My girlfriend doesn't like me caring about her and nagging. Can I write like this?

I advise you not to send it.

Although it is well written, it is also very touching.

But your concern and consideration aroused her disgust.

Even if you send it and she reads it, it won't have any effect.

Maybe it will make her even more disgusted.

She doesn't like your nagging. That means she likes boys who are more capable, talk less and do more.

You should understand this truth.

Make a little change.

Turn your thoughtful words into practical actions.

Of course, if your girlfriend still doesn't accept it, it's her personality.

In that case, you can try to be cold to her.

Although it may make you uncomfortable. But the purpose is to let her, when you don't care,

Recall your kindness.