Short message template for speaking English with others

I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor. I want to make a pen pal, I hope it is a girl in her early twenties, and her interests are similar to mine. In my opinion, she is a person who is interested in traveling, swimming and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better if she had a pet dog, because I have kept it at home for some time.

With such a pen pal, I think I can share our travel experiences, take care of pets or anything we have in common with her. I believe I will improve my English and learn more about her country by doing so. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

salute

Li Hua

Test and analysis: investigate the writing of letters in the application text. I hope to find an English pen pal through Peter, a foreign teacher. Describe the conditions of your ideal pen pal and explain why you choose such a pen pal. The main points have been given, and the key to a short message is to comprehensively contain the main points, and there can be no omissions or omissions. But the main point is only the outline. Candidates should add more details on this basis, pay attention to the order of the article layout, use appropriate conjunctions to connect the full text, and choose advanced vocabulary and grammar items to make the article more literary. Pay attention to the use of the present tense in this article, try to choose concise language, use appropriate grammar rules and vocabulary, and accurately express all the main points. The difficulty lies in the choice of vocabulary and sentence patterns, the flexible use of advanced vocabulary and the accurate expression of fixed phrases. It is also necessary to connect sentences with appropriate connectives, for example, in addition, and so on. This makes the article more organized.

In my opinion, she is a person who is interested in traveling, swimming and playing table tennis. She'd better have a pet dog, because I have kept it at home for some time. With such a pen pal, I think I can share caring for pets or anything we have in common with her travel experts. This sentence is led by an adverbial clause, and related words such as ideas are also used in the essay.