What should you pay attention to when writing a heroine online game novel (holographic)

Unreasonableness:

1. Name: The protagonist of the novel I have seen so far, when entering the game to create a character, may be to show the reality of the game, to show that he is different from ordinary people. The names of the games are all dictated directly. But even in reality, no matter which school or unit you go to report to, you have to submit a form, right? This writing directly led to the wrong names of the protagonists in some online game novels because they have the same pronunciation.

Let’s talk about names: Maybe because I’m used to playing existing online games, the image of names floating on their heads has become deeply rooted in people’s hearts, and the novels they write still have big names floating on their heads, and there are many authors. I feel that writing this way seems a bit unreasonable, so there is also a setting where you can choose to hide your name. But the important thing is that some novels hide names. How can you still distinguish between red names and blue names?

2. Operation and positioning: Another disadvantage of being accustomed to playing manual online games. In some novels, words like this appear endlessly. It would be better to change it to PK technology, tactics, etc., at least No one will suspect that you are writing a manual online game.

3. Agility: This setting is completely nondescript. Strength is reasonable. At least it is directly related to strength. We admit that agility affects flexibility. The most terrifying thing is that many people set Agility affects dodge rate. Have you ever seen a person kill a dead dog with a kitchen knife and get a MISS? This kind of situation is very common in games, but it would be ridiculous if it were brought to the real world.

4. Charm value: It is not an exaggeration to say that lucky value is luck - although it is not reasonable, the setting of charm value is really dumbfounding. Most authors set the charm value to the same value. The relationship between NPC and game characters. Fortunately, the game also has appearance settings. For example, have you ever seen an extremely ugly person, but everyone likes him because of his super high charm value? Of course, I’m not sarcastic about my friends who don’t look perfect. After all, in online game novels, I have never seen people being ostracized because of their ugly looks (most of them are so handsome), even if there are a few, the game It can be raised by 10% to 20%, right?

5. You cannot withdraw from the battle: Who first stipulated this? Is it a legend? At least the legend can still ALT+F4. This is how it is written in novels. The direct result is that players must either kill them all or run away before the battle ends in some dangerous locations. If they encounter a super intelligent BOSS again, let's have some fun with you. In a game where a cat catches a mouse, it is estimated that players, especially female players, can do nothing but scream and faint. It’s hard to imagine how a game with such a seriously destructive setting hasn’t been shut down due to complaints. If you think about it carefully, you will understand. Basically, online game companies in novels are now big and global. No matter how powerful they are, they have the support of the coalition government. Do you want to play or not? If you don’t want to play, leave! Who are you going to complain to?

6. Transaction column: Transaction is transaction. You go to the market to buy food and set up a transaction column to try to pay with one hand and deliver the goods with one hand. The most dizzying thing is that both parties have to press the transaction button! You can even click Agree or Cancel! Brother, just admit that what you write is a manual online game, why do you still say that the simulation degree is 99%!

7. Drinking medicine: I keep drinking the red medicine and the blue medicine. I don’t see anyone’s stomach bloating, and I don’t see anyone complaining that they can’t drink any more. However, in the game, they can eat it at a restaurant. Why do you have so much wine and food? Are you taking pills as dry food?

8. Landing equipment has a protection time: the sequelae of standard manual online games, if I go out and use a kick to blast the plane down, the government will have to search for the black box! Dropped something and can't pick it up. Who has ever seen this happen?

9. Team formation: You cannot use beneficial skills on people in different groups, such as: treatment, resurrection, strange settings, manual online games, after all, they are products of a backward era, and they are 99% guaranteed. Is the simulation still like this? There is an injured person lying on the ground. It’s not that I don’t want to save him, but it’s useless to save him anyway. Even if I give him injections, medicine and bandages, it doesn’t work! Because we are not in the same group!

10. Text messages and chatting: Many novels have the setting of text messages, and it’s just a martial arts online game. At least it’s called Fei Ge Chuanshu. I don’t understand where this text message is sent from. Answered.

Similarly, there are also things like team chat, guild chat, company chat, etc., which can still be chatted eight hundred miles away. What is certain is that they do not use mobile phones, nor do they have mobile phones. When it comes to typing (it’s already a high-simulation game, how can I still use it, right?), I don’t understand how they can chat.

1. When the protagonist buys game equipment, he must express how difficult it is to buy it, how many days in advance to queue up, etc. I don’t know if the game company is SB. Is it possible to apply for an account online like in current online games, and then get the equipment based on the account number? You have to have people waiting in tents in front of your company. Well, the most impressive one is that they waited in line for seven days. Don’t they find it annoying to have so many people at work all day long? And I doubt how they get to and from get off work. There are all the people in front of the door. It’s the crowd, haha!

If possible, it would be better not to write about the main character guarding the door of someone's house for many days, haha, not letting his company in and out. It is estimated that such a large company is the first virtual online game, so it is better not to use people to queue up and display advertisements. And the strange thing is that often when games like this are made without public testing, there are not enough game equipment, and only a few can be given out. Don’t game companies know that the more people there are, the more money they can make? Why must the protagonist play first? Good things are turned into good careers before others can enter. Could it be that N billion people waiting to give money are not as high as the benefits created by the protagonist!

Tip: Let nature take its course. Just let the protagonist apply for the first batch of accounts. Don’t treat a company that can make such a big move as a bitch!

2. The protagonist is born either with a helmet or a glasses-shaped lander. After entering the game, the system will ask you whether you choose to automatically allocate points or choose your own body to allocate points. Then the protagonist will say very awesomely that I have confidence in myself and choose myself. Then I feel a light sweep across my body and a giant attribute appears. It’s strange, how can a helmet scan your whole body? X-rays will only focus on which part is faulty!

Tip: If you must make the main character extremely awesome, you should equip him with a game console if possible. This way you can also say that scanning is possible, but a device with this function will cost the hospital a lot of money. What are the various machines doing? (--)

3. The funniest thing is that it is obviously the second world. You need an account and password to enter the game. Moreover, in order to ensure that one person and one account are still bound to the game device, you actually have to fill it out. Still OK. Haha, imagine a person standing in front of a row of attributes and things that need to be determined, and then... Haha

Tip: There is no one with the same brain waves in the world, so just proceed directly. Technology is so advanced. In order to ensure that the protagonists are all bound to the device, don’t you know how to use brain waves as a reference!

3. As soon as you enter, you will be rewarded with artifacts or attribute points for various reasons. This is the most interesting point. Are the bosses who develop such awesome games all from SB? Will he offend the legendary N billion players for one or ten people, or will he offend the legendary N billion players, or will N billion players feel that the protagonist deserves such a reward. It stands to reason that the most important thing in a game is balance. Why does the official have to create a few unbalanced people? It is probably that either the author is sick or the game company is sick.

Tip: If you want the protagonist Niu to think of another way, writing this way is not as good as the game company giving money directly to the protagonist!

It should be better if you pay attention to these points.