make people feel more cordial. Things that show hatred can be ugly, which can enhance people's aversion to it, thus enhancing the appeal of the article.

Example 1. That peach blossom is a tree, piece by piece, boundless, the sky and ocean of flowers. White is the clouds floating in the blue sky and the sheep floating in the upper reaches of the grassland; Pink is the shy cheek of a girl in love with spring and the smile of a newborn baby; Red is a flickering flame, and it is the rosy clouds reflected by the morning sun. They shook their heads in front of the green leaves. You squeeze me and I hug you, laughing and joking, trying to tell people the story of spring and show people the elegance of spring.

Example 2. When spring came to the world quietly, the city also put on new clothes, bright green willow buds and bright yellow spring, releasing their accumulated strength for a winter; Telling their longing for spring. Look at her, stretching her waist and showing off her arms. She seems to be laughing and shouting, reporting the coming of spring to people.

(7) Authenticity

Use the word at the end of the last sentence as the beginning of the next sentence, so that the front and back sentences are connected end to end and the words are handed down. This metaphor is called top truth, also called couplets.

Top truth, used for deliberation and reasoning, cautious; Used to describe things. Clear organization; Used for lyrical freehand brushwork, fresh style.

The poorer you are, the less you buy books, the less you receive education, and the less you read, the poorer you are.

When Yan saw the land, the river on the land, the wet fields on both sides of the river, and the reeds with green branches and leaves on the fields, her heart was full of joy.

Example 3. We are shocked by nature, by the majestic peaks and the vastness of Yuan Ye. We are moved by nature, the joy of streams and the depth of the ocean. We think deeply, because of the changes in the morning and evening, and the passage of winter; We fantasize about colorful flowers and beautiful birds and insects.

(8) Other rhetorical devices

For example, rhetorical questions, rhetorical questions, exaggeration, and overlapping. If used properly, it can also add a lot of color to the exam composition.

Second, flexible use of sentence patterns

Flexible use of sentence patterns can avoid an article with one tone and boring. Being good at choosing sentence patterns and changing sentence patterns can effectively increase literary talent and enhance the expressive force of language. Different sentence patterns have different tastes, different functions and different effects. If we can flexibly use various sentence patterns in the exam composition, how can we not let the article drag its feet and shine brilliantly?

There are many ways to use sentence patterns flexibly in exam composition. Here are three ways for the time being.

(A) turn declarative sentences into rhetorical questions

For example, people often praise winners as heroes, but seldom think of losers. In fact, they are praised for their perseverance, and their indomitable spirit is touching. If a loser has the same will and spirit as a winner, he is worthy of praise. He is a hero.

People often praise winners as heroes, but seldom think of losers. In fact, praise them, not because they have indomitable will? Isn't it because of their indomitable enterprising spirit that people are moved? If a loser has the same will and spirit as a winner, isn't he worthy of praise? Isn't he a hero?

(B) the use of negative assumptions

For example, it is not the first time that Zhuge Liang has made mistakes on such issues. After Battle of Red Cliffs, he knew that Guan Yu and Cao Cao were kind to him. If Cao Cao crosses Huarong Road, Guan Yu will definitely let him go. However, after Guan Yu made a generous statement and issued a military order, he "left this favor" and asked him to stop it. As a result, Guan Yu really let Cao Cao escape If Zhuge Liang had been unkind and sent other reliable generals to guard Huarong Road, Cao Cao might have been captured long ago. And if we learn from that time and act impartially this time, no matter how hard Ma Su made a vow, it would be unnecessary if it was inappropriate, and it would be possible to avoid the tragedy of losing the street pavilion. On the contrary, Zhuge Liang made a mistake for the first time and did not learn from it. Only by repeating the same mistakes did he "deeply hate his ignorance" and beheaded Ma Su with tears. But this can only be done according to law, and it has nothing to do with the great cause of reviving the Han Dynasty and returning to the old capital. It can be seen that it is better to enforce the law than to appoint people on merit.

(c) use the whole sentence.

For example, those earth-shattering, tear-jerking and all-powerful Qian Qian heroes are the "backbone of China". Selfless, diligent and hardworking people should also be included in this Qian Qian. Whether it is Yuan Longping, who has cultivated high-yield hybrid rice after ten years of hard work, or Wang, a track and field athlete who won glory for his country in the world sports world; Whether it's Chen Aiwu, a hotel employee who is brave enough to fight against unhealthy trends, or Li Suli, a bus conductor who is conscientious and dedicated to every passenger, although they have no vigorous deeds, their beautiful hearts and noble behaviors make people respect. Aren't they also called "the backbone of China"

Third, the use of ancient poetry.

This is a method of not quoting poetry directly, which is equivalent to "dark quotation". In the quotation of poetry, implicit quotation is the application of the original sentence to one's own composition, which belongs to the advanced form of quotation.

The application of ancient poetry to the examination composition can create a beautiful artistic conception, make the article full of poetry and painting, give the marking teacher a beautiful enjoyment, and also show your profound literary skills well, thus winning the favor of the marking teacher.

Example 1: I saw a madman singing with a sword. He missed Chang 'an like a fire, but "Alas, how can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?" So he chose to cut off his flute painfully and close the door of the eternal arrival of the world: he chose to drink 48,000 suns and moons in sadness and silence. He suffered a lot, but since the water is still flowing, although we cut its hatred with our swords, his choice has made him go down in history and made people admire him! He is Li Bai.

Exodus 2: Remember that plum? Shuang Ling stood proudly, but attracted the envy of heroes. She didn't complain. The same is her, even if it is scattered into mud and crushed into dust, she doesn't hate it. Because she has blood in her bones. There is a spirit; Because there is a fire burning in the incense, that is all she has! Yes, she used up all her money! Yes, she used all her energy to interpret the fragrance, as always-because of persistence. If you write a composition (or read more extracurricular books) and draw good words and sentences, write reading notes. Be alert in the exam ~ ~)