Help! The college entrance examination is coming soon, but the English composition is still only 10 points (out of 25 points). I hope so. ...

First, if you write well, you can get two or three more points in the college entrance examination. Second: Make clear the structure of my composition. I once divided it into three sections. The first paragraph is a general introduction, which leads to the content and arguments of the topic. The second paragraph begins with the analysis. Write three reasons for the analysis, each with at least two sentences. The third paragraph: my own views, key parts. There are many sentence patterns, including some conjunctions: with the development of ... with the development of what ... as far as I am concerned ... in my opinion, I don't think much about the mobile phone party, I hope I can help you. My English composition in senior three is generally 20 points.