Joke Collection Website - Blessing messages - There are grammatical errors in the underlined parts of the following paragraphs. Please provide revision suggestions respectively. (2 points) April 20 (1) From our city’s financial and insurance syst

There are grammatical errors in the underlined parts of the following paragraphs. Please provide revision suggestions respectively. (2 points) April 20 (1) From our city’s financial and insurance syst

There are grammatical errors in the underlined parts of the following paragraphs. Please provide revision suggestions respectively. (2 points) April 20 (1) From our city’s financial and insurance system and departments

(1) Remove "near" or "yu" (2) Remove "heard" or "make" Analysis omitted

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