Asking for essay guidance: Thanks for reading

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Please write an article with the title "Thanks for reading". Requirements: ① Choice of style (except poetry); ② No less than 600 words, no real school name or person’s name; ③ Written neatly and standardly. (60 points)

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Thank you for reading. The word "thank you" is the key word in the title, which not only reflects the emotional tone of the article, but also reminds candidates of the stylistic aspects. The best choice is to write a narrative article. "Reading" is the object of "gratitude". The article can express your inner gratitude by selecting materials based on the progress in knowledge, abilities, etc. you have gained during many years of reading. By understanding the title in this way, the content of the article is relevant and the key points are highlighted.

When conceiving, please note that "thank you" is a very delicate emotional experience, which needs to be true rather than false. Especially when writing narratives, it is necessary to write with delicate brushwork. The greatest meaning and value of reading is change. Reading can change everything about us. Our idea is to write about the process of change, which is the top priority of the idea.

When making decisions, we must also understand that reading classics can not only change a person's knowledge structure, but also change a person's thoughts and spirit.

In terms of expression, the word "thank you" provides a broad space for individuals to show their talents. Those who are good at description and lyricism can express their emotions through the rendering of a rich and solemn atmosphere, or they can impress people through some typical details and twists and turns of the plot to express their own value pursuits. This type of article must move people with emotion through detailed description.

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Thanks for reading

The years that pass quietly will take away the once beautiful appearance. It is useless to sigh that time flies and to lament that the years are ruthless. When you feel sad, reading is like a ray of magical starlight, which can rejuvenate your life, forget your troubles and sorrows, and gain unprecedented happiness and fulfillment.

Reading will comfort the soul. Reading a good book is like talking to a psychiatrist. At the lowest point in my life, a friend gave me a copy of "The Complete Works of Squares and Circles". Reading that thick book, my heart warmed up little by little. I completely understand that life can never be smooth sailing, and those setbacks are also part of life. Society is not as beautiful as we imagined. We cannot change the environment, but we can change our state of mind. To live in the world, people need to be both "square" and "round": they must have their own firm principles and be flexible to adapt to the environment. Good books are just like this, making people's hearts no longer cold and sad, but making people full of confidence and fighting spirit because their souls are comforted. They make people firmly believe that every day is beautiful.

Reading will extend the length of life. Human life is limited, but reading can extend the length of our lives infinitely. When I read "The Story of General History of China", my life transcended the limitations of time and space and flew to thousands of years ago, where I learned Taoism with Laozi, lectured with Confucius, discussed military affairs with Sun Tzu, and discussed Dharma with Xunzi. When I read Kang Zhen's "Commentary on Li Qingzhao", I will step into the life of Li Qingzhao, feel with her the feeling of longing that "is only on the brow, but in the heart", and experience together that "the soul cannot be extinguished by the road, the curtain rolls" West wind, people are thinner than yellow flowers" is desolate. Being so intoxicated and almost obsessed with reading made me forget how long I had lived and how many vicissitudes of life I had experienced. Sometimes, I feel inexplicably that I seem to have come from that distant ancient time and have been living in this world for thousands of years.

Reading can also make people elegant and detached. "We are full of poetry and calligraphy." Because of the nourishment of books and the edification of the spirit, we will gradually abandon the glitz and restore a true, pure, and transcendent self, no longer a mundane world. Chatting endlessly out of jealousy, no longer engaging in intrigues for fame and gain. We cannot be a billionaire, but we can be a spiritual rich man; we cannot be a leader who responds to everything, but we can be our own spiritual leader.

Reading allows us to completely transcend the secular world and become a spiritual free person and a truly elegant person.

Reading has been integrated into my life and has become an indispensable part of my life. Thanks for reading, it makes life more meaningful.

Words from the Mark

The process of reading is a process of mental growth and maturity. After accurately reviewing the meaning of the question, the candidates select materials based on "what has changed in reading". Reading can change the state of mind of "me" and make you live happily every day; reading can transcend time and space, enlighten Taoism with Laozi, lecture with Confucius, Discussing war with Sun Tzu...feel the misery of life with Li Qingzhao, so that the length of your life can be extended and enriched; reading can also make you become "a spiritual free person, a truly elegant person." The theme of the article is advanced layer by layer in the candidate's paragraph setting. The true emotions, delicate psychology, and vivid language in the article all leave a deep impression on people.

A kind of finger defect: Thanks for reading (1)

A ghost dog with gorgeous fur is running in the forest with a pack of wolves. It looks like a dog but also like a wolf, which is very strange. fear. His name is Buck, and he is the protagonist in Jack London's "The Call of the Wild." It once had the same or even more comfortable life as an ordinary pet dog, but reality has made it return to nature step by step and return to its wild and primitive companions.

In the modern world with numerous high-rise buildings, people keep themselves in their own small circles, just like Buck in the past, far away from the nature of nature. Thanks for reading, and thanks to "The Call of the Wild", which allowed me to touch the cruelty and beauty of nature, feel the essence of nature, and listen to the first song of nature, the song of the wild wolf.

This song originated from the Santa Clara Valley in California, where Buck, a sturdy big dog, paced slowly on the grass. The sunlight poured down like water and was as thick as honey, sticking to every cell in Buck's body. The cells greedily sucked in the sweet scent of the sunlight. Buck lay lazily on the soft grass, letting the sun shine into his thick fur, enjoying the caress of the sun contentedly. The gilded air was filled with a warm, intoxicating feeling.

Everything was so peaceful, but people's desire for gold broke the tranquility of Buck's life. Buck was sold, and being sold again and again made Buck step by step towards primitive life, towards the wild wolf pack, and returned to the original and most authentic state of life.

Buck’s last owner was named Thornton, and he was also his favorite owner. But Thornton was killed by Indians soon after. At this moment, Buck almost turned into a wolf. He rushed towards the Indian settlement like a madman, biting the Indians' throats as fiercely and mercilessly as a wolf.

The Indians were almost helpless against the angry big dog in front of them, watching in horror and helplessness as it dealt fatal blows to themselves like a wolf. That night, Buck's eyes were dyed red with blood. He left the human world painfully and resolutely. It was his master's love that prompted him to return to the ranks of wolves. That night, the wolf nature in Buck broke out. His wit and bravery turned him into the leader of wolves. From then on, he was called the ghost dog by the Indians. Buck became a wolf, but he often returned to the valley where his master was killed. It was people who made him return to the wild and nature, but he still loves people, the owner who saved him and treated him sincerely. This may be kind. strength. The Song of the Wild Wolf has written the most majestic chapter, and this shocking music will continue to be played forever.

Thank you for reading, allowing me to step out of my own small circle, touch the power of nature, and feel the brilliance of love.

This is just "Call of the Wild", there are many equally excellent books that will give us different shocks. Love reading, thank you for reading, thank you for those books, those books that make people think deeply.

Words from the Mark

This article is scored 45 points.

The article selects the book "The Call of the Wild" that has had the most profound impact on me. In the book, the protagonist Buck gradually loses his "humanity" in the face of human greed and killing. Wild, return to nature.” On the surface, this kind of return is a kind of disappointment and resentment towards human behavior, but in fact it is a kind of letting nature take its course. Humans should give animals the freedom and individuality they deserve. This is a natural law that maintains the continuation of the species. The young author's understanding and insights are undoubtedly profound and thought-provoking. The accurate and profound descriptions in the article make the language vivid and vivid, and the expression clear and clear.

However, the discussion at the end was a bit hasty, and the inner activity of "thank you" was not fully expressed.

Type 1 Finger Flaw: Thanks for Reading (2)

The first memory the world gave me was: I was lying in my grandma’s arms, crying desperately, holding my breath, crying So sad. Grandma hugged me, patted me, and said in my ear: "Shh, listen." I listened blankly and heard a strange sound. Is it a pigeon whistle? Is it autumn wind? Are the fallen leaves brushing against the eaves? Or the sound of grandma opening a book and reading a story softly?

The breeze and mist took turns slipping over the roof tiles. I no longer stared at the darkness outside the window. The sound of grandma reading made the sky full of stars appear in front of my eyes. An unprecedented sense of fullness permeated my whole body, as if the moonlight was flowing on my body, and everything around me became gentle, like ink stains spread by water, softly surrounding me.

Thank you for reading, which brought infinite peace and tranquility to my childhood dreams.

When I was a little older, I started to use my change to buy books from bookstalls, and then on every hot and unbearable summer night, I would try my best to identify every word and picture under the moonlight, and often stare at them. Until my eyes are sore. Only words can wipe away the heat all over my body, and I can realize the tranquility that the night is filled with, which is different from the daytime. I turned the pages of the book at will, letting the trumpet-shaped jasmine flowers, cool wind, blue sky, and twinkling stars come to my eyes as I read. Grandma’s backyard suddenly became a paradise that I believed in. As a little kid, I was completely immersed in the wonderful realm brought by reading. I couldn't extricate myself and never tired of it.

When the air is steamed and hot, you can only feel a wisp of cool wind if you crawl down in a book religiously. Oh, the long-lost coolness is carried in the wind; Oh, thank you for reading.

When I grew up, every time I went back to my hometown, I would always find the orange lamp in my grandma’s house among a series of ordinary blue and white lights. The bright yellow light shines from the window, which reminds me of a passage written by the writer Lin Shaohua: In early spring, the light softly kisses the bulging dandelions on the embankment; in midsummer, the light gently caresses several dandelions in the small courtyard. Cucumbers with whirling green leaves; in mid-autumn, the light shines faintly on the golden fruits of the dwarf persimmon tree in front of the door; in the cold winter, it coats the crystal white snow with a light yellow halo, adding a touch of warmth.

This is the charm of reading. Reading always allows me to discover the beauty of life inadvertently.

Grandma was reading under the lamp as usual, and I took out the "Mentors and Friends" I carried with me and read with relish. Under the gentle light, I saw the running camel Xiangzi, Paul on the hospital bed, and the old man Santiago driving the boat... Over time, that orange light actually stirred up my emotions and made me laugh. I'm fascinated.

Food fills my stomach, but reading can fill a person’s soul. The artistic conception generated during reading has left a strong mark in my memory. Thank you for reading!

Words from the Mark

This article is scored 45 points.

Reading accompanies the young author from childishness to maturity. My grandma's enlightenment when I was a child gave me "infinite peace and tranquility"; appreciating books as I grew older allowed me to "immerse myself in the wonderful realm brought by reading"; when I grew up, reading classics allowed "me" to "discover life" The beauty of ". So "I" feel grateful for reading. However, in the article, the author's understanding of reading is still general and conceptual, lacking detailed description, psychological portrayal, and true feelings