China's resources are everywhere ... (Modify the sick sentence)

Revision: Change "swoops down" to "reflect", "enrich" to "fully", "and so on" are all repetitive, and "extremely rich in resources" and "extremely" are removed.

Revised paragraph:

China's resources are everywhere. These resources often come into our eyes, such as famous aphorisms on the walls of our campus, warnings full of human feelings, attractive advertising words on the streets, flowers and trees on both sides of the road, rural field scenery, rain, snow and frost in nature and so on. As long as we are serious, we will find that these resources are very rich.

Extended data:

Matters needing attention in correcting sick sentences of primary school students

First, the principle of modifying sick sentences

Change fluency and correctness (without changing the original meaning of the sentence)

Second, the method of modifying sick sentences

Add (add words), delete (delete redundant words), adjust (adjust word order) and change (replace words)

Third, the trick to modify sick sentences:

1, abbreviation syntax.

It refers to shortening and simplifying a sick sentence, removing the secondary components (attributive, adverbial and complement) of the sentence, and retaining the main components (subject, predicate and object) of the sentence, so as to judge the cause of the sentence and make it a "medicine" for the disease.

Xing 'an Mountain in summer is the most beautiful season of the year. In the condensed syntax, it is simplified to "Xing 'an Mountains are seasons", which obviously means that "Xing 'an Mountains" and "seasons" are not collocated properly. Correct changes: delete the "season" or change it to Xing 'an Mountain. Summer is the most beautiful season of the year.

2. classification.

Refers to the classification of sick sentences according to different defects. To use this method, we must first remember all kinds of ill sentences (common ones are: improper collocation, incomplete sentences, inconsistency, inverted word order, repeated words, improper use of words, improper classification, etc. ); When you encounter a specific ill sentence, sit down accordingly.

Millions of teenagers in Qian Qian took part in tree planting activities. First of all, it is judged that this ill sentence belongs to the type of "word repetition". "Qian Qian Absolute" and "Countless" appear repeatedly in the sentence, and you can delete one at will when you modify it.

When touching a paragraph, you might as well read it through first and think about what it is mainly about and the relationship between each sentence. Then find out the mistakes in the paragraph sentence by sentence, such as typos, punctuation, improper collocation, repeated meaning, inconsistency, reverse order, etc., and mark the wrong places to make corrections.