As long as the examples are not written, cherish the specific examples of campus memory! ! ! ! ! !

Listen! The whistle sounded and the tug-of-war began. We girls tried our best to cheer for the boys in our class, but these boys were so disappointing that they lost the first battle. The girls were hoarse with anger, but the boys were defeated. Really boring! Looking over there, the dejected boy put on a smug look again: the third place is not bad! If you don't like it, I won't cheer for you tomorrow, so that people can quietly appreciate your flustered "heroic spirit"! Listen, I'm flustered and heroic. How hateful! Hum! It makes sense to lose! Self-deception, thanks to your words! There are a lot of angry words! The next day, the girls went into battle. To our surprise, all the boys, including the master of yesterday's war of words, let go of the wild voice like mountain wind: Come on! Come on! Their rough noise was mixed with the shrill voices of several female compatriots who did not participate in the war. At the moment, I think this is the most magnificent music in the world. It twisted in front of us like a rope and became an inspiring song. Encouraged, the girls fought a beautiful quick battle and won the first battle! Oh, oh! We won! We won! Yesterday's regrets and complaints disappeared in an instant, replaced by cheers! After all, we are in a group, and winning glory for the group is our goal. Today, we have achieved this goal again. How can you not be happy and excited?

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Look! Why is the classroom atmosphere in our class so warm? It turned out to be an interesting math class. Time to ask questions. As usual, the students think positively: this step proves unnecessary. Oh, no, the problem won't be so simple ... Gee, this proof is too complicated. Can you find another shortcut? .. a hands raised one after another. There are usually big boys and quiet girls. At this time, they are all like a different person, bold and cautious, asking novel and ingenious questions. Bell ... alas, how come class is over! How time flies! Of course, after class, the teacher will be surrounded by a group of students who love thinking ... I am especially willing to go to Class 6, because students love thinking, are willing to use their brains and dare to raise objections ... Listen! This is our teacher's evaluation, and we are proud of it!

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All the days, all the days have come ... who is so passionate about long live youth? Maybe you haven't noticed, maybe you don't believe it, how many people envy you for being young ... who sang "While you are still young" so affectionately? Who took a light step with the melody of the song of youth? It's us. This is our weekend party. Please come here. When you come here, the tension and fatigue will disappear. Do you know that?/You know what? We can study and live!

Time flies, our campus life is constantly changing color, and joy and distress follow. However, we love campus life, because it is a life of fire and poetry, and this is the real life! Oh, our campus life is like the moon, with ups and downs, joys and sorrows; Another example is the kaleidoscope, which shows a colorful world. ...

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The article is meticulous and appropriate in cutting materials. The first part of the tug-of-war scene does not describe the whole process of tug-of-war, nor does it describe the specific actions of tug-of-war students. Instead, it highlights how boys and girls cheer for each other, describes the results of tug-of-war and students' reflection on the outcome, effectively highlighting the spirit of caring for and loving the collective. The second part of the classroom scene only describes the students' thinking of finding another shortcut; The questions raised by students are novel and ingenious, which embodies the initiative of students and enlivens the classroom. In the third part of the weekend party, only the steps of two students singing and dancing were written, which reflected the relaxed and happy weekend life of the students. This writing method which emphasizes the key points according to the needs of the center is worth learning.

2. Understand the relationship between detail writing and sketch.

First, in an article, detailed writing and sketching are the unity of opposites and complement each other. Without details, there is no omission; It doesn't matter if there is no omission.

Second, the detailed content must be the main content, and the secondary content can't be detailed, otherwise the article will be verbose, the materials will accumulate, and the central meaning will be drowned.

Third, the detailed writing must be accompanied by abbreviations, which should be supplemented by detailed writing to make the article concise and relevant and focused.

It can be seen that detailed description and abbreviation are two complementary expressions. Generally speaking, detail writing is often used to express the situation of points and reflect the depth of things; Skimming often summarizes the general situation and reflects the breadth of things.

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Two or three things about campus life

Song is floating, it quietly enriches life, flows, and hearts. For the most beautiful campus life, play the most beautiful melody, just like a thread, string our lives together. A song symbolizes a beautiful campus life, and campus life sings unparalleled songs day after day.

Notes before the text of a book or after the title of an article.

At first, I felt that everything was shoulder to shoulder, and I didn't really understand it until I calmed down. Hearing the songs all over the campus, looking out the window at the dim night, there are wonderful songs flying over the school. It's a song in my mouth, a song in my heart, and the truest, purest and most beautiful song in my heart. This song is like our real campus life.

In the background of singing, day by day passed, the record was put on the record player again, and the yellow record player creaked. In retrospect, we collected so many songs and happened so many things along the way that we still remember them vividly.

Autumn. A cool breeze blows gently, leaves fall and thoughts gush out. But in our sports meeting, I realized the true interpretation of perseverance. It's an effort song.

I like watching the long jump. They forgot their feelings and tried their best to run, pedal, jump, fly forward and land at the farthest point they longed for. All these efforts stem from their desire for dreams and unremitting efforts, so the long jump is not only a visual enjoyment, but also a spiritual shock, a persistence and effort.

In that bleak but fiery sports meeting, one athlete left a deep impression on me only because of his indomitable spirit. He did well in the first few jumps. In the penultimate jump, he twisted his foot while pedaling, but he still struggled so hard and tried his best to jump forward. Really, he tried his best. I felt a sweat for him peacefully. But he was not satisfied with his achievements, endured the pain and looked back disappointedly at his unsatisfactory achievements. The slow wind blew his dancing bangs, then gritted his teeth and started the last jump. Go all out, go all out; Insist, insist; Work hard, work hard; It worked! Because he worked hard and struggled. I already have "worship" in my heart. In fact, as long as you persist and struggle, you can also be worshipped.

It snows again in winter. It snows so deeply and seriously, and falls in the purest place in my heart, thinking about things frozen by snow. Looking back, remembering friendship and appreciating growth, it turns out that all this is pure, as pure as snow.

Therefore, for their own comfort, the laughter and pure faith of the Iraqi people have the simplest life and the most distant dream.

Friend, did you hear that? This is a campus song, something on campus, something dotted with songs, something burning with songs. So many days in a hurry, it turned out not to be so hurried. So if you taste it carefully, you will certainly hear the sound of flowers, the sound of sunshine, and our beautiful singing; See our efforts, adhere to our innocence, our struggle for friendship, our campus affairs. ...

..... bell ... bell. ............................................................................................................................................. With the falling leaves in ....................... in autumn, I can't help recalling a series of beautiful and unforgettable memories of primary school campus. Time flies, time is ruthless, time flies so fast. It's like the moon last night turned into the sun today, and it will be two years in a blink of an eye. In the past two years, I have grown a lot. From ignorance in the past to being sensible and clever now.

When I was in middle school, I was still thinking about the old classroom, the flying basketball court and the green grassland. Walking on the path to school when I was a child, I felt as if I had returned to that young me. Everything is still so clear and profound. Now in front of me is a school that has accompanied me for six years. Walking on this path, I enjoyed the sound of reading in the breeze. Ah, what an inspiring voice! I am so familiar with ... so kind ... I breathe the spreading air in the campus, and every vibrant flower and tree makes every detail look so fresh. This is my beautiful and harmonious alma mater, isn't it?

I don't care. Under this autumn sky, it began to rain in Mao Mao. Young students are playing in the rain, and a teacher is trying to persuade them. Finally, the teacher couldn't help getting angry. Seeing those pupils being taught by their teachers to keep their heads down, I can't help but think of my remaining years in this school. At that time, I was only in the fourth grade and regarded reading as a kind of hard work. I don't care about the importance of reading, and I don't know how to cherish the blessings of reading. I only care about playing all day. At that time, my teacher, Mr. Yang, was always by my side to teach me and enlighten me, which made me have today's achievements and stand here firmly. Speaking of teacher Yang, my heart is like breaking a five-flavor bottle, and my eyes are full of tears. The memory left by the teacher can be said to be endless! He is a part of my life, just like the air in my life. I really can't imagine what I would be like now without him. Teacher Yang took good care of me at school and was very convincing. After class, he is like a close friend of mine. I tell him all the joys and sorrows directly. He has always been humorous and always tells a few jokes to make me happy and calm my mood. This makes me feel extremely at ease and happy. I just like the feeling of being protected, so sweet!

The campus wind is blowing again, and the memory in my mind is like champagne that has just been shaken. As soon as it was opened, water spilled on the ground. This smell is still in my memory. I still remember that it was a morning with flowers and birds singing. Because most teachers went to other places for meetings that day, the campus was deserted and naughty, and I began to think presumptuous. I've been chatting with my friends, and I haven't been paying attention in class. I was so bold that I almost forgot the existence of the teacher. Miss Pink is beginning to get angry. She came up to me angrily and said this to me: What time is it? Still babbling there, why don't you learn? What can I do when I grow up? That's right! This is the inscription of Miss Pink's seat.

The first ray of sunshine in the morning fell quietly on the earth. When it came to the campus, our class was covered with the warm sunshine and comfortably read each beautiful poem aloud. What a beautiful scenery! The students in our class are even more enthusiastic animals, and it is their nature to be naive and lively. Although sometimes they are a little naughty, our class is full of talents! There are speakers, athletes, painters, doctors and so on. These little talents have enhanced the reputation of our school. They can be said to be the pillars of the future country!

At school, a girl named Xiao Lin often walks beside me. Xiao Lin's grades in school are always among the best. She will always be so smart and excellent in my heart. We are the best team in the school. We always like to sing along, and we should stick together in everything we do. Can be said to be a group of inseparable sister flowers! Every corner of the campus has traces of joy left by us. Looking back now, my primary school life is really happy!

Look at the green grass again, the laughter of chasing and playing in those days, everyone's passion and friendly laughter, everything has disappeared. Now, what I see is an empty and lifeless grassland. On that path, I will never see my dear classmate again. Everything started to get weird. These scenes, like scrolls, are all collected in my diary.

I love my alma mater, the ancient classroom, the flying basketball court and the green grassland. I love teachers as mothers and friends as brothers and sisters. In this campus, we were full of laughter and laughter, and also left our growth steps. I will always keep my alma mater in the deepest part of my heart and imprint this unforgettable campus life in my heart forever. ...

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