Advantages and disadvantages of short comments on primary school weekly diary

Comments on primary school weekly diary:

1, the narrative is clear, the verbs are used correctly, and the metaphor is appropriate and vivid. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading them.

2. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.

3. At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, and the pen is clear, short and powerful.

4. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.

5. The article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article, full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.

6. The story may not be particularly attractive, but it is still a successful work. First of all, it depicts the image of the characters well. Second, the language is vivid and rich, and the atmosphere of life is strong, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.

7. The main features of this composition are concrete narration, true details, vivid description and true feelings, and rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are used to make … very vivid and express … love for ….

8. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.

9. The material of this article is very novel ... It is full of rural life and children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.

10, the words used in this article are accurate and rigorous, the language is plain and natural, and the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification makes the article icing on the cake.