I'm a real estate agent. I want to edit short messages to new and old customers. How to edit them? Ask the master for help!

Hello, I'm * * from * * Company. Thank you for your continuous support to my work. I also hope to provide you with better service in the process of buying a house and put wings on your dream of staying at home. You can write down my number. If you have any questions about real estate, you can call me at any time. I wish you all the best in your work.