Composition for the fourth grade of primary school 400 words: pond in the community

Keywords: 400 words in the fourth grade of community pond primary school

Words: 400 words composition

This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 400 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The topic is "Ponds in the Community". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. There are two ponds in our community. The pond is crystal clear. When the pebbles are illuminated by sunlight, they will glow. White, silver, black and gray are pebbles. There are little red goldfish in the pond, one, two, three ... then, many little black fish will jump out of the hole. How can you see them if you don't observe them carefully? These lively and clever little fish like to play hide-and-seek with us. As long as we blink at them, they will disappear as soon as they flick their tails. Occasionally, leaves fall from the trees and fall into the pond, with yellow, green and red ... these leaves make the pond look beautiful! I like the pond in my community. Teacher's comment: The pond in your community is really beautiful. You described the beautiful scenery of the pond to us, and we also felt the beautiful colors. The article describes the theme closely and starts with the pond in the community. "The pond is crystal clear. When the pebbles are illuminated by sunlight, they will glow." "These lively and clever little fish like to play hide-and-seek with us. As long as we blink at them, they will disappear as soon as they flick their tails. " "Occasionally leaves fall from the trees and fall into the pond, yellow, green and red ... these leaves make the pond look beautiful." The beauty of the pond is divided into three parts. Each one is well described by our little author, with fluent language and beautiful words. Such a pond will naturally "I love the pond in my community" and "it will glow", and this sentence should be followed by a period. (Outstanding teacher in China, Xue Le: Teacher Rodina)