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Write a letter-a critical review of a perfect work
Please write a letter to relatives and friends who can't meet in the distance, introduce your study and life, express your thoughts to relatives and friends, and speak your mind.
Write what?
1. You can write a letter to your relatives who are not at home. For example, write a letter to your father on a business trip and tell him about your study.
You can write a letter to a friend far away. For example, tell him about his recent study and life, for example, "Sister Ni Jing, I went back to my hometown-Xilin Gol Prairie from the county seat a few days ago as soon as the summer vacation was over at school."
You can write a letter to your future self. If you use your imagination, write to your future self, talk about your current study life, your current direction of efforts, what difficulties you have, and talk about your ideals.
You can write a letter to a real person. If you can write a letter to the uncles and aunts who designed and manufactured "Chang 'e 1", you can show your respect for them. And determined to be like them when they grow up.
You can write a letter to an imaginary object. For example, a letter to Sister Moon. Greet Sister Moon and point out the reasons for writing: I hope to be a guest at Sister Moon's house.
It's well written
Point 1 Talk about your thoughts on things through letters, using true expressions and plain language.
For example, "A Letter to Parents": Dear Mom and Dad, hello. I want to talk to you about your objection to my idolatry ...
Point 2: communicate with life by letters, with sincere feelings and fluent language.
A letter to a distant friend Dear friend, How are you? You know, I miss you very much. I am writing to you because I have a very happy thing to tell you. ...
The third point: regular writing: describe one aspect and let friends know something about themselves.
For example, in A Letter to a Friend, the little author first wrote his thoughts about his friends, and then introduced his recent study and life. Recall the happy times of the past together; Finally, express your wishes and hope to get together.
Point 4: Innovative writing: Choose novel writing content to give people a refreshing feeling.
For example, the article "A Letter to a Distant Friend" begins with the story of Japanese farmers deliberately leaving some fruits on trees for birds, expressing their desire that everyone give a little love, and finally encouraging friends to give love sincerely, with a unique perspective and extraordinary ideas.
Fifth, the language should be appropriate, and different objects should consider different expressions.
It is winter now, and our hometown has become a silver world. What is the climate like in Canada? Is it cold too? According to my mother, you will return to China next month, so please come to my house, ok?
I miss you so much! Sir, I don't know if you can receive my letter, but I just want to read my thoughts aloud to you. ...
Mom, can you understand me after listening to my daughter? Can you be my bosom friend? Looking forward to your reply.
a letter
Cousin:
Hello!
I haven't heard from you for a long time How have you been recently? The schools in Hong Kong must be very good! I really want to have the opportunity to study in Hong Kong like my cousin in the future. At the beginning of the letter, you can ask questions to greet your relatives. )
At the beginning of the new semester, our school held a reading festival called "Love me Fuzhou, Learn to Be Successful". During the activity, the school held several competitions, including writing, tabloids and reading note cards ... Cousin, haven't you always encouraged me to work hard, work hard and try again? Therefore, I will not give up any chance to participate in the competition. The title of the essay is "Give advice to Fuzhou to make my hometown better". After returning home, I went to consult a similar composition, pondered it carefully, and revised it several times after writing it. I took the trouble to ask the teacher modestly. It took several nights for an interesting and illustrated reading tabloid to finally come out. What a busy day! (★ Introduction: In the family book, the key point is to introduce myself. Here, the author introduces her cousin's recent performance at school. )
Finally, it's time to announce the results, and my unremitting efforts have paid off. I won a total victory, won three heavy awards and won the title of "Little Writer". (Use the idiom: "Perseverance" means perseverance. The idiom is used appropriately and accurately, which vividly shows the efforts of young authors. )
Ok, dear cousin, let's call it a day. There are many interesting things in our school. I'll tell you next time I write. I look forward to your reply. (★ lyrics at the end: at the end of this letter, the little author expressed "my" expectation for my cousin's reply. )
I wish you academic progress and good health!
Cousin: Lin
March 9
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The little author chose to write a letter to his cousin, in which he explained his situation and sincerely greeted his cousin's situation.
◎ Intention: In the letter, the little author first expressed his greetings and admiration to his cousin, and then introduced the new things that happened in the school recently to his cousin. The narrative is complete and detailed.
◎ Language: The language is concise, the tone is friendly and lively, and the use of words such as "heavy" and "perseverance" increases the image of the language.
A letter to my parents.
Dear Mom and Dad:
Hello!
Mom and Dad, thank you for raising me. I will never forget your kindness! (★ Beginning method: the beginning directly points to the topic and directly explains the feelings contained in the letter. ) Mom and Dad, I have something from my heart that I want to tell you, but I dare not, so I wrote it down on this piece of paper.
Every Sunday, the students are very happy. They go to the movies with their parents, go to the park with their brothers and sisters and so on. In a word, their Sunday is relaxed and happy, but my study task is too heavy.
In the morning, before I get up, my mother wakes me up from the warm bed and lets me read English. It is said that reading English in the morning is the best time. I opened my eyes and looked at my watch. It's only half past seven. I don't want to get up so early to read English, but my mother can't help listening. I have to open my eyes and read English. (★ Psychological description: Write that you don't want to get up early. After eating, I plunged into intense study again. My parents bought me some exercises, such as "three exercises in one lesson" and so on.
By four o'clock in the afternoon, my homework had been finished. After watching TV for ten minutes, I said to my mother, "Let me watch it for another ten minutes!" " Mom said, "No, I think you will be useless when you grow up." "Later, I had to reluctantly go back to the study to read.
Mom and Dad, I understand your desire for success, but I can't study all day! I should also have my happiness and freedom! I am still a child. I am eager to go to nature. I am eager to play with my friends. Mom and Dad, I am in the third grade. I am rational. I will put my study first. But I can't study all day! Mom and Dad, let this bird fly quickly and let it fly freely! (★ Affectionate appeal: I expressed my surging feelings with a series of exclamations. )
Good luck with your work!
Your daughter: ×××
5 February
Full mark reference point
Material selection: This letter expresses my true feelings. The author borrowed a letter to tell his parents what he was talking about: the students go out to play on Sunday, but I want to stay at home and study. I hope my parents will trust me and give me free space. I will put my study first.
◎ Intention: the structure is clear and complete, and the narrative is organized. The little author writes in chronological order on Sunday. He reads English at 7: 30 in the morning, does exercises after supper and finishes his homework at 4: 00 in the afternoon. He also asked "I" to go back to the study and read a book, and introduce my parents to the whole day's experience, hoping that they would understand.
◎ Language: The language of the article is sincere, telling the truth of the little author, just like talking to mom and dad, natural and vivid.
Letter to the teacher
Teacher Yu:
Hello!
It is often said that students are peaches and plums planted by teachers, and they are bathed in the sunshine and rain of teachers when they sprout and grow up. Rhetoric: The rhetorical device of metaphor vividly tells the relationship between teachers and students. I am a third-grade student now, and I have learned a lot in the two years with you.
When I was eight years old, when I was in the first grade, you smiled and led me into the classroom and into the door of knowledge. I think you look like a magician. You let us know words and magically turn strange "faces" into small words that can be read. (★ Rhetoric: Compare the teacher to a magician and write the process of literacy vividly and interestingly. )
When spring breeze and spring rain revive everything on the earth, it is you who take us out of school to find spring. We smell the fragrance of wild flowers, listen to the music of mountain springs and the sweet songs of birds, and feel the warmth of spring breeze and sunshine. We are like green seedlings that have just emerged from the ground. Rhetoric: figurative rhetoric, comparing "we" to a grain of rice, with beautiful language and vivid image. In this way, you inspired us to write. Back to school, you asked us to leave a line of immature handwriting on the composition and write a beautiful composition.
Teacher, I will always remember your kindness to me. I wish you good health!
Salute!
Your student: Liu Fei.
X month x day
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The article is a letter to the teacher. The little author was moved by the teacher's concern, care, enlightenment and teaching, and wrote this touching letter.
◎ Intention: From the perspective of children, write the greatness and respectability of Mr. Yu in childish language, and the gratitude for Mr. Yu is beyond words. Clear organization. At first, it was a general greeting, then I recalled how the teacher introduced myself to the door of knowledge. Finally, I sincerely thanked the teacher and was very organized.
◎ Language: Use figurative rhetoric to compare students to peaches and plums and teachers to sunshine and rain. It vividly shows the intimate relationship between students and teachers. This metaphor is natural and attractive.
A letter to a foreign friend Mike
Mike:
Hello!
Last summer vacation, we met at Beijing Summer Camp and became friends. This summer vacation, I'd like to invite you to visit my hometown Zhenjiang, Jiangsu. (★ Opening method: The opening part indicates the purpose of writing a letter, which is straightforward. )
My hometown is located at the intersection of the Yangtze River and the Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal. There are many places of interest here, including Jinshan, Jiao Shan, Beigushan and Nanshan, and Zhong Lingquan, known as the "No.1 Spring in the World". Among them, Jinshan is a famous Buddhist shrine.
Jinshan is located in the northwest of Zhenjiang, about three kilometers away from the city center. This is the origin of the legend that "the water overflows the golden hill" in China's famous fairy tale "The Legend of the White Snake". Emperor Kangxi and Emperor Qianlong visited here more than once during their southern tour, leaving many "imperial" cultural relics. (★ Interesting: introducing the history and fairy tales of Jinshan adds interest to the article. ) At the foot of Jinshan Temple, there is a thousand-year-old temple-Jiangtian Temple, and there is a tall pagoda named "Cishou Pagoda" at the top of the mountain. There are many tourists here all year round.
Speaking of food, it is the "three eccentrics" of Zhenjiang. There is a children's song that says: meat is not a dish, vinegar is not bad, and the lid of the noodle pot is cooked. How's it going? Is it drooling now?
(★ Quoting children's songs: By quoting children's songs to explain the "three eccentrics" in my hometown, the little author is well informed. )
After listening to my introduction, will you be tempted? Come on, please come to my hometown. My hometown and I welcome you with open arms. (★ Ending way: Invite friends to show my hospitality. )
Wish you a happy life!
Your good friend: Li.
65438+100 on October 29th
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: accurate material selection. Zhenjiang has many scenic spots. The author chose Jinshan, a Buddhist holy place, to introduce it in detail, which aroused the interest of foreigners and was more convincing.
◎ Conception: complete structure and clear organization. At first, the author sent an invitation to his friend, inviting him to visit his hometown. Next, I briefly introduced the geographical location, beautiful scenery and special snacks of my hometown. Finally, I warmly invite you again. Who is not moved by such enthusiasm?
◎ Language: The author's language is simple and true, and he proudly introduces his hometown of Zhenjiang, Jiangsu Province to foreign friends, and his words are full of pride in his hometown.
Brother, please forgive me. ...
Little brother next door:
Hello!
Do you remember my little sister? (★ Beginning method: use rhetorical questions to lead to the following. )
You should remember, because I hit you mercilessly. It's really ridiculous to think about it. Why can't big brother beat little sister? In retrospect, I'm really sorry.
"Ha ha, hurry up ..." Listen, that was three years ago, and we were laughing on the lawn carefree.
"Little rascal, do you want to eat popsicles? The new popsicle is fruity and delicious! "
"Yes, yes, it's agreed that I'll treat you to pay the bill." (★ Language description: Several conversations evoked memories of the past. )
We just go hand in hand to buy popsicles. I bought it, whether I eat it or not. I sat on the side of the road and grabbed it with my dirty little hands. They are both eating and scratching, but you are too careless. A drop of popsicle juice stained my beautiful pleated skirt! At that time, I ignored everything, pushed you down in a rage, and my fist flew with me. Then, I ran away in pain.
Later, when I went to school every day, you always gave me a back. Alas ..... I really don't like it in my heart!
But I, you know, just like saving face. I was too proud at that time, so I can't apologize now because I moved away.
Oh, dear, if you give me another chance, I will bend down and sincerely apologize to you. (★ Psychological activity: I sincerely apologize to my little brother. )
Now, although the intimate relationship in the past has disappeared, my sincerity has not changed; Even if the time is longer and the distance is longer, I will say to you, "I'm sorry!" " "
Brother, will you forgive me? Anyway, I think we will be friends forever.
Salute!
Your good friend: Wu Mian.
165438+ October 27th
Full mark reference point
Material selection: The content of this letter is true, and I wrote my true feelings. I was full of guilt about fighting with my little brother next door three years ago, so I said "I'm sorry" at the beginning of the letter, then recalled what happened three years ago, apologized for the last time, and expressed my wish to be friends with my little brother next door forever.
◎ Idea: The article describes a mistake I made through letters. Narrating events at the beginning and end of a typical letter is a very novel and unique way of writing.
◎ Language: The letter describes the reminiscence times with dialogues and actions, and accurately and vividly records the scene three years ago.
A letter to the summer vacation
Lovely summer vacation:
Hello!
These two months with you every year are the most relaxing time for me. If you want to talk about your benefits, you can't finish it for three days and three nights. Of course, the best thing is that it doesn't matter when the summer homework is finished. Nobody cares about playing computer while doing homework. That's a real treat! However, this is your fault. You are so kind to me that I have formed these bad habits. (★ Beginning method: a light and humorous beginning, which arouses readers' interest. )
But in two months, I will be separated from you, and I will bid farewell to the happy and unique day, which is August 3 1. Why is the summer vacation so short? Why doesn't God let me stay with you for a while? For both of us, this day is too painful! (★ Psychological activity: The little author expressed his inseparable relationship with the summer vacation with two questions and an exclamatory sentence. ) Goodbye this time, but we will meet again next year! But I will go to middle school next year, and I don't know what fate awaits me. However, there are thousands of children with you. You should live in harmony! Don't forget to remind children not to do their homework while surfing the Internet and not to watch too much TV, which is harmful to their eyes. ...
Oh, don't always cry! Your tears make me unable to concentrate on my homework. Don't do this again from tomorrow, and spend these two months happily with me! This is also to prepare for the intense study after the start of school. After all, after a hard semester, it's time to have a rest! (★ Ending method: At the end, treating the summer vacation as a child still reflects the whimsy of the little author. )
Salute!
Your friend: Kim.
20 1 July1day
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: the topic is novel and the material selection is unique. The first impression this letter gives is: fresh! How can you write to "Summer Holiday"? What did you write? Readers are eager to know the answers to these questions.
◎ Intention: The full text is a conversational tone. The little author wrote his heartfelt words to the "summer vacation", not only missing the relaxed and happy summer vacation, but also lamenting the unforgettable ending of the summer vacation. Finally, he expressed his comfort for the summer vacation, which was really interesting.
◎ Language: anthropomorphic writing technique. Taking "summer vacation" as a friend of mine, and addressing it as "you" in the second person, I wrote about the happiness that "summer vacation" brought me, and criticized "summer vacation" for being so good to me that I formed many bad habits.
Letter to Grandpa in Taiwan Province Province.
Dear Grandpa: Hello! The letter you asked your uncle to give us from Thailand was received today. Because the letter said that you miss your hometown Tianshui and your alma mater Dongguan High School very much, my father said that this reply must let me write about the current situation of your alma mater. (★ Beginning method: Explain that this is a reply, focusing on Dongguan High School mentioned by Grandpa in the letter. )
Grandpa, your alma mater is now "Tianshui Jianshe Road No.1 Primary School". If you come back now, you will not know your alma mater. The old school gate has long been demolished, and the new school gate stands on nine steps. As soon as I entered the school gate, it was a small flower bed. Near the flower bed is a screen wall about four feet higher than the flower bed, which is engraved with the inscription written by Grandpa Deng Xiaoping for our children. Turn the screen, ho! The whole picture of the school will be presented to you. The most striking thing, of course, is the brand-new three-story teaching building that rises in the north of the big playground. Novel modeling, bright windows and soft colors, we are sitting in this classroom to study, let alone how happy we are! (★ Description of scenery: Grasp the most striking teaching building for detailed description, with vivid language. )
Grandpa, please look at the front of the building again. Next to it is the rostrum. There is a flagpole on the rostrum, and a five-star red flag is flying on the flagpole. In front of the podium are two evergreen cypresses, and on both sides are two big flower beds with blooming flowers. On both sides of the wide playground, there are luxuriant and tall paulownia trees and acacia trees with pink spherical flowers. There is a basketball court at the south end of the playground and a comprehensive sports equipment rack at the northeast corner.
Grandpa, that old classroom is being demolished in order to rebuild the playground. The old auditorium-Wenchang Dijun Temple Hall, as one of the national key protected cultural relics, was moved to yuquan temple five years ago.
According to my father, there were only a few dozen students in the school when Grandpa was studying. When dad was studying, there were only one hundred students in the school. Now there are 1200 students in our school!
Grandpa, I often dream of your old man coming back with a smile recently. When you really come back, I will accompany you to visit our lovely alma mater first! (★ Ending method: Express your feelings and sincerely hope that Grandpa will return to his hometown as soon as possible. )
I wish you good health and a long life!
Your grandson: Yang Dong.
May 18
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: the content is complete. This is a reply, which is mainly based on the other party's letter. The author described in detail the Dongguan Primary School mentioned in Grandpa's letter.
◎ Intention: Narrating in a certain order. When the author introduced Dongguan Primary School, he wrote it according to the sequence of scenery he saw after entering the school gate, changing scenery and connecting scenery in series. First, he wrote about small flower beds and screen walls, then he wrote about the teaching building, the podium in front of the building, the trees in front of the podium and the wide playground ... At the same time, compared with the old school, he showed his grandfather the new look of the school.
◎ Language: The author has a strong language ability. In a short letter, he introduced his grandfather's alma mater now. The language is beautiful and elegant, and the use of rich adjectives makes the school beautiful.
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