Excellent composition comments

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1. The article uses rich imagination and colorful language to present... to the readers

2. The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple

5. The wording in this article is accurate and strict, the language is plain and natural, and the use of metaphors and personifications makes the article even better

6. The main feature of this essay is the narration of specific details, the true description, the vivid and vivid It has true feelings and uses rhetorical techniques such as metaphor and personification to write... very vividly and express...'s love for...

7. It is impressive that primary school students can have such an experience

8 . Use the metaphor of... well

9. Use multiple senses to describe very carefully

10. Briefly explain the time, place and result...

11. Language The concise and standardized opening is attractive

12. …begins with... and tells the more innovative causes and consequences

13. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; the key descriptions... leave a deep impression on people Impression

14. Starting with a scene metaphor is quite innovative; starting with a flashback exaggerates the artistic conception

15. Going straight to the topic at the beginning is also a way of writing

16. Beginning The use of very lively personification makes the beginning seem lively

17. The rhetorical question at the beginning attracts readers

18. The beginning goes straight to the topic and makes it clear at a glance

19. The wording of the title at the beginning is very attractive

20. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article; Comments on excellent composition 2

1. The content is mostly outlined in lines and lacks point-style Detailed description.

2. It is inconsistent with the flavor of the times and the content is too outdated.

3. The theme is focused, the center is clear, and the intention is clear.

4. The views are clear and the likes and dislikes are clear, making it clear at a glance.

5. The theme is directly highlighted in the content, clear and concise, without any redundancy.

6. The theme is serious, the thoughts are noble, and the ambition is strong.

7. The center is not clear enough and the intention is not clear enough.

8. The theme is vague, the meaning of the text is vague, and the purpose of writing is unclear.

9. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough and the words are not true.

10. The expression is not clear and persuasive.

11. The theme is not serious enough and there are still dross in the thought.

12. The plot has twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curves and beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

13. The plot has strong twists and turns, and unexpected things happen in ordinary life, which can attract readers' attention.

14. The plot changes do not fall into the clichés, and suspense occasionally arises suddenly, and the twists and turns are unexpected. The development of events reflects the author's innovative ideas.

15. The plot develops relatively slowly and lacks a certain ups and downs.

16. The plot changes are bland and lack new ideas.

17. The plot is straightforward, without any suspense, and the narrative is straightforward and like a running account.

18. The process is detailed, but the ending is brief and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable and gives people the impression of a tiger

19. The beginning and the end.

20. The concept is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, and it cannot reflect the reality of life. Excellent essay comments 3

Chinese characters are an indispensable part of our lives.

Look! Billboards on the street, school slogans, factory slogans... all have the footprints of Chinese characters. Chinese characters allow us to read popular poems and read endlessly memorable articles... Chinese characters are also very interesting!

Once, my younger brother came to me with a question, "Japanese "What is the word "plus one stroke"? When I looked for it, I found many, such as: Jiu, Mu, Dian, Bai, Dan, Tian, ??etc. Another time, a classmate was transferred to our class. When the teacher asked him to introduce himself, he did not directly say his last name, but asked us to guess a riddle: "Add one to the left is a thousand, and minus one to the right is a thousand." "The students thought about it for a long time but couldn't figure it out. Finally, I guessed the word "Ren" in a task and finally guessed the new classmate's surname correctly.

The homophony of Chinese characters is also very interesting. Look! Confucius moved house - only books; nephew lit lanterns - as usual; steamed rice cakes on August 15th - early; lit mosquito coils under the bed - nothing to do; frozen tofu - difficult to handle...

< p> Haha, Chinese characters are interesting, right? Today, I will also guess a word puzzle for you: The sky is as big as it is, but people are not as big as it (guess a word). Win prizes if you guess correctly!

If you want to explore more mysteries, please swim in the ocean of Chinese characters! Maybe you will be the next person to discover another secret of Chinese characters! < /p>

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The language is plain and cannot describe excellent compositions. Comments 4

In the beautiful kingdom of Chinese characters, each Chinese character has its own style, one horizontal and one vertical. , one stroke and one stroke. They are like happy elves. In real life, you can't leave them no matter where you go.

Whenever I open the book, I feel like an elf in the kingdom of Chinese characters, allowing me to see the exquisite text showing its differences. The beautiful words and sentences in the book inspired my interest in learning characters; the billboards from all walks of life on the streets made me realize the power of Chinese characters, because with them, the world is wonderful because of them, and they make human life more enjoyable. Prosperity and prosperity.

Chinese characters have become the dominant player in our lives. No matter what industry we are in, Chinese characters are inseparable, including language communication in our daily lives, etc., all of which are inseparable from Chinese characters. I once saw " The story of "taking rice from the heart of heaven" tells the story of the Huns from the north who were about to attack the Central Plains and sent a "battle list". The emperor took it apart and saw that the battle form only had four words: "天心吃米", which means to seize our country and take the throne of the king. As a result, He Tang, an official in the palace, added one stroke to each of the four words. , "Tianxin takes rice" became "I may not dare to come", and then the original letter was returned to the person who came. As a result, the marshal leading the Xiongnu army thought that the Central Plains did not dare to fight, and urgently ordered his troops to retreat.

From this story, we can’t completely grasp the breadth and depth of Chinese characters, but I hope to use more brains, study seriously, and use Chinese characters better and more appropriately in future studies.

Comments:

This article has a complete structure, a prominent center, and the right selection of materials. But the sentences are not smooth, such as "I am like an elf in the kingdom of Chinese characters, allowing me to see the beautiful words showing their differences." With a little editing it would be an excellent article. Excellent essay comments 5

Xiao Hao stopped in front of the small tree planted by his grandfather.

"Little tree! You are standing here all alone and helpless. Who are your relatives?"

"Your grandfather planted me here and gave me to you. In my life, he is my relative, he is my grandfather!"

"No, no, you are a tree, my grandfather is a human being, how can a person and a tree be a relative?"

"Wrong, wrong, I am not a tree, you are the tree!"

"What, I am a tree? How do I look like a tree?"

"You Aren’t their hands just like branches? Aren’t their fruits just two round black dates—eyes? Aren’t their two ears the bird’s nests on the tree?”

Xiaohao raised his hands, Blinking his eyes, touching his ears, and nodding, he thought Xiaoshu was right.

"Then I am a tree, what are you?"

"Haha! I am you!"

The more Xiao Hao listened, the more confused he became: " I am you, you are me!"

"What grandpa planted was not a tree, but his expectations for you, and you are both a human and a tree. It takes time and training to become a man and a tree. You are just a little tree now!"

Xiao Hao understood: "Haha! I am just a little tree of the new century!"

Comments: This article uses dialogue to convey ideas. , kind and natural. In the article, trees are used as metaphors for people, and people are used as metaphors for trees, which is vivid and vivid. "Grandpa did not plant a tree, but his expectations for you, and you are both a human and a tree. It takes time and training to become an adult and become a tree. Now you are just a small tree!" This sentence is the finishing touch and sublimates the meaning of the article. Purpose. Comments on Excellent Compositions 6

1. The rhetorical question at the beginning attracts readers

2. The topic at the beginning is clear at a glance

3. The wording of the question at the beginning is very attractive

4. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;

5. ...A brief description of the wonderful place; combining points and aspects

6. A brief introduction The situation transitions naturally to the next paragraph;

7. Situation description arouses suspense;

8. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and vivid

9. Briefly describe the antecedents to pave the way

10. You can add dialogue or some psychological description to this part

11. It is more appropriate to change... to...

12. The detailed descriptions that naturally connect the previous and the following highlight the character's quality and are touching

13. The narrative is interspersed with scenes to convey people's feelings and reflect their own feelings

14. The content is closely related to modern life, novel and unique, and grasps the pulse of the times. Full of modern flavor.

15. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, the narrative is orderly, and the details are not chaotic.

16. The details are appropriate, the priorities are clear, and the thinking is clear. Carefully selected, the materials seem to be tailor-made for the theme.

17. The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the characters have distinctive personalities, and the images are full and vivid on the page.

18. Use the environment to set off the mood of the characters, blend the scenes, make the mood appear in the scene, and the scene appear with the scene.

19. The novel is rich in imagination, unique in conception and does not deviate from the reality of life. It is rooted in the associations of life, broadens readers' thinking, and makes people feel lively and interesting.

20. The description of the scenery is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate and appropriate, the sceneries follow the emotions, and the scenes blend together. What is presented to the reader is like a vivid sketch that conveys emotion. Comments on Excellent Composition 7

1. The language is simple, the center is clear, the concept is reasonable, and the writing level is clear

2. It is really rare to be able to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly, which leaves a deep impression on people.

3. The beginning and end of the article echo the center, and the structure is clear and complete

4. The article is reasonable and persuasive, highlights the personality of the character, and the context transition is natural and clear. The beginning and end of the article correspond to the ending topic and highlight the central idea

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5. The article is written in detail

6. The language is lively and interesting.

7. Use a lot of spoken language in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly.

8. The ending just highlights the center, the language is simple but profound and thought-provoking.

9. Switch with feeling and end with feeling. This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the article's theme loop around and have a strong appeal.

10. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

11. The implicit ending of the article not only highlights the topic, but also is thought-provoking.

12. Concentrate your emotions at the end, which not only reflects the beginning but also summarizes the entire text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

13. The vivid portrayal of details can, on the contrary, effectively reveal the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article.

14. The article ends with..., it is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless.

15. The sentence that reveals the central point at the end of the article is really a pen of clarity. The summary is short and powerful.

16. The ending is full of expectations and enthusiasm. The words have been finished, but the meaning is still unfinished.

17. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read it and cannot bear to put it down.

18. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly, and the indispensable highlight at the end better highlights the theme of the article.

19. Although the story is ordinary, the emotions are sincere and touching.

20. The ending of the article is unconventional and gives people the feeling of wanting to stop. Comments on Excellent Compositions 8

1. Failed to tell the truth, tell the truth, create a true personality, and express a unique individual.

2. The sentences are fluent, the sentences are fluent, the words are beautiful, the narrative images are vivid and vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.

3. The language is concise and concise, and the meaning is concise and powerful. The writing is full of power, and a few words can convey the spirit of the character.

4. The language is smooth and clear, the characterization is detailed, and the description is vivid; the meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, and contains deep meaning. After reading, it is like the lingering fragrance after drinking, which lingers in your mouth.

5. The language is lively, humorous and makes people laugh.

6. The language is basically fluent, with occasional problems.

7. The language is not clear enough, the meaning of the sentences is vague, and the teeth are twisted and awkward, which is difficult to understand.

8. The sentences are long-winded, do not convey the meaning, are only detailed but not omitted, and are redundant.

9. The language is too concise and seems to be written in outline style, but it fails to outline the main points.

10. The text is incomplete and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless. . Comments on excellent composition 9

1. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.

2. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading.

3. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

4. The article is detailed, well-organized, and the content is vivid and concrete. It is an excellent article.

5. The close-ups are unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.

6. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.

7. Appropriate detail and the coexistence of reality and fiction are the two major features of this article. The content is richer and more vivid.

8. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple but not vulgar, and it is worth reading.

9. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is full of twists and turns. It seems to bring readers into a happy paradise, making people smile.

10. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

11. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

12. The description of the scenery is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate and appropriate, the sceneries follow the emotions, and the scenes blend together. What is presented to the reader is like a vivid sketch that conveys emotion.

13. The description of the environment is objective and true. The environment serves the character's personality and better explains the ins and outs of the character's personality formation process.

14. The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and is consistent with the previous metaphor...

15. Finally, the author uses a few words to express his emotions towards..., which is touching. Excellent essay comments 10

My mother bought me 3 cute little goldfish today. The 3 goldfish are different colors. One of them is black, with two bulging eyes, like two small rubber balls, its mouth opens and closes, its tail sways, and the fins on both sides are like boat oars, shaking forward. I particularly like its shiny black tail, which looks like the letter V in English, more like a brave and capable gentleman. The other is the red and white crane crown.

There are red spots on its head, its mouth is round like the letter O in our pinyin, and it spits out white bubbles. The fish scales are crystal clear and sparkle under the sunlight, just like a fairy wearing a white gauze and a hat. There is also a colorful goldfish. It is the most naughty. Every time it is fed, it is always the first one to swim over. When the other two come over, it will attack them with its tail. It will not stop attacking until all the feed has been eaten into its stomach. Goldfish are very interesting when eating. They always stand up first, open their small mouths, rush towards the food quickly, and then spit out the food and then swallow it. It's so fun. Whenever they are full, they can swim around freely in their little world. The three little goldfish were blowing bubbles to each other, as if they were talking about their happy mood. When I put my hand into the fish tank, the goldfish hid in a corner, as if they were scared; when I turned my hand, they also started to turn, for fear that I would catch them. I must keep these goldfish well and discover more of their secrets.

Comments:

The three little goldfish written by the author in this article are indeed very cute. You can feel the author's love for goldfish from between the lines. The author is very detailed when describing the goldfish eating, and uses the words "stand up", "open", "pounce", "spit out" and "swallow" to express actions, which shows that the author has keen observation skills. Comments on excellent compositions 11

1. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.

2. The ending just highlights the center, the language is simple yet profound and thought-provoking.

3. Switch on and off with feelings and end with feelings.

4. This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the theme of the article loop around and have a strong appeal.

5. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

6. The implicit ending of the article not only highlights the topic, but also is thought-provoking.

7. The article perfectly explains your Chinese language skills. There are many remarkable sentences in the whole article, which adds literary interest to the article. The entire article has a rigorous structure and a clear theme. It is an excellent article. composition.

8. The logical reasoning ability of this article is weak and the evidence is not conclusive and sufficient. There are many loopholes and the language is inconsistent, but the saving grace is that the article is clean and tidy, making it comfortable to read.

9. The topic selection is novel and closely focused on the theme. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it.

10. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly, and the indispensable point-of-view at the end better highlights the theme of the article.

11. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and the description of the environment is used to set off the mood of the characters, which is very artistic.

12. Be concise and to the point.

13. The beginning of the article is novel and has the effect of taking the lead. So that readers can have an impression of the characters as soon as they meet them.

14. The beginning of the article is engaging and attracts readers. The combination of points and aspects makes the article vivid, specific and appropriately detailed.

15. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is highly readable.

Comments on excellent compositions 12

1. The plot is vivid and interesting, the narration is clear and complete, and it also shows the author’s intelligence and wit, full of family life. The writing is fluent and lively

2. You are good at grasping the meaning of things. The characteristics are described in detail to show that... the writing is full of emotions

3. The article is very persuasive and thought-provoking. From the writing point of view, the plot is vivid and the article is exciting. Reading it is deeply educational

4. The theme is condensed, the discussion is profound, powerful and shocking

5. The wording in this article is accurate and strict, the language is plain and natural, and the use of metaphors, personification and other rhetoric makes the article even better

6. This article The main feature of the composition is the narration of specific details, realistic descriptions, vivid and true feelings, and the use of metaphors, personification and other rhetorical techniques to write... very vividly and express...'s love for...

7. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate. The wonderful twists and turns seem to bring readers into a happy paradise. The full text is easy to understand and interesting. 8. The clues of the article are clear and the theme is prominent. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination. The beauty of the rhythm makes people want to read it and can’t bear to put it down

9. Although it is a small thing, the author describes it vividly and vividly. The indispensable touch at the end better highlights the theme of the article` < /p>

10. The vivid portrayal of details, on the contrary, reveals the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article. Excellent essay comments 13

Autumn is so beautiful!

Although there are graceful willows in spring, graceful lotuses in summer, and pure snowflakes in winter, I still like autumn - golden autumn, fragrant autumn, magical autumn!

Autumn It's the golden season. The rice waves roll like a golden ocean, the falling leaves are like playful golden butterflies, flying happily into the embrace of the earth, and the proud golden chrysanthemums bloom in the rustling autumn wind, how generous and heroic!

Autumn is the season of fragrance. If spring is a beautiful little girl, and summer is a passionate young lady, then autumn is a mature and plump young woman, with even more seductive charm. The low-hanging ears of grain sway in the autumn wind, just like her flowing hair, and the apples on the branches look more rosy under the sunlight, just like her handsome cheeks. Baiyun weaves a holy gauze skirt for her, the rainbow brings her colorful skirts, and the osmanthus osmanthus puts on a fragrant corolla for her. She walks in the wilderness, sending bursts of fragrance.

Autumn is a magical season. Magic is in the fields: sorghum holds a torch, corn shows gold teeth, cotton smiles, and bean pods hide darlings. Walking in the harvest fields, I believe your steps will be more cheerful and powerful.

Friends, when autumn comes, don’t forget to take a walk in the fields. It must be golden, fragrant and magical.

Brief comment: The author of this article uses his own unique perspective to grasp the characteristics of the scenery, uses metaphors, personification and other rhetorical techniques to describe the beauty of autumn in accurate, vivid and vivid language. It expresses the feeling of autumn, and the scenery in the article contains the love and praise for autumn. Cleverly conceived and beautifully written, it is an article of both quality and beauty. Comments on Excellent Essays 14

Recently, a small black fish I raised experienced a "resurrection from death."

On Saturday morning, I was about to change the water for the little fish to clean water, but I found that half of the tail of the little black fish had fallen off? Its body is no longer the original jet black but light red. Its eyes protrude outwards and it floats on the surface of the water, breathing slowly. I thought to myself: Is the little black fish going to die? Is it because I didn't take good enough care of it? I put the little black fish in my hand, and the little black fish swayed its tail desperately in my palm, as if it wanted to be reborn from my hand. I quickly put it back into the water I had just changed.

After ten minutes, a miracle happened - it "resurrected from the dead". I saw it breathing in the oxygen in the water, and its body slowly changed from the red color back to its original color--black. But its half-broken tail could not be opened properly, and it became a crippled little fish. Something unexpected happened to me.

It actually swam half of its tail in the water, and it swam so happily, so freely, so happily, as if the disaster had never happened.

Its small body fought against the powerful God of Death, and my heart was inspired by it. Even such small animals cherish life, but what about us humans? It is too inappropriate to give up life just for one failure or one dissatisfaction. At this time, the little goldfish was swinging its half-stub tail vigorously in the water, signaling to me. Doesn’t it also prove it to me? Loving life is a beautiful and upward spirit.

Comments:

The author uses the method of "using facts to illustrate the meaning" to describe in detail the "resurrection" of the little black fish with half of its tail rotten, revealing the " Love life" theme. The article has a complete structure and a coherent narrative. It is a very good article. Excellent essay comments 15

If someone asks me, what is the color of spring? I will say without hesitation: "Of course spring is green, it symbolizes every little life!" < /p>

As winter turns to spring, a few bits of new green emerge from the branches. Facing the warm spring breeze, the green seems to be slowly growing from light green to dark green. Gradually, the green became a patch of green, flickering in and out of sunlight.

The earth is also green. The tender green grass just emerged from the soil, small and soft. But soon, a cluster here, a cluster there, spread out into a green carpet, which is a precursor to flowering. The colorful flowers come from this intoxicating green space.

Spring rain is transparent. Clean the trees to be greener and the grass to be fresher. The land was soaked by the spring rain, and wisps of fragrance lingered in the air. The rippling water surface stirred up circles of ripples. There were drops of crystal water hanging on the tips of the grass, like gems.

The spring rain drips into the heart of the flower, and the spring breeze shakes the flower branches. It is really beautiful. The ground is dotted with beautiful flowers. Are there any "pearls" hidden on the flowers? In spring, when hundreds of flowers bloom, it is precisely because of these "little things" that they look alive!

Of course, after looking at the flowers, you can't forget to admire the lake! The reflection of the trees and the dark green of the river grass make the lake bluer and greener. The naughty child picked the flowers and threw the petals into the lake one by one, making the lake look like the blue sky and the petals like stars. It was so beautiful! The blue lake water with a few small flowers is so sentimental. Wow! The fragrance of flowers mixed with the freshness of earth makes people feel refreshed and refreshed.

Breathing the sweet air after the rain, admiring the bright colors of spring, you can’t help but exclaim: "Spring!"

The author of the brief review is best at appreciating the beauty of spring scenery. of. The opening chapter leads to the full text. The following is about spring plants, spring rain, spring breeze, spring flowers, and lake water. He is really good at choosing scenery! The author is also good at using short and concise sentences to describe the scenery.