The way of writing novels and compositions

1. Write a 500-word composition in the form of a novel. My classmate has a pair of big watery eyes, a high nose, a glib mouth and dark skin, and always wears a thick ponytail. Does everyone know who she is? Yes, she is-elegant.

Elegance and I are both representatives of mathematics, but Elegance is very serious about collecting homework. On one occasion, Chen Ziying didn't finish her homework in class, but it was time to finish school. He Laoshi asked Fenghua and I to continue to collect homework in the classroom. In the evening, I will go to Peiyou, so I said to Fenghua, "Fenghua, I have to go first and you can collect it." "ok." Later, I learned that I gracefully collected books until 6 o'clock that day and took the initiative to teach others to do problems. My face suddenly turned red.

Another time, we collected exercise books together until school was over. I counted 55 books and there was one left. Who is it? We both asked the group leaders of each column, and they all said they had handed it in. Bored to death, elegance comforts me. "Xin-yu huang, let's look for it. We will find it. Don't lose heart. " I said impatiently, "What are you looking for? You can't find it. What if the child was handed over to the teacher without telling us: or even if the person didn't hand it in, when we asked him one by one, he said he did? We can't find it. Let He Laoshi handle it. He Laoshi will definitely find it. " He said gracefully and angrily, "How did this happen? You haven't seen it. He Laoshi wants to change four big books today. He Laoshi is so hard. If you still have to deal with these small things, what do you want the representatives of our two branches to do? " "Ok, I'll go with you, ok?" I said I would help you find it, but in fact, I just looked through it and sat there reading comics. I glanced at Elegance and looked at her looking for it with her head down one by one. It is estimated that there is no progress. I smiled and thought, "I said I couldn't find it." You still don't believe it. Believe it now! " Suddenly, elegant eyes lit up, went to Tian Lei's side and said to him, "Hand over the book, I have seen it all." When Tian Lei was nervous, he trembled and said, "I ... What am I hiding?" Fenghua suddenly came to "looking for the moon in the sea" at lightning speed. She took out a book from Tian Lei's schoolbag and opened it. Sure enough, she didn't finish. She told me to finish it quickly, and then she gave it to He Laoshi. When I finished all this gracefully, I found that I was sweating all over and my face turned red in a moment.

Elegance and seriousness are far behind me, and I especially admire her.

This is my classmate-Elegance, my good friend!

Classmate, what a kind and familiar word. From the day of school, they are by your side, accompanying you through every day of your life.

Unconsciously, I have entered junior high school. When the classmates who accompanied me to primary school for six years are reluctant to part, there are ninety new classmates around me who will accompany me through the three years of junior high school.

We just started school, and we are not familiar with each other. At this time, a friendly greeting, a kind smile and a considerate pen inadvertently brought us closer.

In my eyes, classmates, everyone is so cute. 90 people from different schools can get together today and walk together for three years. I think it is also a kind of fate. The ancients said, "We met. We understand. What is the relationship between acquaintances? "Yes, why care about the past? As long as we are together, we should cherish and attach importance to this fate.

In my eyes, classmates, everyone is so beautiful. We are all parents' treasures. In the eyes of parents, we will always be their angels. Everyone has his own unique personality, everyone has different excitement and his own colorful sky.

In my eyes, every classmate is so excellent. After just a few months of getting along, I found that many students have their own bright spots: he is cautious, she is serious, she is diligent, she is talented, he is tireless, he is positive ... Their persistence and beauty left an indelible impression on me. After passing the exam, I found some talented girls.

In my eyes, classmates, everyone is very kind. They are ready to help others, helping me again and again, and infecting people around them with their simple and kind hearts. ...

In the blink of an eye, I have been in junior high school for more than three months. During these three months, I gradually became familiar with my classmates. In my eyes, they are so lovely, so excellent, so. ...

Classmate, what a beautiful word, it will always touch my heart with its purity. ...

2. The method of writing a novel. The structure (elements) of modern novels

1. Theme (We can see the author's outlook on life and values; A novel with profound thoughts has more than one theme): A certain idea or concept to be expressed in a novel is presented through stories.

Example: A Dream of Red Mansions

* The Jia family's process from prosperity to decline expressed the idea of prosperity and decline, and life was impermanent.

* The love triangle tragedy of Baoyu, Baochai and Daiyu reflects the sadness that marriage cannot be independent in feudal society.

* The country is hopeless, the world is incompetent first, and it is unparalleled in ancient and modern times =-Jia Baoyu =-useless =-satirizing the Confucian concept of fame and fortune; Respect for women = resistance to patriarchal values.

* Daiyu = * reflects the suppression of personality in China society, and it will not come to a good end.

2. Characters (appearance, clothes, movements; Intrinsic-psychological, personality): it is mainly developed from characters and plots, and characters can promote the development of plots.

3. Scene (which can be used to set off the emotions of the characters): the time and space background of the novel plot and the environment in which the characters live.

4. Language (including the narrative language of the novel and the dialogue between characters):

The language used by the author when telling the story → with the author's personal style.

It can express the character of the character and can also be used to promote the development of the plot.

5. Angle of view (also called line of sight):

All-knowing and all-powerful view: The story is told by the author of the novel.

My humble opinion: The story is told by the characters in the novel.

The first person is "I"-I will tell my feelings and experiences (diaries, private novels).

→ Apply to the amazing events, touching love and strange ideas of the protagonist.

Advantages: particularly realistic, directly close to the heart of the characters.

Disadvantages: can't understand other people's inner thoughts.

The second person's name is "you"-you are usually my incarnation.

The third person is "he"-telling the story by him can broaden the observation angle and produce a sense of distance.

plan

Generally speaking, storytelling usually includes the development process of "beginning-development-* * *-end", which has cause and effect.

Specific events spread out the plot, bring out cause and effect, and form a complete story.

Arrange these six points, and basically there will be no problem.

3. How to write at the beginning of a composition in the form of a novel that love is around?

Zhang Le is an ordinary 13-year-old child who can be seen everywhere in the street. The only unusual thing is that he has no father, only one mother.

Zhang Le always wanted someone to pick him up from school, even if it wasn't a car or motorcycle. So do other students. But he can't have it. He only had his mother riding that shabby old bike home to pick him up in the cold wind. There is nothing hot to warm your hands. If mom made money that day, she might give herself a baked sweet potato, which is the greatest happiness.

(Then you can develop the plot. )

4. Write a composition "My Teacher" in the form of a novel, 600 words, and don't make trouble, don't make trouble. I have many teachers, but they teach me different knowledge. My teacher is Luo Yang. He worked hard for a new type of airplane and created a miracle that it took only ten and a half months to develop the new type of airplane. For the national aviation technology, I personally command. I didn't even go to work as a medical staff until the last moment of my life. He taught me to be loyal and serve my country. My teacher is Yan Zi. In the process of letting Chu say goodbye, he taught me a simple life and learned to be honest and eloquent. My teacher is Chen Binqiang, and his filial piety is even more impressive. In more than 1,800 days and nights, he braved the wind and rain and took down Alzheimer's disease with a piece of cloth. Go to work in a school 30 kilometers away from home. Teacher Chen Binqiang is not only a good teacher in middle school, but also a good teacher for each of our children. Teacher Chen Binqiang taught me that filial piety is the first of all virtues. My teacher is a loyal brother. They taught me to be loyal, reliable and honest. My teachers are still Ma Junze and Huang Yun Show. Neither of them can read, one can't borrow and the other can't. They all made me feel their desire for learning and advised the younger generation to study hard. They taught me to cherish today's superior conditions and hard-won life, and not to wait until I lost it to regret it. My teachers are still my current teachers. They taught me not to forget yesterday, cherish today and face tomorrow. My teacher or others taught me everything I needed to learn and made me understand everything, no matter what obstacles. Not afraid of sacrifice, enterprising spirit, brave and determined spirit, the most important thing is not to forget yesterday, cherish today and face tomorrow. The teacher is a lecturer who teaches me these spirits. I'm sure I will understand these spirits.

5. Write the composition "People and Things Around" in the form of a novel. Who is so moved by the leaders, teachers and students around you:

There are countless touches in life, because we are touched, (so we know what love is); Because moved, (let us know how to live); Because moved, the sun is so warm; Life is so beautiful because I was moved. But there is a feeling that it is surrounded by the fragrance of peaches and plums; It is made by hard work and sweat; It is the fusion of hard work and wisdom.

In 2004, at the age of 20, I returned to the land where I was born and raised-X, because of my love and enthusiasm for my children. The sound of reading, singing and laughter in X school deeply touched and infected me. At that moment, I secretly told myself to make a cup of green tea and spread the fragrance and love! Infected everyone around you.

If a person's life is just a small spray in the long river of history, then the reason why this spray is so (surging) is because of love! So what is love? My children have made the best interpretation with practical actions-(actually) love is never leaving, never leaving! Love is a hug and a simple greeting. Encourage) (remember)

That was when I took the sixth grade graduating class. One of the students in the class (Li) is unfortunate. Graduation is imminent, but her parents are divorced. This family storm is like a bolt from the blue for (this) child (that). The former liveliness and happiness seem to disappear in an instant and fall into pain (chaos). Suddenly, I found that other children in the class quietly stuffed small notes to her, filled with encouragement and comfort (notes); During the break, greeting cards will float into her drawer from time to time, condensed with warm and caring handwriting, like an angel with wings, caring for her all the time and sending her caring information ... The concern of her classmates melted into the joy of playing games together, and slowly (with the concern of her classmates and society) she came out of the shadow (gradually). In the final graduation exam, (she) was admitted to the key junior high school with the first score in her class.

That year, a small classroom gathered not only many (students' expectations and eyes), but also countless sincerity and kindness (love); (that) a small (real) classroom, (carrying) countless attachments; The small classroom is full of their pure love. "Don't give up, don't give up", the children really taught me the first lesson in life with their practical actions, which greatly affected my future life.

Touching does not happen by accident, but can be seen everywhere. I remember one time I accidentally sprained my foot and it was very difficult to walk. When school is over, the children in the class don't know when to wait in front of my office. When I opened the door, the children's simple words warmed my heart. "Teacher, I am older, let me help you." "Teacher, let me help you with your bag." "Teacher, I usually eat the most and am the fattest. Let me carry you. " ..... You know, their 8-year-old children are only my waist tall, but they have the courage to carry this teacher who weighs almost three times as much as them. The children put my arm on their shoulders like adults, and they hold my waist with their little arms. At that moment, every step is a kind of happiness (nagging, deleting); Every step is a kind of love.

In teaching, moving is everywhere. In class, I told the children about my feelings about life, the history of the Corps, my childhood, my joys and sorrows, my experiences and lessons. The children listened with their eyes wide open, and then wrote down their feelings in their weekly diaries and communicated with me. Some people say, "One bosom friend is enough in life", not to mention I have dozens. You say, life is so happy, what else can a husband ask for? More importantly, in the children's world, I understand that worry and sadness are just much ado about nothing. In class, the children took the initiative to explore the history of the Corps, and they were shocked by the persistence of the Corps. Moved by the simplicity of the Corps; Moved by the hard work of the Corps; From their little faces flushed with excitement, I saw the hope of the Corps and was full of confidence in its future.

The feelings around us also permeate every festival. Every holiday, I receive not gorgeous flowers, but paper flowers made by children themselves; What I received was not a high-grade gift, but a small fish carved with chalk; I received not beautiful short messages, but small notes ... but I regard them as treasures. It is precisely because of this that some people's seemingly junk "boutique" tells me "honesty".

Supplement to the question:

No, I will never forget it. I will never forget the children's encouragement to me, a teacher who just stepped onto the podium. I can't forget their strong arms when I was sick; I can't forget the gifts they made for themselves on holidays; I can't forget their spirit of "never giving up and never giving up" when they graduated. They gave me the courage to stand on the podium; They taught me that happiness is actually very simple; They let me know how happy I am to be a teacher. ...

If someone must ask me how I feel about being a teacher, I will say to you, "I am very moved and happy." (Love is by my side)

Thank you! My speech is over.

6. First of all, it is actually a good thing to have your own unique style in the elementary school life where stereotyped writing is rampant, and it needs to be encouraged ~! Judging from your "excellent composition in grade three" and "trying to write a novel in grade four", you should be a good writer. I don't think that many dialogues and form jumps are the shortcomings of writing-of course, it is only possible to portray dialogues very skillfully and form jumps very skillfully. XD If the whole article is full of dry conversations and inexplicable jumps, it is normal to be penalized-if they affect your score, I don't encourage the practice of "erasing my unique style for taking the exam", but in the face of criticism from others, I can't ignore it with the idea of "you don't understand my style, so you say so". On the contrary, I want to find my own shortcomings from other people's criticism, and correct them and make new improvements. If it is really a beautiful article, I believe the teacher will not deduct many points because of his prejudice against this style. Are there still some imperfections? "Only this kind of thinking can help you improve. Well, the above are some suggestions for your current situation ~ Let's talk about the methods I personally think of to write a good composition. Just like the study of all subjects, there is no opportunistic way to write a composition. If you are not a gifted child in composition, and you want to write a much better article than others, then you need to pay more sweat than others. I think composition needs to be accumulated. Here you are. Accumulation means more than just good words and sentences. What you need to accumulate most is your life experience, your thoughts and feelings about things-they will often become the core idea of your composition. I believe the teacher has made such a metaphor with you. In fact, composition is a tree, and the central idea is its trunk. The significance of the existence of branches and leaves of trees is to make the central idea (trunk) vivid. If you have a tall and beautiful trunk, your life experience, thoughts and feelings about things do not come out of thin air, you can't just read books. You need to extract the essence from every bit of life and analyze it in your mind. These things may be difficult at first, so you can deliberately remind yourself to discover the beauty in life and feel like a baby. Over time, you will appreciate the fun and think it will become a very natural thing. There is no need to remind you deliberately. Of course, composition needs more than a central idea, and appropriate description is also very important. Wonderful writing skills can often add a lot of color to your composition-do you think you would like it if you were facing a bare tree with few branches and leaves? The way to make your description vivid is to read more books. What books should you read? I don't recommend writing, especially reading the classics of my peers. Because you belong to the same age group and have similar writing styles and forms, you won't get any experience or improvement from reading it. On the contrary, I think if you want your writing style to mature rapidly, you should read more articles by the elderly or some world famous works, so that you can deeply understand the differences and gaps between your writing style and his. However, where is it? When you start reading, don't force yourself to read some obscure or disliked books, which will not give you any gains and will greatly reduce your interest in reading. I don't support "reading while writing", which will make you unable to deeply integrate into the artistic conception created by the author-of course, the feeling of writing afterwards is also very important.

7. What's the difference between prose, novel and other writing forms? First, there are stories or no stories in the novel, but there must be a central figure; There are stories or no stories in prose, but there is no need to have a central figure. Second, novels are suitable for objective description, even first-person novels are written objectively. Prose is suitable for subjective description, even when writing objective things, it often has subjective views. Third, the novel pays attention to the behavior of the characters, as well as their thoughts, emotions and personalities. They are all expressed by actions, even if they occasionally describe some natural scenery, they are still for the actions of the characters; Prose doesn't have to pay attention to the actions of the characters, but only write a plot, a mood and a landscape, and it can also be a good essay. Fourth, the novel must be described in detail, even a discussion, a feeling or a statement of an idea must be included in the specific description; Prose can make abstract comments, such as explaining an idea, a feeling and a judgment. Fifth, prose conveys feelings with things, expresses aspirations with things, and conveys feelings with scenery. When describing prose, pay attention to one word "emotion"; Novels use plots to set off characters, environments to set off characters and stories to portray characters. When describing a novel, it pays attention to the word "description". Prose writing is the diarrhea of the author's feelings, and the words move with the feelings. Sixth, although the novel is created, the author's feelings are controlled by the characters in the novel. When the personality of a successful novel character is formed, the story of the novel does not develop according to the author's will. At this time, the novel creation is based on the characters in the novel. At this time, it is not that the author wants this "character" to get what he wants, but that the fate of the character in the text develops with the development of the story influenced by him. Things, scenery and people in prose are equal, and there is no distinction between primary and secondary. They can "set off" and "set off" each other, but the "things" and "scenery" in the novel serve the "people" in the novel, and they are the guides to describe the characters in the novel. Seventh, prose creation mainly depends on the author's will. The author says that this mountain is beautiful, this water is beautiful and this person is beautiful. Environment and his personality dominate him. The author's original intention is to write a bad guy. When the author describes the bad guys and the time and environment in which they live, the bad guys will become good people unintentionally. Tolstoy's anna karenine and Wu Cheng'en's Pig Bajie are examples. This is also the reason why many writers have greatly changed their characters and destiny when writing and conceiving.