I want to invite a director to dinner, but I don't know how to edit the news.

Hello, director, I'm XXX. First of all, I want to take this opportunity to pay tribute to you. I wish you success in your work and good health! Secondly, the business we did last time was not perfect, and there were some misunderstandings. I hope you will do me the honor of having dinner with me and give me some suggestions for improvement! It would be a great honor if you could come!