Write a composition with comparative suspense

1. Writing a composition in contrast is the beginning of a composition describing the scenery (Shunde Teaching and Research Office). When commenting on the Grand View Garden, Jia Baoyu said that all beauty must be "natural and interesting".

The excellent college entrance examination composition of millions of candidates in China cannot be separated from a "reason" and a "fun". The college entrance examination magazine collected and sorted out the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination in recent years, and found that there are many remarkable places, but they are all interesting.

Just reading the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and encouraged. Let's classify them and dedicate them to you. Maybe you can learn from them.

First, the most taboo to read the opening is to give people the feeling of digression with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author has not carefully judged the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.

Example 1 "remembered by language and communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are comfortable. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; The fruit of autumn shows the bleak winter.

The four seasons cycle, autumn comes and winter comes, and everything in nature is wonderful. How can we expect the hope of early spring without the baptism of severe winter? Our human society is just like nature. Without language connection and the same lifestyle, how can we connect the world into a whole and build a bridge of communication? "The metaphor at the beginning is improper, and the previous metaphor part is not well paved in similarities.

Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where is the relationship between "green dress" and "bumper harvest", "fruit" and "bleak"? In particular, the rhetorical question "How can we hope for early spring without the baptism of severe winter" has nothing to do with the topic. Example 2 "Spiritual interaction": "Trees never laugh at the weakness of grass, which, though weak, adds green to the grassland; Peony never laughs at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth.

Trees and grass, peony and wild flowers can be harmonious because they have a common language, communicate with each other and interact with each other. "At the beginning, I was close to the topic and found no similarities, which seemed far-fetched.

Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, and communication is a shade; Language is white clouds, communication is floating clouds. Language is a flower, and communication is an ocean of flowers. " This beginning regards "language" and "communication" as the relationship between individuals and the whole, and fails to understand the relationship between them.

All the above three situations use metaphors to increase literary talent, which is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic, he will take a wrong turn at the beginning, which will seriously affect his score.

The following examples illustrate the function of language more accurately and vividly. Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth.

Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences.

So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image. Many methods are introduced at the beginning.

1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he.

His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price.

But every family's words are as different as everyone's face. Shi said, "Love is a tool.

..... "("What is love in the world ") 2 In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "Long years, a flick of a finger.

In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine." Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. "

Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success.

("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice. (A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you.

Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat.

You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time."

At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past. And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world.

(Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Liang Shanbo's Juyi Hall is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling.

What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently. It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin.

That's why all heroes gather here to argue.

2. I cried one day four years ago for a 600-word composition written by suspense. I sat in the classroom of the third grade of primary school, with my head down and crying very sadly. At that time, the sky was gray, the air was turbid, the classroom was silent, and the teacher was serious.

Never feel sad, never feel sad, never feel sad, never feel helpless. At that time, my heart was riddled with holes and I was bleeding. Tears also flowed away with the blood.

If it flows like a stream, like a river, like the sea. Slowly evaporate in the sun .. Finally, the blood flow stopped, the tears dried up, and the sun continued to strengthen, evaporating blood and tears like streams, rivers and the sea. Those tiny pinholes in my heart have been filled by my will and mended by my confidence. After the dust of that day and the turbidity of that time, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. I pulled myself together again. Now I am. (I succeeded! Four years ago, when we were in the third grade of primary school, we sat in the classroom and had an English class. I was distracted in class. I don't remember what distracted me. I only remember that after I was distracted, the teacher called my name, followed by a long and painful lecture. At that time, I was not an English representative, but at that time, my English scores were among the best.

The teacher's voice was very loud at that time. He doesn't know my self-esteem. It's very loud He said in front of the whole class, "Do you know why I didn't choose XXX as the English representative? ! "When I heard this sentence, when all my classmates heard this sentence, 49 pairs of eyes looked at me. Their eyes are full of curiosity, and they want to know the answer ... "That's because XXX has no confidence and willpower to bring this class well! She can only make her grades among the best, but she can't be the best! .

.. "The teacher also said a lot, I can't remember, just remember this sentence, which hurts my heart the most. Because the teacher criticized me and knew my own shortcomings, I was working hard to repair my own shortcomings. It seems that the teacher saw my efforts. At the time of a branch representative election, what I was most looking forward to finally came! The teacher chose me as the English representative! ! I'm really happy and I appreciate the teacher's criticism.

3.500-word composition writing skills: comparison, setting off, feeling the scenery, paving the way and burying. Hello, I'm glad to answer your question.

When, when, when the New Year bell rings, red or gold couplets have been put on the doors of every household, and every household, old and young, is happy from ear to ear. Some excited children are staring at TV and enjoying the annual party dinner-Spring Festival party. Some people are eager to pay a New Year call to their elders, sending text messages and making phone calls, and all the words wishing the New Year seem to be endless; Naughty children are asking their parents for lucky money; Outside, firecrackers rang and colorful fireworks decorated this special night beautifully.

On the first day of the first month, the first day of the Lunar New Year is accompanied by people's joy and peace. I usually lie in bed the most, and I got up early today, because I really want to wear beautiful new clothes and go out to show off. I'm going to visit relatives and friends for the Spring Festival, which is undoubtedly a happy thing. We children walk in front of the new year's welcome team. When we meet our elders and say a few auspicious words, we can get a handful of lucky money and then take it to the street to buy things we like-toys, snacks, firecrackers ... Our parents seem to be different people. They are so tolerant of our indulgence that they have everything! This is the feeling of Chinese New Year.

"set off firecrackers!" I don't know who shouted, but the children soon got together. Strings of firecrackers are lit in people's hands, making a loud noise and splashing around, as if sending good wishes to thousands of families. Firecrackers kept coming, and it was very lively.

When it's time to eat, we children look at the table full of our favorite dishes and don't feel hungry at all. When adults push a cup for a change, the most they say is: it's not what it used to be! Today's happy life can best explain the problem from the dinner table. People are living well now, and every day is like Chinese New Year!

On the way to visit relatives and friends, I saw the spring in the fields. The newly built expressway shortened our trip, and the dirt road leading to the countryside was also covered by the cement road of "every village". High-rise buildings in this city have sprung up like mushrooms after rain and are changing every year. ...

For us children, the Spring Festival means that everything is changing and everything is new!

By contrast, it is urgent to write a 200-word composition. It is snowing heavily now. It snowed at first, just like someone grabbed white sugar in mid-air and sprinkled it one by one. In a short time, the snow is getting heavier and heavier, and the snow particles become snowflakes, falling lightly and slowly like goose feathers, swaying and fluttering, like jade leaves and honeysuckle scattered by the goddess. So clear and beautiful. The thin and tall willow branches on the roadside shook their bodies from time to time, shaking the snow to the bottom, but as soon as they shook off a little, they immediately lost a lot. Gradually, the snow put on a white coat for them. At night 2, everything was silent, only the sound of falling snow could be heard. At the moment, mountains, rivers, fields and villages are all covered with snow.

Pieces of small snowflakes are as light as smoke, as clean as jade, as white as silver, fluttering down from the sky and rushing to the embrace of mother earth.

Snow is like cotton wool, snow is like reed flowers, and snow is like dandelion fluff seeds, flying in the wind.

5. Using suspense method to write a 200-word composition, skillfully setting suspense at the beginning and creating a certain atmosphere will make the article fascinating, ups and downs, make readers feel anxious and extremely concerned, and receive good results.

Here are some ways to set suspense at the beginning:

First, the flashback method. By flashback, the end of the full text is placed at the beginning, which makes readers confused from the beginning. When they are in doubt, they have the desire to read on and solve the mystery. For example, the trust of comrades-in-arms is an excellent example. At the beginning of the article, Mr. Lu Xun met a strange young woman who gave Mr. Lu Xun a paper bag and a letter. At the beginning of reading, readers will naturally ask: What is hidden in this paper bag? What does this letter say? With so many questions, readers have the idea of tracing back to the source and can't help reading eagerly. Such an article is hard for readers to say, and it is also difficult to achieve fascinating results.

Second, comparative method. This method often writes out what people have decided, and then puts forward the opposite view. Because everything has two sides, two sides. People often admit only one aspect and ignore the other in their daily life. If you make a fuss about "this other aspect", it will make people feel abrupt and realize the novelty and novelty of the theme. Once, a student wrote at the beginning of an essay: "Yu Gong has always been called a model of hard work and perseverance, but I think Yu Gong is really a fool." After reading such a beginning, readers will have doubts, so they must read on.

Third, the abnormal behavior law. The article begins with the abnormal behavior of the characters, which makes people think deeply and raises questions. Two short stories about junior middle school Chinese are an example. The advantage of this beginning is that it can arouse readers' thinking: Who is this tall figure that the little shoemaker looks around at the intersection every day? Why are you looking at him? Its beauty lies in taking advantage of the abnormal behavior of the little shoemaker.

Fourth, the memory method. First, the author's views and comments on things or people afterwards at the beginning of the article. This is the method used in A Little Thing. Second, the beginning of the article is shocking and touching.

For example, a student wrote at the beginning of his composition: Every time I open that photo album and see that familiar face, my thoughts go back to that childhood. So the reader's thoughts were brought to the author's childhood.

Fifth, use fable method.

Start with a fable to arouse the reader's interest in the truth or something to be explained. The above three fables lead to the truth to be told. This method is often used at the beginning of an argumentative paper, which can make the article original and enhance its appeal and expression effect.

In short, the specific method of "writing without definite method" depends on the content of the article. However, we should pay attention to setting suspense at the beginning of the article: first of all, the suspense at the beginning should be concise, don't be wordy, don't write anything that has little to do with suspense, and focus on suspense.

6. The composition describing "setting off the environment, cleverly setting suspense and portraying characters" failed, so let me move on.

The storm outside the window is beating on houses, trees and roads unscrupulously ... like a monster, it seems to have swallowed up the whole city. I sat quietly at my desk and looked helplessly at the darkness outside the window. My eyes are red and swollen, but my tears are still flowing. When I think back to the teacher's correction, my heart is pounding. I can't believe this is the result of my hard work for many days. I think of the back of the teacher correcting homework in the middle of the night and the hard work of my parents in the cold wind.

The moonlight is bleak, like running water, pouring quietly on the table, making my face pale. Facing the test paper with poor scores, I feel sour and feel that I have worked hard, really. But the reality is that when I was very confident, I slapped me hard. Why? Why is Destiny so cruel to me?

The moon has risen so high, and the rain has gradually stopped, with a chill. Suddenly, a tall figure rushed into my sight. I took a closer look, and it turned out to be the poplar tree. In the storm just now, most of its leaves were lost. I looked at it sympathetically, with the kind of sadness that "neither of us is happy-forever." I stepped forward and opened the window. After the rain, the humid air mixed with the fragrance of the earth came to my face, which made me suddenly enlightened.

Suddenly I feel that failing the exam is nothing. I should also learn from that poplar tree. A storm knocked out my "leaves", but as long as my branches are still standing, I believe I will be able to bear greener, tender and fresher leaves next spring.

If pride is not slapped by the reality of the sea, how do we know that we have to work hard to go far? If dreams never fall off the cliff, how do you know that persistent people have invisible wings? If life has not experienced the baptism of the storm, how do you know that only strength can see the dawn?

Outside the window, the bright moonlight poured thousands of miles. I picked up a pen, corrected my mistakes seriously and analyzed the reasons for my failure. I firmly believe that one day I will reach the great realm of success. Success will be more meaningful only if you have experienced failure, and it is hard-won that makes people yearn for it, isn't it?

Bend down, tie your shoelaces and run for a successful future!

7. composition 1: the vast sea of people passed by and met in the beautiful rainy port. The name is not important, but it is just a synonym. What is touching is the throbbing at that moment ... the rain gently drifted aimlessly, woven into a hazy green yarn and wrapped in a slender alley.

The rain lane was quiet, and a few flower-like umbrellas drifted by.

2. In the big house of life, there are countless emotional doors. If we open them, we will get happiness, sadness, courage and depression. Thinking: What is the topic of this article from this beginning? What method does it use? What is involved in the following? Clear: The topic involved in this article should be "door". It adopts a "straight to the point" approach. The following contents include the door of joy, the door of sadness, the door of courage, the door of depression and so on.

Pursuing life is like sailing on water. Only by raising two sails high: believing in yourself and listening to others' opinions can we advance and retreat freely and reach the other side of victory.

4. Stick to everything. Don't be too persistent in everything.

5. Survival is rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea. Life is a flower of piano, chess, painting, singing and dancing. Live just to live, but live not just to survive.

6. There is no eternal rainbow in the sky, and there is no eternal splendid scenery in life. Perfection is beautiful, and incomplete regrets are sometimes beautiful.

7. The lush grass in the mountains, the golden ears in the fields, the fresh red carp in the pond, and the black eagle soaring in the sky, all these colorful lives are dotted with nature. As a primate in nature, human beings should also enrich the world with colorful life.

8: What will you do if you encounter setbacks? Perhaps, you will choose to escape and find a sheltered harbor; Perhaps, you will choose to cry and wash your broken heart with tears; Maybe you will choose to ask for help. ...

9. As the old saying goes, dark room seekers are not good at fire; The cableway is on earth, and it's not good to tell the truth. Ceng Zi's word for killing pigs is "faith", and Kong Ming's word for "trusting orphans" is "sincerity"; Because of the word "sincerity", the century-old shop has always been full of customers, and Liu Bang's three chapters of the contract have been passed down as a beautiful talk for a thousand years.

10: The actor said that life is like a play; The singer said that life is like a dream; People who like to travel say that life is like a journey; People who like dreaming say that life is like a dream; I said, life is a challenge.

I hope these examples can help you.

8. A night of composition with a background and clever suspense, such as painting night.

In a thatched cottage halfway up the mountain, dim lights flashed. There are two brothers sitting in the room.

My younger brother is a senior three in the county this year, with excellent grades, and will be admitted to the university next year; My brother is in the second grade of junior high school. My father died of illness three years ago.

Mother works alone at home and outside. Overworked for a long time, my mother is ill in bed, and no one works at home. The two brothers decided to stay at home, while the other went on to school. For a long time, there was no sound in the room

A strong wind blew, the curtains on the door chattered and the flames kept beating. "Elder brother, you go to school and I stay at home."

The younger brother said to the younger brother. Brother didn't answer.

It pains me to look at my sallow and emaciated brother. Do you go to school by yourself and let your weak brother work at home? Brother walked over and caressed his head. "Listen to my brother. You are still young. It's time to study. My brother stays at home and you can study with peace of mind. "

"No, brother, you are going to school soon. You go to school and I will work slowly at home." "Brother" and "Brother", the two brothers hugged each other tightly and heard each other's heartbeat.

Tears, flowing silently ... neither of the brothers could convince anyone, so they had to draw lots to decide. The younger brother found paper and pen and wrote on the table, while the older brother stared at the dark night outside.

"Brother, you catch it first." My brother turned around, paused for a moment, and grabbed a paper ball from the table, which read: "Go to school".

The younger brother looked at his older brother and said, "Brother, your lottery ticket belongs to the school, and I work at home. Go and study. " ..... My brother stared at the paper in his hand, and his heart was full of ups and downs. My brother is so young that working at home will tire him out.

No, you should let your brother go to school. He turned around and saw that his brother had disappeared in the room.

My brother looked down for a while and seemed to suddenly understand something. He found his brother's paper from the wastebasket and unfolded it. It also says "go to school". In an instant, my brother understood everything.

In order to let my brother catch it first, I looked at a crumpled piece of paper in my hand. My brother has tears in his eyes and his hands are shaking. Suddenly, my brother turned around and shouted "Brother …" and rushed out into the thick night. Comment: This is a sad and tearful article. The author first writes about the family background, paving the way for the development of the plot. Then, through vivid language and action description, it depicts my brother's "cheating" behavior in the lottery, and finally solves the mystery.

Understandably, unexpectedly. The expression of true feelings has received good results. Brother, with dark skin and strong arms, looks like a strong cow. Brother, gruff and unkempt, like a hardworking horse; Brother, be silent, get up early and get in the dark, and grind like a donkey.

It is said that I picked it up, because I am a person who can work as hard as an animal as long as I have food. He is the only labor force in the family. The wind passed gently, and my brother's panting voice came. My brother's sweat is dancing in the wheat waves. In the sunshine, I fly like a pearl and sink into the boundless wheat waves.

Did I really find it? In the endless night, I asked the stars that were still shining, maybe they knew if I came out of my mother's stomach. Hey! Think of my mother, think of me asking her brother if she picked it up, she secretly wiped her tears, think of her heartache and helplessness when she looked at my brother, think of … I don't think my brother picked it up! The stars are speechless, only endless thoughts melt in endless darkness.

However, one day, a car came to pick me up ... not my brother, but me ... the whole village was shocked. My mother's thin body leans against the threshold like a piece of white paper that can't stand rubbing, and a few yellow hairs in her silver hair are blowing wildly. Brother, I thought of my brother. I desperately broke away from the warm hands of my biological parents and ran to the wheat field.

Are tears rolling on my dark face in the sun? Still sweating? I stood on the ridge of the field and let the tears flood in my eyes, but I was unable to shout out the heavy "brother!" " "Brother grinned at me and said, you go back and spend more time with my mother. She sacrificed a lot for you. "Mom, mom sacrificed a lot for me. Yes, the mother sacrificed her son. For me, for the baby I picked up, for me to sit in the spacious classroom today, my mother turned my brother into a domestic animal.

Countless days, my mother brought me a bowl of delicious rice, but I stuffed my brother with a hard wowotou. I said to my mother, "It's not fair!" "Mom just smiled and said," school should be nutritious. "Originally, now I understand, is my mother arranged the fate of my brother. Why did my mother do it, my brother or me? At this moment, we understand that there is something greater than maternal love in this world.

It is like spring in Ding Dong, nourishing my heart, like warm sunshine, giving me the strength to move forward. How I want to ask my mother, am I more important than her son? Maybe not, because mother thinks so. This is the kindest person's cognition of things. Comments: As a topic, interrogative sentences set suspense at the beginning, which aroused people's concern about the fate of "brother".

With the development of the plot, "Finally one day, a car came to pick me up ... not my brother, but me ...", a long-term misunderstanding gave the answer. It turned out that "something greater than maternal love" arranged all this. The extraordinary sacrifice of our mother deeply shocked us.

The advantages are: paving the way for the next * *, attracting readers' attention, enriching the content of the article, making the structure of the article ups and downs and enhancing readability.

9. The failure of the composition describing "setting off the environment, cleverly setting suspense and portraying characters" made me impudently beat the houses, trees and roads outside the window ... like a monster, it seemed to devour the whole city. I sat quietly at my desk, staring helplessly at the darkness outside the window. My eyes are red and swollen with tears, but my heart is still flowing. When I recall my teacher's reading, I can't believe it is the result of my hard work for many days. I feel sorry for my teachers for correcting homework in the middle of the night and my parents' hard work in the cold wind. I can't do what they expect. The moonlight is bleak, like running water, pouring quietly on the table, making my face pale. Facing the test paper with poor scores, I feel sour and feel that I have worked hard, really. But the reality is that I am very hard. Why is Destiny so cruel to me? The moon has risen so high, and the rain has gradually stopped with a chill. Suddenly, a tall figure rushed into my sight. Looking carefully, it turned out to be the poplar tree. In the storm just now, most of its leaves were lost. I looked at it sympathetically, with the sadness that "neither of us is happy-forever old". I stepped forward and opened the window. After the rain, the moist air was mixed with the fragrance of the earth. I suddenly woke up a lot. I looked at it carefully. Although its leaves have fallen to the ground, its branches are still tall and straight after countless storms. My heart suddenly trembled. It turned out to be so strong. Suddenly I feel that failing the exam is nothing. I should also study like that poplar tree. A storm knocked off my leaves, but as long as my branches are straight. If dreams never fall off the cliff, how do you know that persistent people have invisible wings? If life has not experienced the baptism of the storm, how do you know that only strength can see the dawn? Outside the window, the bright moonlight poured thousands of miles. I picked up a pen, corrected my mistakes seriously and analyzed the reasons for my failure. I firmly believe that one day I will reach the great realm of success. Success will be more meaningful only if you have experienced failure, and it is hard-won that makes people yearn for it, isn't it? Bend down, tie your shoelaces and run for a successful future.