Behavioral writing composition

1. Write a composition with the theme of behavior, 600 words. After making mistakes repeatedly, I also succeeded in turning mistakes into mistakes.

For example, when I was 9 years old, I didn't finish my homework once, and I was still playing computer there. When my father or mother asked me if I had finished my homework, I simply said, "Yes!" " As a result, 9 pm on Sunday. dad

Mom fell asleep, and I was still playing computer there. Mom got up and saw that I was still playing computer and told me to go to bed at once. I have to turn off the computer, turn off the lights and go back to my bed. Thinking in my heart: How should I do this homework? but

what am I supposed to do？ Will the teacher tell your parents if you don't write? I remember that my classmates didn't do their homework before, so I want to finish the rest. I thought to myself: I am really "smart", hehe.

I went to get my homework. I rummaged through my schoolbag like a thief, looking for homework everywhere. After finishing my homework, I'm going to go to bed and make up slowly, and then listen to music. I turned on the light again and walked slowly in the light.

Make up homework. Time goes by, and I have just finished my homework. What should I do? Then I'll write it quickly As a result, my mother opened the door to get tomorrow's clothes and saw me making up my homework in bed. Anxiously asked, "Your homework?"

Isn't it over? ""I just finished writing it. I want to read some books. I have to take a math exam tomorrow. " I spoke in a hurry. Mother said incredulously, "Then let me have a look. "My heart is pounding and I don't know what will happen.

Yao. Mother picked up my exercise book and frowned and said, "Is there something wrong with your handwriting?" I didn't even see the problem. "I cried like a homeless child. Mother asked me why I was crying. Because I wear makeup.

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In a book, I saw such a sentence: "It is not difficult to correct mistakes and eradicate them." "Genius and great men make mistakes, and mistakes don't make them cringe. What is terrible is not a mistake, but a mistake. " If you want to think of a sentence in Zuo Zhuan, which sentence is "Who is wrong?" It would be great if it could be changed. "

2. Writing a composition from the detailed behavior Balzac said: "Only the details constitute the value of the work." The description of true details is an important means to portray characters and achieve typicality. So how can we make the details of the article shine? There are mainly the following points:

First, choose typical details.

Details are the details of the main characters and the key to show the theme and soul, so you must choose details. Such as that portrait in Kong Yiji:

He is tall, his face is pale, his wrinkles are often mixed with scars, and he has a messy white beard. Although I am wearing a robe, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it hasn't been mended or washed for more than ten years.

This passage captures the typical details of "gown". Wearing a gown is a symbol of literati in the imperial examination era, but Kong Yiji's gown is "dirty and torn", and an impoverished intellectual appears before our eyes, which highlights Kong Yiji's pedantry and numbness.

Second, mobilize all kinds of senses and observe things carefully.

To make the description vivid, we need to mobilize our senses and observe things carefully when observing things. For example, writing about flowers in the garden (arousing various senses), we can write like this:

The crescent moon on the horizon exudes a faint glow and quietly sprinkles in the garden. In the dim moonlight, the colorful flowers and green leaves all seem dim during the day. At this time, a few newly blooming epiphyllum are pure and clean, emitting a wisp of fragrance and refreshing. Ah! There is also a bud in bud. Will it bloom? I took it for a long time. Suddenly, the bud moved ... and finally a small hole opened unconsciously at the tip of the bud. Then, the hole slowly opened, and suddenly the petals gradually spread out one by one. The petals are carved like crystals, and even the veins can be seen clearly; The flower heart is as white as tender, and the lace shows a layer of goose yellow.

The author described the flowers in detail. The whole process of texture, smell, color, grain and bud opening makes people feel as if they were in the scene, and the writing is delicate and vivid.

Third, carefully temper the text.

In the description of details, we should choose the right words and carefully temper them to get twice the result with half the effort, and even convey the spirit in one word. For example:

Open the door gently, squint and see what I do through the crack of the door.

The words "pull", "rice" and "head" are well used.

(2) A gust of wind swept (without "scraping" or "blowing").

(3) The leaves on the tree floated all over the floor (no need to "fall"), and a leaf whirled in the rain and fell to the ground.

To get to the platform over there, you have to cross the railway, jump down and climb up. Father is a fat man, so it is naturally more troublesome to walk there. Wearing a small black hat, a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe, he hobbled to the railway and slowly leaned forward. It's not too difficult. But it is not easy for him to climb the platform over there when he crosses the railway. He climbed up with his hands and his feet shrank upward; His fat body leans slightly to the left, showing signs of hard work. At this time, I saw his back, and my tears soon flowed down ...-Zhu Ziqing's back.

A series of action descriptions have been carefully tempered by the author with vivid words.

Fourth, clever use of rhetoric.

Clever use of metaphor, personification, parallelism, exaggeration and other rhetorical devices can enhance the vividness of language, turn abstraction into concrete, and turn intangible into tangible. Such as Zhu Ziqing's Spring:

(1) (Rain) is like cow hair, like a flower needle, like rain, and it is densely woven. There is a thin layer of smoke on other people's roofs.

(2) (Spring) is like a doll that just landed. It's new from head to toe and still growing. (Spring) Like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile. He is like a strong young man with iron arms and waist, leading us forward.

Composition is life, which needs observation and thinking. Observation is to pay attention to the details of life; Thinking should be inspired by the details of life. Only by observing life with keen sensibility can we write a detailed description of success.

The sound of emergency class has just sounded, and the students have returned to their seats. As we all know, today is a special day. The teacher didn't start the lecture at once, but wrote a few big words on the blackboard: We solemnly mourn and unite the strength of the nation. A few minutes later, there was a shrill alarm in the distance, and a voice came from the radio: please all teachers and students stand up and observe three minutes of silence for the compatriots killed in the Sichuan earthquake. Time seems to have returned to that terrible era ... On the afternoon of May 12, 2008, when people were immersed in the joy of work and study, everyone didn't know that a disaster was brewing quietly and people came unnoticed. /kloc-at 0/4: 28, a disaster fell from the sky at this terrible moment. The 8.0 earthquake centered on Wenchuan, Sichuan swallowed people's beautiful dreams. The earthquake destroyed people's homes and affected many provinces, cities and regions. Sudden power failure, traffic paralysis, mountain collapse, river flooding, people in the disaster area are in dire straits. Wenchuan, a little-known place on this map, is rarely mentioned. It suddenly became the focus of people's attention at home and abroad, that is, at that time, people carried forward the spirit of great love and extended a helping hand to the people in the disaster area. The State Council immediately issued an order to send domestic search and rescue elites to the disaster area. They take "unity is strength, earthquake relief" and "time is life, disaster is command" as the main goal, and race against time to save the victims. At the same time, volunteers from all walks of life volunteered to rush to the disaster area for earthquake relief. In the front line of earthquake resistance, love stories emerge all the time. A doctor who fought day and night saved countless patients who were pulled off the line of life and death. Speaking of his family, he burst into tears, and his wife and daughter were in the ruins in front of him. What a good parting, what a good love! A boy of 12 years old, after escaping from the ruins, lost his beloved parents when he was young, and only one sister lived alone. In order to prevent his sister from being injured, he walked on his back 12 hours. He was twelve years old, an age that should have spoiled in his parents' arms, but he matured prematurely because of a disaster. His heart is full of care and love! He, and he, are great, and they are all interpreting the greatness of love all the time. Love is infinite. As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will be full of spring. The siren is still ringing, but it doesn't feel harsh. It seems to be a mourning for the unfortunate victims; Love is still passing, but I don't think the world is cold. It seems that the world is in the spring season. The earth of love is full of sunshine, and everyone has a paradise of love in their hearts. In that heaven of love-love is boundless!

4. Composition about behavior The most beautiful behavior composition

In the morning, the cold wind roared and a cleaner was sweeping the floor. From time to time, she tears off the waste paper stuck on the wall by hand. If some paper can't be torn off, she will scrape it off slowly with a knife, revealing a white wall. When she approached the last piece of paper, she looked at it, didn't tear it, but smiled and packed up her tools and left.

An old man who ran in the morning approached the newspaper and whispered, "That cleaner was so lazy that he left without tearing the last one." The old man reached out to tear while watching. As soon as he turned a corner, he stopped and stood like a stone. When she finished reading the contents of the newspaper, she ran away with a smile.

Where does a little boy go to school? He stopped, looked intently, took the glue out of his schoolbag and stuck it again. Then he goes to school on foot.

Many people came and went, ready to tear the paper, but no one tore it, and they all walked away with a smile, even the police didn't tear it. Because the sunshine in the crack of the cloud is shining on the paper, the four big characters are clear at a glance: "mother-seeking notice."

By rights, the cleaner should not hesitate to tear up the paper. There is no need for the little boy to stick the torn corner back, and there is no reason for the police on duty not to tear up the paper ... However, they have not torn it off. They are all moved by their children's love for their mothers, and no one wants to let a child who has lost his mother lose the opportunity to find his mother again.

Write a composition on the topic of thought and behavior. Thought and behavior have not contributed to the library for a long time, otherwise, they won't feel extremely bored and empty these days. Last night, I went to Yu Xiansheng's blog and saw a story he wrote recently about his childhood study. At that time, I left a comment that "Rome was not built in a day", which may not be appropriate, but if there was no obsession with books at that time, how could it be today? "Today, accompanied by my classmates, I came to the bookstore of our school. I was going to look at it and leave, because I haven't bought a book for a long time. There are many new books on the shelves, familiar and unfamiliar, domestic and foreign, and everything. Although my major is somewhat different from literature, it is still difficult to convince my original intention. This is the new friend I finally decided to invite back. The classmate said that you didn't buy the opposite book at first > Really? The answer I gave him was that reading that book might make people feel pessimistic, but it's better to read something positive. Of course, I haven't read Dale Carnegie's book, and I don't know what kind of thoughts he expressed in it. I chose Og Mandino because his words touched me: Hope is the first step to achieve the goal. If a person has no hope, he will never intend to do anything, and he will certainly accomplish nothing in the end. Behavior is the flower of thought, and happiness and sadness are the fruit of thought; Whether a person can harvest sweet fruit or bitter fruit depends on the seeds sown. That's good. I remember my father once told me that I should be responsible for my actions when I grow up, because I have my own thoughts when I grow up. Facts have proved my father's advice. At noon, my friend said on the phone that my birthday was coming and asked me what gift to give. This birthday is very special. After this birthday, she will really be an adult. I don't know what to send. Maybe I can't give her too many surprises, but I hope I can express my thoughts. Mandino said; Man is a cultivator of his own quality, a shaper of life and a builder of fate. This is an unmistakable fact. China people have been talking about inner cultivation since ancient times, and now there are so many masters of Confucius and Mencius, all of whom started from their own cultivation. What's more, what about the pursuers of our cultural essence? We often hear people complain around us that the real college life is not as good as they once imagined. The implication is that the reality has let us down, and the university is sorry for us. We entered the house by mistake, didn't we? Admittedly, I once had similar thoughts, but now I can confidently tell everyone who read this article that I have not gone to the wrong house and my college time is too precious. Don't think I'm lying, I want to tell you that she doesn't have her former university in our reality. She is my dream, a dream that always encourages us to move forward, so she is beautiful. But why do we feel disappointed when our dreams come true? Because there is no dream in my heart and no motivation to move forward, I will complain about the day when the monk hit the bell. In fact, we should still have dreams in our hearts now. In fact, our life path is only a short beginning now. We must not let ourselves lose at the starting line. Our tomorrow, our life, will only be wonderful because of our dreams. As the saying goes; Master, come in. Learning art depends on individuals. Some words, like others, are by no means groundless! Separation of Thought and Behavior China preached many books, but the effect was always poor, so he came to a conclusion that the world was getting worse.

I don't know if the world is getting worse, but the bad effect is always true. I have always been quite dissatisfied with ideological propaganda. In ancient times, there were many people whose livelihood was ideological propaganda. However, there were many contrary examples in the past dynasties. Of course, any reform will end in failure.

In the final analysis, China people's thoughts and behaviors are divided, which leads to any reform ideas originating from the ideological field, which have run into a wall in reality, because there is no connection between thought and reality, and the two fields of thought and behavior have their own mechanisms and operating rules. Because of this relationship, China has a lot of hypocrisy and homesickness.

China culture is high-profile, hypocritical and duplicitous. The development of thought and behavior is very uneven, and the thought develops rapidly. Even old people and children can sing slogans, and they are surprisingly unified. Ancient illiterate women also knew how to preach chastity.

But in reality, it is impossible, and it is difficult to form a code of conduct that can be observed. Since the Spring and Autumn Period, China's thoughts have been in a position of opposition to reality, that is to say, the thoughts of a hundred schools of thought are critical, trying to correct people's bad behavior at that time.

Confucius said that benevolence was aimed at the universal tyranny at that time; Han Fei's statement is aimed at the disorder and misconduct at that time; When I said inaction, I saw that the policies adopted by the rulers at that time were inappropriate. They're getting worse. It's best not to do it. Later, the spread and evolution of these theories are inseparable from the purpose of saving the disadvantages of the contemporary era.

Buddhism introduced into the Han Dynasty is also to teach people liberation, and its premise is that life is painful. As for Taoism, the same is true.

In the era of Confucius, thought still has some practical characteristics. Later thinkers can only sit on paper and talk about it, and they are stuck in the study all day looking through ancient books, which has nothing to do with reality. Scholars, on the other hand, shake their heads more and more and are despised by secular people. Since the feudal autocratic society, the rulers have been very strict in restraining thoughts, and their thoughts have become more and more divorced from reality. On the one hand, they let thinkers enter the air-to-air field, on the other hand, they let thinkers speculate and serve politics.

Both of them make thoughts and behaviors more divided and irreversible. Since the idea of official participation in control, popular and influential ideas have been transformed, other ideas are basically difficult to survive, and the instrumentality of ideas has been continuously strengthened.

The reformed ideas always teach people how to obey, that is, to concentrate the rights and interests of the lower class on the upper class step by step. This idea is difficult to implement because it is not in the interest of most people. However, due to the official control of imperial examinations and education, his thoughts were spread through examinations.

Communication is tantamount to saying that it has been instilled in people's minds, and it is not necessarily implemented in behavior. This is why old people and children can sing high notes.

For example, watching TV commercials, day after day, I also remember "Love VCD" and "Love VCD".

6. Composition on Behavior Habits French scholar Bacon once said: "Habits are the masters of life, and people should pursue good habits." As a middle school student, I think we should develop good behavior habits.

Successful people have some good behaviors to persist in for a long time, form habits and form nature. Just say Lu Xun! He has formed a good habit of not being late since childhood. He told himself to hurry up and carved the word "early" on his desk. After a long period of persistence, he finally developed good habits and later became a famous writer in China. Nowadays, many students are not only late, but even absent from class. This shows how important it is to form good habits!

We should also form good study habits. Some students don't study hard, so they often don't get high marks. Some students always play on weekends and always leave their homework until Sunday night. This is a matter of habit. And if you can't form good habits, don't listen carefully in class, don't talk enthusiastically, and don't care about what you don't understand, these habits will make your grades drop. Therefore, it is necessary to make corrections from various aspects, such as: listening carefully in class, finishing homework carefully, and having time to read extracurricular books, so that academic performance can rise.

Ping always sees many people spitting and littering in the street, but he is not ashamed at all. Why can you always see signs in Chinese that say "Don't spit" and "Don't litter" abroad? This is because some people do not develop good behavior habits, which brings shame to our people. So we must form good habits.

Confucius said that "small people succeed, habits become nature", which means that the habits formed when they were young are as firm as when they were born. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator, said, "What is education? In a simple sentence, it is to develop good habits. " Ye Shengtao believes that the purpose of cultivating children is to form good habits. The more natural the habit, the better. The stronger the ability, the better.

Good habits should be cultivated, bad habits should be corrected, good habits should be added and bad habits should be reduced. In fact, it is not difficult to form a habit. The important thing is to persevere. Many people always give up halfway after cultivating habits, which makes old habits come back.

Students, you should know how important habits are to a person! For our life, let's develop good behavior habits together!

7. I can write a composition 1 with my ability. These three words are always on my lips, because I always think I am the best and unique, but what really makes me understand these three words is her, a lovely little girl.

It was a cold night, roaring, and the sky was covered with dark clouds, so dark. I walked alone under the street lamp, looking at the gray sky, and my mood was even darker.

Suddenly a flash of lightning flashed across the earth, and the rumbling thunder muffled. Hey! The teacher lost her old smile when she failed the monthly exam. That's why I feel the seriousness of the situation, maybe! This is just a make-up exam before the final exam. What will happen after the exam? I don't know. Who can tell me? It has already rained. I took out my azure umbrella from my schoolbag and gently opened it. I'm really scared. What if I fail the final exam? Looking up, the gloomy sky was covered with a touch of blue. Seeing the warm blue makes me feel much better, but I feel indescribable pain ... gradually, I lose confidence.

Although "since God has given talents, let them find jobs!" I really can't convince myself that I'm better than others with some hair noodles. Although "confident people are the most attractive", I really dare not take that precious step.

Although "everyone is the only work of God", I gradually believe that I am casual. Because I am ordinary, I don't have amazing looks, I don't have superior family background, I don't have dexterous piano fingers, I don't, I don't ... I think many of them are not excellent in the eyes of others.

I am like an ugly duckling ... the rain is getting heavier and heavier, hitting the umbrella and ringing like a string of notes, but I have no intention of enjoying it at this time, and a thin figure is shaking in front of my eyes. Isn't that the little girl next door? Why are you still outside so late? I shouted at her to cover her up, but she didn't seem to hear me and didn't even look back.

I'm a little angry. He suddenly slipped. I ran very fast and tried to catch her, but I fell down myself. It hurts! I really wanted to cry at that time. She has got up and turned to see me.

She ran to my side and smiled at me and said, "Sister, get up when you fall. No big deal. You can do it. "

It dawned on me that she was right. I had to stand up when I fell. I got up and patted the rain on my body, hugged her and walked forward unswervingly. I won't cry even if it hurts again. I can stand up, I can do it! How many tears and sweat did the ugly duckling shed before becoming a swan? When she saw it flying beautifully in the blue sky, no one knew its expectation and tears in the dark.

If I were just a epiphyllum: I would fight the night with the courage of soldiers and write down the true meaning of life with youthful demeanor. In fact, youth itself is priceless. In the world of young people, grains of sand will be ground into pearls and stones will grow into gems.

So, I want to say, "I can do it! Even if it is not recognized by the world, I will reward myself with a smile! " I can do it. "People, the biggest enemy is yourself. As long as you believe you can do it, you are the winner. " This is my favorite sentence.

Every time I see it and the report card that is no longer clear before going to bed, a dream-like past emerges in front of my eyes. I knew I was a silly girl from school.

Inferiority, don't want to contact and associate with people. My classmates and teachers all look down on me as an ugly and stupid person.

In this way, every time I row seats, I can only envy the smug expressions of the top students sitting in the front row, but I am nearsighted and casually stuffed into the corner of the last row. Almost all the people sitting in the last row are naughty boys. Plus, I can't see the words on the blackboard in class, so I can only stare blankly at the teacher, my mind is blank, and my grades are even worse.

Inferiority, I simply sat in the last row. The years slipped quietly under my feet, and my boat of life ran aground on the gravel beach before it broke down.

The most unforgettable thing is that after that exam, the class teacher who has always regarded grades as life held my thin report card with trembling hands. Suddenly, he tore it to pieces and pressed it at me with a curse. "Students like you only deserve to sit in the last row." Maybe the roaring paper aroused my long-lost self-esteem. I rushed to the door, determined to work hard. I can do it! I stuck the pieces together and stuck them on the bed to remind myself of my humiliation at all times. I bought a cheap electronic watch and tied it to my arm, vowing that as long as I was awake, I would never waste a minute.

Listen attentively in class, you can't see, do you still have ears? I write down every knowledge point in my notes and chew it a little after class. Fortunately, there is an empty table in the back. After class, I read with my back to the whole class! Write! No one noticed the change of my humble self, and I didn't show it to them. I just want to prove "I can do it!" "In this way, in another exam, my incredible grades stunned the whole class.

The score has also become a qualification certificate for sitting in the front row. When I sat in those top students' seats, I understood that there was only room in the last row in the world, but no one would ever sit in the last row. As long as you believe you can do it, you are the winner.

Facing the broken report card, I turned and saw the rising sun. It is so beautiful and brilliant. Facing the sun and tomorrow, I want to shout: "I can do it!" " " .

8. Does location determine behavior, or does behavior determine location? Write a composition. Behavior affects location. Recently, I read an article: "Observing passengers of the same age between 30 and 40, first-class passengers often read books, while business-class passengers mostly read magazines and work with notebooks, while economy-class passengers mostly read newspapers, watch movies, play games and chat. At the airport, most people in the VIP room are reading books, while ordinary waiting areas are playing with mobile phones. So, what is the position that affects behavior? I think behavior affects position, and behavior determines fate. Some people say that "thoughts determine words, words produce behaviors, behaviors create habits, habits determine character, and character affects fate". This is really a wise saying. Everyone wants to succeed and get ahead, but they don't know that failure is often because they don't develop good behavior habits. It is no use sighing. It is better to find out the reasons and develop good behavior habits. Classmate, if I do it,