How to write the email sent to the school teacher during the transfer?

Hello, first of all, state your own situation, scores, colleges you applied for, introduce your undergraduate situation, what awards you have won and what academic achievements you have. Let's talk about the reasons for choosing your school to transfer (say more words) and express our willingness to transfer to your school (because you don't transfer, the school wastes a quota, so this is very important). After that, say a few compliments to the teacher, and it's basically the same.