English written expression examples

As the high school entrance examination is approaching, English review should focus more on the practice of medium and difficult questions. Today I will talk to the students about written expression. Writing is a form of comprehensive English proficiency, which reflects the student's vocabulary; ability to use words, phrases and sentences, and logical thinking ability. The following is a topic about physical exercise and a letter to parents. From the conception, article structure to writing method, we will look at how to complete such a written expression. Example 1: With the development of Sunshine Sports across the country, the government has attached great importance to the problem of declining physical fitness of middle school students and proposed this slogan: "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". After the students participated in various physical exercises, gratifying changes occurred on campus. They strengthened their bodies, enhanced their learning effects, and enriched their campus life. Please report on the school's implementation of this activity. Note: 1. The number of words is about 80-100. 2. The article is required to have a reasonable structure, smooth content, and coherent sentences. Vocabulary reference: build up one’s body strength reduce diseases Conception method: 1. Carefully read, understand and think about all the information points given in the question. Information points are extracted from the text around the prompts. 2. The information points of this topic should be: a. Sunshine Sports; b. The government attaches great importance to the health of middle school students; c. The slogan proposed; d. Participated in various physical exercises; e. Conducive to physical fitness; f. Enhanced learning Effect; g. Campus life is enriched. Writing method: 1. Arrange the logical relationship between the above information points in the text. 2. Use the vocabulary, phrases, and fixed sentence patterns you have mastered to express all information points in the article. (the Sunny Sports, pay attention to the health of the students, raise the slogan, take part in the exercise, build up one's body strength, reduce diseases, make study effective, school life, colourful) 3. Add personal comments at the end of the article ( point of view).

The following is the student's composition: (1) As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved. Let's take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases. (2) Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases. Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government. At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look! The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it .The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better. The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let's keep on doing it. Using rich vocabulary, accurate tenses, combination of simple and compound sentences, and reasonable ideas to make the article fluent and coherent, it demonstrates solid English grammar skills and comprehensive application ability. Example 2: Health is very important to each of us, but your parents are busy working every day and ignore this problem. You are very worried about them. Please write a letter to them using this topic and the prompts. Tips: 1. Walk to work instead of driving or taking a car; 2. Go to the gym at least once a week to exercise, play ball, or swim; 3. Eat healthy; 4. Don’t work too late and go to bed early.

Requirements: 1. The essay has a complete structure, coherent meaning, fluent language, accurate grammar, and logic; 2. About 80-100 words; 3. The beginning and end have been given and are not included in the total number of words. Concept method: 1. Find information points. 2. The information points of this question should be: a. As a son (daughter), you are worried about the physical condition of your father (mother); b. It is best to walk to work; c. Go to the stadium at least once a week to engage in physical exercise (ball games, swimming, etc.); d. healthy diet; e. go to bed early and don’t stay up late. Writing method: 1. First of all, talk about worries about the physical condition of the father (mother). 2. Then elicit what you want your parents to do. 3. As a junior, when making suggestions and requests to your parents, you must pay attention to your tone and do not give orders. 4. Pay attention to the writing format of the letter.

Student's composition: (1) Dear Dad (Mum), You're so busy every day that you don't pay much attention to your health. I'm worried about your health all the time. I'd like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn't far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You'd better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What's more, it's necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) (2) Dear Dad (Mum), You're so busy every day that you don't pay much attention to your health. I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far. What about walking there because it can make you much stronger? I'd like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep. I'm looking forward to receiving your letter. Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) These two essays use the words I'd like to..., Why not...? It is important to do..., Try not to do..., I hope that..., What about doing...?I' d like you to do..., You'd better do... and other polite request sentences

, expressing the author's concern for his father (mother), complete information points, substantial content, and paying attention to the ending form of the letter