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I know you are busy these seven days, because you will be surrounded by flying greetings; Not to be outdone, I set out today, and let my blessings cross the mountains, Wang Yang sea, colorful clouds and just visited. At some time on 20 13, 10, 1 this day, I got into your mobile phone from a pile of blessings: May your happiness become more and more like a bank, may your troubles disappear like dinosaurs, and may you. I wish you a happy National Day holiday and a happy family.