How to write to help parents do housework?

An example of writing a housework with verbs in the fourth grade is as follows:

On Sunday, mom and dad are not at home. I saw the house was dirty and messy, so I decided to help my mother clean it up.

I quickly picked up the broom and swept the floor. After I finished sweeping the dirty things, I put them away with an iron dustpan.

But there are some scraps of paper that can't be swept away, so I pay attention to picking them up one by one by hand.

Then I brought a mop and dragged it carefully with my eyes fixed on the ground. Looking at the clean ground, I feel sweeter than eating honey.

Mom and dad came back, and when they saw how clean I was, they praised me and said, "Yu Jian has really grown up and knows how to help her with housework."

I was so happy that day! Because I understand my mother's usual hard work, I want to be a good boy who is filial to my parents.