Junior middle school Chinese composition details description essay

1. Junior high school composition: detailed description

My wooden clock

There is a very old wooden clock in my house. It is said that it was confiscated and returned as compensation during the Cultural Revolution. property. I grew up listening to its "tick" sound.

Therefore, I know it very well and have deep feelings for it.

This wooden clock is made of Philippine wood and is styled to resemble a villa in the American South. The roof is triangular, and the pointed roof is covered with grape leaves. The emerald-like bunches of mare's milk grapes look so fake that they will make you salivate. There are two shutters under the eaves, and under the windows there are five or six little people dancing to the beautiful music in the music box. They dance with moving postures and are elegantly dressed. There is another semicircular door on the left. There is a unique small second floor at the corner of the door, and the stairs lead directly to the garden. There is a swing in the garden. A beautiful girl with blond hair and a pink dress is sitting on the swing, looking very charming. There is a well next to the swing, and a *** is bending down to carry water. On the right there is a farmer ringing a bell. The bell is a bronze bell, worn with a hemp rope, and the other end of the rope is held in the farmer's hand.

Before the hour, these dummies and scenes were still. When the pointer points to the hour, the two shutters under the eaves will open with a "clatter", and a little bird stretches out its beautiful neck, opens its little red mouth and calls "coo". What time will it be? Call a few times, never lazy, and the sound is clear and sweet. If there are guests in the room, your attention will suddenly shift to the clock. Before you hear enough, the two windows close with a "squeak". I had to wait another hour. Not only that, while the birds were singing, the swing was swinging, the girl's skirt was fluttering in the wind, the farmer was shaking his arms and ringing the bell, and the *** was busy carrying water... The whole villa was boiling. It's even more lively than New Year's Eve. It's even more lively at 12 o'clock. Looking at the entire clock face, you will find that it is simply a beautiful landscape painting. Look at the dial and arc. Isn't the lower half the moon?

The upper half is like the sky, and the emerald mare's milk grapes are still shining like stars!

This wooden clock in my home has won the praise of countless guests. Its ingenious design and exquisite workmanship bring beauty and endless fun to viewers.

The designer actually worked in a limited space. , designing such rich and vivid three-dimensional shapes fully reflects his superb skills, wisdom and extraordinary imagination. 2. Junior high school detailed description essay

This afternoon, I feel a little hot.

When I was just about to pack my schoolbag, it was getting dark. I thought: Why would it be late at night when I obviously have to go to school? At this moment, dark clouds covered us like a piece of black cloth. The whole community was enveloped. Suddenly, a strong wind blew the flowers on the balcony. I thought: it must be raining.

After two or three seconds, a bolt of lightning pierced the sky. , I quickly closed the window, but before I could take a breath, there was another rumble of thunder, which scared me. Then it started pouring rain again, and the water droplets were really like transparent ones. Pearl. At this moment, I smelled a refreshing fragrance and felt very cool.

But my class time was coming, but even if I took an umbrella under such heavy rain, my umbrella would be " "Drops of water wear away rocks"! I had to wait at home. Because it was too dark, I turned on the light. At this time, I was already prepared, but the light was knocked out by lightning, so I had to lie on the bed and continue to wait.

After 30 minutes, these 30 minutes were so long and boring! I really hoped that the rain would stop. Suddenly, the rain seemed to understand my words. In less than five minutes, the rain stopped and the earth returned to its original vitality. However, after this rain, I feel that the summer has become cooler. I thought: Nature is so magical, even a heavy rain has its own peculiarities. It seems that I will pay more attention to nature in the future.

3. I am looking for a junior high school essay that describes the details of the narrative.

The happy time of junior high school has turned into a butterfly and made a cocoon in my heart. It will stay in my heart forever...

Recalling my junior high school days is both bitter and sweet.

It was a day in March when I was in the third grade of junior high school. Our class is preparing to give the class teacher a surprise - because one day in March is our class teacher's birthday. So the whole class wanted to give him a birthday party. Now that the plan has been decided, everyone must take action. Every member of our class took out 10 yuan. Some people are responsible for ordering birthday cakes, some are responsible for buying spray paint and latte art, and some are responsible for buying candles. In this way, the preparations are completed, and all that is left is to wait patiently for the difficulties to come.

Time flies so fast, and in a blink of an eye, the teacher’s birthday has arrived. After finishing the last class, we sent a few people to stabilize the teacher in order to prevent him from going home, and then we had to decorate the classroom. When the birthday cake was put on the table and the candles were lit, someone hurriedly ran over and said that the teacher was coming. We all quickly turned off the lights. The moment the door was pushed open, everyone sprinkled silver powder on the teacher's head and sprayed ribbons on him. As a result, the teacher was panicked and at a loss. Later, the class monitor gave a congratulatory message to the teacher, then made a wish and blew out candles. The classroom was so quiet at that time, time seemed to have stopped, and the scene seemed frozen. In the end, everyone started to divide the cake and said a lot of ugly things, which was like grabbing the cake. After the "robbing" was over, everyone smeared cream on each other's faces. At this time, everyone was intoxicated in the happy atmosphere with the rich milk fragrance. The singing and laughter intertwined into a dance song that composed a happy youth. At that time, everyone was so happy and touched.

Time flies! In the blink of an eye, I was promoted to the fourth grade of junior high school. The study life in the fourth grade of junior high school made me breathless. My mind was filled with chemical equations and physical formulas every day. When I get home every night, my whole body is already soft. But I don't find any of this painful. The pain is the sadness when everyone goes their separate ways after graduation, and the pain of the four-year friendship gradually fading. In order to keep memories for each other, everyone in the grade set off a "classmate record storm". After class, everyone held beautifully drawn classmate records in their hands to look for classmates to sign and leave messages. I, on the other hand, was holding my favorite book and asking my best classmates to sign it for me. Now, I will never forget those friends.

Life in junior high school cannot be finished in a day or two. So I transformed the essence of junior high school into a cocoon and stayed in my heart forever. He will accompany me through more ups and downs.

"Junior high school era, the golden age, wearing a red scarf into the campus, carrying the league emblem into the future...

"The good memories of junior high school will always be with me... 4. Junior high school composition, with a lot of detailed descriptions and narratives, with one or more specific examples, the requirement is

A long and peaceful song "Travel to Suzhou" , the sound of nature, the sound of pearls, I seemed to open the yellow thread-bound book under the clear oil lamp, and came to the south of the valley. There is a beautiful river island, with soft water plants floating on the bottom of the river. Sniffing the radiating Listen to the evening fragrance of Jianjia that has been around for two thousand years, and savor the folk custom that becomes more and more innocent the more you recite it: "Walking back and following it, the road is long and blocked, swimming back and forth, wandering in the middle of the water..." Playing the flute is like reciting a poem. , every time you press the six holes, it is like taking a shower in the long-suffering rain to shake away the fatigue and lethargy all over your body. Ten years of bamboo flute career, ten years of wandering around, how many times have I regained my warmth in the indifference, I am just grateful to have you along the way. I remember the frail me in my childhood - the size of a bamboo flute, my shortness of breath and weak intermittent breath, and my fingers that were so thin that they couldn't block the flute hole. But it was me who insisted on choosing the bamboo flute. Flute, the beauty of silk and bamboo is not for literati, but I was intoxicated when I leaned in the corner and listened to the teacher playing. So, on the road of life, I have you by your side. I remember the first time I played a complete "Little River Flows" "Water", I held you in my hand and devoted my wholehearted devotion and love to you. At that time, the teacher and classmates applauded me, and I cried with joy. I loved my music. In the days that followed, I Carrying you, you accompanying me, I walked here tacitly and without any hesitation. In your world, I experienced the elegance and beauty of lush forests and bamboos, and experienced "looking up at the vastness of the universe and looking down at the prosperity of categories." It is grand and magnificent, it is a kind of bearing with the world in mind, it is a kind of innocent expectation, it is a kind of transcendent calmness, and a selfless and unrestrained dance with music. During the high school entrance examination, I once I was indifferent to you. After knowing my results, I was the first to tell you the good news. Only then did I realize that I have been with you through all the ups and downs. With your tolerance, my fingers jump as I please, and my emotions Express without reservation. I hold you in my arms, just like hugging an old friend who has been away for many years. The geese pass by without leaving a trace, and the wind blows invisible, day after day, year after year. You follow me and taste the spring and summer. Cool, you have witnessed the desolation of autumn and the cold of winter, and you never tire of listening to me and sharing my burdens. Thank you for being with me along the way. Even now, when it comes to the college entrance examination, I still refuse to leave you. I often have a cup of tea, a book, and a song. "Flower Burial Song" is a very fulfilling evening self-study. Every time I play it, I feel like I have come to the flower tomb and chanted with the Xiaoxiang concubine, "When the flowers fade, the flowers fly all over the sky, and the red fragrance disappears, who can pity me?"... After my thoughts wandered, I returned to intense study, as if I was carrying your infinite hopes. When I played you, I always felt a kind of glory that is both present and beautiful when I am not singing, guiding and comforting me. I have you all the way. , I am full of strength, and with you all the way, I will move forward... 5. Request for junior high school composition

Time flies, and we are about to enter the second grade of junior high school. Looking back on the ups and downs of life in the first grade of junior high school, I always have a feeling in my heart. A feeling of nostalgia. One year ago today we sat together, with a strange fear in our eyes; but today we play together, with happiness that belongs only to us in our eyebrows. In this year, we have experienced ups and downs together, and the dream-like life in the first grade of junior high school that we have walked together...

Sour

Still remember the beginning of the second semester

We were so motivated at the beginning. Won the first class and the third class in a row. But in the match with Class 5, the victory was with us

We missed the chance to be first. Our class is so strong and we always want to get the first place in the grade. The average score of mathematics in the monthly exams was first for several times, the paper structure load-bearing was first, the total score of the science and technology festival group was first,

first... all of these are witnesses of our glory. And this time

We lost to Class 5, which made us strong students sad and shed tears...

What an unforgettable game, what a wonderful game. ! Although the game is not long, its meaning is far-reaching.

How difficult it is for a class that has only been formed for less than half a year to be able to unite and fight for honor like a rope!

Sweet

In early summer in May, thin pieces

blocked the dazzling light of the sun. Our grade group went to

to carry out

This time the cross-country boys had 10 points, almost covering all corners of

, so the running distance was really long. long.

There were 23 boys’ teams participating in the competition. We only took fifth place last time. This time everyone wants to take first place. Like other students, 8 of the 10 boys in our team

and 2 prepared plant identification materials. There are 34 kinds of plants in total, and the photos of each plant are

printed out clearly. Distribute it to each team member, with an average of 3-4 cards per person. This may seem like a small thing, but it reflects our rigorous and comprehensive preparations.

The whistle is about to blow, and the students are all

preparing to run cross-country quickly to each point in the next time. Every student was able to persevere and reach the finish line with each other's support. It took us almost 34 minutes.

We won first place. The other five teams in my class also entered the top six in grade. This can be described as a new breakthrough in history.

Sitting in the car on the return trip, we felt something. No one felt tired, and everyone felt like seeds of joy were flying in their hearts. These seeds made us more and more confident in ourselves and the class. At the same time, preparing in advance also allowed us to experience the sweetness.

Bitter

School ends early every Tuesday. You can leave school around 3:20 pm. However, we have to spend some money to listen to the teacher's lectures at school. The class is not over until the quiet school. Sometimes, practicing the quiet school's *** will not block the teacher's ***. It can be done at about 6:30 School is over. In winter, it gets dark around 5:00,

Lesson

The temperature has dropped sharply, and the night lights on the playground have been turned on. Students

must wear gloves and

be fully equipped to protect yourself from the cold. It is only through our hard work that our class has achieved a lot in

:

Many people won awards,

2 people won awards,

Many people have won awards...

Only by adding bitterness to bitterness can sweetness be exchanged for sweetness!

It’s spicy

I’m about to enter the second grade of junior high school, and looking back on my life in the first grade of junior high school makes me feel spicy. It is also a kind of success that I can get to know and get along with these outstanding classmates and teachers.

Three years have passed since the first year of junior high school, and one-third of it has passed in the blink of an eye. It can be seen that time flies too fast.

In the first year of junior high school, we learned a lot of cultural knowledge, we experienced many legendary experiences, and we made many sincere friends... I hope we can continue to work hard and create a better world for Class 8 of 2006 tomorrow! Let’s continue to write a better chapter for our glory.

Just change it yourself. 6. Use details to describe interesting people. A 650-word junior high school composition

The most interesting thing is that the weather is very good today, the sun is shining, the wind is clear, and there are no clouds in the sky. I plan to go swimming in Tianyi Villa. , I asked my mother, and she readily agreed to it. I was very happy.

After I devoured my meal, I called and asked my good friend Xiao Wang to go to Tianyi Villa. We arrived there almost at the same time. After we bought the tickets, we went to the dressing room. We changed into swimming trunks very quickly, and then we went out to take a look. There were so many people. They were like dumplings in a big pot. I couldn’t count them because my skills were not very good. , but it was okay, so I went to the gap between the shallow water area and the deep water area and swam. I learned three types at a time, dog paddle, backstroke and breaststroke. I went to chase my good friend Xiao Wang in the deep water area. First I used breaststroke, then changed to backstroke, and finally when I was very close to him, I used dog paddle. When he saw that I was very close to him, he used his trump card - an adapted version of butterfly stroke, which accelerated instantly. We The distance widened. "You can't catch me anymore, bye bye."

Then he swam away, and I was instantly petrified, "This, this, this is unscientific!" "Haha" Xiao Wang laughed, Then I got angry and chased him with my best breaststroke. He took off his swimming goggles and came to find me. Fortunately, he didn't notice me. Just when he looked confused, I splashed water from behind him and he yelled, " Oops." His eyes were filled with water. "Haha!" He must have been "revenged" by me. "Wow haha!" Just when I was feeling proud, he counterattacked, put on his swimming goggles, and splashed me hard. "Oops!" I was "heavy hit" by him. When he saw that I had no fighting ability, he quickly retreated. , just when we were having fun, my mother urged: "It's getting dark, let's go home."

My good friend Xiao Wang and I reluctantly climbed up from the swimming pool, feeling Thinking: I will come back tomorrow to fight to the death with Xiao Wang! This thing is so interesting, I will definitely treasure it in my heart forever. 7. Looking for two junior high school essays 1. With wonderful detailed descriptions and character actions 2. Language descriptions with narration

Detailed descriptions - the golden key to make characters come alive. "Characters" are the soul of the article. However, the common characters in students' homework are often the same, without personality or vividness. The whole article seems dry and boring, lacking in appeal.

If you read these works carefully, you will find the same problem: they often just pursue to write something completely, while neglecting to describe it in vivid, concrete and meticulous details. The scope of detailed description is very wide, and its role is multi-faceted, but it is mainly used to depict the character and shape the character's image.

Each vivid detail is like a cell in the human body. Without it, people lose their lives; without details in an article, the characters lose their flesh and spirit. Writer Li Zhun said: "A detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene in revealing the character's characteristics."

As the saying goes, "The spirit is seen in the details." ". The creations of literary masters attach great importance to the description of details.

Lu Xun's "The True Story of Ah Q" contains a detailed description of Ah Q's drawing before execution: "It was time to draw a circle, but the pen in his hand was shaking, so the man spread the paper on the ground. Q bent down and tried his best to draw a circle. He was afraid of being laughed at, so he was determined to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It was almost closed when it shook, but it started to close again. He looked like a melon seed."

This detail of behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflects Ah Q's character traits - he still adhered to the "spiritual victory method" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can help but feel that Ah Q is ridiculous, sad, and pitiful? How could we not "sorrow for the misfortune and be angry for not fighting" and then think deeply about the bad nature of the people? This is not only true for Chinese writers, but also for foreign writers.

For example, Balzac's "Eugénie Grandet" writes that before Grandet's death, when the priest brought a gilded cross to his lips and asked him to kiss the icon of Christ, " But he made a horrifying gesture to grab the cross in his hand, and this last effort cost him his life." Only this small detail vividly painted the ugly image of this miser who was greedy and would not change until death.

It is the detailed description that makes the characters flesh and blood, with distinctive personalities and vivid images; with vivid characters, the whole article is full of vitality and has a strong appeal.

Of course, not all details in life are valuable, nor does it only need to be written "detailed". Good detailed descriptions must be useful, true, and typical.

It must serve to display the character's spiritual outlook and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the character's personality characteristics and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the character's personality characteristics. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in the colorful life.

Be a thoughtful person in life, and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects of your description. On the streets of Shaoxing, in the Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun paid close attention to observing the short-shirted gangs and long-shirted customers, and then he "drawn the silent souls of the people."

In a dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce sternly looked at the wandering prostitutes, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, preparing "Ulysses" that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to capturing those people and things that make their souls tremble, and melted them into chapters that will be passed down through the ages.

Capture the details, use the details, let this golden key work for you, and make your articles shine! An essay describing me and my teacher. I was lucky because I met her, my 3rd grade class teacher. As for me, I am a naughty little boy.

Don’t underestimate me. I am the “number one” at home. I say 1, but no one dares to say 2. Faced with my unreasonable troubles, my parents always don’t know whether to laugh or cry. I was well-known as a troublemaker in school, not to mention being a "regular customer" in the teacher's office. Even my parents were often "invited" for this purpose.

In this symposium between teachers, parents and students, facing their teachings, I "accepted them humbly and never changed them." I heard that the head teacher who has been with us for two years has been transferred. I have been wondering what the head teacher will be like in the new school year. A very stern old man? Still a young and energetic young man? Or... I can't wait to see the results.

School has finally started. On the first day of the new school year, she - about 1.55 meters tall, wearing a pink suit, walked energetically to the classroom with a file bag under her arm. My classmates told me that this was our new class teacher, but I turned a blind eye. He lay on the ground at the door and continued playing.

"Oh, it turns out to be a 'little girl'. This time the story of 'cat' and 'mouse' can be staged again," I was muttering quietly. Within a few steps, she walked up to me and said, "You must be Su Shibin from the 3rd grade class. You are so anxious to come to the door to greet the teacher!" I was surprised - the class hadn't started yet, how did she know me? ? At the same time, I was also very proud. It turned out that I was quite famous. Even the new teachers knew me.

After entering the classroom and introducing herself, she quickly took us into the first Chinese class of the new school year. I listened tirelessly for a while, and gradually felt that her class was interesting, rich in knowledge, and full of humorous jokes. It was vivid, interesting, and vivid.

This kind of class makes people relaxed and happy. For the first time, I feel like I want to listen to the teacher. In the following Chinese classes, I became more and more serious and immersed myself in it.

The mock exam for Unit 1 has arrived, but I was in a daze as soon as I got the test paper. My mind was empty because the foundation was so poor. You may not know that I was ranked last in every exam before. 1. When it was time to hand in the paper, my paper was almost blank.

What to do? The teacher paid a lot of attention to me, but I failed in the first exam. Suddenly, an idea flashed in my mind: It was my turn to be on duty in the teacher's office today, so I could take advantage of the teacher's after get off work... The test paper was handed out, and I scored 90 points. At the bottom of the test paper, I saw a line of red words: "Okay." That's it! The teacher is so happy for you, come on!" This is the first time I have been praised by the teacher. I feel a sense of satisfaction that I have never felt before, and at the same time my heart is pounding. Feel ashamed.

I don’t know if I did something wrong, had something in my heart, or something else. I felt that the teacher’s eyes were always on me during that class, as if she knew something. After returning home, it made me even more uneasy.

Day 2,. 8. Find an essay that describes the details

Personality lies in the details

Author: Zhao Changhe, "Middle School Chinese Language Forum" Issue 01, 2009

[Abstract] In many texts of Chinese textbooks, detailed descriptions reflect the author's writing personality and originality. This article conducts a detailed and in-depth analysis and discussion of some typical details in the textbooks, and makes a scientific summary.

[Keywords] Detailed description of Chinese textbooks, text research and teaching methods

1. Details, freeze an eternal moment

We often have this kind of reading experience . The passage of time often dilutes our reading impression of a work (part), but there are always some characters whose moments of voice, smile, words and deeds will be permanently fixed in our minds. We can’t forget the image of Yang Ersao’s “slender legs” and lonely “compasses” when she appeared in “Hometown”: When we talk about middle-aged Runtu, a muddy cry of “Master” always shakes our eardrums directly to our hearts. In "Blessing", there is a puppet picture of Mrs. Xianglin after she became a beggar, and in "Back View", the picture of my father who is so fat that it is difficult to move around buys oranges for me. These detailed descriptions not only have an indelible freezing effect on the image, but also have the function of superbly portraying the characters' personalities. Take the picture of group laughter in the Grand View Garden as an example. It’s the same smile. Shi Xiangyun’s smile is outgoing and cheerful, Lin Daiyu’s smile is reserved and delicate, Jia Baoyu’s smile is doting and indulgent, Xichun’s smile is pampered and innocent, and Mrs. Wang’s Aunt Xue’s smile is expressive. There is a difference between the hidden and the subject. Although there is no direct laughter in Tanchun and Yingchun, Tanchun's involuntarily grabbing the bowl is a sign of his outward aggressiveness, while the lack of movement in Yingchun is a sign of his inner haggardness.

There are many vivid descriptions of "hands" in the textbook, and every move of these hands naturally completes the description of the character. In "Lotus Lake", when Shui Sheng's sister-in-law heard the news that Shui Sheng was going to join the army, Wei Meizi cut her finger in shock, and sucked her finger with her mouth to hide it. Shui Sheng's happy but reluctant to leave emotion was calm and His reserved character is reflected in the unconscious movements of his hands. In Fang Ji's "Between Waves", the chairman's wave is full of wisdom and courage; in "Back", the two hands struggling to climb the platform are tightly clenched with tearful father's love; in "Hometown", Yang Ersao's hands resting on her thighs are flamboyant. In "Yulin Ling", "looking at each other with tears" and "holding hands" in "Speechless Swallowing" are the literati's lingering and talented scholars' passion; in "Medicine", Shen Laoshuan "hurriedly" touched the foreign money and "trembled" "The hand that "dare not" take the steamed buns after handing over foreign money is a sign of kindness, honesty, and cowardice; Uncle Kang's series of "grabbing," "pulling," "wrapping," "stuffing," "grabbing," and "pinching" are a sign of irritability and ferocity. ,greedy.

2. Details, rendering, and foreshadowing reveal character

Details can be repeatedly rendered and foreshadowed layer by layer to magnify and highlight a certain aspect of the character's personality, and at the same time, it can also reveal the character's situation. changes. Show the change of character's personality.

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